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Posted: 7 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: _Sukorian_

Hi thank u all for ur lovely n sweet comments. Thx for ur patience with me .

Recap; Suraj has decided to take the responsibility of Chakor. Ajay will help.

Suraj was sleeping on the couch whereas Chakor is sleeping on the huge bed alone in the darkness. She was afraid scared the darkness was haunting her. She was crying n couldn't move out of the bed she couldn't see rightly in thr darkness.

Chakor cry grow from a small whimpering is become a loud scream n cry. Suraj woke up n runs to the bed room. He couldn't see her n switched on the light. Chakor looked up n with her hands she calls him.

Suraj totally confused he walks to her. Chakor hugs him tight. Suraj caresses her head. Chakor sniffs n sob. Suraj; Chakor relax I'm here na there is no need to be scared. Tell me what is burdening u?. Chakor didn't answer she just fall asleep in his embrance.

Suraj; Chakor... he hold her back n slowly put her on bed. But she was holding him tight. He couldn't move he grip was strong. He made her lie comfortably n tried to lie next to her it didn't take long n he slept peacefully after a long time.

Chakor woke up first in the morning she looked at him his arm was around her on her back but with the other hand he made a pillow bcz he had put his pillow between them. Chakor lied over him with big eyes she looked at him. Chakor doesn't like it to be alone n the stilness was literally killing her. She hide her face in Suraj chest. Her hands were holding his shirt.

Suraj felt the weight on him but he likes the warm breath on his chest he automatically hugs her. Chakor was unknown of the feeling in her but she smiled feeling him.

Suraj was breathing continually Chakor removed her hands n hugs him with a smile on her face she shout.

Suraj I'm awake. Suraj crack his eye open in scare. Chakor was smiling on him. Suraj was breathing uncontrolled... Chakor; Suraj... she got scared. Chakor was breathing controlled n made him to look on her n copy this. Suraj smiled.

Suraj; Chakor I'm fine thank u for ur concern. But got frighten of ur sudden waking idea. Chakor looked at him as she doesn't know anything abt what he is explaining to her.

Chakor; hungry... brrr her stomach talked too. Suraj laughed loud. Chakor hasn't seen him laughing she clapped n laughed too. Suraj; ok first go to the washroom n fresh up. Chakor hold his hand. Suraj; ok I will come with u .

Suraj n Chakor were at washroom he gave her a toothbrush with toothpaste. She brushed her teeths like Suraj did his. Chakor was kinda jumping from one leg to the other leg. Suraj; with a full mouth if toothpaste. What? Chakor showed on the toilet. Suraj; oh... - Suraj beta aab kiya karega tu? toh gaya {Suraj what will u do now? U r done} -.

Suraj; hmm I'm waiting outside. She waved him a bye... Suraj -. She didn't need help -.

After a while Suraj was waiting poor guy the pressure on hus bladder grew. He hammered on the door. Chakor how long will u take... he looked down the water comes out down from the door crack. Suraj opens the door Chakor was in the bath tube with clothes.

Suraj; Chakor... I have to pee he said more to him than to her. Chakor u have to promise me something. Chakor; noo. Suraj; what? Chakor; no. Suraj; I thought we r friends. I was so wrong abt u maybe u don't like me... U break my heart. He made a heart with his hand n cranked it to demonstrate.

Chakor; aahh . Suraj; oh oh.. Chakor u like me? Chakor nod. Suraj; ok fine I trust u but u have to make a promise. Chakor was thinking. Sura was thinking too - what is she thinking? -. Chakor; ok. Suraj; with a relief. look I'm not angry bcz of this n I forgive u but u have to close ur eyes. Chakor closed them... Suraj; don't open them ok. Chakor nod. Suraj closed the bathcurtain. He finally could empty his bladder .

Chakor; ccchiii. Suraj; unbelievable close ur ears I just... I just pee...
Chakor; bad boy. Suraj finished washes his hands n opens the curtains. Chakor has opened her eyes. Suraj; u r very smart right. Chakor .

