Amorous Elixir! UPDATED CH12, CH 13@Pg126[CH11@pg 114]24th Dec - Page 80

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Chapter 13 : New layers !!



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Silence hovered over as both stood staring at each other, trying to grasp their latest activity! Register that insane deed!

She couldn't remember if he was just inside her mouth or something else too happened! But she could clearly feel her body temperature is extremely up even amidst the AC while her own furious breathing sound too registered into her numbed mind gradually!! Moreover, a sweat line was clearly forming on his forehead as well! She was not alone who welcomed the heat!

Maan saw his adorable kitten was standing like a stationary doll while throwing empty gazes as if she is under some trance! Her swollen beautiful lips, messy clothes were faintly grasping into his senses! Did he cause all those wrinkles over her clothes??

That white stole of hers gave a lonely stare at him from the ground!

He was just kissing her like their childhood right?? The memories of their weak moments were rushing back into his mind and he couldn't distinguish those from the imagination and reality under the bewitched spell of that erotic long kiss!

Breaking the silence he said, coming close to her frozen structure concerning to make her ease up a little, "You remember when you used to talk nonstop like this?? I always had to seal your lips like this...

Geet noiselessly listened to him before commencing, "W..Wh..what...What did you do..What did we do Maan... Sparing a frightful gaze she spoke with a broken voice, stammering like always! Her fears were appearing distinctly now!

"We kissed...This kiss should have taken place the very day I came back to see you Mishty...Just like our childhood... He was nonchalant, does he even realize they crossed that fine line called friendship??

Did they make out too?? Damn!! This is a blasphemy!!! How would she see herself in the mirror?? After pondering over so much about this whole matter intimacy what did you do Geet?? Straightly gave yourself up to his lips!! How idiotic! How ironic!

"Shut up...How could you even say that?? Back then we were kids...But now we are old enough...What did you just do Maan...It's so wrong...how long did we...
And how dare you do that... She was getting extremely angry. So much anger existed inside her that's a foreign concept to her own. But those who affect you the most are always capable of evoking every kind of urge inside you!

Geet's speech was again interrupted by him as he cupping her face again pecked those moving lips and she was looking at him in disbelief, "Just like this...Agar aise gusse se baat karogi na toh aise hi karta rahoonga... His encircled hand on her waist again jerked her a little towards him while she was about to initiate her wriggling!

"Maan...Choro mujhe...I will slap you so hard...You are crossing your limits...We are not small anymore...not 5 year old kids who can cuddle...You should hell know this...
What's gotten into you?? Rahul was so right...wasn't he...! Geet shuttered at him while cursing her own breath, her mind was on a rampage of emotion!

"Then slap me...As if I have never been slapped by you?? I don't know tum budhiya gayi ho pata hain tumhe??...Satiya gayi ho to be precise...Par Main.. toh abhi bhi 5 year old hi hoon...I will cuddle with you all I want nanimaa... His touches of sarcasm were never ending but she was racing her brain recollecting the fraction of memories which is painted with such erotic deed she just admitted under sheer rage!

"Seriously the more you would object the more I will hug you tightly...I will keep proving you that this is ok...Things happen between besties...It's ok...
And...you tell me girl...What's wrong with you?? Tabse kiya kiya ilzaam nahin lagaya tumne mere upar?? This much you understand me?? I am still that little Maan...Who can't live without your warmth Mishty...Don't you get that??? You are my best friend... Hugging her closely he flowed his emotions out while she was just watching his antics and deep down found them cute as well! Why is her heart telling her to believe him? Believe those concerned gazes of his??

"Ohh...Really?? So you kiss your best friends to make them shut?? That too like this?? As he was hugging her carnally and his cheek was brushing hers, she tilted her face slightly to gaze up at him!

His brazen reply was on the way, "I won't lie...Your lips look delicious...I felt..wanted to kiss...So I did..." She saw him giving a passionate stare at her crimson lips which made her breath almost stuck on her throat, "And no I don't have anyone else like you...also it's not the first time...why make so much fuss about it...As if you didn't kiss me back?? And what was that strange sound you were making... Hurling that infamous truth he displayed his smirk, he is mocking her or teasing her??

Geet's brain was literally not working at the right frequency for sure!! Yet she tried to put up with him equally!

