Arz kiya hai: ubharte huye kaviyon ke liye ...Index on page 1 - Page 3

Originally posted by: Piya_Malik

Prem kahani mein ek ladka hota hain, ek ladki Hoti hain😉

Prem kahani mein ek sasur hota hain, ek Saala hota hain😉😆

Prem kahani mein Daamad ko taane bhi dene hote hain😡

Prem kahani mein Biwi ke aage jharu bhi lagana hota hain

Prem kahani mein Yeh shaadi se pahle hi hota hain😆

Prem kahani mein hum toh soche thy Yeh shaadi ke Baad hota hain🤣

Prem kahani mein Bhai bahna haste hain aur Hero rota hain😭

Prem kahani mein shaadi ka sequence hota hain phir sab accha hi hota hain😳😆

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

<font color="#cc0066">As @Samaina1990 suggested...I'm here with a thread where you all can post any poetry or shayari that you compose related to the show or the characters😃</font>

<font color="#cc0066">Hope all the budding poets would enjoy posting here and we would enjoy reading each others works here...keep posting and composing poetry and shayaris😃👍🏼</font>

<font color="#cc0066">I'm posting my poem on yesterday's episode😃</font>

<font color="#cc0066">Hope you like it😃</font>

<font size="2" color="#cc00cc">Aa to gaya hu himmat karke main yahan</font>

<font size="2" color="#cc00cc">Jaane kya ho mera anjaam mera yahan</font>

<font size="2" color="#cc00cc">Koi nahi jo chahe mera is ghar mein aana</font>

<font size="2" color="#cc00cc">Hone waale sasurji har pal maare taana</font>

<font size="2" color="#cc00cc">Baat nahi hai koi karne wala</font>

<font size="2" color="#cc00cc">Usne bhi apne dil se hai mujhe nikaala</font>

<font size="2" color="#cc00cc">Saale sahab ko khilaana hai mujhe khaana</font>

<font size="2" color="#cc00cc">Wo ban raha hai mujhse anjaana</font>

<font size="2" color="#cc00cc">Bhai behen hain dono tedhi kheer</font>

<font size="2" color="#cc00cc">Par meri mayaan mein bhi hain bahut se teer</font>

<font size="2" color="#cc00cc">Naraz hai wo aur mujhe hai use manana</font>

<font size="2" color="#cc00cc">Apne pyar ka ehsaas hai use dilaana</font>

<font size="2" color="#cc00cc">Mushkil hai bahut yeh dagar nahi aasan</font>

<font size="2" color="#cc00cc">Har koshish karunga main laga dunga main apni jaan</font>

<font size="2" color="#cc00cc">Dua hi chahiye mujhe aap sab ki har pal</font>

<font size="2" color="#cc00cc">Meri koshishon ka mujhe zaroor milega ek din phal</font>

<font size="2" color="#cc0066">Hope to read your reviews and your poems and shayaris as well😃</font>

Hi doc. Awesome poem. Seems like an extension of Sameer's thoughts... 👏
What a lovely idea for this thread. Especially when the hero is a shayar and we are getting to hear a lot more poetic words from him now.

Originally posted by: Piya_Malik

Prem kahani mein ek ladka hota hain, ek ladki Hoti hain😉

Prem kahani mein ek sasur hota hain, ek Saala hota hain😉😆

Prem kahani mein Daamad ko taane bhi dene hote hain😡

Prem kahani mein Biwi ke aage jharu bhi lagana hota hain

Prem kahani mein Yeh shaadi se pahle hi hota hain😆

Prem kahani mein hum toh soche thy Yeh shaadi ke Baad hota hain🤣

Prem kahani mein Bhai bahna haste hain aur Hero rota hain😭

Prem kahani mein shaadi ka sequence hota hain phir sab accha hi hota hain😳😆

😆 😆 😆
That is some humor here! Especially, the hero rota hai part and shaadi ke baad part... the last line as well. 😃

Wow Manisha...didn't realize you had started the thread alreadyyy...yayayya!!! Superb kavita both you doc n Piya...loved it to bits...😃 let's post the ones we've posted before on this thread too...I'm doing the same...my one n only 🤣

hero ne maana use hai heroine se pyaar, kiya apne nanu se bhi iqraar, uski balcony ke niche kiya raat bhar intezaar, chadh gaya use pyaar ka bukhaar, uski gali me gaana bhi gaaya sapne me dhamakedar, school me hua shart ka prachaar, ab chal rahi hai jeeja saale ki taqraar, aaj darshan denge Sameer in Agarwal parivaar...

