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Chapter 24 (Part 1)


A slumbering moon with numerous stars twinkled is the sky as dark as thick black velvet ,the night pulsed with the sounds of crickets ...while the air was brisk on his otherwise clean shaved cheeks that somewhat irked him because it seemed to be an obvious ploy the childhood buddies Jalal and Abdul busied themselves with chilled beers laying back on the car bonnet.


The freshness and the stillness of the night resembled the ruckus that was going on in Jalal's mind , his hands often travelled back to his hair inbetween taking long sips of alcohol .


Abdul could sence his body tensed up and he very well knew the reason for it but then he couldnt help becoz this time it was entirely upon Jalal ...Abdul seriously thought while gulping down the beer ...if he couldnt help him in any way regarding the issue ...he atleast will try to cheer him up ..Abdul resolved


" ohk ...so dragged me out of that night club ,just to stare at the sky ?" ...well its not as bad as i thought , He started , staring the moon that struggled to shine through the thick clouds .


"Abdul ", Jalal rolled his eyes when Abdul said ,


"Jalal , u know i cant see u in so much stress ...", Abdul interupted while taking another sip of beer .


" Do i have any other option ?", he let out a deep sigh and looked down at the ground dejected .


"Well ,dont u think ,instead of beating around the bush , why dont u just go and try speaking to him ?, im sure he will understand , he suggested looking at his sad face .


"As if i hadnt tried before ? He ran an exasparated hand through his hair .


" Try again then ", he said while Jalal just shook his head .


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Mohammad Mansion


" So how was ur trip Bairam ?? ", Hamida asked looking at her son in law in between serving the vegetable pulav that she prepared especially for him .

" It was good Ammijaan ", ...he replied whilst downing a spoonful of spicy rice dish and added " except , i lost my mobile mid way " taking another spoonful of rice he looked up at the pair of eyes .

"Really ?? ", A surprised expression crossed her face for an obvious reason ...no matter how much of a pro her son in law is, in business world one can't deny how careless he sometimes become when it comes to his personal belongings .

"so that was why ur mobile came switched off , always , whenever we called ?? she shook her head amused at her amazing son in law who sometimes behaves no less then a kid .

Dont laugh ammijaan ..do u even know what all i had to face because of that little crap of device ? ...and the worst part was , i couldnt even remember any of ur numbers to contact ...u know how bad my memory is ...he went on ranting while Hamida took her own sweet time to absorb what he was saying before bursting into fit of laughter .

Ammijaan ?? Im serious !! He frowned crossing his arms while Hamida tried best to compose herself .

" Well sorry for that , but im happy that somehow u managed everything well ", ...her words instantly brought a proud smile on his face untill he heard her next words ..." despite of all the mishaps ", ...she teasingly added .

Bairam ,to say the truth had never seen Hamida in such a jovial mode ...she seemed happy today ,he could see and say that ...was it all because of rukkaiya ?? He mused when Hamida broke his chain of thoughts .

"Do u want some more rice ?? ", She offered noticing his empty plate .

"Oh no Ammijaan ...im done", ...he smiled and looked around for other family members .

"Where is Jalal ? Already on a date , or what ? He asked in his beaming voice estimating the extent of happiness in Jalal's eyes .

" No ", ...came her instant reply " Might be with his friends as usual ?? ", Hamida replied uncertainly before going silent wondering if she should atleast try talking to him once before getting into any plans but discarded on hearing Noor's voice .

" Nani ...Nani , has mamu came home ?? ...she asked sluggishly dragging her body with a huge teddy bear in her arms .

"Not yet Noor ", Hamida replied amused and asked " werent u sleeping before ? " , ...pulling Noor's hand she made her sit on her lap .

"How can i when Mamu promised me a barbie doll , ", she replied stifling her yawn making Bairam and Hamida chuckle .

"Dont know about ur mamu ...but daddy has definetly got something ...and im sure u will like it", ...

Bairam went to his luggage, unzipped his bag and pulled out a huge box .

"This is for u my princess ", ...he outstretched his hand so that Noor can take the box .

She slowly took the box ...and got up from Hamida's lap .

"Thank you daddy", ...she said and flicked her eyes onto her grandmother .

" Nani ... im feeling sleepy , will take my gift from mamu tomorrow ...good night ...", gracing a small smile on her lips she turned around only to be stopped by Bairam .

" Noor , wont u open the box and see what daddy has got for u ? ", ...he waited for her to say something but she stood silent at her place .

" umm ,if u want ,daddy can help u in opening that box , he offered help but Noor still remained silent .

" I think Noor is really feeling sleepy Bairam and remember she has school tomorrow ... you father and daughter can open and see whats in it later ...alright " , ...Hamida said and asked Noor to go back into her room and she simply followed .

Bairam sighed exasparated , Noor always behaved weird around him ...as if he wasnt her father but some stranger .

Hamida, understanding the situation smiled at Bairam .

" Looks like u too r sailing on the same boat which i took once long back ".

Getting no clue Bairam looked confused when Hamida smiled more .

" After the death of Humanyun ...i too kept myself busy in some or the other works , just to keep his thoughts away from my mind ...all the time ignoring the love and care my children deserved ...and the result u know it right ? ...hinting towards Jalal and her present relationship , Hamida tried making him understand .

" Noor is a small child Bairam , she needs your attention , love and care ...take out some time from your busy schedule for ur daughter ".

Bairam listened her each and every word carefully ...she was right ...he actually got so involved in his work that he barely got time to spend with his angel ...he thought rubbing his temple with his eyes closed .

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The wheels of black SUV screeched with a sudden half in front of the house . Hastily getting out of the car Jalal rushed a nervous hand through his hair and breathed out to relax . All the time since the day his and Rukkaiya's allaince was announced ,he only had one thing in his mind ...meet his jiju and clear all the clouds and today when the day had finally came he was standing outside the house , all nervous . He had no clue on how to convince Bairam without hurting his feelings , all his hopes were on Hamida which he doubted even work .

