SS-Changes Charecter Sketch and Part 1 on Page 1

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The story of this FF is different.Here Avni doesnot know that it was Dayawanti who killed Aisha and tried to shot here.So Avni is not revengeful.(NO JUHI)

Character Sketch

Adv.Avni Ayesha Parekh-She is strong,determined,disciplined,independent and successful lawyer and runs her own firm.She did not know that who shot her 17 years ago and who killed her mother Ayesha Haider.She is still obsessed with that case and trying to find out that killer.She hates Police Officers,Ashish Mehta and doesn't want to step in Mehta House.She feels it odd that Dayawanti Mehta has accepted her though she disliked her.Though she has immensely bonded with Rhea who doesnot live in Mehta House anymore.

Neela Parekh-Owner of Parekh Industries,Hospitals.Neela manages it all along with her daughter who though is independent but still alone.Avni lessens the loneliness that Neela has due to her divorce and losing her father.Still not convinced about Dayawanti Mehta she keeps Avni at distance from her.

Dayawanti Mehta-Killed Ayesha Haider and tried to killed Avni but was not successful and tried to accept her with true heart but now no one believes her and all her children are getting away from her.Still hiding away her crimes .

Ketan Mehta-Younger brother of Ashish Mehta.Ketan has started to fret over the losses in Mehta industries and his mother's lavish life styles.But she doesnot listen to him and Ashish has already left the house and stays nearby Neela's house to spend time with Avni.Ketan knows everything about her mother and hence is trying to cap all.Desperately trying to get his daughter back in the house.

----------Khanna Family---------------------------

Sweta Khanna-Wife of Prakash Khanna and mother of Neil Khanna.Honest and good hearted but worried about his son due to his job.She has too much of tuti footi english.

Prakash Khanna-Bussiness Man.Owner of Khanna Industries,Hotels etc.Still believes and keeps faith in his son though he may not be in business.Always in a cheary mood,supportive.

Neil Khanna-Dashing,Handsome Neil Khanna sorry ACP Neil Khanna,strict,honest and no-nonsense officer of whose nothing is above duty.Loves his family and Bebe to the bits.Still has never fallen in love.
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It had been 17 years of her mother's death nothing had changes for her except that she had grown up.Nobody knew who had killed Aisha Haider and who had tried to kill Avni Ayesha.Avni knew that the cops had been bribed.She never trusted cops.They are always not trust worthy.Though she was in a line where she had to meet the cops daily.From that day she had decided that she would be a lawyer and she would solve these three cases one day.She had been legally adopted by Neela Ma.Avni could never forget how great of a women Neela Parekh was.She knew that Avni was her ex-husband's daughter still she adopted her and raised her like mother.Avni felt thankful to god each day for Neela in her life.

And suddenly there was a alarm clock.!!!!!

Avni got up and like and got ready for her jogging.Her favorite day of time.Fresh air which she could never get in all day due to her being in court all the time and other than that stuck in office for paperwork and studying cases.Sometimes Avni liked to cycle as well.Well Avni's hate for her father was slowly vanishing though she still hated him for divorcing Neela.Avni took a big and round and came back home.

Avni-Ma !!! I am home please get my breakfast ready I have to go to court.

Neela-Ok you go and get ready.

Avni's room was huge with her room over looking garden and a balcony.She had painted the room blue.She liked the colourAvni hurried with her bath and wore her blacks and whites along with her black coat.She liked her work.She worked for it.She could help people on some level.She never took wrong cases.Neela Ma had recently pointed out that she had become workaholic.

Avni-Good Morning Ma !!

Neela (Kissing her on the head)-Good Morning Baccha !! Ready for the case.

Avni-Yes !!.

Neela-Where is your work-husband baccha ??

Avni-My what ??

Neela (smiling)-Your Assistant lawyer !! Dubeyji.

Avni-He will be on his way.

Dubeyji-Good Morning Mam !!

Avni-See he is here.Now I got to run.Bye Ma !! Donot wait up for me.

Neela-You have dinner with Ashish.Donot forget.

And just like that Avni Ayesha Parekh begins her hurricane of day.Dubeyji was her Assistant Lawyer.He had experience of over 30 years in court and knew many big shot clients and thats what helped Avni.His experience.Avni's talent and instincts and arguments and Dubeyji's clienteles.

Avni-Dubeyji I hope the witness is ready.She is 14 so I hope all this doesnot freak her out.

Dubeyji-I will see too it Mam.What about Mr Zaveri ??

Avni-He is in safety with my friend who is IAS Officer at home Ministry.It's his case.


Dubeyji-The Judge is here Mam.


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Neil Khanna's entry

Neil-I genuinely thought you were committing suicide.It was not my intention that we fall here...Miss..

Avni-No One

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