Ashni poem... Thanks for giving me a life.. !!!

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Bhavit Kapoor

@bawaswift

Stunner

Posted: 7 years ago

You taught me how beautiful life is,...
Everything from your words,,, your touch,...

You gave me hope, you gave me love,,,
And I know you were sent from heaven above...!

The way you showed me the person I could be,,,,
It's something you, and only you, would see...

You were always different and unique,
But I never guessed it was me you would seek...!

How someone like me would end up with someone like you.. ?/
I honestly dont believe it, it cannot be true...

But it is, and I know every day...,
That I have YOU, and its needless to say ...

You've made my life beautiful and taught me how to live...
To show you how much I am grateful,,, anything I wud give.

So thank you for coming into my life...
In doing so you havve taken away the sorrow and strife...

You put a smile on my face and a skip to my stride...
And I know you'll always be there by my side... 🤗

Nidhi... you are such a sweet person..

i am what i am cos you are the only one...

Only one to see my good things in me..

Only one to love me for what i am n can be.. !!!

Thanks for the read.. !

This poem is written n had to posted long ago when once Mudra di asked me to write.. But then the flow n the activity was so less .. that i cud hardly see anyone to read me here...

Today i am asking myself to post it... lets see if you wud like it.. 😳

Purely written with Ashni in my mind,,, cos their presence always make the most of it in my n our life.. !

🤗

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nishi05

@nishi05

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

Wow Bro it's beautiful poem...⭐️ 👏 👏

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braveheartdoc

@braveheartdoc

Alumni

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Posted: 7 years ago

Bhaiya...where did you keep it hidden for such a long time...its really awesome Bhaiya👏⭐️...when you wrote this...that time obviously the activity would have been much better at this forum...I'm so glad I got to read it and really hope that the old members come here and have a look at this stupendous poem written by you...they really missed a masterpiece😳

The way you expressed Asu's love for Nidhi and what he feels for her...I really got emotional to read it and went through his emotions all through your lines😃

Please do write more and I'm still waiting for your story on AshNi...hope to read it once Shona is back...be ready with it soon Bhaiya😃🤗

Thanks a tonne for posting this fabulous work of yours...mind blowing and heart touching😃⭐️⭐️

Waiting for more from you and Bhabhi😉

Edited by braveheartdoc - 7 years ago