Suraj; don't smile like that bcz u r not. Chakor pout. Suraj; u said u r hungry right then y r u taking a bath? Chakor; new... she looked down. Suraj; ok I will give u clothes n u will change like yesterday... Chakor looked
with a sad face. Suraj; what? He is was had alot of concern n tension in. Chakor; bad clothes... . Suraj; ok fine today u wear then later we go shopping. Chakor .

Suraj was in the kitchen preparing the breakfast he started when he remembers to bring her clothes. Suraj enters the washroom Chakor was in towel. Suraj - I'm such a stupid. Just bcz she behaves like a child she isn't one -. Sorry Chakor next time I will knock. Here ur clothes.

Chakor took them n Suraj left. Chakor comes out with wearing the clothes awful! clothes. Chakor found the remote control well she thought it was for the tv but nop the sound systen goes on with painful like heavy metal songs were playing. Chakor screamed holding her ears tightly.

Suraj comes he turns of the music n gave her the right remote control she watched cartoons like the fairy oddparents Jimmy Turner. Chakor laughed n clapped. She was happy Suraj places the food on the table.

Suraj; Chakor come have some food. Chakor to the table but her concentration was on the episode... Chakor took the plate she filled it with food n sat on rhe couch. Suraj comes ready to eat n saw the empty seat. Suraj was a bit angry. He switched off the tv. Chakor confusingly looked at the tv... She stood up n hit the tv. Suraj was shocked he stood up too but to control her. Chakor; bad tv. Suraj; haan bad. Come let's eat together. Chakor; aahh. she opens her mouth.

Suraj walked to her hold her hand n goes to the table with her. He made her sit n sat next to her n feeded her.

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Thanks again for ur support. Sorry for mistakes.

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When u open udaan forum after so long and get lots of lovely updates of stories fir to balle balle
Keep writing and updating guys



Awesome Wala update👏😉
Poor Suraj (sooSoo)🤣
& Innocent chakor😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#72

When u open udaan forum after so long and get lots of lovely updates of stories fir to balle balle
Keep writing and updating guys



Awesome Wala update👏😉
Poor Suraj (sooSoo)🤣
& Innocent chakor😳


Thank u dear 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#73
Amazing update
It's cute how Suraj ended up sleeping next to Chakor, but poor guy, waking up so suddenly.
The bathroom scene was so funny.
Chakor is such a child, eating in front of TV, watching cartoons.

Waiting for next
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Posted: 7 years ago
#74
hahah
am liking this Chakor

so cute and so Suraj is handling her well poor guy


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Posted: 7 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: meshmesh

Amazing update

It's cute how Suraj ended up sleeping next to Chakor, but poor guy, waking up so suddenly.
The bathroom scene was so funny.
Chakor is such a child, eating in front of TV, watching cartoons.

Waiting for next



Thank u ya she is like a cute child mischief one
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Posted: 7 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: sumsukor

hahah

am liking this Chakor

so cute and so Suraj is handling her well poor guy




u know someone has to suffer 🤣
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Posted: 7 years ago
#77
Hi

Recap; Chakor is at Suraj place n is a kind of trouble maker.

Suraj looks at her. Chakor mouth was open he slowly feeds her. She was chewing the food... She made a yuck face. Suraj was confused. He forwards his hand n she spits the food on his hand.

Suraj . Chakor y u did this? He shouts at her old Suraj never thinks before he acts... Chakor frightens she moves backwards... Teary eyes...

Suraj just realise his mistake. He cleans his hand n tries his own... Yuck he spits it out. He put the food down on the table... He looks at her. Sorry

Chakor; food bad... salty...
Suraj; bhooot.. {alot}.
The door ring bells. Chakor jumps up Suraj saw her excitement n was confused if she knows more than he does. Suraj; Chakor u know who is coming... Her smile faded... No .

Suraj stood up n looked through the spy on his door. Are yeh musibaat {oh no Mr. Problem}. He opens the door n Ajay enters the house. Chakor hides... .

Suraj looks at him.


What do u want? Y r u here? Do u have any process in the case?. Tell me?

Ajay looked at him in disbelief. Are oh bhai control give the time to answer ur questions before u starts to fire again with new questions.

1. Nothing from u.
2. I'm here ro meet Chakor my sis
3. No have patience I will inform u asap.
Now u tell me Where is she? Look I food for her.

