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Congrats for new story dear

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Hi...friends I m here with an first part of these story...

PART 1

After listening toshi ji words ishu felt bad n leaves for her room...
Beeji who listen the convo go to ishu room n see her doing some work...

Beeji- beta kya mein Ander aa sakti hoo..

Ishita- ha... Aaiye
Seeing ishu confused beeji give her intro...

Mein beeji hoo is ghar ki if u want u can call me dadi..

Ishita nodded n asked for her aarival..

Beeji- Maine Teri aur toshji ki baat suni...muje pata hai tuje bura laga hoga uski baat ka...par beta uski baat ka bura mat manna woh dil ki bohat aachi hai...bas woh jaldi kisi pe bharosa nai kar pati...aur tum abhi new aai ho...isiliye woh aisa behave kar ri hai

Ishita- dadi ji muje unki baat ka bura nai laga hai...woh bhi toh meri amma jaisi hai na..

Beeji cares her head n say thank u beta..

Ishita confused n ask thank u kis liye dadi ji..

Beeji- meri baat ko samaj ne ke liye...

Ishu hold her hand n says aap hi toh kehti hai na mein aap ko dadi bulav ...jab hamara dadi poti ka rista ban gaya toh phir thank u bich mein kaha se aaya...

Beeji- soh toh hai...waisa bata tu kya karti hai tere parents kaha rehte hai...

Listening parents name ishu get sad but composed herself n says mein college mein professor hoo...aur mere parents chennai mein rehte hai...

Beeji- oh toh tu teacher ji hai hame toh tu nai dhamkaegi na jaise baccho ko dhamkati hai..said smilingly..

Ishu smiles n say nai mein apni dadi ko nai dhamkaungi..

They were talking like this when they hear toshi ji voice.. Beeji aap kithe ho aap ki dawai ka time ho gaya hai...

Beeji makes face ise kuch yaad rahe na rahe meri bp ki dawai hamesha yaad rehti hai...

Ishita- aisa health ko neglect nai karna chahiye dadi ji jaiye aap apni medicine le lijiye...

Beeji- ha thik hai.. Agar tumhe kisi cheez ki zarurat ho toh muje bata dena... N leaves.

Ishu think dadi ji kitni aachi hai...n do her works while a photo frame fall from clothes n it was her family photo she cares the pictures n say kya meri galti itni badi ki aap log muje maaf nai kar sake...n keep it aside...wiping her tears

somewhere In Mumbai...
Mrs iyer- Mihika chalo ready ho jao college Jana hai..
N goes in kitchen murmuring kitna soti hai yeh Ladki.

Mihika- kya amma meri aaj college nai hai...aap bhul gai aur meri neend khol di...

Mrs iyer - kya jaldi time dekha hai kitne baj rahe hai aur keh ri hai jaldi kyu utha diya..aur waise bhi tumhare yeh college ka last year hai..phir koi aacha ladka dekh kar tumhari shadi kar denge haina vishwa

Mr iyer - ha madhu tumhari baat toh sahi hai..

Mihika made faces n says mein itni jaldi shadi nai karungi...mein aur 4-5 saal yahi rahungi aur aap dono ki pareshan karungi said smilingly n leaves for freshen up

Mrs iyer- dekha vishwa yeh kya bol kar gai...

Mr iyer- ha dekha bhi aur suna bhi...tumhe pata hai bachpan mein ishu bhi aisa hi bolti thi..

Listening ishu name mrs iyer says vishwa uska naam bhi mat lo...aap bhul rahe we have only two daughter Mihika n vandu ishu hamari kuch nai lagti..

Woh sirf aap dono ki kuch nai lagti par aaj bhi woh meri akka hai...n I m very proud of her kyuki joh unhone kiya hai woh sab ladki ke liye inspiration hai...aur woh akeli bina family support ke n looks towards them angrily aur aap unhe bhul sakte ho mein nahi...said Mihika who come back to take her phone n listen the convo of her parents..

