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Posted: 8 years ago
#21
First if great going girl...Loved it...Angle is Jst amazing...Nd come-on reveal d mystery...Jst tooo curious... Continue soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Mind blowing update.plz next time bara wala update dena.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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"So, Cadets what's the plan? I questioned.

We, Huda, Alekh, Pooja, Sherry, Yudi, Ali, and I, were sited around a table in the game room panning for the fresher's ball

"Ma'am meray paas ek plan hai Pooja stated

"Bolo Cadet I replied

"Kyu na hum ek Bollywood theme karay...hayay socho har taraf Shahrukh aur Priyanka aur Deepika She said exicted claping her hand like a little kid

"Oai punjaban yeah kaisay plan hai Huda complained

"Kam se kam meray paas plan toh hai, aagar tera network koi aur idea catch kar raha hai toh talk kar varna chup kar Pooja scolded

"Oh Punjaban, itna ghussa kyu kar rahi hai Huda sai

"Huda Bhai jaan aap please chup raheyae Ali said looking towards Pooja with adoration.

Huda was about to reply when I stopped the arguments.

"Cadets, stop arguing like kids...aap log bacchay nahi hai I said "Agar kissi aur kay paas koi ideas ya suggestion hai toh boliyae

"Ek idea hai meray paas Huda said. I nodded my head in positive asking him to go on. "Kyu na yeah Fresher's Ball couples only ho

"Wait...hold on dude...yeah, this is not done Yudi complained standing up from his seat

"Kyu Yudia daar gaya kya, oai fikar mat kar. Huda hai na, main teray liyay koi date dhooon lunga, fikar mat kario He said in his total Huda style

"Duda, please yeah bakwas bad karo Yudi replied, pointing a finger at Huda

"CADETS SHUT UP I screamed and immediately a silence fell over the room "Aap log bilkul baachay ki tarah act kar rahy hai, ek sholdier ya ek cadet kissi bhi angle se nahi lag rahay. Aur cadet Huda, Fresher's ball humesha couples only hota hai...so any other suggestion

"Ma'am white tie event? Yudi suggested

"Ma'am kuch traditional kartay hai Ali said

"Ek kaam kartay hai, khet (farm) ki theme rakthay hai, aur saab bhes (buffalo) ki tarah kapaday panehgay Huda said which made him receive a smack from Sherry

"Cadet Ghelot, Cadet Sharma, any suggestion I said as they had been quiet the whole time

"Aapun ko iss sasb se koi fark nahi parta...yeah saab beekar ki cheez hai Alekh responded dishearten

"Cadet Ghelot...what about you? I said looking at Sheey

"Kyu na hum masquerade ball host karay. Sab logo ki face cover hoga aur ek mysterious environment bhi baha rahagay She said

"Aaray wha kya idea diya hai Huda said praising her

"Hai sach mein yeah sms to mujhe bhi bohot pasand aaya Pooja replied

"Dude that is really a cool idea Yudi commented

"That is really a great idea cadet I said with a smile but Sherry just showed me her eyes. Clearing my throat, I continued "Agar kissi koi koi aataraz nahi hai toh masquerade ki idea final kar detay hai

Everyone nodded in affirmative..

"Aacha theek hai, now for the rest of the planning: Cadet Ghai and Huda, aap log decoration ki responsibility lengay, Cadet Sahani aur Cadet Ghelot, music ki responsibility aapki, aur Cadet Bei gaur Cadet Sharma aap log catering aur khana ki responsibility lengay...any question I said and when no one said anything I dismissed everyone except Alekh.

"Lt. Sharma kya appko time mila security plan study karna ka time mila? I questioned

"Haan, mila...kya aapun yeah puch shakta hai ki itna bakwas plan kisnay banaya He said taking me by surprise

"Like always, plan to Maj. Nair aur BC mera matlab Brig. Chandok na banaya, kyu koi problem hai I said worried

"Bohot hi bada locha hai ma'am He said opening the file and right then Rajveer walked in and said:

"Problem toh woh file mein bhi hai jo tumne mujhe diya tha

"Kya matlab I questioned

"Yeah raha He said handing me the file. Looking over it my eyes widened and I was overcome with shock.

