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Posted: 7 years ago
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Guys this is something I wanted to write always but couldn't do review this one

THE PRINCE


I was in UK since birth my father was Indian while My mother was Britain.Me and my sister have a great bonding she left to work in Italy as she was called by a interior designing company she was their since 2 years while after I got free from my MBA she called me for having vacations and spending some quality time together. I glanced around as I recently landed in Italy to find my sister and there she is standing in front of me I quickly ran and embraced her in Hug."aaahhh diii I missed you so much.How are you?" "I missed you too rids I am super good. You can see"rids smiled at her sister for her known answers."aur tu suna ghar pe sab kaise hain mom dad Dadi??""All are good and misses you a lot ""hmm"Anjali smiled remembering them.

"Ok leave these sentimental talks"Anjali said moving out and signalling the cab driver to stop.

"Di this city is indeed beautiful but m so tired right now"rids said pouting adorably.

"Ok lets go home first."

They both went to the apartment settling everything she had a shower and then went to take a nap.Anjali meanwhile cooked something for her dear sister.After having dinner round about 8:00pm they went to just randomly explore the near by areas and eat ice cream walking to the ice cream parlour.They were briefing each other about life while Ridhima explored the area too. As soon Anjali bought two cups of ice creams ridhima instantly got out of her senses she grabbed the cup enthusiastically jumping and turning around she bumped into a guy whose face was now covered with the chocolate ice cream as the half of his face was covered with it."sorry"Ridhima mumbled apologetically seeing his eyes fixed on her.and in an rattle attempt to. Grab the napkin she broke the vas laying along side it."oh m sorry"she looked back at the attender of the parlour who signalled to clean the face."sorry again shall I clean?"as she saw him nodding she started to work and As soon their eyes met all turned unknown to. The oceanic blue orbs met hers ridhima felt a picture has been painted of a ocean infront she felt herself drowning deep deep and more deep in his eyes. It seemed nobody existed except them in this wonderful world.coming back to world and saying sorry once again ridhima left as Anjali pinched her arm"rids yaar He is Armaan Malik." She said

"So what?"rids said shrugging.

"Urgh ridsy He is the heir of Malik's the royal family of Italy.They now own the steel mills in entire world "Anjali said informing rids about the blunder she just made.

"Di leave now we wont meet him again so what's the point of talking about him??"Ridhima said as both sister moved to their way.

While a pair of eyes keep looking at their retreating backs.he was eager to know about this girl who captivated his mind so strongly.He immediately took his phone and dialled to someone and spoke"I have urgent work come up here as soon as u can"he said to the other end and ended the call.still staring at the backs of Anjali and Ridhima.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awww this is super awesome starting dear
Love it and I want you to continue it
I want to read furtherrr
So better continue okey

So Ridz came to meet her sister in Italy and
First day, or should I say night she bumped to the prince heheh
Ridz didn't give a damn to the guy thinking they wouldn't ever meet again but girl
U never know whats destiny has store for u
Its the starting not the end hehe

Super aweome
Amazinggg but really short yaar
Make it little longer than this plzzz
Take care
Love u
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow awesome part.part ki liye bohot sukriya.story ka name,concept,character just wonderful.ridzy uski behen ke sath milne italy aya hai.beautiful outstanding story.love it.pls post the next part asap.eagerly waiting for next part.❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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lovely ..pls continue sooon 😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
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sorry for late abbia,but padhkar dill khush khush ho gaya..Italy pahunchte hi greek god...i mean apne prince ke sath accident..hahahha..blue ocean..i loved it so much,but its very short part..arman ko bura mat banana please..yeh itne rich people mostly bad guys hote hain..hehe..ud soon and pm me. i will read whenever get time..
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The proposal
I was standing on the edge of a hill capturing the beautiful sight in my camera . I heard di calling me "coming"saying so I moved to the corner she was present."yes di"I said as soon my feet were on that place.

"Look rids the royal family is here this hotel belongs to them and they have come here for a dinner see the whole protocol yaar"Di said praising.somewhere I was also a bit unresponsive to the idea but deep down I was very much glued to that guy I wanted to know more about that guy he came in my dreams in my daily thoughts.

"Rids"Di said bringing me out.

"Huh yeah di"I said gaining conscious

"Lets go and meet them their daughter is a renowned designer she might get me in her team."Di said hopefully

"Definitely you should try but she might be arrogant you see so rich are they"

Di nodded so having doubts we moved to just try a luck.

