RiKara OS : YEH KYA HUA

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Okay guys...here's a one shot...i shall start rightaway...
please pardon me in advance...if i am not upto expectations...i cant write romantic stuff

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Gauri stood under the fiery gaze of her Omkaraji...she had an inkling that he was desperate about getting physically intimate with her. Truly speaking...she had waited for this moment...but now when the much anticipated moment arrived...she was literally frozen and dumbstruck. She lost her voice and her better judgement and was at a loss about the response she was supposed to give. Omkara kept moving towards her with fast paced strides...and she barely managed to move backwards...and backwards and backwards...till she hit the wall. Her Jatadhari hippie craned his neck towards her face...her body was shivering...they were just inches apart...when...

"MR OMKARA SINGH OBEROI"...a loud female voice was audible from the living room...it repeated..."MR OMKARA SINGH OBEROI ...baahar aaiye"

Hearing this both husband and wife proceeded towards the living room...and they found a familiar woman standing...

Omkara said ..."Kranti"..."arent you Dhurandhar's Kranti"...the woman replied..."Yes and No"

"Basically Omkara ji...I look like Kranti...but I am actually your Gauri..."

Omkara was flabbergasted..."kya bakwaas hain yeh?"

"Bakwaas nahin hain...basically...that Kranti woman fell in love with you the moment she saw you...so she got me kidnapped and got a plastic surgery done...with the help of Dr Dang...so the woman standing beside you is actually Kranti...and I am Gauri"

"what proof do you have?"...Omkara asked...

" see my hair...its that same old style...face was changed...but hair cant change na...see the curls"..."dekhiye dekhiye"

"Oh my Gauri..." Omkara lovingly said..."maine tumhe pehchannne mein galti kar di...mujhe maaf kar do"...and he started moving towards her...

Then achanak...

"Thehriye..."...he heard another shrill female voice..."Ruk jaiye Omkaraji"

Omkara looked at the owner of the voice..."Tum toh woh Maya Bhootni ho na?..." he asked...

To this the woman replied..."Yes and No"

"Basically Omkara ji...I look like Maya Bhootni...but I am actually your Gauri..."

Omkara was speechless..."ek aur Gauri?"

"Haan ...that Maya bhootni fell in love with you...so she kidnapped me and got a plastic surgery done with the help of Dr Dang..."

Before she could complete...another voice came from the entrance...

"Jhooth...sab jhoothe hain..." she said


Omkara looked towards the door...Scientific Lana was standing...

"Svetlana"...Omkara gasped...

"Nahin main cruel Lana nahin hoon...achhi Lana hoon bhi aur nahin bhi"...she started

Omkara was feeling dizzy...

"Basically Freezer Lana fell in love with you...and she kidnapped me...went to Dr Dang...and underwent plastic surgery..."..."so I am Gauri...and she is freezer Lana"

So ultimately kya hua tha...

Freezer Lana kidnapped Gauri...and became Gauri (fake no 1)...
Maya bhootni kidnapped fake Gauri, actually Lana (thinking she is real)...and became Gauri (fake no 2)
Kranti kidnapped fake no 2 Gauri, actually Maya bhootni (thinking she is real)...and became Gauri (fake no 3)...

All claiming to be Gauris...the real Gauri is actually freezer Lana...but are we sure...twist kabhi bhi aa sakta hain...kaise bhi aa sakta hain...

okay back to story

Omkara...turned towards FreezerLana...actually Gauri..."toh tum meri Gauri ho?"

"Ruk jao..." this time a male voice came from the door...

Everybody turned...it was Dr Dang...

"Yeh Omkara Singh Oberoi nahi hain"...he continued... "main hoon OSO...yeh actually Dr Dang hain...jisne mera plastic surgery kar diya...because he was in love with Kranti...who is now Gauri"

So ultimately Dr Dang is OSO...and vice versa...

Aur bi bohut kuch ho sakta hain...Dhurandhar baaki hain...KT ka bhai baaki hain...but I dont feel like typing anymore

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Yeh ho kya raha hain...
samajh mein aya?...Nahin na...
Mujhe bhi samajh mein nahin aya...but 1 saal se main yeh sab hi dekh rahi hoon...at least...maine explanation toh diya...aap log samjho na samjho...aapki marzi

Pasand aaya...to chalega...nahi aaya toh bhi chalega...mukhe kaunsa "Oscar" jeetna hain🤣

Signing off

Priya di 😊



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Posted: 8 years ago
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This one is crazy 🤣 but far better than what writers are writing 👏
Edited by haalim_ - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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🤣 - it's like the show form the last 3 months.
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Oh my god..!! It's making me laugh like hell...
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I can't stop laughing!!!!!


Priya Di please send this to the makers!!


This is amazeballs!!

🤣 🤣 🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
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omg this is epic , kranti , dr dang n om's kya bakwas h ye sachme kya bakwaas h ye 🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Okay, I completely forgot to comment here, and went and commented on the AT instead.

But this is a killer.

I've not laughed this much in the whole week. 😆


I think I'll think of this tonight and laugh again.


My brother is getting slightly worried now, he thinks, I'm getting some attack.


But this was superb! 🤣 🤣 🤣

Priya Di! Hats off to you, you nailed it!!! 👏


Now I have another farmaaish. Can you write an OS where Om and Gauri find out that they are siblings? Please?


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wonderful tribute to the writers of DBO...waise my head is spinning...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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OMG its Hilarious.🤣 .I cant stop laughing..its like Dejavu
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Posted: 8 years ago
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🤣 🤣
I actually read it with a lot of interest but loll
Edited by Mahnaz93 - 8 years ago

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