Avneil FF: dil mil gaye

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Posted: 7 years ago
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hello everyone I am Ishani
obviously naamkarann and avneil lover
I love avneil and their story a lot
just thought to write their story with my ideas...a new story after leap

note:story begins after 15 years leap as I told I am writing a totally new story but not that different. avni's past story is totally same but just after dayawanti attempt to kill her neela took her to Hosp and saved her life and they both left India and never came back

introduction/character sketch:
Avni Ayesha: she is 25 year old ,lives in Newyork with her Neela Ma.Owner and CEO of Ashiyana Industries(textile industry)[as we know in childhood she started a business with her friend alladin but was shut by dayawanti mehta so when avni came to Newyork she started a company of her own with little help of neela]
avni is brave,intelligent, smart and born fighter and business person,loves her neela ma and ayesha ma(dead) alot.
she has only one agenda and motive in her life that is to take revenge of her ayesha ma's death and most important to bring her brother back in her life.
{Avni is also good in technology and is also a software engineer}

Neela ma: The one who always supported avni and loved her the most.she loves and care avni more than anything.Avni is her life and everything. she have a wish that her daughter believe and trust in love and be happy from inside. she lives with avni in newyork from past 15 years and always ready to do anything to protect her daughter.she gave rebirth to avni by saving her from death and bringing her back.

Prithvi Singh bedi(avni's bestest friend in newyork): lives in newyork with his mom n dad(names if needed somewhere I will give). he know avni since 15 years.(yes as they studied from same school,college,university) he knows hercop
ot and obviously they are jigari dost. he is also 25yrs old. they share each and evrthing.{prithvi's sense of humor is v.good}
[note: avni never fogot her childhood bestest frnd Ali and never gave anyone his place and prithvi also didn't took his place instead he made his own]

in India--Mumbai

mehta's all are same

Neil khanna(ACP): 26yrs old,he is a supercop,handsome,charming,honest(words will not be enough to describe his character but same as in show) have lost his first love 4 years ago but still believe in love.
{juhi is permanently dead will never come or her name also will not come In my any chap.}

shweta khanna: possessive mother of our super cop,love her son alot

Prakash khanna: understanding and loving father of our super cop

Dd: the one with good humor,respect our gentleman supercop and also he is his right hand

{other characters if needed will introduced to you all later}

please everyone give ur precious like and comment and also give ur opinion and should I continue this or write a new one on current track.I like independent and career oriented women's so thought to make avni a famous businesses person of newyork and so thought to write from start everything as I miss their old tashan and nok-jhok for any doubts u may ask me I will surely answer
well I know I am really late to write a story from starting. Will reveal more thought and idea soon.
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Chocolatebond thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Special kudos to mention that chuhi is permanently dead and even her name will not be used
Looking forward to read your ff
Update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Afsana103

Special kudos to mention that chuhi is permanently dead and even her name will not be used

Looking forward to read your ff
Update soon

Thanku I will surely update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tumpa12

interesting
update soon

thanku i will update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Superb
New Avni is good
Continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Afsana103

Special kudos to mention that chuhi is permanently dead and even her name will not be used

Looking forward to read your ff
Update soon

Good one 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: rinku95

Superb
New Avni is good
Continue soon

thanku i will update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: rinku95

Superb
New Avni is good
Continue soon

😃 thanks i will update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: susan7

Interesting...plz update soon

thanku i will surely update soon

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