Akdha New ss- Main Tumhaare Bina Nahin Reh Sakata - CS /Part 1 - pg 4 - Page 3

NEW Character sketch

Jalal Mohammed khan : he is 24 yrs old..he is polite,very kind heart person.he pursing final years mbbs in London college.he love his little brother so much .he is little brother but not more age difference only 10 minutes difference both were twins ..jalal ka life his brother.it's true one both sharing everything..he scarificed anything for his brother happiness.yeah both r same age..but he treat him like baby.his mom died after their birth.Jalal is kind person but if anyone cheated him.he never forgive that person even though that person is jalal's lovable person..he never forgive mainly that person hurt Jigar..omg person face angry JMK.

Jigar Mohammed : he is 24 yrs old.he is naughty,polite dido like brother.he pursing final yrs mbbs in London college.he love Jalal so much..but he never angry with anyone.he have protective brother so he don't bother anything.his life around only Jalal.sirf Jalal.Jigar means heart of heart . jalal ka heart is jigar.

( dont shock guys both Jalal and jigar look like similar..noone identify their identity whose jigar whose Jalal..)

Baazir Mohammed : Jalal and Jigar dad.he running famous Indian restaurants in London.he love his children.after his wife, he not marry with anyone .he sacrifice his life to lovable children.

Ram singh ( not decided yet): he also family of Mohammed.he is servant in Mohammed restaurant.mohammed treat him like his own family.

Bharmal family

Jodha Bharmal : he is 23 yrs old..she is modern,bubbly,prankster girl.she love her family so much.little bit stubborn character but she is so sweet.she favourite god her babaji.every time she troubling her babaji so much( babaji: yeah iam poor).crime partner dadi and her little bro sujamal and she interest in his father business. she want to learn hotel business in step by step. i mean starting her career with employee..

Paridhi

she is traditional girl.she talkless ,lovely girl.everyone love with her seeing humble nature..she live in tamilnadu..she also main character in this stories..u will know upcoming part what about paridhi ..

Savitri Bharmal : dadi maa of Jodha and Sujamal. If she open her mouth..lie only come out in her mouth.she love her grand children.she did it everything to her princess.such a dramabazz character..

Sujas @ Sujamal Bharmal: he is younger brother of Jodha.he is little bit stupid character and funny guy.he not liked any one call him Sujamal..he proudly said iam Sujas not Sujamal with angry face.crime partner of dadi and Jodha.he interested in music

Bharmal and Mina Bharmal: scape goat of savriti devi..they will do what dadi saying..Mina so innocent . both never raise their voice infront of her , he is rich person in delhi & he owner of Bharmal hotel company.but chairperson dadi only.she only take any decision..

Other characters

Saraswathichandra viyas @ Saras : he is 26 yrs old.he running his family hotel business in London .he is straight forward character and very sweet person to his friends.business partner of guptas.friend of Jalal and his lady love is kumud gupta.

Kumud Gupta: she is 24 yrs old..she is pursing final year mbbs as same college of Jalal and jigar .she so lovely girl with everyone except riddhima..her step sister..she thought she snatched her mom from her and love with saras . best friends is Jalal, jigar , Armaan,Abdul and cousin of Jodha.

Armaan Mailk : He is 24 yrs old .he is pursing final yrs same of kumud.he is very possessive but lovely characters with his friend.he treat jigar for his good friend but rudely behave with Jalal.he have reason also. One side love with kumud. He share his every feeling to riddhima. Childhood friend of Jodha .

Riddhima gupta: she is 21 yrs old . she is pursing third yrs in mbbs of kumud college. Step sister of kumud..she is very reserved type..she did not easily open with everyone except arJalal but she hide her love from him.. yeah one side love for Armaan.she carving for love.

Amarnath gupta: grandpa of riddhima and Kumud.business partner of viyas and philosopher of BAzzir Mohammed.

Abdul: batch mate of Jalal ..he is good friend of everyone.. lovely character.

Salima : batchmate of riddhima..best friend of riddhima..

