Hasi Labon Pe (Shayari)- My Extented Version

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey everyone, I'm Lubna. This is my first post in EDT forum but I'm an active member of EDKV forum. I love writing my versions of songs, but my latest interest is to write Shayari. At least trying to. This post has my extended version of Namik's Shayari in the first episode. Hope you guys like it!!!



Hasi labon pe sukoon rooh ko aur dil ko kharar deta hai!
Par jab ishq hadd se guzar jaye to maar deta hai!!


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Jitna marham hai ye dil ka utna hai zakhm bhi!
Kar ke vaada saath ka bas intezaar deta hai!!


Inteha ye pyaar ki hai ya hai aitbaar ki!
Jiske haathon tootna hai usiko dil pe iqteyaar deta hai!!


Is junoon ki hadd na koi aazmaa ke dekh lo!
Ek wafa nibhane dhoke maut ko hazaar deta hai!!



I hope you guys like it. Do drop in your views!! Thanks!!

Lubna❤️

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Res !!
I'm first :D
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It's beautiful Lubs
And like always i didn't get few words' meaning 😆
It's beautiful like always Miss Shayra 😳
Edited by phoenix_edkv - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Lubs! Look who followed you here😆
You are a wizard with lyrics and we all in EKDV forum know that. .absolutely in love with those lines girl👏


Keep treating us with more of these beauties!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Smooth and suave like Shiv
...welcome to the forum Lubna❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow magnificent dear 👏
Just imagine this in Namik's voice
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Willy_Wonka.


Wow magnificent dear 👏
Just imagine this in Namik's voice

@bold Haina !!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ranified009

Smooth and suave like Shiv

...welcome to the forum Lubna❤️

@bold oh yeah !! Welcome aboard Lubs 😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Luubana good to see you here
Beautiful
You have way with weaving words
❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Yess ❤️ 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Jitna marham hai ye dil ka utna hai zakhm bhi!

Loved the aboove line, 👏 Beautiful work ❤️

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