With zillions of thoughts reeling inside his mind Jalal entered the mansion only to see his jiju sitting on the couch placed right in front of the entrance in the middle of the house , with a huge smile across his face .


"Look who is here " , getting up from his place he walked towards Jalal and pulled him into a small hug , thereafter dragging Jalal along he made him sit on the couch .

"After the party i didnt get to meet you ,to talk with you , hope u r happy with my decision , arent you ? Bairam enquired throwing his hand around Jalal's shoulder

No !! Jalal mentally yelled looking wearily at his jiju , he so wanted to tell him that no , he was not at all happy with his decision , he wanted to say ,he doesnt like rukkaiya at all ...and hell he wasnt ready for this alliance either...but as usual he kept quite .

Unable to meet Bairam khan's eyes ,Jalal shifted in his position averting his gaze from him .

Guaging the uneasiness is Jalal's eyes Bairam lovingly ran his hand on Jalal's back .

"Jalal i understand all of this might have taken u by surprise but have some trust in me ...i dont know why but i find Rukkaiya perfect for you ...she is smart ,intelligent , good looking and most importantly u know each other since graduation days ...though not perfectly but to an extent atleast ...and ", ...he paused in between as his throat went heavy ...swallowing down the surge of pain he continued further ..."u remember it was ur di's wish to choose ur bride by herself and when zubair came up with Rukkaiya's hand for you ...i felt why not ...may be salima too wanted this to happen ...so ", ...he paused again.
..looking at Jalal who has traces of tears in his eyes now .

Just now when Jalal thought of speaking for himself Bairam talked about Salima bringing back all those memories she shared with his sister .

Jalal remembered how salima always wished to see him grow older so that she could get him married soon and bring a sister for herself .

Holding the tears back that were ever ready to make its way through his eyes, Jalal said ...

"Jiju , u have always given me the best and will continue to give me the best in future too ...and i trust u , no doubt ...but Rukkaiya and me though know each other as a person, never has been close as in to get into any kind of relationship ...so ", ...Jalal attempted to voice out his thoughts while Hamida held her breath back
...but before Jalal could complete that ...Bairam jumped out of his seat .

" So this is ur problem ? U scared me silly boy ...u should have said it before " .

Ammijaan i have got a brilliant idea ...just a while before u suggested me to spend some time with Noor right ? And Jalal too needs to hangout with Rukkaiya to know her well
...so why dont we do one thing ...i will take a day off , Jalal and Noor too will do the same ...we will invite zubair and Rukkaiya home and spend the whole day together as a family ... we can go out for lunch too ...that way Jalal will get to know Rukkaiya and i will get to spend some time with my daughter ...what say ??

Bairam squealed in excitement like a small kid when Hamida seconded him .

Sounds good !!

Jalal gave a ghostly look at Hamida ...a whole day with Rukkaiya sounded no less then a torture to him , but Hamida smiled with an assurance .

Whats going on in her mind ...Jalal thought confused and walked back to his room as it was too late but sleep was far away from his eyes .

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Trinnggg tringgg ...the blazing sound of the mobile snapped Jalal out of his thoughts .
...it was only a few minutes ago that he went under the covers and decided to sleep , other then pacing the length of the room the whole night .

The phone kept on ringing while he was least interested in giving it a look ...but when it didnt stop screaming in its irritating voice ...Jalal finally gave up and looked at the caller id .

Jodha ?? ...momentarily surpried he picked up the call .

Hey ... he sighed and got down the bed , dragging the recliner along right in front of his french window .

Why arent u picking up ur call ? Came a haste voice from the other end ...that reflected the owners restlessness .

A small chuckle escaped from Jalal's mouth ..." she was damn worried he knew , but he couldnt see her like that ...hence decided to play a little ...Aah someone's desperate to hear my voice ".

Her brows knitted into a frown at his words...here she was hopelessly waiting for his call only to know how he was doing and there he was laughing ...she opened to retort but stopped on hearing Jalal's voice .

"I understand u were there with ur phone in ur hands but how on earth u can expect the receiver to attend ur call at the ring of one ? ", He quipped knowing well what her reaction would be and just like he thought her jaw indeed fell down .

" Common ...now close ur mouth , else if something creepy goes into it ...u will put the whole blame on me " her eyebrows pulled up while she braced herself to give him a fitting answer but was again interupted by his voice .

What ? Want to have a fight ?? She pouted thinking what he thinks of her and kept quite when Jalal said again ...

"I won't mind though , atleast in that way i will get to hear ur voice " ...she could sense the mischeif in his vouce that made her blush a little .

"Hmm...so madam is blushing now , eh ? Amazed she looked around to ensure he wasnt hanging somewhere around her and said ...

Hogaya ?? (Done?) " she asked curtly " now tell me how did everything go ? ", steering into serious matter she asked again nervously .

" I dont know ...i mean i tried speaking to him like Abdul said ...but he is so excited that he isnt ready to hear anything i have to say ...and", ...He paused and sighed .

"And ?? she patiently waited for him to elaborate ...

"And ", ...he cleared his throat and continued ..." And went on fixing a day out with Rukkaiya " .


" what ??", she asked baffled .

yes ...im supposed to spend an entire day with Rukkaiya to know her better ...he tried mimicking his jiju' words in a comical way making Jodha laugh .

"God , u r laughing ?", ...he quizzed astounded .

" what else u expect me to do ? ", she remarked controlling her laughter .

"Seriously girl ...your boyfried is going on a date with someone else and here u r laughing ? atleast show some amount of jealousy if not anything", ...he exclaimed twisting his lips.

"Aahhh ...thats becoz i really trust someone a lot ..she proudly admitted laying flat on the bed .

