Amorous Elixir! UPDATED CH12, CH 13@Pg126[CH11@pg 114]24th Dec

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WaveTeal

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Sparkler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#711

Originally posted by: Roopa_1
Part 7
This one is again fantastic didu ... geet wants raghav to understand her plight. .. Seriously maaneet relation seems complicated ... But they are not realising that they probably love each other ... Maan is indeed soo possessive of her .. And what did raghav do in school ??? I loved that flashback dii ... Their bond is soo cute .. Geet angry on maan and blabbering and maan shutting her by kissing her on her lips .. Omggg lol hahaha ... Maan saw this scene in some movie and following that from then ?? Omg but now he knows the real meaning of that kiss na ?? And even previous day also he did that ... Geet is irritated and feeling guilty as raghav is not backing out from his love .. But how can he do that ? He loves her na ... So he cant back off .. Raghav is soo strong .. I liked the way he replied to maan .. But geet y she said that he is her bf ?? Is she trying to make maan jealous ?? And what this maan is searching ?? Raghav is soo insecure .. Poor soul .. Loving the way story is moving forward didu ... Its going very good .. Becoming interesting day by day ... By the way i loved that gif alottt and that smirk of maan .. His sarcastic remarks ... I love this sarcastic maan more didu ... He is amazing .. And why did geet said that he changes his gf daily ? It doesnt make any sense. .. There is some big misunderstanding didu ... Plzz clear it soon ..and what abt naina ?? Who is she ..?? What is between raghav and naina ??
Part 8
Hahaha .. This is beyond awesome ... Seriously maan is soo sarcastic ... I seriously love his attitude .. Geet is soo much angry on maan ... When raghav said that he is going geet stopped him and asked maan to get out but maan gussa hogaya and kyun nahin hoga .. Yeh geet kuch jyada k
Hi kar rahi hain ... Ufff yeh kyun geet aisa kar rahi hain .. Maan ko gussa dila rahi hain and she said that he will next hurt her physically ??? How can she think like that ?? How can she forget her frndship with him for ten years .. This seems that there is something big which made her like that ...loved their eyelock .. he so much want to kiss her but stopping himself and controlling his emotions ... And this sarcastic fellow is not at all understanding his feelings ... Omgg geet saying that raghav is her bf ... She has done damage now... Ufff she very well knows that maan is soo possessive abt her and again she did this ... Hahhaha now i am rofl ... What they did in car ?? Maan geting naughty naughty ... Then he very well knows that what they did in car should not be done by frnds ..and still not realising their feelings ... Lol i just love his claim didu ..maan ne dara hi liya raghav ko .. Agar koi aur ladka hotho bhaag bhi jaayega .. He is not at all leaving geet Possessive bestie sry bff of geet ... So koi bhi aaye iss maan kobhi jelna padega ... His restrictions lol no touchings and kissings ... Only he has right to do that right ..finally raghav has opend his mouth .. God he doesnt believe anything said by maan .. Poor him ...does raghav really dont care abt maaneet relationship ?? Or is he assuring himself not to be affected but his heart knows that he is burning in jealousy seeing their proximity .. So got it what maan is searching for .. He is searching for diary and rahuls recording ... Awesome update .. This is very long i think so ..

Haayyyeee!!
This is a SWEET SURPRIZE!!

Thanks a lot Ruppu my baby for this wonderful res!
Loved it!
I am glad you are loving this sarcastic feisty Maan!
Raghav is equally in love with Geet. Don't consider him any less!😉

Thank you once again for the long response comment! i adored every bit of your comment!❤️🤗

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Roopa_1

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Posted: 7 years ago

#712

Part 9

No words to say abt this chapter ... I dont know what to say ... Even words will be short to express the way i felt while reading this chapter ... I think this chapter is one of the beautiful chapter of whole ae fiction ...so many emotions , feelings ... Both are confused abt each others feelings .. Geet is angry on maan and yet she wanted to be with him .. She likes his closeness and one part of her heart is yearning to be with him but she is burying her emotions and behaving as if she is not effected ... And other side maan is feeling something new .. He is feeling some changes in geet ... But he is yet to realize his new found feelings towards geet ... Wow ... He is asking her diary which they made rule long back .. This diary sequence is mindblowing didu ... This really shows their true frndship .. I just loved this chapter... I want to know the other rules also which broke by geet .. Haha .. I know when maan said gud bye .. I got doubt .. Why he left so suddenly .. And mujhe laga pakka yeh maan ke dimag mein kuch chal raha hain and i thought ki yeh maan yehi kahi hoga and when geet went to destroy her diary he came from back .. Lol .. He played his trick very well .. Didu the way maan expressed himself is amazing .. I really cant express myself didu .. He perfectly showed their relation in words .. Yu did an amazing work didu... Yu perfectly expressed their relation .. Loved those lines said by maan didu ... And the last line " thoda sa aitbaar karo mujhpe ... " i loved this line didu ... Geet can only see love and affection in his eyes .. This chapter showed how much geet is confused .. She even has two journals .. But did maan took both of them with him ??? I dont know how to choose here .. I really dont know which scene i love the most because probably reading line to line i am falling in love with each and every line .. Kiss on geets forehead and "you will always be my elixir" i just loved this one .. Mostly i loved everything and every line in this chapter ... And flashback part .. Geet getting emotional and she is thinking that its all her dream .. Maan proving her its all reality .. Maan is behaving as if nothing had happnd but geet case is different .. Someone spoiled her mind .. And the more i am reading the more i am exposed to new names of geet given by maan .. Gol matol billi , mooh , mishty .. Probably they used to call themselves with their nicknames back then .. Maan is behaving in the same way he used to behave but geet is being distant and angry because of rahul issue ... They fought before maan left india ??? Geet is talking abt some punishment .. What was that ???

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Roopa_1

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Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#713

Part 10

So their talk was incomplete as raj came and maan left with him .. So there is no punishment .. Its just maan is helpless .. I am not getting what he meant sonali maa ?? Who is she ?? I think it would be revealed after few updates ... So ridhima is maans cousin ..uff thats y he want to talk to ridhima abt armaan as they are now in relation 😛😉 Maan came to india and didnt visited geet ?? 😲 This one is shocking .. I can understand geets pain .. May be maan is soo helpless ... Maan questioning geet that y she is avoiding him .. Mujhe toh laga tha yeh maan bahuth busy hogaya ridhima ke saath 😛 And why maan fought with seniors ? 😲 So this was all planned by rahul .. I think there is someone behind this and this had happend when maan went to london for some paperwork .. Omg they pleyed soo dirty .. They even showed some morphed pics and that recording .. They created all these just to create rift between maaneet 😲 What they gain by doing all these things.. Now i clearly understood y geet is soo angry on maan .. She clearly misunderstood maan but even profs are against him .. She still believe him but that proofs messed a lot and that pics ... Now eagerly waiting for next one ..plzz update soon ..