Adham: he is spoil brat character. He hate both Jalal and gurJalal..because everyone love them even every professor ka favourite Mohammed twin brothers.

Ruqquia: current gf of Adham and one eye with Jalal or gurJalal or both ..

Karan: he is sweet guy. He always control his gang from angry.

Surya : he is cunning mind person..he cannot do anything for his selfishness.

Part 1

A girl kneel down infront mid age lady as lady sit in corner of bed with pout face..she wore white and black salwar kameez..her dress colour so suitable to her milky skin.her open hairs and kajal applied in her shinning eyes.

A mid age lady : Jodha beta, i said na..u not going anywhere alone..with soft voice.

Jodha standing in her own foot: mom, plz i am going to London only .it is very good opportunity for learning hotel business from amaranth grandpa..with pleading tone.

Mina: but beta, u going alone even saying u stay in hotel..i am worried about ur safety.

Jodha: i am not kid , mom with irriatate face

Mina: that only i fearing more...u r not kid..u reached ur marriage age beta..try to understand, our relative side, friend circle, business circle asking ur hand for their sons to marriage. U will choose whom u want to marry otherwise u would love to anyone..tell us..we never denied ur love also beta..with mother concern voice.

Jodha hugged Mina : Mom, u r very sweet mother but i want to achieve more in our hotel business..mom please understand , marriage not only every girl dream..this is 21 st century this generation girls wish touch to sky..in every sectors, girls achieve in their field and make their own identity..my wish aslso same , i create my own identity rather than Business man Mohinder Bharmal ka daughter or Mrs savitri Bharmal ka Granddaughter...everyone say..she is Jodha Bharmal..she create her own identity ..i want my parents and family see me in proud look...plz mom accept my London trip..without ur permission , i am not go with pout face.

Mina , allow her to London trip hearing old lady voice standing in door entrance.

Mina standup in bed : Maaji, u also supporting her.with sad face.

Savitri:u trust ur daughter or not..

Mina: Maaji, why u asking this question ..i trust her more than myself..she is my lovely daughter

Savitri : then allow her trip..

Mina: this is not trust matters..it depend upon her safety, maaji with worried tone

Savirtri: trust my word, she become safe in London and she stay in Amarnath bhai villa not any hotel.dont worry about her safety..she become safe in bhai house.

Mina : ji maaji..with half heartly accept their wish

Jodha hugged dadi : thank u dadi.. love u mom..

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Jodha standing near bed as packing her things and one young boy pushed her and jumped her bed and lay her bed in comfortable position ..with smirked face.

Jodha: hey duffer, why u pushed me and get up from my bed first with angry face.

Boy: after u went to London , i am only using ur room na.why not today now..and bouncing above bed .

Jodha: Sujamal stop ur monkey antics in my room..with angry face.

Sujamal: oyie i am not Sujamal..I am Sujas..with attitude face..just call me Sujas not Sujamal with chuckling face.

Jodha: hmm.but u r name Sujamal only , Sujamal ki bachi..with teasing tone..

Sujamal pushed her and Jodha also pushed him..both started their pillow fight like everyday they doing..

Mina come to Jodha room : stop ur fight...both never stopped their fight..Jodha snatched pillow from Sujamal and throw out opps unfortunately that pillow hit to mid age man head to ground

Man placed his hand in his hiccup and angry glare to them and Jodha and Sujamal pointed their fingers opposite each other..

Jodha N Sujamal unison: she /he only start fight dad..with innocent face. Sujamal pushed her arms and Jodha also start whacked him.

Jodha: see dad, even infront of u, he start fight with me.

Mohinder : Arhhh..Jodha beta, two days only , he fight and teasing with u..after u went to London , if he want tease with u also but he cannot so dear..leave him.

Sujamal left Jodha room without saying anything and Jodha sensed her litte bro sadness..he cannot fight with her in single day..how he could be stay away from whole 6 months.

Jodha enter in Sujamal room with two bowls of rasugulla..Sujamal sitting in window while playing his guitar ..

Jodha come to near him : hey duffer, eat ur favourite rasugulla..showing bowl in front of his face.

