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What say people? I was hoping for a slow and gentle, eye-lock, attraction period for Rikara after confession, where they learn more and more about each other and fall in love all over again, but cant expect that from the CVs , can we?
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Aankhon ki Gustakhiyaan ( Day 2) - part 2
Oberoi mansion was in topsy-turvy, so many preparations had to made, the Obros and Obahus were going on a week long trip to Goa ( separately). So everything had to be doubly planned, each gangs itinerary, accommodation, transportation etc. Whilst the Obros were going to travel in their open top red Ferrari, the limousine was prepared for the Obahus. Re: accommodation, Shivkara made sure that Obahus were staying in the same five star resort as them , only in different rooms, and without Rudy's knowledge that their rooms were inter-connected with a secret door. Of course, SSO hone ke koi toh faayde hain, the hotel manager was all too obliging and the hotel staff was briefed accordingly.
Omkara was restless, he had not seen his chiraiyaa for 6 hours straight. He was caught up in the exhibition planning since he left that morning after teasing her. He just wanted to get home and spend some time with her before they left for Goa that evening in separate cars. He rushed through the rest of his briefings to the curators and made his way home as soon as could, only to find his love busy packing things into two suitcases. he kept admiring her from afar, so lovingly she held every shirt of his, smelled it, hugged it and then arranged it in his suitcase. He was spell-bound! So much love and so much beauty, if he died just now he wouldn't regret. He kept observing her from a distance, until she felt his eyes on her and turned.
'Aap' she said. She turned red thinking how long has be been there. He put her at ease saying, yes, I just arrived. Packing ho gayi? yes, a few last things to go in - I wanted to check with you - what paints will you take? Don't worry, he said, there wont be time for paints. She finished packing and he called the servant - please take these suitcases, this one in the Ferrari and the other one in the limo. The servant nodded and Omkara smirked, this will be fun, purposely he had switched the suitcases around. He had also taken Shivaay into confidence about his plans to spend time with Gauri in Goa, and Shivaay was only too happy for his bro and rakhi sis, who he adored like crazy. And of course, Shivaay was hoping that if Omkara takes Gauri away, he will have Anika to himself for a bit. He had briefed Anika about Omkara's plan that afternoon. At first she was reluctant to leave his little chiraiyya sis alone , but Shivaay explained to her Omkara;s motives and then Anika was happy to co-operate. And she wasn't complaining at all for having Shivaay all to herself whilst Rikara were together.
Bhavya was not going with them, she had received a call that afternoon that she was being re-instated as ACP as upon investigation they found that she had been setup. She was all too happy to have her uniform back. But she had to fulfill her contract with Rudy as his body guard which she related to the Commissioner. He wasn't complaining as he was going to send her on a secret mission to Goa as an under-cover cop, since no one knew of her re-instatement. Bhavya was happy to carry out the mission but she had to inform that Obros and Obahus that she wont accompany them.
The only remaining hurdle for Omkara - his dear baby bro Rudy of course. Shivaay had a solution in place. He sweet -talked Rudy into maintaining his gym sessions whilst in Goa , and Rudy was happy that first time Shivaay didn't think of his exercise sessions as obsession but was in fact happy to take his gear along so Rudy can exercise even when in Goa. Shivaay knew all too well, that Rudy required atleast 3 hours of exercise in the afternoon, then shower and then a power-nap in the afternoon. That gave them 5-6 hours of free time to spend time with their respective wives whilst Rudy was busy body-building. It was a prefecr plan.
Omkara had just gone over this in his own head, when he saw Gauri come out of the washroom ready and dressed for Goa. Only last touch remaining was her dupatta. She looked ethereal and suddenly he couldn't bear the idea of being away from her in separate rooms for next 7 days. She was just about picking up her dupatta, when he did. She asked him for it but he refused to give it to her. When she came closer to take it, he pinned her to the wall, with both his hands on her sides. She was surprised. 'Omkaraji' yeh kya kar rahe hain aap' she complained. He smirked. ' I am looking at you' he said. She couldn't believe what he just said, he was staring at her lovingly and had a naughty smirk on his face. ' Whhhyyy' she said. Is something wrong? Kuch laga hain humare chehre par? She tried touching her face, when he held her hand. Nothing, he said, just looking at you. She was blushing by now, he voice shaking - ' Why'?