Suraj; what u mean by I have food for her?!.

Ajay; simple I thought she might be hungry as I know u r not a gud cook. Suraj; oh mind ur language. Ajay looks on the table... he gazed on it. Suraj; I used a bit much salt... Ajay laughed. Suraj; y r u laughing he asked irritated.

Ajay; the cook who oversalt the food is in love {It's german Original Der Koch ist verliebt, wenn das Essen versalzen ist}.

Suraj was confused he just shook his head... Chakor? Je searched the room with his eyes but couldn't find her...

Chakor was play hide n seek without informing them. Ajay; how is this possible? How could u lose her? Suraj; don't shout at me even I can...

Chakor frighten she hates it when the people around her shouts. Chakor runs out of her hideout. Ajay; Chakor he opens his arms but Chakor just pushed she hugs Suraj tight.

Chakor; don't shout... ghussa naa...
Ajay was sad n hurt... . Woh ghussa aur main ghussa nahi {he was angry n I wasn't}? Where is my hug? Chakor goes to him but she didn't hug him she took the food he helds in his hand. .

Chakor sat on the couch taking out the food box with aloo ki tarkari... {potato spicy/sour dish}. Chakor starts to eat with her fingers. Ajay n Suraj just looked at her both slowly sat on each side of the couch... Suraj was starving unfortunately Ajay too... .

Chakors face body was leaning to the front Suraj leans to the back Ajay follows his move. Suraj talks between his teeths. Is this all or u have more? Ajay shook his head .

Chakor was eating fully alone with pooriyan. aah. Suraj; Chakor he turns her toward him. He holds her cheek. Suraj; aaa Open ur mouth. Chakor; aaa . Suraj; there is nothing y scream? Chakor show a chilli . Ajay; oh no. U feel better now?

Chakor nod. She eats further but with care. She hears the stomach but wasn't sure whom's? Chakor was eating with both hands now .

Chakor made with eqch hand a bite ready. Shw holds it in the direction of Suraj n Ajay. Both smiled at her n eat. Chakor claps. Aaa... Yes wants to be feeded now. Suraj made her eat rightly.

After they finished with the food Chakor was looking like if she comea out of a food fight. Suraj hits his head with his palm. Chakor now u have to take another shower. She looks at him. Susu? {pee}. Suraj felt embaressed he lowered his gaze.

Ajay saw that n smirks. Chakor... She turns on him the way he pronounce her name was cute n soft. She likes it. Ajay; me ur bhai wants to know if he ur friend Suraj is taking gud care of u or not? Chakor smiles bhot acha {very gud}.

Ajay; did he misbehave with u?. Suraj stood up in anger... Ajay; relax I'm just asking abt one thing... Susu? Kiya? {pee what}?. Chakor starts to laugh. Hahaha. She told him somehow all. Ajay couldn't stop his laugh. tears were rolling down his eyes of happiness.

Ajay; I will now take care of u. Ok? Chakor; Suraj? Ajay; he has to go to work Hospital to save the others like he saves u? Suraj sat next to her he holds her hand. If u don't want I won't go... but hw is right I have to save lives. Do u want me to do bad? Chakor shook her head. She caresses his cheek.

Suraj felt a warm touch in his heart which couldn't melt after the loss of his sister but it starts to melt by her.

Suraj talks to Ajay.
Suraj; be careful how long can u stay?. Ajay; a couple of hours. Suraj; what?. But I can't leave her alone. Ajay hold his shoulder. U r not alone . Riya n Vivaan I discussed it. Chakor is now the responsibility of all. Not only urs...

Suraj nod he gies to Chakor n explains her that after Ajay leaves Vivaan or Riya will cone to take care of her till his return.

Chakor nod again she caresses his cheek...

Suraj gave her a warm smile . He kisses her forehead n left...

Next Update less Suraj but more Chakor n friends

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Posted: 7 years ago
#78
It was very cute update😛
Sukor are so adorable😊
Waiting for next
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Posted: 7 years ago
#79
Very cute and loved suraj and chakor bonding
Keep it up
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Posted: 7 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: katheriene

It was very cute update😛

Sukor are so adorable😊
Waiting for next



Thank h dear

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