" An advice for free ...never trust your boyfriend so blindly " ...he tried sounding serious while his lips pulled out into a smirk .

"And who said its my boyfried i trust ? ", ...she literally gave him a shock there , if not him then who else ...he thought narrowing his brows when came her reply .

"I trust his Ammijaan more ", ...tch tch tch ...that hurts .

"And i was unnecessarily taking the credit here " ..he simply said with a pout and the next minute he could hear her soft giggles that releived his tensed nerves prompting him go join her ...and the duo bursted into fits of laughter .

The laughter fell down moments later ...no matter how much ever the duo tried to ease each others stress ...it surfaced back with all its might .

"Jodha , she heard him calling her name and knew what would come next.

"R we doing right ? ", he asked unsure of things happening around .

Exhaling a deep breath Jodha took a moment to start ..." Jalal , to be straight even i dont know what's right and what's wrong , i cant even imagine how i would face my Bhaisa later in this situation coz going against our family or loved ones is something not very easy ...but we have to do it , for us ...and i am ready for everything ...now, r you ? ...she asked with determination in her voice and he knew what to say .

"Yes , me too " , ...the confident with which he replied left her heart at peace , sending goosebumps down her skin at the same time ..she somehwere feared he would back off hearing his words before ...but know she felt releived ...a smile made its way on her lips when Jalal asked ...

"What happened ? Already started picturizing us , ' TOGETHER ' , ?", stressing on the word together he teasingly asked bringing his hand beneath his head , finding her quite all of a sudden .

" Umm ...yes ...she replied absently and bit her lips on realising what she just said ..." umm ,no ...not at all ... i , i am just feeling sleepy ...she could feel heat rising up all the way to her ears making her body go numb...god he loves making me squirm ...she rolled her eyes lost in her thoughts when Jalal said .

" well , back to earth lady , we have a long way to go ... she could feel the mischeif in his voice ...he leaves no chance to tease her, she huffed when she heard Jalal saying something again ...

"Waise ,it feels really great ", he uttered dreamingly ,stretching his legs .

" Umm what feels great ??...", she asked puzzled finding Jalal saying something out of the box .

"Imaging us , under one roof ,on our bed ...enjoying ...he deliberately stopped there pursing his lips .

"Enjoying ", ?? she asked partly shocked partly curious .

"Enjoying the moonlight ofcourse ", he coolly shrugged being tease a thon .

"Moonlight ,hmm ", she stated confused .

"Yes thats right , why ? did u think of doing something else ...he asked feigining innocent only to hear a cough from the other end ...his smile widened as he could guess what all she might have deduced from his words .

She fell silent for some time ,probably to drink water .

"Jodha , r u there ??", how can he let her go so easily .

"Jalal " ..he heard her saying ..." I think u should sleep ,else u will be late for ur date ..., so good night ...she hung up the call without caring for him to reply .

" Goddd...what have i gotten myself into", ...her heart rate incread many folds while images of Jalal sharing bed with her being all naughty reeled in her mind .

Her mobile beeped seconds later , undoubtedly it was Jalal's message .

"By the way , u r not as naive as i thought ", she read the text with a wink emoticon ...her lips broke into a shy endearing smile.

" Good Night Jalal ,and all the best for tomorrow , remember , im with you ", ... she texted back with a kiss emoticon .

He sat straight on the recliner with his legs down ...and the next minute filled the whole msg box with loads of kissed finally pressing the send button .

she opened the txt msg ...and blushed with the number of kiss emojis.

Images of her with Jalal swam back into her head raising her heartbeat . Holding the device close to her heart she drifted into deep slumber .

Her words gave Jalal the much needed push and he braced himself for the next day taking in the sharp breath ...tomorrow was an important day ...not only for him but for both of them .

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CONTINUED IN PART 2 😉





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chapter 24 ( part 2 )

He woke up cussing the damn alarm and the person who invented it . Its was only few hours before he drifted into deep slumber , otherwise the night passed pushing the scary thoughts of todays 's events away from his mind .

He sighed and got up from his bed ,did he had any other option ? Hell no !! Gruffly dragging his body to the washroom he finished off his daily chores and came out with a towel wrapped around his body . Going through his wardrobe thereafter he picked out a dull grey shirt paired with ripped denim . He has never ever in his wildest dreams thought of a day like this where he would be grooming himself to spend a quality time with the girl he loathed .

Fully immersed in his chain of thoughts he brushed his hair still in towel when someone pushed the door wide open and barged in .

" Baybyyy !! ", The same irritating voice , it didn't took a second for him to recognize its owner .

" Holy crap !! can't u knock the door before coming in ?", ...he furiously snapped at his intruder for running into his personal space unannounced , inbetweeen grabbing his clothes which were left unattended on bed before .

" Ahh Don't be shy , baby , Its just me , your future to be , remember?? ", she shamelessly stepped in with a sly smile on her lips .

" God this women , he mentally cursed before composing himself .

" As u can see , I need to change and i need my privacy ... so if u dont mind ...", showing her the way out with his hand he tried to be as polite as possible .

" Ahh common , i wont eat u up ", she sneered motioning in , only to be stopped by Jalal .

" out ?? ", he rebuked frustrated raising his voice a notch higher when the duo heard Bairam khan tamping Jalal's voice .

"Jalal , Rukaiyya , come down ,breakfast is ready , we r waiting ", ...

Her lips twitched up into a wicked smile well aware of his weakness , she moved closer to him , his brows narrowed as she approached closer , a finger ran down across the length of his arm disgusting each and every cell of his body .

Rukaiyya was probably the only person on earth whom Jalal couldnt even think of as a friend and if asked why , he couldnt actually pin point one reason ...perhaps it was her self centric attitude that he hated the most , or it was her infinite cheesy attempts to hit on him everytime...her , hard to left for imagination kinda clothes or that irritably seductive voice , actually he despised every bit of her .

