Raina FF - Pardes - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks for pm dear

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrats on new story ..👏
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Cont.soon.😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ananya2010

Congrats on the New Story.

Your first FF on RaIna i guess.
Waiting to read more of it.
Thanks for the PM dear.


Yes, this is my first ff on Raina.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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hello there 😃 really looking forward to reading your ff! 😳

thank you jasminerahul for the PM ⭐️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 1
Madanlal comes with his friends in the USA to India. After the flight lands, he shows them Taj Mahal
Madanlal: Though I am well-settled in America, I feel like heaven when I come to India. I know that India has got a lot of shortcomings but it has never lacked in one thing which is love. Taj Mahal is the symbol of love where Shahjahan had built the Taj Mahal for his wife after her death. He loved her the most.

One of his friends said, "That is really amazing and unbelievable."
Madanlal: According to the Americans, love has always been "give and take." But here love is only to give. We term love to be selfless.
The other friend said, "That is unbelievable."
Madanlal: Everything here is unbelievable.
Suddenly his childhood friend Kishorilal comes.
Madanlal: One more unbelievable thing has come.

Kishorilal comes. Madanlal introduces him to his friends.

Kishorilal: You have become a star from the time you went abroad.
Madanlal: Nothing like that. How is everyone at home? How is Asha?
Kishorilal: She is very much upset with you.
Madanlal: Don't worry, this time I will not give her an opportunity to be upset. Rather, I will see that her anger vanishes.
Naina comes there. Kishorilal was about to introduce her but Naina said, "I know who he is. He is Madanlal, the USA uncle right?"
Naina touches Madanlal's feet. The latter bless her.
Naina: I will tell mom that you have come.
She goes home to inform her mother.
Madanlal & Kishorilal also come home.
Madanlal sees the farmhouse & said, "It is very beautiful."
Kishorilal smiles.
Asha comes out.
She said, "You have come all of a sudden & have not informed me."
Madanlal smiles: It is our house.
Naina & Asha go to the kitchen to prepare snacks. After preparing the snacks, they come to the living room with the plates.
Madanlal: You have taken so much trouble.
Naina: It is not a trouble. It is my pleasure. I have prepared them.
Madanlal: Then I will definitely have.
He tastes the food & enjoys it.
Madanlal: I have never tasted such dish in my life. I have always found it refreshing coming to India but this is just a treat. Naina, may God bless you with a good partner.
Naina is shy.
Kishorilal: Our Naina has always been fond of cooking. Since we have our own farm, our vegetables have always been of a superior quality.
Some of the Madanlal's relatives are jealous of him as he is one of the richest men in the USA. One The boy's name is Manu. His parents come to Naina's house to ask for her hand, thinking they can get a dowry from her parents.
Meanwhile, Naina gets the tablets for Madanlal who is surprised.
He asked, "How do you know that I take these tablets?"
Naina: When I was pressing your clothes, I found the strip & the prescription in which the dosage was mentioned. I also found Raghav's letter. Who is Raghav?
Madanlal: He is my younger son. He is the son of my second wife. I was married earlier but had lost my wife because of which I had remarried. Veer was very small & I needed someone to look after him. Then we came closer & got blessed with a boy. Raghav takes care of me the most.
Naina has got 2 little cousins who want to go to America & are expecting Madanlal to take them.
One of them said, "We have to do something to impress him so he will take us there.
Naina: He is an American Indian. You can't impress them with Western music.
The boys make a plan to impress Madanlal.




Edited by kavsy - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm! wonderful update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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madanlal is so fond of India though he stays abroad. loved the friendship he has with kishorilal and asha.surprised to see mohindar and rano from ghsp as naina's parents here.naina taking care of madanlal is so nice.nice to see raghav's name mentioned. waiting for raghav's entry and raina meeting
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely superb update dear
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update dear. Waiting for nxt. Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update.
Loved it.
Naina is going to win the heart of Madanlal, he is impressed by her and may be thinking of making her his bahu.
Loved the friendship of Kishorilal and Madanlal.
Continue soon.
Waiting for the next update.
Thanks for the PM.

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