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Twinkle.MaNan

@Twinkle.MaNan

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: _era_
Bumping it

Oye Era sorry just now noticed it re..😳

And you are such a great shayer dear 👏👏👏

Absolutely awesome piece..Grand salute..👍🏼

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Mehek25

@Mehek25

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Superb. Most brilliant.
And yes Shiv...please come out into the open now. It's high time.

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beagleboy

@beagleboy

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

I cannot write in hindi as well as you but here is something for the Ghost that the Ghost should really ponder -

The Ghost is better off six foot under,

or flying away into the wild blue yonder,

where, in peace, he should sit down and ponder

on the time and effort he has chosen to squander

on people and a past that make him aimlessly wander.

So under the earth he should lie

and eat delicious mince pie

rather than kneel in a forest to cry

or hit his head against trees of ply

or look upwards at the heavenly sky

with tears of blood streaming down the blackness of his eyes!

Edited by beagleboy - 8 years ago

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Era

@Memorable_ERA

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: beagleboy

I cannot write in hindi as well as you but here is something for the Ghost that the Ghost should really ponder -

The Ghost is better off six foot under,
or flying away into the wild blue yonder,
where, in peace, he should sit down and ponder
on the time and effort he has chosen to squander
on people and a past that make him aimlessly wander.

So under the earth he should lie
and eat delicious mince pie
rather than kneel in a forest to cry
or hit his head against trees of ply
or look upwards at the heavenly sky
with tears of blood streaming down the blackness of his eyes!

Hey dear it's so beautifully awesome.👏 ...

I can say that u are a great english poetess .👍🏼...

where as am a little something in hindi/urdu ...

But did u notice that u & I have together completely summarised

shiv's doings in the show in our poetry ...

May he get more screenspace. ...Coz am dying to know his back story. ...

Sometimes I get angry on namik for choosing this hiding & popping role.😡 ...

But what to do our banda is content driven ...😈

This show wouldn't have been such a disappointment for me🥺😭

if the writer would have given him any content to enact...

Such a waste of marvellous fantabulous talent... i tell u...⭐️

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hellohii

@hellohii

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: _era_
Hey there Deewaanis & Deewaanas if any😆
I was ...sorry am still on IF detox for one month...
Just dropped in to vent my frustrations
courtesy the beloved Shayer Bhootji...
He always tells some shayeri at the end of episodes...
So am gonna tell him in shayeri only...
Tere intezaar ki muddat ab to khatam kar...
Zalim tere dewaanon par ab to rehem kar...
Chup na ja faqat ek jhalak dikhla kar...
Kuch ziyada der apna Chand sa mukhda dikhaya kar...
Ek jhalak dikha kar hume na tadpaya kar...
Sapnon main bas, ab haqeeqat main nazar aaya kar...
Hazaron logon ki iss dili ilteja ko na thukraya kar...
Teri moujoodgi ka Ehsaas hume bhi diya kar...
Un phoolon ki bheeni khushboo humare aas paas bhi bikhera kar...
Hamari taraf bhi nazar-e-mohabbat se dekha kar...
Zara hum par bhi apna Haq jataya kar...
Hum jahan bhi jayen hamara bhi peecha kiya kar...
Bahut hua gussa zara baar baar tu Muskuraya kar...
Bahut huyi khamooshi ab zara kuch irshaad farmaya kar...
Har gila Shikwa hamara tu Qabool kiya kar...
Jitna hum sab karte hai tujhse utni hi
mohabbat humse tu bhi kiyakar...

Shukriya...Shukriya
Ijazat chahti hoon

That was creative😆

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