Jalal always wondered how on earth his Jiju liked a stupid ,selfish girl like her without knowing her well , was it purely becoz he blindly worshipped his friendship with zubair or was Rukkaiya actually a nice person in real which he couldnt see ...whatever it was , but he and Rukkaiya never clicked from their very first meeting and he beleived , would never .

His chain of thoughts broke when he felt her finger travelling up from his hand to his face .

He was about to push her back but surprisingly she herself removed her hand ,stepping back .

" Will be waiting down, don't be late ", she winked and turned back on her heels.

He stared gravely , till she left his room and locked the door immediately ... the nerve of this girl ... he seethed and wore his clothes cursing the beginning of his worst day .


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Hello Rukkaiyya aunty ... will u play catch catch with me ?? Noor decided to play with Rukkaiya following her Nani's intructions .

What ever Hamida planned earlier all went into drain becoz of Bairam khan...so she decided to go with the flow and plan accordingly .

To begin with first thing first she took Noor's help to irritate Rukkaiya as much as possible .

Plsss Rukkaiya aunty ...she battled her puppy eyes as if she cares .

"Aunty ?? She growled rolling her eyes before faking a smile .

" Noor ,im not appropriately dressed to play such games , u see ?? ", ...we will play some other time ...hinting towards her knee length skirt and high heels , she tried to be as nice as possible ...but Noor didnt budge .

she ran to her father , " pls Daddy tell Rukkaiya to play with me ... plsss Nani ..pls tell her ...plss Zubair uncle ...she pleaded everyone around and waited atleast for someone to respond but when no one did ...Hamida decided to take the charge .

"Go and play with Noor , Rukkaiya ...there is still time for breakfast and even Jalal is not down yet " ...

Rukkaiya knew Hamida and Noor never liked her much ,just like Jalal...and if it was not for the obsession she had for Jalal ..she would have never given a damn to this lady and her annoying grand daughter even today ...but like it is said to win something one has to loose something ,thence she decided to be nice ,atleast when Bairam was around .

"Sure Aunty ", forcing a smile she took the ball from Noor's hand and headed her way towards the lawn followed by Noor behind , the duo played there for good five minutes when Rukkaiya noticed Jalal descending downstairs .

Distracted , she grazed her eyes all over his body ... starting from head to toe ...needless to say ...she found him delectably sensuous ...she was so lost in his charm that she failed to notice the ball coming towards her .

"Ouchhh, a muffled scream escaped her mouth ...

"You idiot ", she continued to scream but stopped suddenly when she found Jalal coming towards them.

" Morning princess", crouching down to Noor's level Jalal ruffled her hair and kissed her cheeck like always .

"Mamuuu ", she made a frown as usual when Rukkaiya came near them .

" Even i am here , making a cute pout , as if that will work she proffered her cheek to kiss while Jalal rolled his eyes and went on inside with Noor in his arms .

"Arghhh", stomping her feet she followed them .

Everyone settled around for breakfast , numerous variety of dishes according to each and everyone's appetite graced the grand table .

While Rukkaiya tried every possible way to get Jalal's attention , with him ignoring her completely ...Bairam on the otherhand busied himself in his mobile forgetting the people around .

Hamida snatched mobile from his hand , startling him.

Ammijaan ??? he asked puzzled to which Hamida replied .

"Bairam didnt u promise , a day with family ? and no business ? ...now if u keep checking ur mobile every other time how will u enjoy with us ", ...she was right it was him who decided that, competely forgetting his plans he had for today , and when he found his family excited for the day , especially Noor ...he didnt had the heart to change .

Taking the phone from Hamida he quickly texted a message to his personal assistant and resumed his previous work .

Giving special attention to Noor by serving her food himself ...he tried making yo for all the days .

After the breakfast , Bairam and zubair decided to make the best of today ,thus decided to play Golf...while Jalal went back to his room utterly pissed of with Rukkaiya's flirtatious gazes and double meaning words ...God she was always around him .

He remembered the first day when zubair introduced her as his neice. Notably and undoubtedly Rukkaiya possessed all the good looks a guy would ever fantasize about , however , knowing well her intentions from the very first sight of hers ...Jalal for some unknown reason couldnt help but rebuff mentally while she continued trying her luck , even today .

only Noor ,Hamida and Rukkaiya were left in the hall when Noor again came up with another game .

" Rukkaiya aunty ...will u play sword fight with me ? ", ...frankly she was only here for Jalal but he was running away from her like always while this little punk was getting on her nerves now .

"Noor baby ",...pressuring her lips to pull up into a smile she asked ..." have u ever scene girls playing with swords ?? ".

" Jodha aunty does ...she replied with a smile ...saying that she meant Begum Jodha of popular serial Jodha Akbar which her Nani used to watch ...but Rukkaiya understood the other way .

"If that Jodha can do , so can I , she walked past with her nose high in te air ...

"Fine ,bring it on ...i cant say no to u right , flashing another fake smile she waited till noor came with her toy swords , the duo again played for few seconds when the loud sound from landline echoed .

Rukkaiya being close , marched up to pick the call .

Hello ,who is this ...Rukkaiya spoke into the speaker .

"I'm Tanushree , Mr Khan's P.A ...can i pls speak to him ? ...came the voice from the other end .

"well he is not here right now , why dont u try his mobile ? Rukkaiya suggested but remembered Hamida taking Bairam's mobile and switching it off .

"Ohh , its swtiched off right , umm u can give me the message ...i will inform him ...she assured and heard the message carefully and hanged the call .

It was about the same meeting Bairam was waiting since morning .

In hurry Rukkaiya forgot to tell PA to try for Zubair ...thence she decided to do it herself .

