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Posted: 7 years ago
#91
Aaj hua sasural me swagat...
Na na...pyaar se nahi...balki chaawal bikhrakar...
Nayi naveli dulhan sa main darwaaze pe sharmaya...
Naina ko dekh kar hi to ise sasural maine banaya...
Jhaadu lagaya, pocha maara...
Fir honewali biwi ne chai ka cup thamaya...
Coffee maangi to gussa gayi chachi...
Boli kya sasural samajh kar hun aaya?
Ispe main man hi man muskaya...
Naina ke gaalon ki laali dekhi to laga...use bhi ye sach tha samajh aaya...
Dil me jagah maangi maine...
Gusse me hi sahi, Naina ne saath to nibhaya...
Milkar mere saath usne, saale ji ke liye poha jo banaaya...
Antenna theek karke...match tha dikhlaya..
Par Arjun ke gusse se fir Safari suit sasurji ka dimag jhunjhalaya
Wo aaye seedhe mere pass aur ek jam kar thappad lagaya...
Haila Naina...sirf tere liye hi aajtak is Sameer ne thappad pe thappad khaya...
Dard to gaal pe hua..lekin dil me sukoon aaya...
Ye dekh kar ki tune bhi meri taqleef me khud ko tadapta paaya...
Aakhir tujhe samajh gaya ki ho gaya hun main bhi tera deewana..
maafi to maang ke rahunga, mushkil to hai us pyaar ko waapis ubhaar kar laana...
Par Naina...ishq me haar nahi maanuga...
Tune zidd dekhi hai meri...
Ab dekh...sasurji se kitne thappad kha lunga...
Is pyaar ki uljhi reel ko
Fir se suljhaunga...
Dekh lena tu...
Fir apni aashiqui ko tere naam kar jaaunga...
Edited by Samaina_1990 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990

Sameer to Naina in saree:

Haaye ye teri aankhon ka kaajal..
Bana raha hai mujhko pagal..
Ye laali tere gaalon ki...
Ho rahi hai dil me hulchul...
Tere lab pe jo ye muskaan hai...
Isi ke liye to ab is dil me jaan hai...
Teri ye reshmi zulfein...
Uljha rahi hai mujhe tujhmein...
Kya karun..kya na karun...
Is kashmkash me uljha hun...
Naina tere nainon ke..
Is jaadu me uljha hun...
Tere kangan, teri choodiyan..
Khanak ke bole...
Bole mujhe...mita dun dooriyaan...
Teri bindiya...teri paayal...
Kar na de ab mujhko ghayal...
Teri sari ka aanchal...
Mano khinch raha hai mujhe pal pal...
Tera wo zulfon ko sehlaana...
Haath ghuma ke wo jhumka dikhlaana...
Jo chamke jaise...chand ho deewana...
Rok mujhe...ye kadam ab nahi sunte meri...
Dekh mujhe...kyun hai tu door khadi...
Aa kareeb aa na zara
Jaan tu ban ja na ab meri...
Naina..kab wo din aayega...
Jab tera ye aashiq tujhe haath pakad kar mandap par le jayega...
Deewane bahot dekhe honge tune...
Par deewangi ka matlab...ye deewana tujhe samjhayega...
Kabhi to...khilte huye labon pe tere, apne hoth saja dunga...
Naina, tu haan keh de bas...tujhe apni bana lunga...
Ek din aisa aayega...
jab tere naam ke sath mera naam likha jaayega...
Bas us din tak ruk jaana hai...
Majnu, Ranjhe honge kayi...
Ye Sameer to tera deewana hai...
Dharm honge laakhon kayi...
Ye to bas parwaana hai...
Naina...
Mujhe to bas tere ishq ki aag me jal jaana hai



Nicely written Sam dear...it was awesome the way you expressed his pov😃👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990

Aaj hua sasural me swagat...