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Ridhima and Anjali moved to the dining area where only The Malik were present they all were so royal.A man was sitting who looked approximately 50 with a lady in her late 40s in a maroon lightly breaded dress completely reaching her toes.while a girl was seated in a knee length orange dress looking elegant. Her hair were open as they were curly.




There were two guys along with her of same age.A guy was wearing white shirt with half sleeves with blue jeans looking handsome as ever.




The other guy was The prince whom she have slipped coffee at the guy who captured her and seeing him so wonderfully dressed her heart skipped a beat.his Shades were off as he was inside and he was wearing a simple shirt with three buttons open and a blue pants making girls drool over him but he was ignoring the stares as he was in conversation with the elderly man.




"Ahh ridsy dekh Armaan kitna hot hai nA"di said and as she said that Ridhima's blood boiled.

"Di do what we came here for!"Ridhima said sternly.she didn't like the stares Armaan was getting from girls.

They moved and excused the young lady.

"Excuse me mam"Di said politely

"Yes "the lady smiling said.and got up to talk to di.


"Actually I am a designer and want a break from you"Di said expecting a disapproval because who talks like that to someone in place she is having dinner along her family.

"Umm Yeah you know my office?"seeing a nod she continued "come there at 11am sharp"the girl said smiling and excused her to join her family.

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"Dad,I am so upset with you!!"muskaan said to her father as he was here in middle of his son in law and daughter's bickering and he tried to help them sort out.

"Beta i was just saying which seemed right to me " said Billy.

"But you're my dad you ought to side me"muskaan said laying down on couch huffing.

Billy's face turned tensed seeing his daughter angry .Seeing that Rahul burst into a laughter.

"Hahahaha look at your face Dad"Rahul said.

When they heard a voice "Billy you talked to them or not??"Ananya said barging in.

"Oh I was just gonna do it"Billy said quickly

"You all are incredible now I myself can do now without interfering listen to me carefully and muskaan put finger on your lips" Ananya said glaring the two father daughter duo.

"Last night Armaan told us he wants to marry"Ananya said to both of them.

"What??????"Both spoke gaping at the news.

While the the prince himself stood on the door smiling at their reaction.

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Next Morning

Anjali was preparing her stuff her degree to meet the one of the most wonderful designer of world .Ridhima got a Skype call by her dad she quickly settled the phone and stood along Anjali so her dad can see both of them.

"Hey dad"both said simultaneously.

"Hi beta!How are you both??"he said smiling.

" Good but right now di is very tensed"Ridhima said answering him.

"Why?what happened?"their father said getting worried.

"Nothing she speaks too much"Anjali said intervening for the first time.

"Dad di gonna meet the best designer of world and I know she will like her concepts and will surely give her job"Ridhima said boosting her di's confidence seeing which their dad smiled.

"Yeah definitely"

"Thanks rids and dad I will leave now I need to be on time Bye "she left and Ridhima sat to talk with her dad for time being.

"Ridhima beta Actually I wanted to ask you something very important Do you like somebody???"her dad said making her startled with the question.Not getting a answer he continued.

"Beta I have a proposal for you but if you like someone you can tell me freely I won't object but if there's nobody so do consider this proposal"he tried best to make her feel comfortable.

Hearing such thing from her dad was a surprise but anyhow her sister is engaged with her boyfriend from her early days of college.They both were in same College but her to be brother in law was in business field so he was in a reputed company he was a manager in the business empire of France.So they decided to marry once all will be settled and his migration will be done by the company as he wants to stay in England with his family as they were from India and moved here only for the happiness of their son.So it was her time and when nobody is in her life how can she say that but somewhere the image replayed in her mind of the bump she had with the Prince Armaan Malik.

"Beta" he said making her come out of her thoughts.

"Huh,,...ah yes dad"she spoke unknowingly.

"So what's you answer I request you to meet if there's nobody in your life it's a very big family your mom really want it to work I don't want she trouble you by her drama to force you that's why I am talking it to you."Her dad said once again.

"Yes dad I am okay to meet them but when and how"she told as she was in another country.

"U just dont think about it all is sorted you just pack up and reach airport you would get a flight we have booked tickets all the things will be given u on the counter"her dad said enthusiastically.

"Dad you knew it I am gonna say yes??"she said faking anger.

"Obviously After all I am your father"he joked.

"Ok now I will pack my stuff!when's the flight??"she said ending the conversation.

"Its at 1:00pm"he answered.

"Oh god so soon bye dad"she quickly hanged up.

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The household of Gupta's were in spirit all were just preparations going on.the both ladies present were busy in cooking one was making some Italian food to impress the guests as they were from Italy while one was busy cooking Indian as they had a past background from that country.

