Avneil -a thousand year of love and wait(Part 4) 9/11/2017

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Here Is the 4th part---

Avni was brought home.The whole family was rejoicing the moment along with the double happiness.They saw their son in front of eyes after so long time.It felt like a decade spent in suffocation without them.Finally they were safe and sound,most importantly back amid them.

Their happiness overshadowed the worries of Avni's health.Before she was brought here,she had been vomiting for hours and every time she gaged blood.She had breathing problem also.She was given ventilation and the oxygen mask was still there.

Avni hadn't regained consciousness yet.Everyone was present in the room.Nothing made any sound except the whispering of exhale of the populace present in the room.They were breathing very heavily out of anxiety.

Neil was sitting beside Avni's head pillow and holding her hand very lovingly,softly yet hardly as though if he left those soft pair of hands,she would lost somewhere again.

Her hand moved suddenly and it took time for Neil's neuron to understand and react this.He was constantly looking at her weak,blacked eyes.She had difficulty in opening those.After flapping her eyelids for a couple of minutes,she opened her eyes.Such a blurred vision it was!! Nothing was seen to her.

She luged her eyes a bit more and thankfully she something.It was a perosn weairng a saree and standing in front of her putting her one hand on her head as if she had terribly headache or she was maybe worried about something or someone.

ONE MINUTE!! NEELA MAA----Avni got in her mind.She was looking at her after so many days.She turned her eyes,bebe was standing in her right side where sweeta had held her legs.It didn't look like she was helding her daughter-in-law's feet,she was infact caressing her dauther.Papaji was standing a little bit away in the sofa.They all were so drowsy.They had spent a sleepless night because of Avni-she was totally oblivious of it.

Her attention fell on her left hand.It was shroued in another hand.Why was she feeling so calmed,protected?She loved the touch.In all these months,she craved for such melody in her body.She follwed the margin of it and reached at the face.It was Neil.

Suddenly all her pleasure went away.The soft hands seemed to be the toughest thornes for her.She felt disgusted somehow and it was so unpleasantly pleasant that she seriously wanted to hug the perosn and tell him that "I want all of you.I so missed you,man!!"

She didn't let her mouth speak that.She actually couldn't.She jerked her hand from his one and tried to wake up from the bed.Neil felt the push.He had gone on a sudden sleep while looking at Avni.He saw Avni trying to wake up but couldn't had her strength.Her horizontal grip on the bed was loosing time to time.

Her grip impulsed -hand slipped from the bed sheet.She felt an immediate hard push in her back.It was Neil who had held her from back and saved her from falling.

"Avni.."Neil spoke out.Everyone in the room who had slept woke up.They looked at them in their half fallen pose.It was a bliss to watch them together after ages.

"Avni"
"Avni puttar"
"Mera baccha"
All different souns got mixed in the room.They were giving headache to Avni.She didnt want such chaos.Avni held her head tightly.She really was having problem.She felt drowsy.But before she could bruise off,Neil held her tightly and engulfed her in a warm hug.

Her loosened hair was blowing in theair.Neil had placed his one hand in her back and other in her waist.Though,she had pain in her stomach,she didn't want to loose his body pressure.It was heavenly.His passionate body gave her warmth of love she needed the most right then.

She wanted to cry,hug him back,clinch his T-shirt at that moment.She had wish to many thing but did the whole opposite.


Avni pushed Neil back.She didnt feel disgusted at his touch,but wanted to feel so.How could she love his touch?-she fumed in anger.

Neil didn't bother this reaction of Avni.He cupped her face,ticked her roughed hair behind.

"You have no idea how I have passed these 2 months.I was like a living corpse without you,Avni.I missed you sooo much..." Before finishing,Avni again jerked his hand form her face.

"Don't ever dare to come near me,Neil."-Avni shouted.

Neil couldn't believe what just happened.Everyone was hell shocked.They didn't expect Avni to be like this.

"What's wrong with you,Avni?Why are you behaving like this?"-Neil asked while wiping his tear.

He again placed his hand on Avni's face.She was crying so vigorously.Never ever in her life had she shouted on Neil like this.But she couldn't look at Neil.She didn't want to.Neil never wants tear in her eyes.He held her neck warmly enough,

"Sshhh...shhh...Avni...no,dont cry,dont..hey please,stop it.."he tried to console her like a baby.

She stopped crying.Actually she didnt have strength to Cary.Her head was spinning again.

"I said don't.Dont means don't" ,Avni made her words clear again removing Neil's hand.


"Avni Baccha...dont say like this..what happened?" Neela spoke.

Avni saw everything unclear.She felt immense pain in her abdomen again.It was her old pain.She crawled holding her belly.

"Ahhh..."Avni shouted in pain.
Neil had the worst panic.He held despite her disapproval and annoyances.
"Avni,what happened? Where is paining? What is it,Avni?" Neil shouted as Avni was again going into unconsciousness.She couldn't speak.

"Avni,dont sleep,damn it!!!Everything will be fine.Just stay with me.We will go to doctor..dont worry " Neil kind of consoled himself.

Her pain increased.She held Neil's shirt tightly.She coudnt bear the pain anymore longer.It became intolerable in every second.

"NEIL!!!!!!!" shouting for the time, she just drowsed off.It was all blank.Nobody could get what happened.

"Avniii...open your eyes...Avni please...Avniii...I swear I will never ever touch you.Avni,please wake up" Neil started panicking terribly.He was shuddering like hell.

"Neil,pick her up.I am calling the car.Lets go hospital", prakash said in a hurry.

Neil just grabbed Avni in his hand and took her in the car.He made her sleep on her lap in the back seat and prakash drived as fast as he could.


Neela,sweta,bebe didn't know any solution rather just praying.

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Hello,guyz,Avni is back in India.Lets see how her hatred towards Neil explore and How does Neil handle it.Hope you liked the part.If liked,make sure to hit the like button.

Thank you.

Raiyan

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Great update. Please write more:)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Continue soon.superb update.y avni hate neil?
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: avneil2

Continue soon.superb update.y avni hate neil?


It will reveal soon...thanx for the review 😛😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Zenab78

Amazing update dear


Much needed appreciation...Thank you!!!!!!😛😛😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awsome but still dont know why avni is hating neel
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Awesome please update soon 😊 😊
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amazing update please update soon😊

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