dira one shot(dil mera hai nasamjh kitna)- Page 2

Originally posted by: Sravani_Rao

It's beautiful and emotional...

Ratan sa😭

Originally posted by: sanateju

sorry.. i thought to unite them..but got tired of writing so wrapped up der only

Originally posted by: Sravani_Rao

Ab punishment tho dena padega... Dira ko alag karne ke liye😡

And ur punishment is... u have to write another os/ff on Dira😆

Originally posted by: nancy505

I will kill you Sana

But very good writing. Heartbreaking, heartwarmimg but very very beautiful.

And how dare you make a story where Ratan is crying.

But it touched my heart.I could imagine Ratan drenching in water with Diya where he is staring at her and Diya looked back and see Ratan is standing still and looking at her.She waves her hand that why he is staring .Ratan comes to the reality and nods that nothing and Diya closes her eyes, putting her heads up tries to feel the raindrops.And Ratan still looking at her.Wow you are brilliant Sana.(though I modified some things,ignore me)

Welcome to our mad, crazy forum where I am always saying bakwaas and Sravani,Kuhsbarry,C0raline are in catfight about CT(God bless them).

Originally posted by: kusharberry

arreh wah wah kya baat hai BhuNi

Originally posted by: Shafoo

This is amazing

Originally posted by: nancy505

I will kill you Sana

But very good writing. Heartbreaking, heartwarmimg but very very beautiful.

And how dare you make a story where Ratan is crying.

But it touched my heart.I could imagine Ratan drenching in water with Diya where he is staring at her and Diya looked back and see Ratan is standing still and looking at her.She waves her hand that why he is staring .Ratan comes to the reality and nods that nothing and Diya closes her eyes, putting her heads up tries to feel the raindrops.And Ratan still looking at her.Wow you are brilliant Sana.(though I modified some things,ignore me)

Welcome to our mad, crazy forum where I am always saying bakwaas and Sravani,Kuhsbarry,C0raline are in catfight about CT(God bless them).

Originally posted by: Shanaya1526

Amazing

Originally posted by: kusharberry

no non o no nancy iam after my ratan sa only sravu and coraline is after bhuvan sa mein bas cheer group mein hai for sravu hai nah