I passed the file to Alekh and said "God itna bada galti kaisay ho shakta hai...this seems so impossible.

"Kisi ne yeah impossible ko possible kar dala Alekh said handing the paper back to me.

"Guys yeahh bohot badi problem hai...yaha abhi jo bhi discuss honay wala hai woh bahar tak nahi pooachna chayae I stated and began discussing security plan and further preparations.

Outside the room there was someone standing there with their ears to the wall listening to conversation happening inside and when she turns around we can see it's Sherry!!!!

My Note:

Hey guys, sorry for late update. I know some of you are expecting long and regular updates but I don't think that will be possible for me to do that immediately so please expect irregular updates of varying lengths. And please don't think that this is so because I am not committed to this book, because I am but I also have a lot of other prior commitments. I know you all will understand

Also, a huge coagulation to LRL and us, fan, for its LRL officially turning 11. Cannot believe it has been that long since the best show in the history with the most amazing incomplete love story first began.

Love you all

Misha

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Posted: 8 years ago
#24
Wow!
This was really good!
Excited to read Sherry's reaction!
Thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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As Fresher's ball started approaching closer, my level of tension rose. It was evident that whatever the spy was planning on doing, they were going to execute it on that day, but I still had no strong plan to stop them. I was pacing back and forth in my room, trying to come up with a plan that would keep everyone safe. There was a knock on the door and without bothering to look at the person knowing, I asked them to come in. I heard the door open and someone's footstep, but my mind was in its own world.

"Naina the person says and his voice brought me out of my world. Turning around I see Rajveer standing there, looking as hot as possible in a blue button-down shirt and a plain denim pants.

"Mera matlanb Maj Singh... aap ne mujhe yaha kyu bolaya He said

"hmmm I said distracted

"Is everything ok? He asked concern

"Yea...yes...mera matlab please have a seat I said when there was another knock. I excused myself and went to open the door.

"Shalini come in I welcomed her as she tried to question me about Rajveer's presence through her eyes.

"Nains yeah sab kya hai... tum ne humay yaha kyu buliya? Shalini questioned as she said next to Rajveer.

I walked over to the counter and held a file.

"Main tum tono se kuch share karna chati hoon...magar yeah baat is kamray se bahar koi discuss nahi karaga I said strickly. A look of confusion was across both of their faces. I handed the file to Shalini. As her eyes looked over the papers they fill with tears.

"Kya hua Shalini? Rajveer asked and Shalini silently passed the file to Rajveer as she tried to hold back her tears. Rajveer also carefully studied the file and even he could not control his tears.

"Naina yeah... He bagan to say

"Sach hai...Yahi sach hai I said

"Magar kaisay Shalini questioned as she wiped her tears "Humay toh bataya gaya tha ki Naveen ki case aur file officially close kar diya gaya hai

"Close nahi kiya hai, re open kiya gaya hai I stated

"Magar aaisay aachanak...? Rajveer was unable to have complete sentence due to this big shock

"Itnay saalo kay baad headquarters ko lagnay laga hai ki Naveen ko trap kiya gaya tha, iss liye case ko reopen kiya hai. Dushman ko yeah bata pata na ho iss liya case band kar ney ka natak kiya tha I blankly stated

"Aur tum hai yaha bheeja gaya hai Naveen ki katil ko dhoon ne kay liya Shalini questioned, unsure

Looking into Rajveer's eyes I responded, "Katil ko dhoonay kay liya nahi, balke unhai dhoon ney kay liye jin no ney Naveen ko trap kiya I said emphasizing on the word katil.

"Baat toh ek hi hai na Shalini said confused

"Nahi Shalini ek hi baat nahi hai... Ji ho ney Naveen par goli mari aur jis ne ussay fasiya woh separate hai I said still looking into Raj's eyes, trying to decode his current thoughts and emotions

"Tum itni confident se yeah kaisay keah shakti ho Shalini asked, doubtfully. Listening to this Rajveer looked at Shalini, worried and scared.

"Bas mujhe pata hai I said and hearing my answer, Rajveer looked toward me and took a visible sigh of relief.

