Chap 14 on Pg 136 Entrapment : An Extremely Dark Advni FF - Page 21

Originally posted by: gamini2207

I'm speechless. I mean, you're an incredible writer. The way you're penning both characters is commendable and I'm totally loving Advay's intense and manipulative side.

Originally posted by: ASRkiMoonlight

WOAH!!I'm fanning myself☺️
Advay's in lust and Chandni smitten, she doesnt understand her own reactions to his advances... this girl is so innocent and pure..especially the way she speaks her mind to him..amuses him to no end..she wonders why he doesn't hold the bare part of her waist😆 he is everything that she needs to stay away from..inspite of that, is attracted to him like moth to a flame...she is unable to refuse him, a man who is brooding and dark who is anything but decent..she is terrified at the same time relieved to have him close. .he wants to destroy her yet is bothered by her tears..doesn't like others ordering her around as its his only haq..and she on the other, subconsciously submits to his every whim..there's a stranger in her bedroom invading her space and she behaves as if it was completely normal..had any other girl in her place, would have slapped him. Infact Advay himself is intrigued, fascinated by her actions..her body reacts on it's own accord to him...Love how the control part has already seeped into their equation..he loves to manipulate and twist her. Now I can understand what you might have had gone through
while writing this.There's so much complexity to these characters..With every update the darkness is a notch higher...going to be fun reading this

Originally posted by: In598y

please update soon

Please read it on wattpad, link is on first page 😃

Originally posted by: 2filmy

Advay was enjoying her company a lot
I an sure he was watching her every move carefully
she was very uncomfortable under his scrutiny
he understood that it was her room and she loved it
she also understood that he liked this room a lot
he can persuade her for anything very easily
she is almost like a putty in his hands
he asked her if she didn't like his name so avoided him
but she had thought he has referred to the room when he had asked her the question
she had really hoped he was Dev but she wouldn't ever tell that to this stranger so she denied
I wonder how Advay couldn't read through her denial
u wrote she knew Dev won't come back ever after what she had done what do u mean by that
do u mean that she felt that Dev had heard about the rumours surrounding her so wouldn't come back
please explain that part

Originally posted by: Illuminatus.

Loving the concept. And this is the kind of Arnav/Advay I adore.

Waiting eagerly for the story to unfold.

absolutely Chitra reply in a long reply if u wish
I comment in separate posts as my mobile screen restricts my writing space so I myself can't see what I wrote if I exceed that space

I have to mention something here
she is just like a putty I his hands
or rather she is like molten was that he shapes as he wishes
she can't control her mind in his presence at all
she blabbers all that she feels before him easily
I think it amuses him but also pleases him secretly
she is fully pure and innocent and that's his advantage
their relationship & reaction to each other are special
he takes so many liberties with her yet she lets him to
also once she's with him she forgets Indrani too

oh wow an update in progress already

Amazing chapter!