Grabbing her mobile ...she started dialing the number when Hamida asked ,what the matter was ...Rukkaiya shrugged off his shoulder as it was nothing important and went on with her work when something came into Hamida's mind .

She uttered something in Noor's ears and Noor without saying anything attacked rukkaiya with her toy sword making her mobile fell on ground scattering into three peices .

"Noor ...she screamed and raised her hand ,Hamida was about go come to her rescue but stopped on finding Rukkaiya horrified .

"Oh my god ...my nail
...she screamed noticing her finger that looked absurd among the others . She spent a good amount in shaping them ,afterall it was a special day for her today , she had to do something , she briskly tapped her legs on the marble floor when she broke her 5 inch heel .

Oh my God , she was about to fall but got hold of something that saved her from falling when she heard a torned sound .

"Heck...this cant happen , she turned aroud dreading and wished it wasnt what she was thinking but looked like it was not her day today ...as she found the skirt of her frock ripped .

she was almost in tears now , cladding in one of the finest dress ...atleast according to her , she groomed herself in a way even a blind man would fall for ...but everything was screwed up as of now .

She excused herself throwing angry glares at the duo and left the house without saying anything .

Hamida and Noor hi-fied with wide smile on their faces ...This was just the beginning ...there were many more to come .

STAR PARADISE RESTAURANT

The two families reached the posh restaurant which was starkingly modern with its leather chairs and flamboyant tablecloths . A magnificient fountain stretched from the ceiling to the floor , sparkled like a frozen waterwall in the centre of the hall got maximum admiration from the visitors especially small kids who seemed awestruck by the manmade creation and Noor was no less .

Although Bairam and Zubair many a times visited the restaurant but today they felt refreshingly different from the other days ...may be thats the magic a family or dear ones hold .

The staff escorted them to their seats and pulled out chair for the adorable kid and women .

Rukkaiya was back to herself now ...earlier she feared like a kitten when Bairam khan angrily enquired about the person who received his P.A's important message and didnt care to pass onto him thereby .

when Hamida revealed her name she sweated like anything .

Bairam recently made plans to try his luck in ceramics world too . He heard about RAK ceramics quite a lot which was officially recognised as worlds fourth largest ceramics manufacturer and asia's largest tile manufacture .

A meeting was fixed with the comapany's manager and if everything went well , Muhammad and Khan 's would have kick started a new venture .

Bairam knew this was very important for company and himself asked the manager to fix a meeting as soon as possible ...but coz of the last minute changes in his day plan he asked his P.A to postpone the meeting thinking ,if they agree well and good but if they not ...he would somehow attend the meeting .

But unfortunately things went haywire ,he left his mobile at house and adding to his frustration Rukkaiya failed to pass on this important peice of information to him .

If it was some employee Bairam would have seen his/her grave by now ,lest it was Rukkaiya ,his friends neice ...he couldnt even vent out his frustration properly considering her a family member .

Fortunately for Rukkaiya and unfortunately for Jalal, Bairam khan's persistant requests compeled the Manager to agree for another meeting bringing solace to his angry heart inturn failing Hamida's first attempt to bring Rukkaiya down from his good grace .

The trio sighed to see Rukkaiya back into action .

cladded in a black sleek corset style dress which didnt care to reach her knees even when everyone was around , with a low v neck that gave a sneak peak of her assests might have killed many there but disgusted Jalal in every possible way . If not for Bairam he would have left the restaurant long back by now .

Rukkaiya purposely sat besides Jalal , throwing her body literally on him when Bairam or Zubair cracked a joke she didnt leave any chance to get physical with him...adding to his frustration .

"Why dont u come and sit on my lap ", he seethed annoyed in Rukkaiya's ears .

For a second he thought she would take him seriously when she got up from her seat ...but thankfully she didnt , she just left to wash her hands smiling evilly .

Ahh ,Jalal just now realised how badly he wished to see his girlfriend. He pulled out his mobile from his pocket and went through this phone ...No call , no message ...is she so busy ? he frowned shoving the electronic peice back into his pocket .

while everyone skimmed through the menu card Hamida noticed how uncomfortable her son was besides Rukkaiya .

She exhaled a deep frustrated sigh ...plan A was failed miserably ...but never mind ...she already had plan B as backup.

...


Hamida signalled Noor something , getting the cue Noor got up from her chair .

"Rukkaiya Aunty ...i need to go pee, will u take me pls ? She sweetly asked shaking Rukkaiya out of her dreamland .

"Me ??", she wasnt here to babysit a kid , was she ? Rukkaiya was about to refuse when she saw Zubair asking her to take Noor .

"Really ?? Goddd ", she got up and took her to washroom .

2 minutes , 5 minutes ,10 minutes passed and the little brat was not showing up yet .

Irked by Noor's intrusion every other time she furiously knocked the door .

"Noor ,r u done ?? , she waited for her to answer when she heard the sound of flush .

" God i had never been so happy in her entire life" , Rukkaiya thought when Noor came out with her jeans in her hands .

"Can u please help me with this ?", the poor girl wasnt troubling her this time ...she genuinely had trouble wearing it ...Rukkaiya darkly glared at her . Harshly snatching the fabric material from her hands she made her wear and pulled her roughly by the arm .

The duo took their seats once back , the food was already served , Hamida noticed tears at the brim of her grand daughter's eyes ...did she do anything with her ...she thought placing a napkin on Noor's lap .

Thankfully Jalal hadnt noticed otherwise god knows what would have happened.

Everyone started having their food , while Bairam and Zubair were busy discussing something related to business , Noor decided to take revenge from Rukkaiya for her previois action .

She purposely kept asking Rukkaiya to serve her something or the other from the dishes , sometimes she asked her to clean the food particles from her mouth and sometimes she kept dropping spoons or forks which Rukkai ya had to pick up , much adding to her irritation .