Na na...pyaar se nahi...balki chaawal bikhrakar...
Nayi naveli dulhan sa main darwaaze pe sharmaya...
Naina ko dekh kar hi to ise sasural maine banaya...
Jhaadu lagaya, pocha maara...
Fir honewali biwi ne chai ka cup thamaya...
Coffee maangi to gussa gayi chachi...
Boli kya sasural samajh kar hun aaya?
Ispe main man hi man muskaya...
Naina ke gaalon ki laali dekhi to laga...use bhi tha ye sach tha samajh aaya...
Dil me jagah maangi maine...
Gusse me hi sahi, Naina ne saath to nibhaya...
Milkar mere saath usne, saale ji ke liye poha jo banaaya...
Antenna theek karke...match tha dikhlaya..
Par Arjun ke gusse se fir Safari suit sasurji ka dimag jhunjhalaya
Wo aaye seedhe mere pass aur ek jam kar thappad lagaya...
Haina Naina...sirf tere liye hi aajtak is Sameer ne thappad pe thappad khaya...
Dard to gaal pe hua..lekin dil me sukoon aaya...
Ye dekh kar ki tune bhi meri taqleef me khud ko tadapta paaya...
Aakhir tujhe samajh gaya ki ho gaya hun main bhi tera deewana..
maafi to maang ke rahunga, mushkil to hai us pyaar ko waapis ubhaar kar laana...
Par Naina...ishq me haar nahi maanuga...
Tune zidd dekhi hai meri...
Ab dekh...sasurji se kitne thappad kha lunga...
Is pyaar ki uljhi reel ko
Fir se suljhaunga...
Dekh lena tu...
Fir apni aashiqui ko tere naam kar jaaunga...


Nicely wriiten dear...love his determination to face everything thats coming to him😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc


Nicely written Sam dear...it was awesome the way you expressed his pov😃👏

Lo jeet gaye tum humse, hum haar gaye is dil se
Karlenge hum aashiqui firse...😃
Beautiful Surbhi..👏👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Munna's pov

Yeh mera dost bhi hai kaisa deewana

Ho gaya hai ise pyar hum sab ne jaana

Par yeh akela hai jisne yeh na jaana

Par sipahi ke paas rehne ka dhoonde bahana


Kya kahu main bahut ajeeb hai yeh baat

Theher gayi hai mere dost ke jeevan mein raat

Hum the uski galti mein uske saath

Ab kaise chhod de apne dost ka haath


Safari suit bana hai uski jaan ka dushman

Milne na dega wo in dono ke kabhi mann

Judi hain in dono ke dil ki dhadkan

Hum milwayenge inhe yeh hai humara pran (promise/decision)


Karo dua mere liye aye mere yaaro

Koi mere Pandit ko mere liye pukaro

Aye Pandit apni dost ke ghar me zara padharo

Inke bigde huye rishte ko saath milke sawaaro


Kya pata inke saath ban jaye humari bhi baat

Aaye na kabhi hum dono ke beech dukhon ki raat

Pyar hai mujhe tujhse samajh meri yeh baat

Sach hai yeh jhoothe nahi hain mere jazbaat


The end😆


Splendid POV from Munna...emotions on point.👏👏 Too good.😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990

Aaj hua sasural me swagat...

Na na...pyaar se nahi...balki chaawal bikhrakar...
Nayi naveli dulhan sa main darwaaze pe sharmaya...
Naina ko dekh kar hi to ise sasural maine banaya...
Jhaadu lagaya, pocha maara...
Fir honewali biwi ne chai ka cup thamaya...
Coffee maangi to gussa gayi chachi...
Boli kya sasural samajh kar hun aaya?
Ispe main man hi man muskaya...
Naina ke gaalon ki laali dekhi to laga...use bhi tha ye sach tha samajh aaya...
Dil me jagah maangi maine...
Gusse me hi sahi, Naina ne saath to nibhaya...
Milkar mere saath usne, saale ji ke liye poha jo banaaya...
Antenna theek karke...match tha dikhlaya..
Par Arjun ke gusse se fir Safari suit sasurji ka dimag jhunjhalaya
Wo aaye seedhe mere pass aur ek jam kar thappad lagaya...
Haina Naina...sirf tere liye hi aajtak is Sameer ne thappad pe thappad khaya...
Dard to gaal pe hua..lekin dil me sukoon aaya...
Ye dekh kar ki tune bhi meri taqleef me khud ko tadapta paaya...
Aakhir tujhe samajh gaya ki ho gaya hun main bhi tera deewana..
maafi to maang ke rahunga, mushkil to hai us pyaar ko waapis ubhaar kar laana...
Par Naina...ishq me haar nahi maanuga...
Tune zidd dekhi hai meri...
Ab dekh...sasurji se kitne thappad kha lunga...
Is pyaar ki uljhi reel ko
Fir se suljhaunga...
Dekh lena tu...
Fir apni aashiqui ko tere naam kar jaaunga...


Wow ! so beautiful Surbhi 👍🏼
Sameer's determination, perseverance 👍🏼
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Posted: 7 years ago
#97
This is from
Naina's POV -
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Pehla gussa pehle pyar se

Na hogi yeh aashiqui firse.

