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Posted: 7 years ago

#311

Originally posted by: Roopa_1
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iss story mein hain😉

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Roopa_1

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Posted: 7 years ago

#312

Originally posted by: Iptida

iss story mein hain😉

Yea ... Iss story likhne wali

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#313

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Edited by Iptida - 7 years ago

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Posted: 7 years ago

#314

Originally posted by: Roopa_1

Yea ... Iss story likhne wali

Mujhe kuch dikhai nahin de raha 😉

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Roopa_1

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Posted: 7 years ago

#316

Mys mys mysterious but bloody gorgeous 😆😉 The suspence is purely killing me didu .. How come this can even be possible ? Maan forgot everything that happend the previous night ... 😲 omg i am not at all getting this one .. According to gaurd he came back home by himself and is in the senses .. yaha two possibilities ho sakthe hain .. Ek gaurd jhoot bol raha haim .. Do vo kala smoke maan ke andar guss kar maan ko leke aayi hain .. Haha 😆 Yeh possibilities galat bhi hosakthe hain 😆 predicting the future 😛 I know i am wrong...

And myrah and geet are behaving as nothing had happend .. This is not expected .. Maan is thinking that they forgot everything like him .. But baath toh kuch aur hain .. They remember very well .. I think geet is the reason behind gaurds answer ... Ufff kuch bhi hosaktha hain .. Its thrilling but guess toh kar sakthe hain na .. Freedom to guess 😆 maan is getting affected by geet .. Pehle myrah and ab uski behen 😡 Agar geet ki maa aagayi toh usko bhi dekhe ga kya 😆 Maan ko toh bahuth yaad hain geet aur uski baatein lekin iss bande ko kal raat kya hua uske baare mein patha nahin .. Sirf geet ki eyes aur geet ka interest yaad hain 😆 he himself called geet and asked her to attend interview .. They have selected geet but still he wanted to follow rules ... So he again took her interview ..

I just loved it .. Totally the way you have expressed abt colours .. Woeww .. I was awed .. And orange ? Maan kyun volcano ki tarah udd gaya orange ke bare mein kehthe waqt ? Hmm note this point .. Who is this mysterious person ? why he is saying not to get physical to maan ? Why she will die ? So i can understand one thing that this black smoke protects maan from chudails 😆 So if geet get close to maan yeh black smoke bahar aayegi .. So but she came to lure maan na ?

I will surely get mad because of all these questions .. Dont go without answering this .. I am loving this one .. 😳

Edited by Roopa_1 - 7 years ago

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#317

PRECAP :

"It's alright...But yeah...it doesn't often happen with me...But with you I don't like formalities for some reason...I feel I can relate to you Geet...So aap next time se mujhe kuch kehne se pehle don't feel so hesitated..." He couldn't finish as abruptly her soft body pressed on him in a hurling motion followed by her earth shattering scream!!

"Maannnhhh" She screamed her lungs out and pushed him fiercely as the gunshot numbed their senses!