Mrs iyer- tum kuch nai janti tum tab choti thi..aur yeh kya tarika huwa baat karte ka...

Mihika- mein sab kuch janti hoo mein tab itni bhi choti nai thi jab apne ishu akka hamari zindagi se nikala tha...jab ki unki koi galti bhi nahi thi...yeh toh kisi ke bhi sath ho sakta tha mere sath bhi ho sakta tha ya vandu akka ke sath par isse aap ko kya app hamare sath bhi wohi karti joh ishu akka ke sath kiya...pata nai woh kaha hogi kis halat mein hogi..zinda bhi hai ya...not able to say further she just cry n leaves..

Mrs iyer angrily dekha is Ladki ko ise ishita pe proud feel ho raha lekin hame kitni baate Sunni padi thi .

Mr iyer- Jane do madhu waqt ke sath Mihika bhi ishu ko bhul jayegi jaise hum uski yaado ko bhula chuke hai...n wipes his his tears n thinks kaash ishu tumne hamari baat maani hogi toh shyd aaj hum sab ek hote


In Delhi

Ishita- ha uncle boliye...Kaise hai sab amma appa

Person- sab bahot aache beta...ek baat pochu tumse

Ishita- ha uncle

Person- tum jab apne family k itni parwah karti hoo toh tum unse khud baat kyu nai kar leti..

Ishu cried listening this n thought kaash mujse koi milna chahta baat karna chahta...but sadly sab log muje bhul gaye jaise mein kabhi unki zindagi mein exist hi nai karti thi...

Person asked getting no response from ishu hello beta tumhe meri awaz aa ri hai...

Ishita- ha uncle woh bas kuch kaam yaad aa gaya tha aapse baad mein baat karti hoo...n disconnect the call

While person says muje nai pata tum apne pariwar se dur kyu hui ho par dua zarur karunga tumhari sab pareshani dur ho jaye

A day passed in jiffy. At night everyone is gather for dinner in bhalla house...
Ishu see this n was about to sit with them for dinner but toshi ji stop her n says - tum yaha PG hona ghar ki member nai ho joh hamare sath dining table par baith rahi hoo...

Beeji sign her to keep quite but toshi ji say kya beeji aap mainu Chup kara rahe hoo are hum pariwar wale ek sath dinner kar rahe usme ko bahar wala aayega toh hume koi baat karni hogi toh kaise karenge...yeh ek din ka thori hai..yeh toh roz ka hai..

Though ishu feel bad but she says sorry aunty aap log khana khalo I will have my food afterward..

Toshi ji- tum agar chaho toh hamare pehle ya phir apne kamre mein kha Lena...lekin hamare sath nai said sternly

Ishu take her plate n go her room n eat..

While Mr bhalla says- yeh kya tarika tha bachi se baat karne ka use aap pyar se bhi keh sakti thi na...pata nai kitna bura lava hoga use

Mrs bhalla- dekho bhallaji aapne apni manmani ki na pg ko rakkar toh bas mein ab use apne tarike se handle kar lungi..

Mr bhalla - Maine manmani nai ki hai use wakeh mein ghar ki zarurat thi aur uska background dekh kar Maine use apne ghar rakha hai...beeji ab aap hi ise samjaye...

Beeji signs him to keep quite she will take Care...

After having dinner all were in living room watching movie when door bell rang..

Toshi ji- oyy neelu dekh kon aaya..

Neelu open the door..n says are romi bhaiya aap..

Romi - nai mera bhoot hat piche n shout maa...

Listening romi voice Toshi ji gets happy n hugs her sons n says are mera puttar tu aagaya...yeh dekh waha hostel mein kuch khata pita nai tha kitna patla ho gaya mera puttar...kiss his forehead
While romi take blessing from beeji n Mr bhalla

Mr bhalla hugs him n say are romi tu aane wala tha toh phone toh karna tha...mein pick karne aata..

Romi- are papaji aap thand lo mein ab bacha thori hoo

Mr bhalla - hmm chal thik now go n rest will talk in morning..
All wishes Good night n go for sleep..

