ANUVIR/AVIMAN TS : WHEN I GOT MY LOVE

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Hii guys i'm here with two shot but this time on our new pair anuvir and this is my first writing on anuvir.
A kind request, if you are a anuvirian then only read this, if not kindly ignore but pls don't post negative comments.

Serious Note : pls don't expect any logics in this TS😆




PART-1



Anushka, a law student who totally believes in law and order and she can't tolerate anything which is against law. Her little sister jhanvi and her dadima are her entire world. But this beautiful world of her was collapsed by an unfortunate incident which took away her sister from her. And she firmly decides to punish those people who did that heinous act with her sister and she is staying in veerpur to gather all the proofs against them. In her way of revenge she met with a guy who tried to protect jhanvi at the time of that incident but he couldn't, by knowing that she is jhanvi's sister he is helping her and they both became good friends.

In veerpur anushka came across with all the negativity which is happening in that village and found that the roots of all this acts are held with Chowdary whom all consider as the head of the village. She decides to punish Chowdary too as it is the only way to bring peace in this village.

Rantej, one of the follower of Chowdary came to know about Anu and he planned to kill her as per the orders of Chowdary. Rantej with his gang kidnapped Anu but fortunately she escaped from that place where they tied her and started running away from that place. Rantej and his men started following her and they are running behind her.

Anu almost tired by running but she didn't give up and tried her best to run as fast as she can. While running she dashed with a person and almost fallen into his arms. He held her and helped her to stand straight while Anu is gazing at him not knowing who he is.

"hello Mr. if you want to be alive leave her and go on your way it will be better for you"said Rantej who reached the place while Anu looked at him in shock.

"it will be even more better if you don't come in our Viren bhai's way"said rohan who is standing beside that person and one of the follower of viren.

" who is this viren?"asked rantej with a puzzle.

"it's me."said the person with whom Anu was bumped a while ago.

"whoever you are stay away and leave that girl to us"said rantej and moved forward towards Anu and raised his hand to hold her but stopped by viren as he held rantej's hand stopping him to even touch her.

Rantej who is in surprise with viren's holding his hand recieved a nice punch on his face which made him to fall on the floor. Same with the men who came with rantej all received nice punches by viren's men and they left the place without any other option as they are unable to bear the pain of punches.

"thank you"said Anu who is standing in all surprise while Viren turned towards her.

"your welcome"said Viren but soon he tied Anu's mouth with a cloth making Anu shocked while she tried to come out of his hold but she couldn't and Viren made her to sit in the car and drove away.

Soon they reached a bungalow, Viren came out of the car and helped Anu to come out. she still is in shock and not understanding anything. After reaching inside the hall Viren removed the cloth which was tied to her mouth.

"are you mad i thought you are helping me but what you did, why you brought me here and who are you?"burst out Anu in one go.

"shhh... can't you shut your mouth"said viren who is annoyed with her talks. "so you want to know about me"asked viren while Anu nodded her with a angry face.

"i'm Chowdary's son"said viren but stopped by Anu.

"it means you too want to kill me right then what is the need of saving me from them"said Anu in all frustated state.

"i think it's better to tie your mouth to get rid of your nonsense talks"said viren with an annoying face "shut your mouth and listen" continued viren while Anu glared at him.

"yes i'm Chowdary's son but i don't even consider him as my father and i would rather say he is not at all eligible for that. He killed my mother when i was 10 years old and did second marriage only for power and property. As i lost my mom and don't even want to be in this place so i went away from this place and decided to come back only to punish that Chowdary who snatched away my mother and love from my life and the only punishment to him is death"said Viren and a tear rolled down his cheeks while Anu too gets emotional as she too know the pain of loosing her mother.

"though i stayed away from this place i very well knew what is happening in this village as some of my men are in this village and then i came to know about you. I'm planning to kill him and you are trying to punish him through law it means you are an obstacle in my way so i decided to keep you away from all this. So it'll be better you just leave that Chowdary and his men to me i know how to punish them"continued Viren.

"how can i leave them that easily bcoz of them i lost my sister and i won't leave them"said Anu firmly while Viren held her and walked towards a room making Anu surprise again.

Viren opened the door and Anu is in shock to see the person in the room. She slowly walked into the room while that person smiled at her emotionally.

"jhanu"uttered Anu in atmost shock while tears formed in her eyes, she is not able to believe her eyes.

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"Ae pataka"said jhanvi standing in front of her while Anu came out of her thoughts by her call and soon she hugged jhanvi tightly.

"jhanu you are ok"said Anu by cupping her face.

"your sister is alive nothing happened to her"said Viren while Anu turned to him.

"but how it happened"questioned Anu with surprise.

"that day you all thought that jhanvi is died but not she was in coma"said viren.

"can you say everything clearly"asked Anu who is unable to understand anything.

"my men who are mingled with Chowdary's men and working for me in this village always informs me what all happening here and like that i came to know about jhanvi's incident and i came here at that day itself when you joined jhanvi in hospital. I met the doctor before you met him and he said that jhanvi is in coma bcoz of the shock she got. I said to him to don't say that to anyone bcoz if Chowdary men knows about this they can again harm her so i requested him to declare as jhanvi is died and he did and you all thought jhanvi is died. At the time of setting fire to corpse my men changed jhanvi's body unnoticed by you all with a dead body which we got from the hospital with the help of doctor and we brought jhanvi here for treatment. After two months of that incident she opened her eyes a week ago and now she is perfectly alright. All thanks to that doctor that she recovered very soon"completed Viren.

"i really don't know how to thank you"said Anu wiping her tears which are flowing with the joy of getting her sister back and she herself don't know how much happy she is to see her little sister standing in front of her with a smile on her face.