Vaada hai jo khudse

Galti na ho jaye phirse.

Phir kyun uski takleef

Meri dard ban jaati hai?

Kyun uski wo hasi se

Meri aanshoon nikal aati hai?

Kya itna bhi nahin haq

Ki gussa kar saku apne pehle pyar se?

Munna ko kya pata?

Registhan bhi bhara tha kabhi phoolon se...

Phisalti in vaadon ko kaise sambhalun?

Dil Ki yeh haal kisse kahun?

Kitne saare sawal aur jawab ek bhi nahin..

Kahin pyar phir se ..ussi se to nahin?

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Posted: 7 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU

This is from

Naina's POV -
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Pehla gussa pehle pyar se

Na hogi yeh aashiqui firse.

Vaada hai jo khudse

Galti na ho jaye phirse.

Phir kyun uski takleef

Meri dard ban jaati hai?

Kyun uski wo hasi se

Meri aanshoon nikal aati hai?

Kya itna bhi nahin haq

Ki gussa kar saku apne pehle pyar se?

Munna ko kya pata?

Registhan bhi bhara tha kabhi phoolon se...

Phisalti in vaadon ko kaise sambhalun?

Dil Ki yeh haal kisse kahun?

Kitne saare sawal aur jawab ek bhi nahin..

Kahin pyar phir se ..ussi se to nahin?

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Minu, this is exactly what Naina must have said to herself in her alone scene in the room 👏
Munna's line of Registhan was like 💔 Exactly, I thought Registhan bhi bhara tha kabhi and who made her this Registhan -THEM. She must be thinking pyar bhi kiya, chot bhi kayi and aaj ye bhi sun liya pyar mein 💔
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Posted: 7 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU

This is from

Naina's POV -
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Pehla gussa pehle pyar se

Na hogi yeh aashiqui firse.

Vaada hai jo khudse

Galti na ho jaye phirse.

Phir kyun uski takleef

Meri dard ban jaati hai?

Kyun uski wo hasi se

Meri aanshoon nikal aati hai?

Kya itna bhi nahin haq

Ki gussa kar saku apne pehle pyar se?

Munna ko kya pata?

Registhan bhi bhara tha kabhi phoolon se...

Phisalti in vaadon ko kaise sambhalun?

Dil Ki yeh haal kisse kahun?

Kitne saare sawal aur jawab ek bhi nahin..

Kahin pyar phir se ..ussi se to nahin?

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nice one minu...i liked it😃👏
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Posted: 7 years ago

Ek haseena thi...Ek diwana tha...

Kya Umar, Kya sama, kya jamana tha...😉

Ek Din Wo Mile Roz Milne Lage...
Phir Mohabbat Hui, Bass Qayamat Hui
Sunn Ke Yeh Daastan, Kho Gaye Tum Kahan
Loge Hairaan Hain, Kyunki Anjaan Hain
Ishq Ki Woh Gali.., Baat Jiskli Chali..
Uss Gali Mein, Uska Aana, Jaana Tha😆

Heroine Karen pray Bhagwan karo koi chamatkar,😲 Hero ko karo mere ghar aane se inqaar

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Usi chakkar mein Jaan se ajeez doston ko bhi kiya wahan aane se sakhat inqaar😡

Kyonki waqif hain woh acche se apne pagal librarian sasur ke kiye jaane wale atyachaar😲

Jaise hi baal lahraate hue lee entry, Vividh Bharti Radio ne bhi Lo Aa Gaya Hero gaana bajaya dhamakedhar😎

Phir Annapurna Mata ne bhi ghar ke daamad ka kiya chawalon se Su-Swagatam sanskaar👏🤗🤣

Wahi Chacha Ji ne taano se kiya rishte banane se sakhat inqaar, Aur hero dekhe heroine ko ek-ek tak najar lagatar😉

Par kahan maanane wala tha Nanu ka laadala woh bhi toh tha Yaaro ka Yaar!!⭐️

Preeti, Chachi Ji aur Pooja Dii😆 ko makhan lagaya baar-baar aur jhat se bana liya apna rishtedhar🤣

Hero ho gaya tha ab bore-bore, khelne ko kuch nahi tha aur-aur, Phir heroine ko daali pahli boll pe hi no-boll

Phir kya tha heroine ke taano aur phatkar ne macha di dil mein ha-hakaar, Bola dekho toh kaise tevar dikh ke ho gayi hain Aar-Paar!!!

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Badi hi tedhi-medhi pitch hain bhai khelna nahi hoga iss par ab itna aasaan😆😲

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