Sameer to Naina:

Wow! What a thread.👏👏 Would love to be part of this awesome creativily productive thread.😃

Awara Kaho, Pagal Kaho Ya Majanu Diwana

Awara Kaho, Pagal Kaho Ya Majanu Diwana

Naina Mujhe Toa Bas hai Tere hi Dil Mai Aana.

Mai Sameer Maheshwari hu hawa ka jhokha

Sacha kehta hu na kabhi dunga aab tujhe dhoka.

Naina, Yakin nahi tujhe ,Lekin aajmaa ke dekh le,

ek baar apne kadam, mujha tak badha ke dekh le.

Sach Mano mujhe tere dard ka ehsaas hai,

Aisa lagta hai Jaise dil ka ek tukda Tere hi paas hai.

Chahe jitna dushman mujhe tere ghar wale maan le.

Naa rok sakenge mujhe ye tu gaatha bandha le.

Karta hu tujhase hi pyar ye sach maan le.

Pake rahunga tujhe ek din, ye sach bhi jaan le.

Sameer aur Naina nahi hai 2 ye jaan le.

Hona hai hame Saamaina ye Sach tu aaj maan le.

I tried my level best guys.😳

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990

Sameer to Naina:

1. Ishq me padna hai mushkil, par bin tere jeena kahan aasan,

Sau dard seh lu teri khaatir, bas aa jaye tere chehre pe muskaan...

2. Tu jitna door mujhse jaayegi, utni meri taqleef badhayegi

Par main bhi haar na maanuga, tu meri hi dulhaniya kehlayegi

3. Hawa ka jhonka hun, tujhpe aakar bikhar jaunga..

Jo tu na mili, sach kehta hu, jeete jee mar jaunga

4. Jab pehli nazar ka asar hua, tab maine kahan jaana

Yahi wo teer hai, jo banayega mujhe ghayal deewana

Tune tadpaaya, gussa dilaaya...

Par sab bhul gaya main jab pyaar se padhaya

Tere papa ne aakar firse kahani me udham machaya

Paper chor kehkar mujhe bahot rulaya...

Zidd thi meri, sabak sikhaunga..

Bin soche samjhe tujhe mohra banaya

Rakhi se to bach nikle, fir dosti ka haath badhaya

Dheere dheere tujhe apni baaton me uljhaaya

Par hua yun kuch asar tera, ki bhul gaya kyun tha tere dar aaya

Teri hasi me, teri khushi me jaane maine kyun sukoon paaya

Tujhse chori chori milna, baatein karna

Lagne laga ik meetha sa sapna

Tune mujhpar wo pyaat jhalkaya

Jo maa se bhi na tha maine paaya

Pari bankar tum aayi meri kahani me,

Jab tak maan paata ki rog laga tha prem ka...

Tujhe sach samajh me aaya

Tu royi, tu tooti

Mera dil bharmaya

Kyun kyun kyun...sochta raha main har pal..

Tujhsi maasoom ka dil tha dukhaya...

Maafi maangne ki jab samajh aayi

To phir se tere dar pe aaya,

Kabhi tota, kabhi gulaab se

Tera dil behlaya

Ye bechanini ajeeb thi, ye ehsaas naye the...

Hum tab kya jaante the...hum tere aashiq ban gaye the...

Jab tere aansu dekhe...umad kar mujhe bhi rona aaya...

Jab jaana tu meri parchayi thi aur main tera saaya...

Tera hero banta isse pehle villian ka kirdaar tha nibhaya

Par ab hridya parivartan ka aabhas tujhe karwaane aaya

Tere sitam sar aankhon par, tadpa jaise maine tujhe tadpaaya

Teri ik hasi pe sau janam qurbaan..

Tu aur main hain aakhir do jism...ik jaan...

Aaj aaya hun shayad hone wale sasural...

