AvNeil Drabble : WHY ??

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey guys! This is something completely random in my head... after seeing the recent episodes and the OLV's...can't get enough of these two babies... AvNeil... so just tried to pen down their pure and eternal bond...
Many of u might feel it vague but it's fine... do give it a try if interested

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"6 mahine !! 6 mahine ki saari mehnat par paani pherdi Neil ne...!! Akhir kyu yeh wapas meri zindagi me aya hai...?! Kyuuu...?!!!!!"

Avni banged her fist against the wall in a fit of rage... Neil who was walking by her cell stopped then and there when he heard Avni shouting... he wasted no time in going inside the cell when he saw her banging her fist which had bruised her knuckles badly.

He looked at her furiously without talking a word he held her wrist and dragged he out of the cell.

"Yeh kya badtameezi hai?! Chodo mujhe !!!" Avni kept screaming behind him but he paid no heed to her cries. He just barged off as swiftly as possible towards the medication room.

As he reached there...he pulled her to sit on the bench and turned to get the antiseptic lotion.

Avni stood up and widened her eyes... "Mujhe kuch nai karwana...!! Mein theek hu sir...!" She said in a high tone of annoyance which she was using the moment Neil had entered the jail. She walked few steps ahead towards the door and stopped suddenly when she saw the door being slammed with a loud thud.

Neil locked the door... he went close to her, too close...held her waist and he just signed Avni through his eyes to go back and sit at the same spot. His eyes showed mixed expressions... they were almost flooded but had anger and pain too...! Those eyes...those brown orbs were looking straight into her eyes... and Avni like a hypnotized person just went back and sat on the table...

Why was she getting so weak whenever he was in front of her ? He gave her so much pain, he hurt her, he broke her completely but still... she could get lost in him every time he went close to her... why was this happening to such a strong and brave Avni... that Avni who could fight back at her enemies like a true tigress, who never spared any person who messed with her... was now like a peaceful dove in front of Neil.

Why ? Why ? Why ?




Bcz of



The


"Unconditional LOVE that binds her with him no matter what and somewhere in the corner of her heart this man is a permanent resident who doesn't leave"

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If u feel it was something worth reading then like and comment...

Thanks
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Gappu123 thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
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It is beautiful and lovely😊❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loved it yaar it's short but sweet
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Posted: 8 years ago
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beautiful! love it. keep writing more
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb... avni ki zid neil ko gussa dila hi deti hai...bechara neil vidyut se kaise bachaye apni wifey ko...loved it yr...plz do write more
Edited by Kiranrathore - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Well the only question I have is why did it have to end. Why why why?
The pain and suffering was so apt. Would love to get something more like this.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gappu123

It is beautiful and lovely😊❤️


Thank u 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Globetrotter_me

Well the only question I have is why did it have to end. Why why why?

The pain and suffering was so apt. Would love to get something more like this.


Haha thanks dear but it had to end... Bcz i just wrote as a drabble since this pain AvNeil are going through was stuck in my mind... so i penned it...


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: neeraja91

beautiful! love it. keep writing more


Thnq 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loved the drabble. Please write more.

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