I just came across dis story.someone suggested it.
I dnt know wht to say.
I m N-U-M-B.
I love Dark stories and ur story too stood as an epitome of Perfection till now.
I went to the backbone of it twice..
I love reading dark stories coz it really depicts someone's real life..
The dark concept which u pursued has been the subject for many authors but all have different ways to hone it. and u are classic in ur own way . Kudos to u for that !
This is the rude reality of Humanity which u have portrayed it well through our very own Arshi.
Such men still exist somewhere for whom anger seems to be on their Veins!And until they realize it ,all is turned into Mayhem already.
It seldom happens when they are given the opportunity to regret!
Coming back to the Story,i thoroughly loved it..
I m astonished as to how to have carved khushi's character..That woman is really a classic instance of someone who is compelled to go through such tragedies!
My heart goes for her..She stood there fighting against all odds and without uttering a thing..
She was nothing but a Mistress to ASR,a mere Sex object or a mere excuse of revenge!
It would be completely unfair on my part if I said such Women are brainless coz they ain't! Coz who knows to how much depth,true love can dig!
In some chaps,i felt why cant she stand for herself in-spite of her being a LLB student!
I m startled to see dat she is left Scott free even after playing with Fire!
She chose to forgive the infidelity and enjoy the false love of her husband.
I wont be surprised if she somehow forgives him .And to be frank , i ain't even surprised to know that She has turned into a retarded person ..Well Who Wouldn't !!
Instead of reaming him out ,she would chose to curdle him !
And now coming to Arnav.Well he is Brutish .A complete dishonored person .
Agreed he wanted to avenge but Why his Child damn it .. That chapter wherein the truth was all revealed was amazingly penned down ! What can i say My heart twitched .It was like a sudden out of nowhere current ! I read it twice and wont deny that a few sprinkles of water did pour out .
Well the part where he shoots himself , I donno but if in reality something sort of dat did happen to someone, I would have silently wished his death .
But since dis is only a fiction and we cant deny so that we all do dream about ASR no matter what !!
So i might give him an unfair chance to remorse and rectify ! In front of whom all the hatred and disgust are null and void !
P.S-
~Waiting for the next installment ! Update regularly if possible ...
~Do PM me .I sent to u a request .
Shiv Shakti
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