Sujamal: no need with sad face.

Jodha smiled : chinnu, ...Sujamal stand up and placed guitar in above table. He showing his back to Jodha as starring sky..

Jodha turned Sujamal and noticed his eyes moist.she felt bad for Sujamal..she knew that her little bro is naughty but senti and more love with his sis.

Jodha chuckled face: i think, i have a sister not bro..while wipe his tears from eyes.

Sujamal snapped her hand: chinni...with grinned teeth..

Jodha yuck face: dont call me chinni..

Sujamal: chinni..chinni..chinni...shout near her ears..with teasing face and run out while escape from her beat..Jodha run behind him..

Jodha running behind : duffer, stop..i am not leave u today..Sujamal running to garden area..and splashed water Jodha through water pipe and Jodha drenched by water and Jodha snatched pipe from Sujamal and splashed water to him.. once again Sujamal snatched water pipe..Jodha did it same..after few minutes both got tied ..both sit underground tree in garden place..its is favourite place of them..both sit back to each other and their back head touched while their both bodies swinging

Sujamal: di, i will be miss u with sad face..

Whenever Sujamal in emotional that time only he called Jodha to di otherwise he addressing her to Jodha, teasing name is chinni..and gudiya..

Jodha: but i am not miss u , duffer..with calm tone.

Sujamal turn and come in front of her : u do not miss me with angry face.

Jodha nod her head positively : yes..

Sujamal: Jodha ki bachi..i hate u..

Jodha: but i love u lot..with smiling face.

Sujamal placed head in her lap : di, after u go out our mansion, i use ur car..

Jodha: yes, but be careful in driving time..

Sujamal: i eat ur chocolate , unfortunately u already preserve one month ka chocolate in fridge with chucking face.

Jodha : yes..with pout face.

Sujamal laughed : i use ur room ..

Jodha:yes, but dont change anything in my room..

Sujamal : i open ur secret locker also with rapidly asked

Jodha : yes..

Sujamal: yes, i use ur secret locker, u do not mind...with bangra in laying posture..

Jodha: no..u cannot open my secret locker..that only for mine..noone poke my matter..i did not like it..with strict face and angry face

Sujamal : one day, i open ur locker infront of u..its my challenge , Jodha Bharmal..with attitude face

Jodha : i am also challenging u..u never open my locker.. let see

what would decide our fate, Sujamal Bharmal..

Sujamal: Sujas with grinned teeth.. Sujamal stand up and almost reading to running position..

Sujamal smirked : Jodha Bharmal, who will be eat ur icecream first ..while running..

Jodha get up and run behind him: if u touch my pistachio icecream..i kill u...sure..hey duffer stop..

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Jodha layed in bed : London..tomorrow i am coming...Jodha Bharmal coming ...with smiling face .

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Big University Campus, London ..

London ka one of the top university ..its excellent infrastructure and high qualification faculities. One side medical block and opposite engineering block present in same campus.

Mid 20's man with evily face : this time, she obey my word..with smirked face

Same age other man: Adham what r u saying..u did it anything with curious face..

Adham showing his phone : Surya , see this video, i captured her dress changing video..i already sent to her phone..within few minutes , she come in front of me and begging me..she think , I leave her easily after she slapped me.

A girl wore very short dress and touched Adham shoulder: hey honey, today whom got for u..with smirking face.

Surya: shilpa. Last week she slapped Adham in ragging time .today he got her with cunning smile.

Ruqz see some one come to their side (mind)..he so handsome, hot, his bischep and his cute face and his sparkling eyes ..any girl attracted him.just single day..i want his GF..

Man come infront of Adham group with calm face and Ruqz touched his cheeks in seduce way..

Man not see single glance to her and disgusting look at seeing her dressing sense..

Ruqz: hi baby..how r u..today, u have free time honey...

Man ignore her word: Adham, delete shilpa video from phone..with polite voice.

Adham: hero come to save heroine dignity with teasing smile.

Ruqz and Surya smiled ..

Man: u r pursing doctor, but ur behaviour not like that . dont play with her life..its not good for ur life and carrier with raising his voice.