Kya tu fir chahegi mujhe...bas yahi hai sawaal...

Teri ik haan se ban jayegi meri kismet...

Jaanta hu main..hamare dilon me aaj bhi hai qurbat

Chal aaj ek naya rishta banate hain...

Gussa, mohabbat, taqraar sab saath nibhaate hain...

Is nahi...har janam me tujhe chahunga...

Tu haan keh de bas...is pal me sadiyaan jee jaunga...

5. Naina...tumhe bhi mujhse pyaar hai na...

Kaho na, dil tumhara bhi beqaraar hai na..

Kya dogi ek mauka, apni har galti mitaane ka..

Ek mauka firse tere dil me jagah banane ka?

Again some impromptu shayaris coz of sudden insomnia 😆 Feedback welcome...PS: I'm not a shayar...

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990

Sameer to Naina:

1. Ishq me padna hai mushkil, par bin tere jeena kahan aasan,

Sau dard seh lu teri khaatir, bas aa jaye tere chehre pe muskaan...

2. Tu jitna door mujhse jaayegi, utni meri taqleef badhayegi

Par main bhi haar na maanuga, tu meri hi dulhaniya kehlayegi

3. Hawa ka jhonka hun, tujhpe aakar bikhar jaunga..

Jo tu na mili, sach kehta hu, jeete jee mar jaunga

4. Jab pehli nazar ka asar hua, tab maine kahan jaana

Yahi wo teer hai, jo banayega mujhe ghayal deewana

Tune tadpaaya, gussa dilaaya...

Par sab bhul gaya main jab pyaar se padhaya

Tere papa ne aakar firse kahani me udham machaya

Paper chor kehkar mujhe bahot rulaya...

Zidd thi meri, sabak sikhaunga..

Bin soche samjhe tujhe mohra banaya

Rakhi se to bach nikle, fir dosti ka haath badhaya

Dheere dheere tujhe apni baaton me uljhaaya

Par hua yun kuch asar tera, ki bhul gaya kyun tha tere dar aaya

Teri hasi me, teri khushi me jaane maine kyun sukoon paaya

Tujhse chori chori milna, baatein karna

Lagne laga ik meetha sa sapna

Tune mujhpar wo pyaat jhalkaya

Jo maa se bhi na tha maine paaya

Pari bankar tum aayi meri kahani me,

Jab tak maan paata ki rog laga tha prem ka...

Tujhe sach samajh me aaya

Tu royi, tu tooti

Mera dil bharmaya

Kyun kyun kyun...sochta raha main har pal..

Tujhsi maasoom ka dil tha dukhaya...

Maafi maangne ki jab samajh aayi

To phir se tere dar pe aaya,

Kabhi tota, kabhi gulaab se

Tera dil behlaya

Ye bechanini ajeeb thi, ye ehsaas naye the...

Hum tab kya jaante the...hum tere aashiq ban gaye the...

Jab tere aansu dekhe...umad kar mujhe bhi rona aaya...

Jab jaana tu meri parchayi thi aur main tera saaya...

Tera hero banta isse pehle villian ka kirdaar tha nibhaya

Par ab hridya parivartan ka aabhas tujhe karwaane aaya

Tere sitam sar aankhon par, tadpa jaise maine tujhe tadpaaya

Teri ik hasi pe sau janam qurbaan..

Tu aur main hain aakhir do jism...ik jaan...

Aaj aaya hun shayad hone wale sasural...

Kya tu fir chahegi mujhe...bas yahi hai sawaal...

Teri ik haan se ban jayegi meri kismet...

Jaanta hu main..hamare dilon me aaj bhi hai qurbat

Chal aaj ek naya rishta banate hain...

Gussa, mohabbat, taqraar sab saath nibhaate hain...

Is nahi...har janam me tujhe chahunga...

Tu haan keh de bas...is pal me sadiyaan jee jaunga...

5. Naina...tumhe bhi mujhse pyaar hai na...

Kaho na, dil tumhara bhi beqaraar hai na..

Kya dogi ek mauka, apni har galti mitaane ka..

Ek mauka firse tere dil me jagah banane ka?

Again some impromptu shayaris coz of sudden insomnia 😆 Feedback welcome...PS: I'm not a shayar...