' Its all your fault' he said. 'You only agreed to send us Obros away on this separate trip, now I wont be able to see you for 7 days' She blushed yet again. ' You know' he continued, when you went away after I shouted at you during the inspiration phase, my breath dried out. I was looking for you everywhere. I was seeing you everywhere. I was imagining you , touching you, you were just there'. I was going mad, had Rudy not asked you to come back for uniting Shivika. She couldn't believe what she was hearing. She had no idea Omkara missed her so much. 'And when you were doing your secret English classes, and I couldn't see you, talk to you for few days, I was going mad, thinking all sorts of things - like you were no longer interested in me'. I waited for you every day, every evening to come back, so I could see you , in the room, close to me.'
Gauri couldn't believe her ears. She knew Omkara had confessed to her and all, but she had no idea of how deeply they were tied together. He missed her as much as she missed him !
Her reverie was disturbed by a knock on the door, Rudy shouted ' O' Lets go, its time for Goa. Gauri fidgeted. ' Rudy bhaiya is outside ' . ' So' said Omkara. ' Let me go' . No, I want to look at you. Gauri was all hot and bothered by now, blushing, she pleaded to him, ' please Omkaraji'. But he kept looking at her as if in a trance.
Another knock, this time it was Anika, ' Gauri, lets go, the car is ready'.
Gauri moved, but it was futile, Omkaras grip was strong, ' please' she said. ' Bhaujai is waiting for me'.
' On one condition' he said. ' What?'
' Kiss me' .
' What?'
' I said kiss me' said Omkara in the most seductive tone possible.
' Omakraji...' she had no words, she wanted to drown, at the same time she was melting in his gaze.
Looking at her state, he released her ' okay, go'. She smiled. ' Gauri' he stopped her.
She turned around and in a flash, he had kissed her on her cheek.
She gasped, turned red and ran out of the door. Running, only that her feet were not on the ground, she was running on seventh heaven, she felt euphoric. What could this feeling be...
Omkara smiled, seeing her reaction, he felt happy, he felt at home, he had his Gauri, he just had to draw out all of his dabanng chiraiyya again, who was lost somewhere due the burdens she had to bear all these years. He was determined to just do that.
And of course, have fun along the way, get his fill of her, which will never be enough, according to him, he needed her, like one needs their breath. With this happy thought in mind, he followed her , sat in the Ferrari where ShivRu were waiting for him and they took off, followed by the limo where his heart was...
END
So guys, this was part 2 - day 2 .
I am planning to make this into a 7 day story.
What do you think?
Leave your comments below.
Please leave you comments.
Some encouragement to keep me going...
Aankhon ki Gustakhiyaan ( Day 2) - part 2
Oberoi mansion was in topsy-turvy, so many preparations had to made, the Obros and Obahus were going on a week long trip to Goa ( separately). So everything had to be doubly planned, each gangs itinerary, accommodation, transportation etc. Whilst the Obros were going to travel in their open top red Ferrari, the limousine was prepared for the Obahus. Re: accommodation, Shivkara made sure that Obahus were staying in the same five star resort as them , only in different rooms, and without Rudy's knowledge that their rooms were inter-connected with a secret door. Of course, SSO hone ke koi toh faayde hain, the hotel manager was all too obliging and the hotel staff was briefed accordingly.
Omkara was restless, he had not seen his chiraiyaa for 6 hours straight. He was caught up in the exhibition planning since he left that morning after teasing her. He just wanted to get home and spend some time with her before they left for Goa that evening in separate cars. He rushed through the rest of his briefings to the curators and made his way home as soon as could, only to find his love busy packing things into two suitcases. he kept admiring her from afar, so lovingly she held every shirt of his, smelled it, hugged it and then arranged it in his suitcase. He was spell-bound! So much love and so much beauty, if he died just now he wouldn't regret. He kept observing her from a distance, until she felt his eyes on her and turned.
'Aap' she said. She turned red thinking how long has be been there. He put her at ease saying, yes, I just arrived. Packing ho gayi? yes, a few last things to go in - I wanted to check with you - what paints will you take? Don't worry, he said, there wont be time for paints. She finished packing and he called the servant - please take these suitcases, this one in the Ferrari and the other one in the limo. The servant nodded and Omkara smirked, this will be fun, purposely he had switched the suitcases around. He had also taken Shivaay into confidence about his plans to spend time with Gauri in Goa, and Shivaay was only too happy for his bro and rakhi sis, who he adored like crazy. And of course, Shivaay was hoping that if Omkara takes Gauri away, he will have Anika to himself for a bit. He had briefed Anika about Omkara's plan that afternoon. At first she was reluctant to leave his little chiraiyya sis alone , but Shivaay explained to her Omkara;s motives and then Anika was happy to co-operate. And she wasn't complaining at all for having Shivaay all to herself whilst Rikara were together.
