#4 FF:Journey of Passionate love Note on Page 72 (15/1/2018)

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NONIE

@Nonie12345

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Posted: 8 years ago

#401

Amazing chapter Payal Didi 😊

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eshalli

@eshalli

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+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#402

Awesome update dear
Poor jo
Continue soon
Thx 4r pm

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Rashmi Singh

@Rashmisingh9151

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Posted: 8 years ago

#403

after such a long time we get update and I like it it was awesome but to my disappointment so short I wanted big but never mind we want next update soon hope we will get next update soon.

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mama17

@mama17

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Posted: 8 years ago

#404

What a pleasant surprise!

Thank You for the update.

Enjoy your day. Happy birthday dear.

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divyadaya13

@divyadaya13

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Posted: 8 years ago

#405

Thanks for the lovely update payal. Would eagerly wait for next chapter. It would be so lovely to read this devil jalal falling head over heels in love with his angel wife😳

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Taahir

@taahir004

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+ 10

Posted: 8 years ago

#406

Awesome and so Superb Chapter

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binduprasad41

@binduprasad41

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#407

Thank you so much payu for return gift and double thank you for continuing this wonderful story.

Wonderful update dear

Yup chapter is short i guess but full of emotions.

Jodha condition is very painful , she just couldn't able to do something for herself.

Any ordinary girl in her place think and do something like this only.

No girl wanted to hurt her family because of her problems.

Love the way Jodha deal with the situation.

Jodha is the girl who loved and pampered by her family so much because of that only she is sacrificed her happiness.

Both families mixing with each other so well.

Atleast their families are happy.

Jalal sometimes feel irritated, frustrated and guilty towards jodha.

He just can't let her go and he so wanted to live his life with jodha.

He knows he lost his wife and now it take so much time to bring back her .

If only both sit and talk with each other then so many problems are solve but what to do , their big ego can't let them do that.

Finally jodha come back to bedroom from where all that started.

More then angry she feel now embarrassed to face jalal. She told him she leave him and his house but ...

Now both comes face to face and both are alone also.

I hope things are not turn more ugly this time .

Payu now please stop this painful condition of both . Do something na so that both atleast try to move on especially jodha.

Poor girl suffered so much.

Make her happy now .

Waiting eagerly for next chapter dear. ...

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Shinchan_20

@Shinchan_20

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+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#408

Flawless update

Thanku for pm

Continue soon

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Geetanjali

@Geetanjali1993

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Posted: 8 years ago

#409

Awesome update
Jo is in miserable state still she still she stood strong for her family
Ja is very well aware of jo's state, hope he heals her slowly and make her fall for him
continue soon and thanks for pm

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Bond_7

@Bond_7

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Posted: 8 years ago

#410

I hate this Jalal! 😡 His wife is in such a miserable condition and even thought of ending her life.. All b'coz of him. And this guy can only think of his physical desires! 🤬

I know he also feels guilty and bad for her.. But that's a very very tiny part of him.

Jo definitely deserves better. Poor thing is going through a lot! I want her to be strong and teach her so-called husband, a lesson!

Payal, hope I didn't upset you with my ranting. But I seriously feel this guy is disgusting! 😡

You've written all the emotional scenes beautifully!👏 It's nothing short of a hell for Jo to leave her loving family and live with this fellow. She doesn't even have someone to share her pain!

Pls do update soon! 😳