a new story fanfic ..........part 2

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Part 1 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dill-mill-gaye/774284/a-new-fresh-story-fanfic-part-1

just before we start i'm sarcastcly saying. thanks for not replying. two replies and 52 views. its great!

part 2

sapna is still standing in dr.shubankar's room. dr shubankar smiles and says ' hi'

shubankar : aapko pehle toh yaha kabhi nahi decka

sapna : ha main nayi hoon. mera naam sapna hain. apke parents meri parents dost....

shubankar : ha ha acha toh tum sapna ho

sapna : ji sir

shuabakar : kya chahiye tumhe?

sapna : woh main baas apse milne chahte ti. mere papa kehte aagar mujhe koyi dickt hoge is hospital main aap meri madat karege

shubankar : ha hakyon nahi

sapna simles : ji, thanks sir

she leaves. amazing shubankar thinks.

dr kirti is in the the corridor waiting for the interns to come.

dr kirti : yeh itne derr kyon lareye hain

she hears footsteps and hides. she thinks this is a good chance. she brings her hands forward with a bunch full of marbles ( i know its childish😆) and gets redy to throw them. she does but she got the wrong person. its dr. shashank!😆

shashank : ouch. yeh yaha kisne rakhe

kirti decided to run away and poor shashank is left on the floor😆

next morning....

atul comes in with his fresh voice and sings ' oh yara bolo kya baat hoye hain. kyon hain diwane is dil mein hulchul hulchul. firtha hoon main toh galiyon main pagal pagal. tera dil tera dil koyi le hegaya . aysa pehle toh na hoya tum jano na haal mera'😆😳

armaan was already their listening to the song and reapeting in his mind ' aysa pehle toh na hua tum jano na haal mera' ( with ridimaa😆)

ridzy comes and says hi to everyone. amraan thought that she looks prettier everyday.😳 his pager rings and he leaves. atul gets his things and leaves. when ridz opens her locker she lookes trough her files. then gently a small phot falls on the ground.

she picks it up and sees it was a picture of her and anjali when they were small😛 but that photo made her even more sadder that she's not her sister. suddenly she startes crying she doesn't know why. when she found out th ruth about her she didn't cry. she was shocked. but now looking at this photo it let all her feelings out. she cried and cried😭 leaning against the wall and sat on the ground.😭

anjali is just about to enter the locker room and sees ridzy crying.varoius emotions mixed within her. she couldn't bear id ridz cried like this. but then she wasn't her sister. all this time she had nenver spke to her since she found out the truth. she had no idea it would hurt her so much. she had forteen she was her little ridzy😊😭 she's too sensitive. no she didn't care now. forget it. so what if she isn't her sister. they have been living for so long together. they did have a bond.

anjali ran inside and sat down. ridz keeps crying but when she sees her she stops.

angie : ridz decko maat roh

she still does

ridz : aap yaha kyon hain. tum toh mujse baat thak nahi karne chate teh

anjali : ridz, mujhe maaf karo. plz. main kabhi bhi nahi chahte ke tum roh. plz.

ridz controsl her self

ridz : toh tum

anjali : ha ridz main tumhari behen hon. chahe tum adpoted hon. i love you

ridz : i love you too ( gosh this is making me cry😭😭😳)

they hug each other after such a long time. they were sisters. and they didn't care what anyone else said. tears of happiness came into their eyes as they remembered the moment when ridz was six. she was sitting on a swing and her sister. enjoying themselves. they had never been so happy before....

awwwwwwwww with that beautiful cute sister scene 😳............

the precap : you will see armaan trying to tell ridzy that he loves her. ( trying to put a bit more romance to the story😉 ) ridzy his now back to normal.😃 she wears her suits and churidar and angie her jeans and top. they have become to them normal selves. but then something will happen that will change their lives..................................

thanks do comment😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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it was very gud .. do continue ..
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Amaizing 👏 what a part yaar maza aa gaya!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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oh gr8 work👏can't wait to read teh next part. plz continue soon teh precap is gr8.and a little brief about the thing tht changes there life plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz😳

Love Iram😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i think u shud really continue...........plz continue soon....its long since uve not updated...........
plz continue soon
luv ur ff
ishiqa
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey
plzzz do update na
this is a really good ff
plz plz plz plz plz plz plz
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey jus catched up wiv ur ff
really gd
plzz continue x
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey i dont read FF's but i read this one n i thnk u shuld continue i thnk its really good.... awesme job.... 👏 😊 😃

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