Edited by Iptida - 7 years ago

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Tris

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Posted: 7 years ago

#318

Res
Beautiful mesmerizing gif
Outstanding update 👏 worth the wait
U knw how i was after this story because of the unique storyline
The ud is mindblowing n mysterious just loving the pace of this ff
Writing ki kia kehne? U r a pro n versatile writer n with ur everystory u r proving it
Awesome just awesome
Maan wakes up n remembers nothing his head is heavy n the guard tells him that he himself came
Bt how? Because he was unconscious n what about myrah n geet?
Kyu ki they were in senses n saw maan falling down so idhar pakka kuch jhol he
Maan seems 2 share a lovely bond with his mom n dadi
He goes 2 school n the principal reminds him that he has 2 select art teacher 4 their school
In oct they have art competition n maan is lost in geet's thought
There is a line i m confused a photograph flashed into maans mind? What does that mean?
Maan has seen geet earlier 2? Myrah is behaving cool n unaffected bt am sure there is more 2 this
Both sisters r lying they remember evrything i feel
Then maan calls geet n tells her about the job interview
She is very interested 2 take the job now maan is a man of honor n he legitimately being fair takes interview of all candidates
The interview session n questions were awesome
Loved geet's ans so much she is very intelligent i must say
The way she described color r awesome ipti r u a painter 2?
At orange maan gave the job 2 geet instantly so why so much snapping at orange?
I liked miss rosy by the way she was sweet
So geet showed she is happy bt maan k jate hi she remembers her conversation with that mysterious guy who is the cause of all this
He explicitly warned geet n myrah 2 not sleep with maan
He mentioned myrah's name 2 means both sisters r trying 2 trap maan in some love lust thing
Bt Maan is very intelligent abtak jitna smajh aya hai merko itna asani se 2 nai fasne wala
Aur ye black smoke ka kia chakar he ? I am pulling my hair god its so mysterious
U better update this sooner this time ipti
Plz already waiting 4 the next ud eagerly
tHax 4 updating finally after 2 months yar love u 4 this outstanding chapter 👏

Edited by solaceMG - 7 years ago

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Roopa_1

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Posted: 7 years ago

#319

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Edited by Roopa_1 - 7 years ago

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#320

Originally posted by: Roopa_1
Mys mys mysterious but bloody gorgeous 😆😉 The suspence is purely killing me didu .. How come this can even be possible ? Maan forgot everything that happend the previous night ... 😲 omg i am not at all getting this one .. According to gaurd he came back home by himself and is in the senses .. yaha two possibilities ho sakthe hain .. Ek gaurd jhoot bol raha haim .. Do vo kala smoke maan ke andar guss kar maan ko leke aayi hain .. Haha 😆 Yeh possibilities galat bhi hosakthe hain 😆 predicting the future 😛 I know i am wrong...
And myrah and geet are behaving as nothing had happend .. This is not expected .. Maan is thinking that they forgot everything like him .. But baath toh kuch aur hain .. They remember very well .. I think geet is the reason behind gaurds answer ... Ufff kuch bhi hosaktha hain .. Its thrilling but guess toh kar sakthe hain na .. Freedom to guess 😆 maan is getting affected by geet .. Pehle myrah and ab uski behen 😡 Agar geet ki maa aagayi toh usko bhi dekhe ga kya 😆 Maan ko toh bahuth yaad hain geet aur uski baatein lekin iss bande ko kal raat kya hua uske baare mein patha nahin .. Sirf geet ki eyes aur geet ka interest yaad hain 😆 he himself called geet and asked her to attend interview .. They have selected geet but still he wanted to follow rules ... So he again took her interview ..
I just loved it .. Totally the way you have expressed abt colours .. Woeww .. I was awed .. And orange ? Maan kyun volcano ki tarah udd gaya orange ke bare mein kehthe waqt ? Hmm note this point .. Who is this mysterious person ? why he is saying not to get physical to maan ? Why she will die ? So i can understand one thing that this black smoke protects maan from chudails 😆 So if geet get close to maan yeh black smoke bahar aayegi .. So but she came to lure maan na ?
I will surely get mad because of all these questions .. Dont go without answering this .. I am loving this one .. 😳

WOWOWOWOWOOWOWO!!
My baby commented finally!!
This is a bloody story after all!! 😉

Maan forgot temporarily, later he remembered everything!!

The guard - He is not lying 😉

His interest on Myrah - Soon would be revealed!! Thoda patience rakho bacchi!!😆

Underline - Orange- your guess is right!! Maan is a divine being and his color is orange!!😉 Means he possesses that color, it symbolizes him, though he doesn't know that yet!!

Purple - She was talking with KM, this guy is the one who kidnapped Geet's friend's boyfriend and he is the one who wants Maan!

Red - She can get physical but no consummation!!

Green - Nope, it won't come out unless a specific criteria occurs!!

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Replied all of your your question!!

Thanks a lot baby for this outstanding response!! I am glad that you are liking it!!🤗