Adham grabbed his shirt: if i do play with her life..what u will do with angry face.

Man calm face : remove ur hand from my shirt..its not good for u..

Adham angry raised and tried punch his man face before he got punch ..Adham hand relief from man shirt grip and Adham nose have bleeding..

Adham glare to them : how dare .u punched me.., u knew my parents r billionaire even though u punched me..with angry face.

Man: i already said , remove ur hand from my shirt..see ur nose have bleeding with teasing voice.

Adham tried to hit man before other man grabbed his hand and fold behind his back: how dare ,u try hit my brother in front of me..u think ..i stand like statue..

Man: Jigar..delete video from his cellphone.

Jigar : yes bhai..take cellphone from Adham pant pocket with winning smirk..and Adham tried relief from Jigar brother grip.

Adham shout : u did wrong with me ..i am not leave u twins brother with angry voice.

Jigar: let see Mr.Adham...bhai leave him..i deleted video..

ruqz and Surya standing like statue..yeah they dont want interfere fight..its not good for their carrier

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Jigar : hey man, nowdays , u got more angry in ur above nose tips.

Man side hug to Jigar: if any one hurt my brother..u think ..i stand in calm face like u did with him .with rolling his eyes..

A girl come infront of them..

Girl: hey Guys, i heared, u both did new adventures with that stupid Adham ..is it true..

Jigar: i am not kumus, our Great Jalal Mohammed did it with head bow infront of Jalal with folded his hand.

Kumud: really,hey Jalal..we knew how much u r sweet person but in Jigar matters only .we cannot understand ur nature..why u over protective him.

Jalal: he is not only my twin brother. He is my life..my jigar with smiling face.

Jigar hugged Jalal: insake only i am not fear with anyone..whenever i am in danger .my saviour come to protective me with cute face.

Jalal twisted his ear: dont think, every time i come to save u..next time,u going meet Adham gang before inform me..dont go alone.

Jigar : its paining with fake sad face.

Jalal seeing his sad face and leave his ear as rub his ear lightly ..

Kumud starring their bonding ..

Jalal wave his hand infront of Kumud and she come to real world..

Jalal: why u starring us..if saras see , u starring us without blinking eyes ..poor guy his heart break into two pieces with teasing tone.

Kumud hearing saras name and her cheek changed to little pink in sake of blushing ..

Jigar: Jalal, see..our gang ka sherni..blushing hearing her BF name..with joined Jalal teasing session.

Kumud: u both stop ur teasing , tomorrow ,u both come with me to airport

Jalal and Jigar: why...with confused face.

Kumud: tomorrow , my cousin coming to London..i am excited to meet her..long back she come to my home..with happy face.

Jalal and Jigar: sorry..tomorrow..its weekend , kumus with sorry face.

Kumud hit her forehead : opps, yeah i forgot..u both enjoy with ur dad in every weekend right..noone reach ur guys in weekend days...ok no problem ..enjoy ur weekend..

Jigar: hmm..u r cousin is beautiful girl or like u..with chuckling face..first kumud not understand Jigar word ..after recollecting his word..and Jigar run while saving his life from her..

Kumud mouth open widely and run behind him : u, what u said..i am not beautiful...while running..

Jalal smiled seeing his brother naughtiness..

Part end.

Jalal and Jigar enjoy weekend day with their dad..

Jodha land to London.

Adham and Surya brainwashing someone against to Jalal and jigar

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I know guys..its short update..sorry 😳

Yeah one of my favourite film "JEANS". i write jeans story in Akdha version...concept same but i pin dowm in my style only so please bear it ..this story u enjoy two rojat & Paridhi guys..i gurantee for ur enjoyment.

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Unres akka

Interesting CS akka

Somewhat u included Jeans movie na??

I'm going to read the chapter now akka

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Thanks for pm akka

Wish u a very very happy birthday Vrindu

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Unres akka

Awesome chappy Akka

Adham is disgusting

Jalal rocked

As I guessed

Then Paridhi should be jo's twin??

Update soon Akka

Awesome start