To Bairam...their bonding was something to admire ,he was glad that the duo mingled so well with each other ...but to the vexed lady , Noor was really getting under her skin now .

She had tried ,tried her best to be nice but what if the person in front is hell bent to annoy her ...there's a saturation point for everything and Rukkaiya has reached her's .

There was a time when she ate something really spicy and was in dire need of water ...her throat was burning and she couldnt control anymore ...when Noor all of a sudden decided to practice ordering ...she wanted an icecream for herself but she wasnt able to pronounce the word by herself ...she could've given up and asked someone else to order for her ...but she didnt .

Rukkaiya needed her water to be refilled while Noor still continued her stuttering and that pulled the last chord ...

Rukkaiya rudely snatched the menu card from her hands and ordered a water bottle for herself .

Jalal ,Hamida and even Bairam didnt like her act , agreed she was dying for water there ,but her action didnt justify completely , .

Noor's face fell down and that didnt go unnoticed by Bairam himself ...he took the menu from Rukkaiya's hand and ordered on behalf of Noor .

An instant smile erupted on her lips making Bairam happy for his little angel .

They were waiting for Noor to complete her ice-cream when Rukkaiya found her mouth all sticky .

Ewww , Rolling her eyes she darted her gaze to Hamida .

" Aunty , is this the way she behaves even at home ?", Pointing towards Noor's mouth which was now covered with icecream Rukkaiya added " why dont u teach her some manners , dont u feel embarassed having her around in sophisticated places ? u have spoiled her a lot Aunty "...she laughs and continues further ...i think u should send her to some good boarding school ...trust me she would atleast learn how to behave in public place if not anything else ...she stated making a face .

That was a shock to everyone ...especially Bairam khan ...How dare she could say anything about his daughter ..."be in ur limits " he wanted to scream ,lest kept quite considering the place...but who can stop Jalal ..."she is a kid dammit " ...he snapped angrily on finding tears in his neice eyes , his hands fisted at the sides , ...if Bairam wasnt present there ...he would have kicked her out of the restaurant on spot .

He quickly got down on his knees ...he shot an deadly glare to Rukkaiya and she understood she screwed up everything again ...she flicked her eyes from Jalal to Bairam and Hamida ...everyone held the same expression in their eyes .

Noor got up from the chair and with teary eyes she said ..." Mamu i need to clean myself " .

Rukkaiya took the opputunity to redeem herself . "I will take her ", But noor refused polietly and ran towards the restroom as fast as she could .

Noor was trying hard not to shed her tears ...she knew it was her fault completely that she pissed off Rukkaiya to extreme ,she also knew even if she said anything like that ,her family especially her Mamu and Nani wouldnt agree with her ...still she felt bad , for ,she remembered the words uttered by Maha manga (her nanny) once that her mother left her because she wasnt a nice daughter...was she so annoying ? she thought to herself ...she was heartbroken and tears made their way through her eyes .

To her frustration ...her neatly bound hair with the help of a clip , fell loose .

She cried her heart out , inbetween wiping her tears with the back of her palm when she heard some footsteps .

Noor ...she heard a familiar voice ...her vision blurred with tears , she wiped again and now could see the person in front .

"Jodha appi , u here ...utterly shocked and shattered she hugged Jodha tightly and let her tears flow more .

Jodha tried hard to focus in her class but nothing went into her brain ...even the whole night she passed dreading ...she had no clue what Hamida and Jalal planned for today...she just wished everything to go smoothly and Jalal to convince Bairam sucessfully ...she wanted to be with them but she knew she could'nt ...but then when Hamida breifed her about the family outing and the things going go happen there , Jodha decided to be there though oblivious to Jalal and others .

Moti accompanied Jodha as she wanted to be with her ...the duo was watching everything from far when this happened ...she couldnt see tears in Noor's eyes ...she has to console her ...afterall she was doing all this for her and Jalal

Jodha lovingly caressed her hair ...Noor stopped crying by now and was now hicupping ..." she is bad ...i hate her appi " ...Jodha wiped her tears and made her look into her eyes .


"Do u think Nani or Mamu will ever send their princess away "? ...Noor's head swayed in a no ...Jodha smiled and pulled Noor into her arms... Nani ,Papa , Mamu and Me love u a lot noor and we cant see tears in ur eyes ...so dont let Rukkaiya's words get into ur head and always remember u r the best and prettiest thing happened to this world ...so cheer up ...u have to get back to Rukkaiya right ? ...she lovingly cooed and tickled bringing back Noor's smile .

she wiped Noor's face with tissues and made her hair again ...she pinned a beautiful disney princess clip which she always carry , to complete the look .

Minutes later Noor came out while Jodha hid herself back seeing Jalal ...

He was waiting outside since a while ..he came looking for Noor after assuring Hamida to take care of Noor well ...he couldnt go in as it was women's washroom so waited outside ...he tightly embraced Noor the moment he saw her ...

"Im sorry Noor ,Im sorry ", he muttered letting the lone tear roll off his cheek...he hatred himself for letting Noor ,go through all this .

He expected her still crying with red swollen eyes and running nose ...but she was looking fine ...that was kind of miracle ...usually Noor doesnt cry but when she does she needs someone to console her .

Another striking part was her hair style that didnt look same as last time ...there was no way she could do it herself ...he thought of asking her ...

"Noor , nice hairstyle ,who did it by the way ", ...he questioned staring at the hair clip that caught his attention drawing someone's memory in his mind .

"why do i feel i have seen this clip with Jodha before, ...he remembered teasing her for carrying a small kid's clip in her bag ...she was still a kid by heart ...Jalal chuckled " is she here ? ", ...he thought and looked here and there for her traces ...but she was no where to be found .

Jodha still kept hiding from his sight , for she didnt wanted Jalal to think she was keeping an eye on him and signalled Noor to be silent .

