Pati ka farz, Patni ka haq - RiKara TS (completed)

kashishsr thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 7 years ago
#1

Pati ka farz, Patni ka haq - RiKara TS - Removed

Dear Readers.

Firstly, i would like to thank all the people who have liked this fiction and given me such lovely reviews on it. Thank you so very much, it means the world. Unfortunately, the satirical nature of the post was lost on some and I have been asked to edit some of it - but if you know me, then you should know this: I would never compromise my creativity for anybody's sake... it's throwing away my integrity, if I were to do so. Therefore I have moved this piece to my Wattpad account and will shortly be posting it on my blog. Plz PM me for links.

Because I really value all of you guys and many of you encouraged me to write this piece, I am going to tell you exactly what about it raised 'flags'. Talking to a very helpful moderator I was informed that my 'bashing' of a fictional character in my heavily disclaimed work of fiction had resulted in this piece being locked and reviewed. Patiently, I awaited a verdict on the case and was informed that it would be best for me to edit part 2 as it contained some bashing of Shivaay - naturally I am not the type to agree without discussion so here is my reply, the same I present to all of you:

'I don't believe in that kind of censorship when it comes to works of fiction so I will be removing the whole TS. Thank you for your time. I noticed you picked out Shivaay being mocked' - ironic for me as I feel that Dadi was the person I used satire most on. I appreciate the sentiments of all though so if despite all the disclaimers I've left, it has hurt somebody's feelings, I would like to apologise to them. Thanks for your time.'

As they are in place to support and help as well as police us, the moderator did suggest she could help me by indicating what needed to be changed, but I have always been firm in my decisions, so I responded to her as so:

'I'm afraid that would send the wrong message to my readers. I fully believe in creative freedom so I don't want to be party in constricting it. Thanks for all the time you've taken to review and get back to me. I will remove the fic by the end of the day.'

Again. the moderator tried to help and suggested that perhaps I would consider moving the fic un-edited to the ff-forum where there are less restrictions, but I did not want to expand the hate outside of this forum and contaminate the rest of India Forums, so I responded:

'It's alright, I have a wattpad account. Honestly, I am disappointed that the forum is in such turmoil - the conflict is sometimes overwhelming and I'd rather keep my work away from it if it's a cause for more conflict. I wouldn't want to take the issues in this forum to other parts of India forums.'


Now I am removing this work of fiction from here, but I want you all to know that you are truly amazing.

So now, I'd like to make a little request. Let's not sink to a level where we begin to report the creativity of others. If you enjoyed my fic, then please never be that person who will try to censor the creativity of others. If someone disclaims their work as satire, then please take it as that. If it offends you then please look away - I have done so many times in the past personally. Because art and creativity should be treasured... cherished... they should never be a cause for hurt.

I apologise to anybody offended by this piece or any other, but I would like to thank you for taking the time to read it - if you miss my writing PM me and I will send you links to it.


Love you all lots,

Kashish

Edited by kashishsr - 7 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

168

Views

19.9k

Users

47

Likes

334

Frequent Posters

OoViVioO thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
#2
Loved it!!!...This is how it should go. Done and Dusted once and for all👍🏼
sparkling_gems thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 7 years ago
#3
Brilliant, mind blowing, superb, fabulous, what to say. This is exactly what I wish someone to write on Om and Gauri. If Shivay and Anika were Ram and Sita of this Ramayan and Omkara is Lakshman, I wish Gauri to refuse to be the Urmila of this Ramayan. Not that I wished Urmila oops I mean Gauri should leave Omkara but I want Omkara to have Gauri included in every decision of his life. No more taken for granted, Urmila.
tasnimrodela thumbnail
8th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 7 years ago
#4
Pehle toh mujhe yeh samajh nehi aaraha whether should I cry or should I laugh..don't take it otherwise dear..it's just that the screen space wali thing is making me laugh continuously..kaash Omkara ko thoda sa screen space diya hota to show his side of Ishqbaaz... *SIGH*
Coming to the update..I'm sending you lots of geeli pappi for writing this...I don't know if the whole vanvaas is a plan of obros or not, all I know is Gauri will be royally ignored while as those hustle bustle and emotional drama..I was excited for this track since I saw the promo of initial days of IB..but as a Rikarian I've 0% level of interest in this track...Gauri always stood beside him..silently supported him..endured all those mental tortures and hurtful words..but never let him know anything thinking he was already upset with the so called vanvaas...it was her right to know what was going on her husbands mind..even Omkara had some duties of being her husband..but he was terribly failed fulfilling those...I could connect myself with this...It was heart wrenching to see that Ramayana just focused Ram Sita and our Parvati (who isn't a part of this) was ignored to the exceed level...
Thanks again for writing this as we all know even if Gauri felt hurt cvs won't think it important to show that giving them ss of two minutes... 😆 🥱
Edited by tasnimrodela - 7 years ago
123mitul thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 7 years ago
#5
why do I feel that the whole OS is a troll!!😆
Anyway, loved it.
AfrinHrid thumbnail
8th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
#6
Fantastic update👍🏼
Loved it
Z.A.A thumbnail
8th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
#7
ROFL! 🤣
The story is great which is why they'll never do anything like that on the show but damn those digs! You're one witty chirriyya 😆
GoldenPanda. thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 7 years ago
#8
Oh my God, I did not see those last two paragraphs coming.😆

But you couldn't be more right with this:

Gauri was done with waiting for the Ishqbaaaz she had thought he would one day be for her... they would never be granted the screen space required for that much development.

And this:

He did not chase after her as Shivaay was not there to encourage him to do so

I think the frustration level for rikara fans has reached its limit at this point.
Edited by GoldenPanda. - 7 years ago
mailanchi thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
#9
How I wish ke Gauri of last wale dialogues shrenu bole gulneet
Ko
priyadil thumbnail
8th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
#10
Nice story
Gauri stands for her rights at least now before leaving ...

Rikara fans crossed all the limits of their patients ...

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".