"no need of thanks just leave that Choudary to me and take care of your sister"said viren coolly.

"i can understand whatever happened with you is really sad but there is law to punish such people"said Anu to explain him.

"which law you are talking about. i tried to take the help of law at that time itself but what your so called law did nothing, nothing at all, so i choosed my own way to punish them"said Viren sternly.

"but what will you get by killing them and moreover you will go to jail for killing them, why to spoil your life, we can punish him legally and i'll help you "said Anu trying to make him understand the consequences.

"i don't need any help and about my punishment, i'm ready to take it but after killing that idiots and however i don't have anyone to be effected by my absence so i'm ready to go to jail too"said Viren confidently.

"i won't leave them without punishing for their deeds"said Anu firmly who is fed up by explaing him.

"i won't even leave them alive to be punished"said Viren sternly looking into her eyes.

"viren thank u so much for saving me and i'll explain to my di to stay away from all this"said jhanvi as she knew that her sister is all set to start a war now.

"lets go jhanu"said Anu and walked out of the room but not before giving a killer look to Viren.

Days are passing, both Anu and Viren are in their own ways to punish Chowdary and his men and they both are clashed every where in some or other way. In other side that guy whom Anu met at the beginning of her journey started loving her and even proposed her but she rejected saying that she thinks him as a friend only and these all witnessed by Viren who coincidentally watched them and some where he felt happy. Somewhere Anu and Viren fell for each other but being determined to their own goals not realising it. And at another side jhanvi started liking that guy who tried to save her at the time of that incident and she don't know that he is liking her sister.

One day Viren is all set to take his revenge and headed towards Chowdary's house along with his men. When he entered in to house he saw Chowdary sitting on sofa and six guys around him. Chowdary was surprised to see the coming towards him.

"who are you all?"questioned Choudary.

"Viren"said viren in his serious tone and his voice echoed in whole house while Chowdary is looking at him in shock.

"you..."said Chowdary in shock "i thought you might be died on that day itself"said Chowdary making Viren even more angry.

"on that day itself i decided that you'll die in my hands"said Viren in tit for tat tone and gives a nice punch with a stick on his face.

"what are you seeing go and kill him"ordered Chowdary to his men but none responded to his order while he is looking at them in surprise.

"they all are my men, we engaged all of your members in some other works and no one is going to save you, you have to die today"said Viren as he again gives a pun ch to him.

Anu who gathered all the proofs against Chowdary came to his house along with police shocked to see Viren and his men in the house.

"Viren"said Anu and rushed to him to stop him "what are you doing leave him"said Anu while she took the stick fro his hand and thrown it away.

"stay away anu"said Viren and moved towards chowdary by holding a knife in his hands.

"Viren pls don't do this"requested Anu helplessly as he is going mad in his revenge, police who came to arrest Chowdary too unable to hold him.

"he has to pay for snatching y mom away from me"said Viren as raised his hand with knife to stab him.

"atleast for my love stop this viren"opened Anu which she was hiding even from herself while Viren stopped and the knife almost reached Chowdary's neck.

"pls don't do this, you said that you have no one to be effected by your absence but now i think i'm the most effected person if anything happens to you, pls don't do any such thing which makes you away from me" said Anu while she closed her eyes and tears rolling down her cheeks.

Viren is in shock to hear these words and he always want to hear this from the day he met her but didn't show it out and now she herself said that which he wants to hear. He slowly moved towards her and held her both sides while Anu opened her eyes and looked in to his eyes which are reflecting the same love.

"what did you say?"asked Viren as he unable to believe anything.

"i love you"said Anu by keeping her head down while Viren made her to face him by cupping her face and wiped tears.

"i love you too"said Viren with a smile while Anu is just lost in his eyes and hugged him as tight as she can and same did Viren.

"leave him na, i can't live without you"cried Anu inside his hug while Viren smiled and broke the hug making Anu confused.

"i got love after many years and i don't want to loose my love, inspecter you can take him away with you"said viren much to Anu's relief.

"so now are you happy"asked Viren by keeping his hands around her shoulders while Anu hugged him not knowing what to say and wondering how things changed in few minutes.

Police arrested Choudary and his men who are busy with their works too arrested by police later.

Later jhanvi expressed her love to that guy and he accepted her love as now he too started treating Anu as only friend and not more while Anu too happy with their relation.

Anu and Viren kept their love with dadima and she expressed her acceptancy. Viren started a business as now his revenge is over and he got his love.

Anushka and viren whose ways used to be different now they both are in one way to live their life with lots of love.

Edited by manasa5124 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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super duper awesome loved it the twist & turns were fab viren chowdhry's son janu alive all were nice anuvir falling for each other but didn't tell & doing their job on their own way finally Anu confessed that she can't stay away from him & viren left that stupid chowdhry loved their confession viren starting business & anuvir living happily ever after awesome ts dear keep writing more
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Posted: 7 years ago
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hearty congratulations on completing this anuvir's 2 shot..!!!it was soo super...soo awesome...!!!!loved it soo much dear...really it was soo soo cute...!!!!👏👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Congratulations for your first story on our favourite couple anuvir. And this ts was fantastic. Loved each and every scene yaar. Lovely work .finally anu confessed her love to our hero viren. Awww lovely. Want more from you dear. Waiting for your ff's update. Thanks for the pm
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Awesome update really love it.. Love this ts alot..
Good u make jhanvi alive. Anuvir love each other.. Really love it.. Keep writing more
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Amazing TS Manasa...Anuvir love each other but didn't tell...finally Anu confessed that she can't stay away from him...Viren starting business & Anuvir living happily forever...Loved it...Keep writing.

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