Jodha waited till they left the place .


Bairam was composed by now as Rukkaiya apologised to Noor and others and Bairam forgave her...which means ...plan B failed too .

The trio face palmed unable to come up with any other plan ...when Bairam all of a sudden annouced Rukkaiya and Jalal's engagement at the earliest...giving them almost a heart attack .

They had to do something ...that too very quickly .



CONTINUED IN PART 3



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Part 3


It was almost dinner time ...till now they had lost all the oppurtunies which could make Bairam see through Rukkaiya's true face . They tried all possible ways that could anger Bairam khan but strangely nothing worked as anticipated . Undoubtedly they were running short of time and Bairam's latest announcement added more to their dissapointment ...though noor couldnt understand the exact reason behind their stress she was sure it had something to do with Rukkaiya .

Zubai r left the mansion as he had some important work but Rukkaiya stayed back and all of a sudden opted to cook something for them .

Hamida , though denied at first but decided to give her a chance as said by Bairam .

Rukkaiya didnt know much of cooking but she remembered the recipe of a soup made by her mother everytime which she liked the most and assumed it will win Jalal and Hamida's heart too .

She was informed by the servants that Hamida was allergic to Mushroom's ...thence she made sure not to make any mistake as such .

Everyone gathered around the dining table , food was served hot in their platter , Bairam was the first to taste Rukkaiya's hot soup...it wasnt good to say the truth but it wasnt that bad either ...he asked the servants to serve everyone ...Jalal and Noor couldnt have more then a spoonful but Hamida praised her saying it was a good attempt and had few more spoons shocking Jalal and Noor in the process ,but mostly Rukkaiya .

The dish tasted different for some reason and was not worth eating but she was gald Hamida liked it atleast .

15 minutes later , Hamida started coughing violently ... saliva started oozing out from her mouth , her face turned red while sweat drops started forming on her forehead ...seconds later the house mates noticed her irregular pulse ...she was finding difficult to breath .

Noor being a small kid horrified to see her nani like this...she started crying terrified when Bairam asked Jalal to take her to room ...he with the help of a servant took Hamida to her room .

Absolutely clueless of what was happening around Rukkaiya followed them absently when she saw Hamida vomitting and spoiling her dress in process ...Rukkaiya's stomach churned at the sight ...she wanted to run away from there but couldnt when Bairam asked her to change Hamida's dress .

Unable to take the sight she asks one of the servants to clean everything and leaves from there . Rukkaiya felt nauseated ...if she had to stand there for some more time she would definetly had puked ...she thought and came out to breath fresh air .

Bairam was dialing doctor's number ...when one of the maid came running to him ...

" Sahab ji ...sahab ji ...Rukkaiya Madam accidently used mushroom paste that we kept grinded for some other dish " .

" What" ...Bairam shreiked ...and added ..." didnt u tell her that Hamida is allergic to mushrooms ?".

" We did, sahab ji ...but she might have got confused between mushroom and groundnut paste " .

" Seriously ?? ...he ran a hand through his hair ...since the morning he was ignoring all her mistakes as they were harmless but this time she crossed all the heights of carelessness .

Keeping the matter aside for time being Bairam called the doctor first and asked him to be there asap .

The door bell rang after fifteen minutes ... Bairam felt releived to see doctor on time ...he himself escorted the doctor to Hamida's room ...the poor lady was in a mess ...doctor checked her pulse and blood pressure , he examined her eyes , tongue and inserted an injection .

Jalal leaving Noor to Maha manga reached Hamida's room by now .

He enquired doctor about her ...to which doctor assured not to worry and that she will recover soon ...he also scolded them for being so careless ...when Bairam apologised ..."sorry doctor ... one of our family member unknowingly added mushroom paste in her dish leading to all this " ...

Doctor nodded understandingly and asked them to be with Hamida till 24 hours ... " anything suspicious give me a call ...he left saying that thereafter leaving furious Jalal behind .

" It was becoz of her all this happened ?? Unbeleivable , His hand fisted in anger ...eyes turned blood red ...he casted a glance at Rukkaiya who was busy doing something in her phone ...which didnt go unnotice by Bairam either ...Both were equally infuriated ...but left to Hamida's room .


Hamida was relaxed a bit by now ...she smiled assuringly at her son and son in law before closing her eyes due to medications .

That was enough ...he furiously turned to Bairam ...

"Do u still think she is good enough for our family Jiju ?? If u hadnt noticed she is the most careless person on earth ...in morning u almost missed a deal becoz of her , lateron she made your daughter cry with her sharp tongue ...and now she almost sent Ammijaan to death ", he paused taking a sharp breath in ..." jiju ...i love and respect u alot and thats why i didnt say much about my alliance with that headless chicken ...sorry for calling her that but she acts as such ... she was never of my type ...i cant even stand her a second forget lifetime ...still i kept quiet because u wanted to see us together ... after all this if u still feel she is right then go ahead ...i wont say any anything but yes keep her away from Noor and Ammijaan ...becoz if something happens to them she will see the worst me ", he warns and leaves the room furiously .

He left lashing out all the buried frustration ...and walked to Noor's room ...Maham was unable to control the little kid ..
.she was crying profusely ...Jalal tried to calm her down ..but nothing worked .


Bairam felt bad at first ... Jalal had never talked with him in such manner ...he thought hard and recalled all the incidents happened ...not only today but also in past when Rukkaiya proved herself good for nothing ...he wondered how on earth he thought Rukaiya would be a good match for Jalal .

With the same thoughts he came outside when he found Rukkaiya clicking her selfies oblivious to the things happening around .

Anger coursed through his veins ...he went to her and asked her to go back home with the driver as she was no more needed here...to which she immediately obliged and left without even asking once about Hamida ...Bairam shook his head and went back to Hamida .