Next day
In Mumbai
As usual Mihika get late for college while her friend was waiting for her...at parking..

Mihika- sorry pooja late ho gaya kya karu..while pooja complete her sentence
Kya karu raat bhar tere jiju se baat kar ri ho toh late ho gaya...n says kya Mihika hamesha ek hi bahana itna kitna baat karti hai apne hero se..

Mihika- shut up kisi ne sun Liya toh..

Pooja- lekin aisa kab tak chalega kabhi toh teri family ko sach batana chal jayega...mihika says bas yeh college khtn higa phir ghar mein sab ko bata dungi...
while pooja says aacha chal college jate hai waise bhi first lec to gaya hi ..n they leaves in Mihika scooty

In bhalla House..
Mr bhalla gather everyone n says I want to give u some good news...

Romi- papa is umar mein bhi..n wink at him
While Toshi ji pulls his ears n shaitan n Mr bhalla glare at him...
Seeing Mr bhalla he mouth sorry n say kya Good news hai papa..

Mr bhalla - are raman wapas aa raha hai US se..

Listening this all family get happy while most happiest soul is beeji n toshi ji...

Toshi ji- hayy rabba mera puttar pure 3 saal baad wapas aa raha hai...bhalla ji aap sach keh rahe ho na..

Mr bhalla- ha uska abhi phone tha usne khud Kaha k woh Delhi aa rahe ek meeting k silsile mein..
Listening this toshji face fall n says Matlab woh apne kaam k liye aa raha hamare liye nai aa raha hai..

Beeji- dil chota na kar toshji woh aa raha hai na hum use ROK lenge apne pass..

Romi- ha maa bas aap Rona band karo...

While ishu comes out from room for going college n see family are gather...
Beeji see her n say are ishita puttar itni jaldi Kaha ja rahe hai..

Ishita- dadi ji woh mein college ja ri hoo waise bhi late ho gai hoo

Beeji- par puttar nasta

Ishita- raste mein kar lungi...

Romi- beeji yeh kon hai...

Beeji- yeh hamare yaha pg hai

Romi- hi...miss ishita nice to meet u

Ishita- hi... Same here..n leaves hurriedly...

Mrs bhalla lite the diya in front of matarani idol n say bas ab raman k aane baad hamara pariwar phirse ek ho jayega...

Beeji comes to toshi n say chal Rona band kar mera pota aa rahe ja jakar tyari kar...

While toshi ji says ha beeji mein uski sab favorite dish banaungi...aur uska room bhi ready karna hai..

While romi says to papaji ab toh mera MBA bhi ho gaya hai...ab bhai k aane k baad mein unke sath office join kar lunga..

Mr bhalla- kyu raman k aane k baad join karega abhi chal mere sath..

Romi- kya papa ji do din muje aaram toh karne do... Bache ki jaan loge kya aate hi..said with baby face

Mrs bhalla comes n support romi yeh kya bhallaji abhi kal raat ko toh aaya hai... Na toh dhang se kuch khaya hai aur aap use office le Jane ki baat karte hoo..

Romi- maa tuje salam said dramatically..

Mr bhalla- aacha thik hai lekin ghar pe re aawara gardi mat Karna..

Romi looks towards toshi ji with baby face... While toshi ji says are agar aapka ho gaya ho toh jaiye office mere puttar ko pareshan mat kijiye...

Mr bhalla thinks inka kuch nai ho sakta


That's all for now..

Hit likes n give ur valuable comments...

Will update next part as per ur response
Edited by Rarupatel - 8 years ago
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Updated first part
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Superb update
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Posted: 8 years ago
#80
intresting start
seems something bad happend with ishu and her family left her insted of supporting her in bad times
only ishu feels bad for ishu and waiting meet her akka
ishu is pg in bhalla house toshiji dont like idea of pg and she showing anger on ishita
beeji is sweet
raman is in usa and coming back soon
romi come bach house after xompleting studies
ishu is lecturer in college
continue soon

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