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Kabir to his mom 'Mom ye kya kia apne...ap itni gir jaoegi ye kabhi socha nahi tha..I hate u mom !' Kabir is crying now
Had shared this few days ago in one of the threads , thought of sharing it here
This is one of the endings I came up with , not sure if this is a proper OS or not or just a thought about the ending...Slightly inspired by Beyhadh 😆 Well I would prefer AanVir ending and i feel that a guns and roses sort of tragic ending will suit them so much ! plus brothers also re-uniting in the end !
So, here you go !
SCENARIO - Aanchal and Ranvir got married, they ,married each other with their own agendas...both wanted to take revenge from each other and marriage was a way for them to seek their revenge...but could't help thmeseves from falling in love... a lot of secrets came out...Ranvir had done certain crimes although they were redeemable...He was innocent in Meenu rape and murder case...Kabir in the meantime had also fallen in love with Aanchal...then Aanchal's mom or bro dies and blame is put on Ranvir...This drifts them apart and Aanchal starts hating him...Kabir supports her all this while !
Aanchal wants to hurt Ranvir in the most cruel way , she wants to destroy him and thus files for divorce...Kabir proposes her...and Aanchal who knows that Kabir is a changed man now will not betray her says yes and they get engaged. ..Aanchal gets engaged because she wants to hurt Ranvir , though she has a soft corner for Kabir but doesn't love him.
Ranvir loves Anchal but Anchal blames Ranvir for her mom/bro's death...She thinks that Ranvir is responsible for the death while in reality he is not and someone framed him for it...so she basically misunderstands him. Let's say Sarika did all this 😆
Kabir and Ranvir are at loggerheads with each other...Sarika wants Ranvir out of the way...She has created a huge misunderstanding between the bros and AanVir.
Ranvir knows that Kabir loves Anchal and thinks that maybe it is good for Aanchal if she moves on in life coz he thinks that he is an empty shell, a completely broken man who doesn't deserve Aanchal now not after everything he has put her through.. he also knows that Sarika has done all this.
Kabir and Anchal are against Ranvir and want revenge from him..they want to destroy him...although deep down Anchal still loves Ranvir...he is her forbidden love...both have managed to destroy Ranvir to a great extent unaware of the fact that Ranvir himself allowed them to do so...lot of tragedies have happened...Mr. Raichand is dead , Anchal's mom as well ...All 3 have done their share of mistakes.
CLIMAX :
Kabir calls Ranvir for a final showdown..Aanchal reaches there...They all are at near a cliff , the area is secluded.
Ranvir is pointing a gun at Kabir...Anchal also has a gun in her hand...She asks Ranvir to let Kabir go.
Ranvir refuses to do so...he tells her some philosophical lines in his amazing voice 😳
Ranvir tells Anchal 'Aanchal tum janti ho ki Ranvir apni kismat khud likhta hai aur aj bhi vahi hoga ... Ranvir apni taqdeer ka mohtaj nahi..aj main apna maqdad poora karke rahunga'
Anchal tells him to stop otherwise she will shoot him...Anchal is in tears but is determined
Anchal warns Ranvir, 'Ranvir I said just stop ! Mujhe majboor mat karo'
Kabir asks Ranvir to shoot him if he has the guts.
'Bade chala goli agar tujhme himmat hai toh,...lekin ek baat yaad rakhna...main rahoon ya na rahoon par Aanchal ko tu kho chuka hai hamesha ke lie..u have already lost bade !'
We have the whole build up
Ranvir doesn't reply...His demeanour is as calm as it gets and he tells Aanchal
'Aanchal soch kya rahi ho...chalao goli. .aj main bhi toh dekhu Kya meri Aanchal kisi ki jaan le sakti hai...kya meri Aanchal mein itni himmat hai ki vo apne Ranvir par goli chala de...uski jaan lele.' Come on Aanchla...shoot!'
Ranvir keeps instigating Anchal to fire the bullet
And then suddenly a shot is fired !!!!!
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After full build up
It is shown that Anchal has shot Ranvir...blood is coming from his chest...the same place where Anchal had placed her hand the first time he had saved her.
Ranvir has a smile on his face,a tear rolls down his cheek and he falls on the ground.
Kabir is in shock and Anchal is in tears and shock...both rush to him...Kabir notices the gun in Ranvir's hand and recognises that it is his gun.
Ranvir says with a chuckle 'Kabir Teri gun kabhi loaded nahi hoti na...tu aur Teri gun dono ek jaise hain' (the gun was not loaded at all)
Kabir and Anchal both are in tears
Anchal is crying now 'kyu Ranvir , kyu Kia ye tumne'
Ranvir tells Anchal - 'Anchal maine kaha tha na ki Ranvir apni taqdeer khud likhta hai...mere marne ka waqt, tareeka aur jagah koi aur kaise tae kar sakta hai' he is in pain and his breathing is uneven.
