Ashni ki guddi... poem.. !!!

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Bhavit Kapoor

@bawaswift

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Posted: 8 years ago

Hello Ashnians,,, 🤗

Me again here with a short poem on Ashni n their daughter as was named in Ashni Bas Ashni by Indu di.. Guddi... !!!

This poem i wanna dedicate to Indu di n Snehatanu.. as her daughter is always considered as Guddi in that story by Indu di... 😃

The cuteness that is there in the story,, i cant bring in with perfection ... but have tried to see what guddi n her father's relation went on with n how she felt with them as her parents... !!!.

Here it goes...hope you will like it.. !!!

Guddi..

He taught me life's lessons ,,,of right from wrong..
And instilled in me values that I might be strong..

And so through the years,.. like a hero he stood...
Working to give ,,, All that he could..

Ashu..

He was so proud of his little girl,, it was her very first day of school
He walked with her to school that day,,and she held his hand all the way
They walked together quiet and sad,,A little girl and her loving dad
Into the school her father led,,,but he almost cried when she said
Daddy, Daddy please don't go,,don't leave me here all alone
I'll miss you if you go away,,,and I might need you, can't you stay
Little Daughter please don't cry,,,you'll be okay so dry your eyes
You have our memories in your heart,,,We're together though we're apart

To her parents..

There are people whom you can't replace,...They're the ones who gave you your face.
They'll love you through thick and thin,...They show you the light from deep within.
there's no one who can love you more,...than your very own parents, that's for sure...
Always remember that this is true,,,,that wherever you go, your parents will be there for you...

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thanks for the read.. !!!

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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 8 years ago

Beautiful lines...beautiful rhyming words all expressing the beautiful relationship between a father and his daughter Guddi😃👏

The first day of school and the emotions a child goes through are known to everyone...the anxiety of being away from their parents...the fear and tears...which are never hidden from any parents ever😊

They just wanna console them and tell them that whatever it is...they are there for them and they need not worry...all this is so divine...so pure which can't be expressed in words😃

The people who get to experience such emotions and love are so lucky and so blessed😃😃

May God grant this to everyone in this world😃

Thanks a lot Bro for writing this down and making me a part of it😃

Thanks a lot...me speechless😃🤗

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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 8 years ago

Loved to see you dedicating this awesome work of yours to Indu Di and Sneha😃

I wish they come here once and acknowledge your efforts...Please come and see how beautiful this is😃

God bless you Bro and God bless Indu Di and Sneha😃🤗

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Babita

@babita..

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Posted: 8 years ago

Really very emotional poem 👏👏

Very finely U have shown the relationship of Ashu and Guddi

Such deep feelings of leaving each other : this can be define as leaving for school and even leaving as a bride ⭐️

Such deep and intense moments of a daughter telling the world how heroic her father has been ! What parents are, in every thick and thin 👏👏

Glorified enough ! Beauteous to make me so emotional, and ...

again you leave me speechless Bro 🤗

Hats Off Bro, for your efforts to make this forum alive and active ! We can never pay U back 🤗

Regards, as there are many !!! !!! !!!

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Anjani9

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Posted: 8 years ago

Miss Florida...any idea about her health??? She has Facebook or other accounts???

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Bhavit Kapoor

@bawaswift

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Posted: 8 years ago

not using any other site...

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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 8 years ago

I hope Florida Indu Di and Sneha come here and acknowledge this lovely post

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Swati Kapoor

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc
I hope Florida Indu Di and Sneha come here and acknowledge this lovely post

I too wish the same!

May them all come up and say something! We all are waiting ❤️ 🤗

AshNi ki guddi has been a lovely and a cute girl, who has tantrums, who has a hero in her Papa, and who wish to take problems and things to him, whenever she wishes.

Love her, luv AshNi ❤️

Nice 👏