Here Noor was still uncontrolable ...she never behaved like this ever .. she was acting different ...probably because she was extremely scared... Jalal tried hugging her to comfort her but she pushed him back ...when Jodha barged in .

Jalal ,how is noor ...she asked motioning in ...and found noor crying miserably .

Noor , she called her name and noor jumped into her arms , clinging herself more into her chest Noor uttered ...Nani , Nani ,Nani .

" Shh shh ...Noor ...Nothing will happen to nani...doctors have already treated her ...she will be fine ...dont worry ...she tried consoling her .

" Will she ? ", Noor asked to confirm and seemed relaxing in Jodha's arms . Jalal played salima's recorded song which noor always heard when stressed and was slowly drifting into slumber in Jodha's arms .

Jalal sat besides her ..." Im sorry for troubling at this hour Jodha ...we werent able to control her ...i couldnt think of anyone else so ", ...

Shhh ...Jodha sushed him up ..."its ok Jalal ...dont worry ...Moti bhabhi will take care of everything , im here with Noor and u be with Ammijaan " .

Hmm Jalal nodded and was about to leave when Jodha held his hand " R u ok ??", she asked concerned when Jalal blinked his eyes in assurance .

Bairam was sitting on chair holding Hamida's hand ,he held himself responsible for Hamida's state .

Jalal recalled his harsh words to him ...he felt sorry and kneeled down ...in front of him ...

" Im sorry Jiju ...i really am", ...Bairam raised him by his shoulders .

" Jalal ...its ok ...i didnt feel bad ...but why didnt u tell about Rukkaiya before ?".

"I tried Jiju ...right in the party ...but u were hight that time so decided to talk the next day ...but to my despair u left the very next day ...i tried to reach u ...but ur mobile came switched off ", he said all in one go ...

Hmm ...

Jalal saw his tired eyes ,he needed rest ...Jalal urged him to go and sleep while he takes care of Hamida ...Bairam refused but Jalal insisted so he left .

The whole night Jalal kept awake ...checking Hamida's temperature every now and then... ...she was sleeping peacefully and Jalal felt at peace finding her safe ...on second thought Jalal wondered how Hamida couldnt guess mushroom's taste ...she was an expert in cooking and could tell with only smell what all ingredients were used in a particular dish ...then how couldnt she see this ...and most importantly she always had her anti allergic tablets in her medical kit for any emergency , then why wasnt it found earlier when he searched for it
...there was something mysterious... He kept on thinking ...when it striked 3 in the morning...he dodnt blink his eyes even for a second the whole night ...he was so exhausted and was feeling too sleepy ...he couldnt keep his eyes open any longer and sleep took over his senses .

Jodha slept besides Noor when her alarm buzzed ...she had to leave home before her bhaisa wakes up and asks for her ...he went to Hamida's room to check how she was doing ...and relaxed finding her safe and sound .

Her gaze then fell on Jalal who slept on the couch nearby ...she went to him and slowly caressed his hair ...he was so tensed last night ...for noor for his mother and for his jiju , everyone ...but now was sleeping like a small kid ...Jodha lovingly planted a kiss on his forehead and stared him for good five minutes before turning back on her heels when Jalal held her hand .

" U r not sleeping ?? ", She asked surprised ...

" If i had ...i would have missed to see an angel loving me ...

She smiled shyly ...and looked down when her eyes fell on her watch .

" Jalal i need to go before bhaisa gets up ", ...

" Ohk ...i will drive u then ", ...

But what about ammijaan then ?

" I guess she will sleep for some more time ...and nurse is already here ...moreover she is out of danger now ...so i can drop u " .

Hmm .

The duo walked silent ...Jalal opened the car door for her and they left for Jodha's house .

They reached Jodha's house ...it was still dawn ...probably even the sun wanted to see them together spending some lone time with each other ... Jalal hugged taking Jodha by surprise .

" Wanted to do this since long time", ...he said holding her close to his heart loving the contact with her soft skin while she nestles herself as close as possible to him , enjoying the warmth radaiting from his body .

" Jalal will everything be right today ? She asked pressing herself more into him .

Jalal caressed the back of her head and said ... " i dont know Jodha ...lets just say ...we did our best , now hope for the best" .

" Ummm hmm", ...she melt into him, relishing their closeness...trying to push away the thoughts of future .

They just wanted to live in the moment till they can, regardless of what future has stored in for them .


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Heya people ...i know i know ... updating after a long long time ...but truth to be said ...i couldnt focus on writing ...some of u know the reason akready ...so i need not give explanation to them ...and to the rest of the others ...i can only say sorry to them ... sorry sorry sorry being late..but now im back ...hopefully for a long time ...😆

So with this chapter rukkaiya is out of jalal and jodha's life ...but they doesnt know yet ..hahaha ...koi nahi they will know it soon 😉.

Hope u liked the triple dhamaka ...pls do let me know if the chap was worth waiting ...even if it is not ...pls keep it to urself 😆 just kidding .

See u soon ...and love u all 😳
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Just now realised , i took such a long time to update ...
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Unres akka
Awesome chappy Akka
Want this do called marriage called off
Phone conversation is awesome
I'm going to read the next one now akka
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Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-


Unres akka
Awesome chappy Akka
Want this do called marriage called off
Phone conversation is awesome
I'm going to read the next one now akka


Thanks for pm akka
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Wow! And a whistle. Saw the msg of the update. Thought you have forgotten this story. Will give my review later. Rushing off to read the update first😊
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Unres akka
Awesome chappy Akka
Poor them
Why can't Bairum see the real ruks
Hate this ruks
I'm going to read the next one now akka
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Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-


Unres akka
Awesome chappy Akka
Poor them
Why can't Bairum see the real ruks
Hate this ruks
I'm going to read the next one now akka


Thanks for pm akka
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Oh my god
U are back
I am so happy

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