RiKara OS: Daughter's first love [Ft Omkara]

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wanderlust786

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Posted: 8 years ago

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hiya

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Posted: 8 years ago

omg
this was such a emotional os
gauris letter was too good
well written👏

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wanderlust786

@wanderlust786

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: coolhi1988
omg
this was such a emotional os
gauris letter was too good
well written👏

Thank you so much 😊

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Pixiepixel11

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Posted: 8 years ago

Wow that was such an emotional one shot.
Loved it so much.

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wanderlust786

@wanderlust786

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sirimiri
Wow that was such an emotional one shot.
Loved it so much.

Thank youu 😊

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IAdoreYou

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Posted: 8 years ago

This is one heartwarming shot, undoubtedly. Not that I haven't read on this concept before, not that I did not know the reason of Om's behavior in the start itself but the way you have penned this down, carefully weaving story with every incident is just beautiful. Beautiful. Keep writing.

Much love

- Harshada

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wanderlust786

@wanderlust786

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: IAdoreYou
This is one heartwarming shot, undoubtedly. Not that I haven't read on this concept before, not that I did not know the reason of Om's behavior in the start itself but the way you have penned this down, carefully weaving story with every incident is just beautiful. Beautiful. Keep writing.
Much love
- Harshada

Thank you so much 😊

This concept had been in my mind for a while now and I was actually a bit skeptical about posting this. I didn't know how this would be received as father-daughter relation is more like a delicate one.

Glad you like it

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Khidki

@Khidki

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Posted: 8 years ago

This was such a heart warming shot.

Indeed a Daughter's first love is her father. Loved the title.

Just love the way Advi respected and loved her father.

Beautiful Shot!😳

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Ms.Lizzie

@Ms.Lizzie

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Posted: 8 years ago

So beautiful

A father and daughter's love is so pure. It always makes me trear eyed.

Loved it completely

It was very touchy

Love how you took the whole story throughout

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wanderlust786

@wanderlust786

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Khidki
This was such a heart warming shot.
Indeed a Daughter's first love is her father. Loved the title.
Just love the way Advi respected and loved her father.
Beautiful Shot!😳

Thank you so much 😊

I loved writing Advi's part. How-so-ever a father is, a daughter's first love would always be him.

Glad you like it