"Oh God...Maan...Really??? Grow up...That was ages ago...We were kids...We didn't know the meaning...Now..
Today that was indeed the first time..we never crossed that line...but today..it was...umm...Leave it... Remembering that sensuous smooching session she touched her own lips again, her heart skipped a beat instantly while a tickling sensation bolted into her core!

"It was deep?? Like a proper smooch...But news flash you started that...I was just trying to stop your endless blabbering...But you started kissing me back...And did all those...But I don't blame you cause I loved it Mishty...It was... Describing their terrific session back in an explicit way he stared at her lips, sending shivers down her throat!!

"You know what?? It made me feel like you totally belong to me...Ekdum meri Mooh... Ek aapnapan...Jaise tum hamesha se aapni haq jatati aayi ho...Jaise ke hamare beech aab koi doori nahin hain...As If my heart is in your warmth...at total peace...Even I loved your anger the most...Mooh...Aisa laga ke main apne wajood ko choo raha hoon tum mein...My lost elixir...I missed you so much...Didn't you read that in me Geet?" He drowned her with his honest disclosure, stirring her loneliness violently! Didn't She miss him more! And wasn't he the one who left her all desolated?

Why is she feeling like this all of a sudden!! So weak!! So vulnerable!! Amidst all the havoc created by her deep suppressed emotions, all she desired to ask him that he belonged to him. That he should never ever let anyone else imply their filthy unauthorized touch on him!!

Now after their intimate moment, she felt more possessive for him but alas can't show him!!! She wanted to cry badly!! And there this boy doesn't even have the severity of what they both have committed or how he makes her feel!!

"SHUT UPPP...I didn't start it...You did... She retorted vehemently, "You you you.. You started it...Sari galti tumhari hain...You liar... Smacking him on his shoulder she displayed her anguish, "How dare you even think of enjoying it...Tum toh ho hi jhootey...I am so ashamed of myself right now that I let you do it...You stole my first kiss... Maan patiently let her crib nonstop and was holding her delicately while she was hitting him continuously with her feeble fist over his chest and shoulders!!

He found her so much adorable at that time when she was showing her cute anger by hitting him, that's his Mooh!!

That's how they used to fight!! She would slap him, hit him yet confide him into her feelings!! So no, he was not angry at her at all!! Rather was watching her closely, loving her silently!!

"Geet...You started kissing me furiously I just followed you...Any it doesn't matter now.. She looked at him while his voice remained calm like his soft demeanor, "Can we please stop talking about it...I will end up kissing you again, you are looking too much cute...And this time be sure I will be the one who would initiate that french kissing thing.. Dangerously calm that was in which manner he let his words out, touching her face with a tender approach!!


"No..Don't even try that in your dreams...Fine..Leave that..But is that right the way you are holding me right now?? Geet hissed at him! Her mind was gradually taking control over her and she was trying to match Rahul's wordings with Maan's demeanor!!

"I don't care about right or wrong...Mujhe tum waise hi chahiye jaise hamesha se hum eksath thhey...And no I don't want to grow up... Breaking her heart he kept his stubbornness intact!!

He doesn't even realize how important this was for her. For a girl!! It's all so much ordinary for him!! Yeah!! Why won't be!! He must have done that numerous times that's why what a feeble creature like Geet handa thinks why would that even matter to him!!

"Yeah right!! So you mean this closeness is very valid?? She muttered clutching his shirt!

"Indeed...We are besties after all. He was quick in making the eye contact!

"I am going to make a few more besties..Male one... and then going to be kiss them, hug... Smiling bitterly she was commencing just to be collided into his chest followed by his burning stare!

"Don't you dare handa...I will rip you apart...and unka toh bhool hi jao... That compressed voice of his indicated he is losing his cool! Bull's eye!!

"Why?? I Thought this closeness is normal between besties?? Geet kept smiling while he was glaring at her with his scrunched eyebrows!! Anger and Maan Singh Khurana can't keep distance for long after all!

"Nobody knows you from last 10 year...I know your every breath..Every antic...We have grown up together...So what has changed in all this 2 years?? Not even 2 years...16 months!!! Why are you comparing me with others?? Comparing our unique bond with others?? He complained with his eyebrows knotted in exasperation unknown to the fact which was plotting inside Geet's enraged mind!