Bhavya was not going with them, she had received a call that afternoon that she was being re-instated as ACP as upon investigation they found that she had been setup. She was all too happy to have her uniform back. But she had to fulfill her contract with Rudy as his body guard which she related to the Commissioner. He wasn't complaining as he was going to send her on a secret mission to Goa as an under-cover cop, since no one knew of her re-instatement. Bhavya was happy to carry out the mission but she had to inform that Obros and Obahus that she wont accompany them.
The only remaining hurdle for Omkara - his dear baby bro Rudy of course. Shivaay had a solution in place. He sweet -talked Rudy into maintaining his gym sessions whilst in Goa , and Rudy was happy that first time Shivaay didn't think of his exercise sessions as obsession but was in fact happy to take his gear along so Rudy can exercise even when in Goa. Shivaay knew all too well, that Rudy required atleast 3 hours of exercise in the afternoon, then shower and then a power-nap in the afternoon. That gave them 5-6 hours of free time to spend time with their respective wives whilst Rudy was busy body-building. It was a prefecr plan.
Omkara had just gone over this in his own head, when he saw Gauri come out of the washroom ready and dressed for Goa. Only last touch remaining was her dupatta. She looked ethereal and suddenly he couldn't bear the idea of being away from her in separate rooms for next 7 days. She was just about picking up her dupatta, when he did. She asked him for it but he refused to give it to her. When she came closer to take it, he pinned her to the wall, with both his hands on her sides. She was surprised. 'Omkaraji' yeh kya kar rahe hain aap' she complained. He smirked. ' I am looking at you' he said. She couldn't believe what he just said, he was staring at her lovingly and had a naughty smirk on his face. ' Whhhyyy' she said. Is something wrong? Kuch laga hain humare chehre par? She tried touching her face, when he held her hand. Nothing, he said, just looking at you. She was blushing by now, he voice shaking - ' Why'?
' Its all your fault' he said. 'You only agreed to send us Obros away on this separate trip, now I wont be able to see you for 7 days' She blushed yet again. ' You know' he continued, when you went away after I shouted at you during the inspiration phase, my breath dried out. I was looking for you everywhere. I was seeing you everywhere. I was imagining you , touching you, you were just there'. I was going mad, had Rudy not asked you to come back for uniting Shivika. She couldn't believe what she was hearing. She had no idea Omkara missed her so much. 'And when you were doing your secret English classes, and I couldn't see you, talk to you for few days, I was going mad, thinking all sorts of things - like you were no longer interested in me'. I waited for you every day, every evening to come back, so I could see you , in the room, close to me.'
Gauri couldn't believe her ears. She knew Omkara had confessed to her and all, but she had no idea of how deeply they were tied together. He missed her as much as she missed him !
Her reverie was disturbed by a knock on the door, Rudy shouted ' O' Lets go, its time for Goa. Gauri fidgeted. ' Rudy bhaiya is outside ' . ' So' said Omkara. ' Let me go' . No, I want to look at you. Gauri was all hot and bothered by now, blushing, she pleaded to him, ' please Omkaraji'. But he kept looking at her as if in a trance.
Another knock, this time it was Anika, ' Gauri, lets go, the car is ready'.
Gauri moved, but it was futile, Omkaras grip was strong, ' please' she said. ' Bhaujai is waiting for me'.
' On one condition' he said. ' What?'
' Kiss me' .
' What?'
' I said kiss me' said Omkara in the most seductive tone possible.
' Omakraji...' she had no words, she wanted to drown, at the same time she was melting in his gaze.
Looking at her state, he released her ' okay, go'. She smiled. ' Gauri' he stopped her.
She turned around and in a flash, he had kissed her on her cheek.
She gasped, turned red and ran out of the door. Running, only that her feet were not on the ground, she was running on seventh heaven, she felt euphoric. What could this feeling be...
Omkara smiled, seeing her reaction, he felt happy, he felt at home, he had his Gauri, he just had to draw out all of his dabanng chiraiyya again, who was lost somewhere due the burdens she had to bear all these years. He was determined to just do that.
And of course, have fun along the way, get his fill of her, which will never be enough, according to him, he needed her, like one needs their breath. With this happy thought in mind, he followed her , sat in the Ferrari where ShivRu were waiting for him and they took off, followed by the limo where his heart was...
END
So guys, this was part 2 - day 2 .
I am planning to make this into a 7 day story.
What do you think?
Leave your comments below.
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