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sanateju

@sanateju

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Sravani_Rao
It's beautiful and emotional...
Ratan sa😭

Thank u sravani😊

Bhuvan sa ki deewani😃😆

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DiRa_Love

@DiRa_Love

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: sanateju

sorry.. i thought to unite them..but got tired of writing so wrapped up der only

Ab punishment tho dena padega... Dira ko alag karne ke liye😡

And ur punishment is... u have to write another os/ff on Dira😆

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floral

@floral

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+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Sravani_Rao

Ab punishment tho dena padega... Dira ko alag karne ke liye😡
And ur punishment is... u have to write another os/ff on Dira😆

arreh wah wah kya baat hai BhuNi

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desiseriesfan

@desiseriesfan

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#14

I will kill you Sana

But very good writing. Heartbreaking, heartwarmimg but very very beautiful.

And how dare you make a story where Ratan is crying.

But it touched my heart.I could imagine Ratan drenching in water with Diya where he is staring at her and Diya looked back and see Ratan is standing still and looking at her.She waves her hand that why he is staring .Ratan comes to the reality and nods that nothing and Diya closes her eyes, putting her heads up tries to feel the raindrops.And Ratan still looking at her.Wow you are brilliant Sana.(though I modified some things,ignore me)

Welcome to our mad, crazy forum where I am always saying bakwaas and Sravani,Kuhsbarry,C0raline are in catfight about CT(God bless them).

Edited by nancy505 - 7 years ago

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floral

@floral

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: nancy505
I will kill you Sana

But very good writing. Heartbreaking, heartwarmimg but very very beautiful.

And how dare you make a story where Ratan is crying.

But it touched my heart.I could imagine Ratan drenching in water with Diya where he is staring at her and Diya looked back and see Ratan is standing still and looking at her.She waves her hand that why he is staring .Ratan comes to the reality and nods that nothing and Diya closes her eyes, putting her heads up tries to feel the raindrops.And Ratan still looking at her.Wow you are brilliant Sana.(though I modified some things,ignore me)

Welcome to our mad, crazy forum where I am always saying bakwaas and Sravani,Kuhsbarry,C0raline are in catfight about CT(God bless them).

no non o no nancy iam after my ratan sa only sravu and coraline is after bhuvan sa mein bas cheer group mein hai for sravu hai nah

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sanateju

@sanateju

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: kusharberry
arreh wah wah kya baat hai BhuNi

Hame saza manzoor hai...ha ha...bt actually seperation was not planned..i was just tired writing..so stopped der only😆..thinkng to continue..m so lazy..that why i wrote os 😃

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sanateju

@sanateju

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Shafoo
This is amazing

Thank u dear😊

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sanateju

@sanateju

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: nancy505
I will kill you Sana

But very good writing. Heartbreaking, heartwarmimg but very very beautiful.

And how dare you make a story where Ratan is crying.

But it touched my heart.I could imagine Ratan drenching in water with Diya where he is staring at her and Diya looked back and see Ratan is standing still and looking at her.She waves her hand that why he is staring .Ratan comes to the reality and nods that nothing and Diya closes her eyes, putting her heads up tries to feel the raindrops.And Ratan still looking at her.Wow you are brilliant Sana.(though I modified some things,ignore me)

Welcome to our mad, crazy forum where I am always saying bakwaas and Sravani,Kuhsbarry,C0raline are in catfight about CT(God bless them).

Mummy dont kill me plz😭me rlhn kese dekhugi agar me mar jaugi to...

Thank u ..gkad u like it..

Ur imagination is superb wese..i will add that in my new is😆

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sanateju

@sanateju

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Shanaya1526
Amazing

Thnk u dear😊

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desiseriesfan

@desiseriesfan

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: kusharberry
no non o no nancy iam after my ratan sa only sravu and coraline is after bhuvan sa mein bas cheer group mein hai for sravu hai nah

Sorry.I take my words back.

But now you are my sotan you...😡😡😡

Ratan is mine.(But if you have no problem I can share with you Lina)

Edited by nancy505 - 7 years ago