"Oh...Ok...Let's do everything then...Let's kiss again...Do some make out as well?? Chalo aur unique banate hain iss bond ko??" In a mocking tone she emitted those shocking words while her analysation was taking place on full swing against that childhood friend of hers who was looking at her in disbelief, "You know what?? Let's have sex.. Virginity... This is what all about, right?? Kyun Aab kiya huwa?? Bolti kyun bandh ho gayi??" Snatching the ground under his feet she started unzipping her clothes while he was dumbfounded for a few initial seconds, not knowing how to react! Then he instantly caught her hand to stop her!

But his hand was jerked off the next moment with a few more shocking statements coming out of her, "Aur uske liye your clothes should be off too Maan...Let me help..." He couldn't believe his innocent Geet could say something like this as well as making him more stupefied she touched his trouser, trying to take it off!

"Geet...Calm down...Pagal ho gayi ho tum? WHAT the heck is wrong with you?? Ye kiya bol rahi ho, kiya kar rahi ho Mishti?? Hosh mein aao...Ok, I am sorry...I am really really sorry...Please...Calm down..." Seeing her deranged avatar he apologized at last in a trembling voice yet fueling her more!

"Oh I am absolutely calm Maan...Aab door kyun jaa rahe ho...And why sorry haan?? Kuch galat toh huwa nahin hain na...tumhare hisab se...Toh aao sari haadein tod dete hain naa...Bestie??" An enraged Geet inclined herself more towards his flabbergasted confused frame as he took one step backward while gaping at her with an aghast gaze!

She is clearly not herself, as if in some bewitched stupor! His baby kitten can never say such abominable stuff or execute this type of brazen acts! That indicates her being really affected by his words which she again took wrongly!!

"Geet..." A dejected perplexed Maan meekly called for that best friend of his whom he always yearned till this very day, "Please mujhe batao...Tumhe huwa kiya hain, why are you so upset?? Kiya sunna chahti ho tum?? Ok fine... We had a weak moment...
But all I meant is ke it is fine jo bhi huwa...Itna accha bond hain hamare beech, agar galti se hi sahi waisa huwa toh I just didn't want to burden you more by saying ki ye ek galti hain...I know how sensitive my Mooh is...Isi liye maine kaha ki it's fine... This much gravity I thought our friendship holds Geet... Ke itna toh kareeb hain hum?? We didn't plan that kiss...It was momentary...Aur tumhe maine kabhi khud se alag samjha hi nahin...Naa hi waqt mere liye badal sakta hain tumhe, hamari dosti ko, isiliye mujhe laga it is ok..." Whilst taking a pause Maan deeply looked into her sad hazels which were burning slowly!

"Lekin I might have hurt you more by saying that... Then I am sorry Mishty... I really am...
But I meant my words, Mujhe bohot apnapan mehsoos huwa hain us pal mein, woh apnapan jiske liye main taras gaya tha...Mujhe laga ke meri possessive Kitty Mooh phir se wapas mill gayi hain mujhe pehle ki tarha..." She heard his sincere yet miserable voice which displayed he was quite unhappy with the whole current scenario while pouring his heart out, exposing the world of his abstruse emotions!


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Edited by WaveTeal - 7 years ago
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Precap :

Maan was staring at that diary of hers with a blank stare!! Like his empty gaze those papers were also all white, deprived of any inkling!!


May

Memories... is there any way left? How to create more?? He is gone... Left me all empty... Now I won't be making anymore new memories!!


Edited by Iptida - 7 years ago
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Edited by cutical - 7 years ago
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will read n commebt sorry i was little busy these day so didnt read but once read n comment dont mind di
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update
Waiting for next update
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Awesome updates..
Continue soon..
Thank you for pm..
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Excellent update yaar geet's outburst on maan nd their kiss part both r superb. ..waiting for nxt. ..Thanks for pm
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Amazing udates. Geet is spoiling her mind by thonking in a wrong way about maan. She should talk directly and know the truth instead of blaming maan. She is trusting rahul words more than maan. Waiting for next...
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update...
She thinks so bad of maan...
Why not she explain everything and stop her imagination.
But any way unexpected kiss😳
Liked d both chapters😊
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Hmm misunderstanding
geet doesn't believe him even he tried to make him understand
but those 2years gap forced her to think opposite and then rahul he manipulated her well
her innocent mind now fill with confusion distrust and new found intimacy

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