My One Sided Love

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Divanru

@Divanru

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Lovely OS .

Beautiful thought written nicely .

I don't hate ashok rather I felt bad for him .

Nice One .

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Diksha Naik

@DikshaN

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

what a Beautiful os
I loved it alot
u wrote about their pov
wish it happens in the show too
do write more such os'es

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Akriti154

@akriti154

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

lovely OS gia
ishu's thoughts were nicely explained
both r fallling r d other
n he was getting jealous seeing her with ashok
ashok too has developed smthng fr her
hmm nice
come up wid more OSes, a lil longer ones
m greedy reader
thnxx 4 pm😉

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raksha

@cutieruhi

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Lovely os

I liked the idea

Ashok falling for ishu

Actually CVS too should show something like this

Har koi is always behind puttar. I want someone after biwi

Love to see jealous puttar

Do write more

Loved it

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Amreen99

@Amreen99

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Lovely os dear...

Ishita was lost in Raman...she was admiring him when he was giving presentation...

Ashok told her that presentation got over which stopped her staring session

Ishita was blushing seeing raman's gaze..she was so happy she was falling for Raman...she was acting like a teenager

She was sad thinking Raman is not falling for her...

Loved raman's pov...jallu raman is too cute...

He was jealous seeing Ishita and Ashok together...he was angry when Ashok touched her...

He is also falling for her...

Ashok is also falling for Ishita...sab ka one sided love hai aisa sab ko lag rha Hai but we no..ishra love each other only bechara ashok ki one sided love story reh jayegi...

Nice os...

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Anju

@Muskan193

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Nice os dear
A different obe
Got to see a love sicj ishu,jalli puthar and ashoks one sided love
Thanks for pm

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nafnaf

@nafnaf

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

That was beautiful!!
Loved the way you captured feeling of all three of them!!
Ishita is falling in love with Raman all over again and is acting like a teenager!!
Raman seems to be falling for Ishita and is jealous of Ashok!!
And poor Ashok he is watching Raman's rude and arrogant attitude towards Ishita and still she has such a big heart that she is falling for him again!!
But in the meantime Ashok himself is falling for Ishita but he feels he has no right!!!
All three of them getting a feeling of "one sided love"- aawww so sad!!