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Ramya

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: PanchaliKaArjun
This is such a sweet poem. The tittle is so cute and the poem even more. Enjoyed reading it.
And I jus realised that I missed your old poem. How could I miss a Draupadi poem? 🥱
Just read it and really loved. The way you described the five Pandavs in a short yet so beautifully is amazing! Very nice. Keep writing more such.

Sam

Sammy, thanks a lot!! <3

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Ramya

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Radhikerani
This one's amazing! So soft, and beautiful! <3

Pro doll, thanks a bunch! <3

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Ramya

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Viswasruti

Gawd ☺️ What have I done to deserve this?

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Nonie12345
Nice poem Ramya😊

Thank you!😊

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: -PyaariBhootni-
Beautifully written👏

Thank you, sweetie!

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: _Eternity_
beautiful piece dear
awesome..👏

Thank you!! ❤️

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Posted: 6 years ago

Next page please... Edited by .moonglade. - 6 years ago

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Posted: 6 years ago

This poem is addressed to love.

Dear Love

A million times a minute, my mind,

Reasons that you're one of a kind.

Talks and tribulations in joy laced,

My being in gloom, tissues lie creased.

I call you back every moment without fail,

Storms come and go, my faith stays regaled.

In empty gatherings and tarnished silences, I look,

In starlit skies and wry rose buds in books.

On the bottom of the locket the old man's wife wore,

Or under the sheets that fretting time froze?

I plead for your roar beneath a volcano's core,

To clear all of my life's cranky haze.

Dear love, I demand the world to be replenished with you,

For it to feel the miracles of skies blue,

With selflessness revived and trust to have thrived,

Make it a place where I could survive.

~

PS- I made an fb page for my poems and just in case you'd like to follow it, let me know and I'll link you up. 😊

Edited by .moonglade. - 6 years ago

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NONIE

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Posted: 6 years ago

Fantastic Poem Ramya👏 Edited by Nonie12345 - 6 years ago

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proteeti

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Posted: 6 years ago

As I said, this is just brilliant! The choice of words and the delicate rhyming! <3 <3

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