AvNeil SS~Entwined Destinies [Part 2]

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AvNeil SS ~ Entwined Destinies


Insight :


" I love you, Avni Parikh. Will you marry me?


"Yess


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The happiest moment of their lives replayed in his mind to taunt him about the mess that life had created. His face was pressed against the window as his eyes travelled to the view of the sky, the dark night sky. Millions of stars twinkling under the canopy.


As much as he tried to hold it, the pain came out like an uproar from his eyes in the form of tears. He tried blinking them away, but the droplets of water did not show any sign of stopping. The muffled sobs wracked against his chest, his orbs turned red; when he cried there was rawness in it.


She stood at the threshold, helpless seeing her son break and shatter into fragments. Their happiness was short-lived. Her heart filled with immense rage as she cursed the devil for creating a havoc in their lives. The tears that trickled down were wiped before she walked back to her room.

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She sat on bed, blank, giving away zero emotions on face. She had witnessed the brutality that the world can throw upon. Destiny loved to play with her, she was its favourite plaything afterall. The warm saline droplets of water stained her cheeks. She felt cheap; dirty and used. She could remember nothing except for the devil's hand that roamed all around her body.


No mother could see her child suffering. She was determined to do anything that would bring back the old version of her daughter; feisty, fiery woman, a force to reckon with. Eyes sparkled whenever she spoke something she was confident of.


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So here's a sort of insight into the story. Part 1 will be updated soon, if anyone is interested.

Love,

Nivi

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Instalment 1 - Page 2

Instalment 2 - Page 4


Edited by Aphrodite_NV - 7 years ago


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Posted: 7 years ago
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That sounds really intriguing.
Waiting for part one! :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Simi1711

That sounds really intriguing.

Waiting for part one! :)

Thank you for the encouragement, Simi. Will be updating the first instalment in few days.
Love,
Nivi
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Sounds interesting. Waiting to see the story unfold.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#5
Sounds interesting. Can't wait to read more :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Sounds intriguing !
Waiting for part 1
Update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Veenapain

Sounds interesting. Waiting to see the story unfold.



Thank you so much. Started with chapter 1 already. Will be up in few days.
Love
Nivi
Edited by Aphrodite_NV - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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That sounds really gripping. I am guessing some PTSD kind of thing. Both the mothers seem to be pivotal. Please update soo. :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bhavsss

Sounds interesting. Can't wait to read more :)

Thank you so much, Bhavya. Will update soon.
Love,
Nivi
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: AgnesFan

Sounds intriguing !

Waiting for part 1
Update soon

Thank you for the encouragement. Mind telling your name? Part 1 will be updated soon.
Love,
Nivi

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