Anchal is in tears 'kyu Ranvir kyu'
Kabir ' bade ye tune Kya Kia...mana humare raste alag the , bht chot phchai humne ek doosre ko , bht galat tareeke apnae par main ye nahi chahta tha ..kyu Kia ye !'
Ranvir 'tere lie , Maa ke lie aur apni jaan, apni zindagi Anchal ke lie"
Sarika has also reached there
Ranvir looks at her 'Maa jo ap chahti thi vo aj ho gaya...apko apki aur Kabir ki khushiya de raha hoon...ye sari property...sara paisa sab kuch..Anchal ki mom ke murder ka ilzam lagake apko Kya laga ap mujhe hara doge!...Ranvir kisi se nahi harta...usse koi nahi hara sakta sivae uske khud ke...(Ranvir is bleeding from his mouth)...jao Maa tumhe ye sab tohfe mein diya..par jis bete ke lie tumne ye sab kia usse nazre kaise milaoge
.Ravir looks at Kabir and caresses his cheek...Kabir ye Jeet tere bade ka akhri tohfa hai tere lie.
Kabir to his mom 'Mom ye kya kia apne...ap itni gir jaoegi ye kabhi socha nahi tha..I hate u mom !' Kabir is crying now
Anchal is in shock...she knows now that Ranvir had done a lot of questionable things in life but he did not kill her mom...he is innocent..She can't believe what she has done...she couldn't believe why she didn't trust Ranvir..Her Ranvir...The guilt was too much to bear...She couldn't believe that she could destroy her Ranvir, give him so much pain and when that was enough now she has done the unimaginable..she has taken the life of her own love with her own hands...The guilt and sorrow wrapped her, suffocated her and she couldn't breathe.
'Aanchal' , Ranvir's calls her and his voice gets her out of the trance state which she was in.
She takes his head in her lap...and looks into his eyes searching for answers.
Tears are flowing from her cheeks and she says 'itni badi saza de rahe ho tum mujhe tumpe bharosa na karne ki Ranvir! '
Ranvir smiles and tries to speak when he starts coughing and more blood comes from his mouth.
'Saza nahi Anchal AZAADI...tumhe azad kar raha hoon..mujhse jude har bandhan se...mujhse nafrat karne se , mujhse badla lene ki tamanna se, mujhe barbad karne ki khwahish se aur...aur...mujhse junoon ki hadh tak PYAR karne se.'
Mera maqsad Maine haasil kar lia...aj jab main ja raha hoon toh mujhse nafrat karne vale bhi ro rahe hain...looking at his mom...aur pyar karne vale bhi...looking at Kabir and Anchal...apni zindagi aj tak khud likhta aya tha aur aj apni maut bhi khud likh li.
Aanchal is hysterical 'Ranvir tumhe kuch nahi hoga...main tumhe kuch hone nahi doongi...Tum akele hum dono ki zindagi ka faisla nahi kar sakte...sun rahe ho...Pleaseee' Tears are flowing down her cheek
Ranvir to Aanchal (a smile is still there on his face), 'Jab main tha toh mere hone se gila aur jab main ja raha hoon toh bhi gila...maine khud se toh tumhe azaadi dedi bas ho sake toh meri yaadon se rihaa ho jana'
He gives a final look at Anchal and takes a final breath and in that last breath takes her name one last time 'AANCHAL' and his hand slips from Anchal's hand.
Vocieover of Aanchal :
'maine kabhi socha nahi tha ki main tumse pyar karungi Ranvir- junoon ke hadh tak pyaar...tum galat the Ranvir par phir hume se sahi bhi toh koi nahi tha...maine tumhe barbad kar diya aur tum chup rahe , Main tumse nafrat karti gai phir bhi tum chup rahe ..aur aj tumne mujhe azaad kar diya...tumse nafrat karne se , tumse pyaar karne se ...par tumse nafrat Karna mera haq hai Ranvir...tumse ladna.tumse jhagadna mera haq hai..tumse pyaar karna bhi mera haq hai ! Toh tum mujhse mera haq kaise cheen sakte ho'
She picks up the gun and shoots herself right where she shot Ranvir...she falls near Ranvir's body...her hand is placed on his chest..the same place where it was kept the first day he had saved her'
Kabir screams her name but it's too late...he blames his mom and leaves from there..Sarika looses everything in the end coz her son leaves her for whom she had done everything.
Ranvir achieved his maqsad and Anchal her haq...both were together in death...for others it is till death do us part but here it was death which united them forever!
A sad, beautiful and a tragic love affair...One that was incomplete and yet complete in it's own beautiful way !
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