"So, what now? Rajveer asked, trying to change the topic

"Mujhe clear order milay thay, aur mujhe saaf saaf bataya gaya tha ki main baat kisi se disclose nahi kar shakti, magar phir bhi mujhe aaisa laga ki aap done ko janey ka haak hai. I said looking at both of them and they nodded in understandment. "Abhi meray paas koi lead nahi hai, iss liye hum hai discreet li investigation kar na hoga

"Hmmm, you are right. Rajveer said in deep thought

"I need to go, Maj. Nair ka drill over honay ka time ho gaya hai, aur jarur koi cadet ko chot lagi hogi Shalini said and stood up "Magar agar app donoo ko kuch bhi pata chalta hai to mujhe jarur batana

Shalini existed the room and Naina sat back down on the couch across Rajveer after closing the door behind Shalini

"Tum ne Shalini ko sach kyu nahi bataya? He questioned me

"It's not my place to tell I simply said shrugging my shoulders

He looked at me with his warm brown eyes making my inside melt but I could not let him find out how weak he can make me feel. Seeing my uncomfortable face, he looked away.

"Tum hai kya lagta hai, iss spy kay saath Naveen ki koi connection ho shakta hai He Questioned

I thought about the possibility for a minute before saying "It's absolutely possible. Woh bhi yaha use mission kay iya tha jis kay liya hum yaha hai...it's definitely possible

"hmmm He squinted his eyebrows and a line formed on head as he deeply though of something. "Tum ne kuch plan socha hai, Fresher's ball kay liye

"Kab se wohi karney ki koshi kar rahi hoon...but dimaag ek dum khali hai I said with frustration "Mujhe yeah baat samaj nahi aa rahi hai ki jab ball ki security plan Nair aur BC nai mil kar banaya hai toh itni sari loop holes kaisay hai. Ek bacha bhi iss se aacha aur effective security plan bana shakta tha

"Mai ne BC say baat kit hi. Un ho ne kaha ki iss saal ki security details Maj. Nair ne aakale banaya hai He said. I looked at him in shock.

"Iss ka matlab Maj. Nair ne jaan buj kar security details main itney saray holes dalay I said shocked

"Tumara matlab ki who spy Maj. Nair hai? He questioned

"Nope, I hate Maj. Nair and I would love for the spy to be him but he is not smart enough to be the spy. Woh ek kutta hai, kudh kuch nahi kar shakta. Pooch bhi tab hi hilita hai jab usskay milik ussay kahay I said causing Rajveer to chuckle

"Toh Nair ne kissi kay keahney par yeah sab kiya...matlab woh Spy kay liya kaam karta hai He said, astonished

I gave him a look and nodded in the affirmative. We sat there in silence, trying to take in what we have just uncovered. Though we both despised Maj. Nair, he was our teacher and we had helped us become the person we are today.

Silently Rajveer got up and I followed his actions; he started to walk towards the door but stopped midway.

"Naina, tum ball mein kis kay saath jaa rahi ho He asked grabbing me by surprise. I looked into his eyes and say immense hope in them

"So far, kissi kay saath nahi I said not wanted to bring down his hope.

"Meray saath chalogi? He asked with so much hope and love that I could not help but nod in affirmative. A satisfactory smile comes to his face and I realize what I have done. He steps forward and I feel as if my feet have been glued to the floor. He comes closer and held my hand; I did not try to fight him.

"Naina please mujhe batao ki main kya karu? Kya kar shakta hu main. He questioned and listening to the desperation in his voice, my heart filled with tears.

"Kuch nahi ho shakta Raj...Kuch nahi I said as I try to remove my hands from his

"Naina, mujhe samaj nahi aa raha...main galat tha, I accept that. Please mujhe shamjao... He said as tears fell from his eyes.

"Yeah to problem hai na Raj. Main humesh shamjati rathi hu magar tum kabhi shamajtay hi nahi ho I said as I turned around and tried to control my tears.

"Please close the door after your leave I said and went into my bedroom.

Edited by RNgirl - 8 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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loving the story till now
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Posted: 7 years ago
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sorry for the late reply

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