AvNeil Fan-Fiction : Chase Against Time Ch31: Pg41 on 11/09

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

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Posted: 8 years ago

#111

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vaish_patel

@vaish_patel

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Posted: 8 years ago

#112

Brilliant update. By showing Avni's POV, you answered most of my questions. Poor girl isn't used to being surrounded and having her freedom taken away! Bless her! Can't wait for their interaction post this latest drama! I live for AvNeil scenes but now I wanna know who this asshole is and why he's doing what he's doing! Update soon darling 😳

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Veenapai

@Veenapai

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+ 10

Posted: 8 years ago

#113

Loved it. So now Avni will understand everything she can't do herself.Some time your enemy will be more powerful than you. But you have to give credit to her guts.She is really brave.

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Wingsoflove_2

@Wingsoflove_2

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Posted: 8 years ago

#114

Awesome dear. Thanks for the pm. We have to appreciate avni's guts. Poor girl she dont want to lose her freedom. Loved it. Continue soon.

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Zara

@ZaraxA

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#115

Thank you so much for the PM xx. And a brilliant update as usual. Loved seeing Avni's POV and love how gutsy and brave she is, it's what we love her for. Happy belated new year and please do update soon xx

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Tumpa12

@Tumpa12

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Posted: 8 years ago

#116

loved it

awesome

thnx for pm

cont soon

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HighOnSarcasm

@HighOnSarcasm

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#117

Well this is what I was afraid of! Ananyaz stubbornness to outsmart Neil has almost proved fatal for her!

M pretty sure that Neil's arrival would prompt the attacker to flee...but had Neil been a second late, Ananya could have been in a world of trouble!

I liked that even though she was slightly drunk she was aware of the approaching danger & acted accordingly.

I don't know if fully sober she could have taken on her attacker completely but m hoping this close encounter will bring things in perspective for her & accept Neilz help!

Happy New Year!

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srinithi

@AgnesFan

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#118

This is bound to happen . She is not a person who can be stopped by anyone . I expected her to pull some stunt to escape from the club .

She is a force to be reckoned with ! Even in dizzy state the girl could give a tough time to the attacker . She is not a person to be messed with .

At least after this she should accept Neil's protection without any complaint . She should realize that the seriousness of the situation .

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Zara_Imam

@Zara_Imam

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Posted: 8 years ago

#119

Awesome dear and thanks for the pm. I'm glad that you wrote this in Avni's pov

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iykyk

@iykyk_3

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Posted: 8 years ago

#120

Poor girl! I can totally understand her frustration on being monitored all the time. But Neil too is helpless here, as all he is doing is to safeguard her.

Ananya by now has understood that trying to sneak away is not going to work anymore. Neil too should have understood that restricting her from doing something she want to, is not going to stop her either. She is smart enough to fool him.

Neil's fears were proved right. The murderer did attack her. But our girl is no less. She gave it back to him even in her tipsy state. I'm so loving this daring & rebel side of her!

I'm still waiting for you to reveal the Ananya-Avni mystery.

Continue soon dear. I'm eager to read the next part.

Edited by Ashi3 - 8 years ago