Ridhima arrived home at almost 4:00pm.she entered to see a hustle bustle going on.she met her dadi who was chopping some vegetables sitting on the small table of kitchen.she hugged her and after receiving some kisses from her she went to her mom and hugged her who was flying in the air with the news of such reputed family coming their home.

She lastly met her dad and after this went to freshen up she freshened up and slept and didn't get the time to ask about the people coming but nevertheless she trusts her family she got up by 6:30 she heard the knock and her mom asked her to get ready in whatever she feel comfortable.she opened up the luggage and looked at a dress she was recently gifted by her sister on their shopping tour in Italy.she took a shower and wore the red coloured dress which was an Indian attire she matched a pair of silver sandals with it she combed her hair and when once she was satisfied with the look she turned around




and heard a faint voice of her mother who was whispering only smiling at her mom's antics as she get too conscious in front of some rich people .she opened the door when her mom said "oh my God Ridhima you wore Indian??"she said feeling upset that the family might reject her because of being Indian.

"Mom I am an Indian okay!"seeing Ridhima angry tone she hushed.

"Ok ok come now I was just asking"she said not wanting to spoil her happy mood.

"Thats very good then"saying these things they both moved down and entering inside the lounge she saw someone who took her breath away.

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Guys here is the next update I hope you all will like it this time I tried my best to right Long.And I hope now I could get a few comments.with the lack of response I am feeling dejected but it's a promise I will complete my each story until I am alive.

I just hope you would like the update and please if there's some more AR story readers do share it with them too if they like i also might get some reviews.

please comment please

And those who do comment thanks for the response I love you guys.

Thank you.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow awesome part.part ki liye bohot sukriya.love AR character.anjali jis tara riddhima ko bola armaan is hot just love it.riddhima ke proposal aya hai wow.love riddhima dialogue I am an indian.beautiful story.love the part.eagerly waiting for next part❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome part Abbia...
Wow, so Armaan has send proposal to Ridz...???
Ridz ke expression koh dekhke aisa hi lagta hai...
I mean she was shocked to see the person...
Aur first meeting mein hi usse dekh ke Ridz fida hogayi uspe ;)

Everything was just superb...
From starting to end...
So Muski is Armaan's sister...
With whom Anjali wants to work...
Cool, actually its superbbb :D
Glad she was nice, the opposite Ridz thought her to be heheh...

Mallik moments, superbbb..
hahaha everyone got surprise to know ARMAAN MALLIK wants to get married...
I mean common dude, he has finally found the girl toh obviously he is going to make it work...

OMG, hehehe Shanky knows Ridz would agree...
Issiliyeh he call and already make arrangement for Ridz to go back ehehe...
Waise, Shanky is so nice but...
Padma seems more in to social...
but nice, the change is cool that the father is more understanding ;)

Chalo ab next part mein dekhte hai, if its really Armaan or not...
Kyunki I had a feeling that its him only ;)
Amazing...
Superbbb...
Beautiful and...
Lovely update...
Love it...
And Love you...
take care :D
Continue soon...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: RihooHaws

Awesome part Abbia...
Wow, so Armaan has send proposal to Ridz...???
Ridz ke expression koh dekhke aisa hi lagta hai...
I mean she was shocked to see the person...
Aur first meeting mein hi usse dekh ke Ridz fida hogayi uspe ;)

Everything was just superb...
From starting to end...
So Muski is Armaan's sister...
With whom Anjali wants to work...
Cool, actually its superbbb :D
Glad she was nice, the opposite Ridz thought her to be heheh...

Mallik moments, superbbb..
hahaha everyone got surprise to know ARMAAN MALLIK wants to get married...
I mean common dude, he has finally found the girl toh obviously he is going to make it work...

OMG, hehehe Shanky knows Ridz would agree...
Issiliyeh he call and already make arrangement for Ridz to go back ehehe...
Waise, Shanky is so nice but...
Padma seems more in to social...
but nice, the change is cool that the father is more understanding ;)

Chalo ab next part mein dekhte hai, if its really Armaan or not...
Kyunki I had a feeling that its him only ;)
Amazing...
Superbbb...
Beautiful and...
Lovely update...
Love it...
And Love you...
take care :D
Continue soon...

Thank you di
I am glad you liked it.
its something different so stay tuned.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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awesome part..toh arman ka hi proposal hai ya kisi aur ka? hopefully wo arman hi hoga ..waiting for next update abbia
love

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