Avneil OS Avni cooking lunch for neil

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Avni cooked neil's favourite vegetable pilau and chicken makhni with bebe and shweta's help.she arrived at the police station and was greeted by the same officer who had a first hand experience of avni's cooking by tasting the salty tea when they visited neil at his apartment. He was terrified to see the tiffin box in avni's hand. he swallowed his saliva almost choking to death and asked in a very low voice.
Officer: Bhabi thhhiss ???????????
Avni: lunch for Neil. is he in his office ?
the officer nodded in negative as he didn't want to die virgin in hands of his ACP. but before avni could react DD came and greeted her cheerfully.
DD: Bhabi why are you standing here please come in the office
Avni: but neil is not in the office
DD: says who
officer: is he back from patrolling i didn't know
DD: what patrolling dude you need a vacation
they enter neil's office who was busy sorting out some paper work
Neil: Avni what brought you here oh neela maa sent food again
Avni: no i cooked lunch for you today
that instant something told neil he might not live to see his billu
neil: you shouldn't have (figuring how to worm his way out of this deadly situation)
avni: its your favourite chicken makhni with chapati and veg pilau
DD felt his mouth was watering hearing chicken makhni
neil quickly invited him and told him to ask if anyone else is yet to have his lunch his plan was to gather as many officers as possible so everyone will get just 1-2 spoons or bites as that wil not be enough to kill anyone will probably give them diarrhea to the max.
DD called the other officer who tried to save neil's life by telling avni he is not in the office
avni served them food
DD was the only one excited to taste his bhabi's cooking rest two were saluting his sportsman spirit (imaginary)
neil was thinking ya what better way to go than this for DD
that officer started to see double and he could see his secret girlfriend dressed in white sobbing infront of his picture with garland hanging on it
nnnooo screamed the officer DD quickly shook his shoulder enough to snap him back to present
Avni: go on taste and tell me how it is
neil: we will have to live long enough to do that
Avni:what!!!!!!!!!!
neil: I mean boy am I hungry cant wait to try DD what are you waiting for go ahead
DD; lets tuck in
officer: (as quiet as possible) sir I am not even married yet
neil looked at him as saying how lucky
DD ate the first spoon and was pleasantly surprised
DD: wow bhabi its yummy go ahead you two its very tasty
officer :you even liked the tea rich in salt
DD: you are worrying for nothing trust me you will regret not eating this food
avni: worried !!

to be continued

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Continuation bhi aaj hi upload Karo na! I love it. Bechaari ne it pyaar se banaya aur ab jab voh upset hogi to Neil ko hi manana padega! Can't wait to read the next bit.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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That's funny... Update soon yaar... Can't wait to know their reactionsšŸ˜†
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This is sweet and funny.
Cannot wait to read more:)
Update asap!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It's funny but nice peice continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Fantastic
Avni cooked lunch for Neil but he's trying to save himself from disastrous yet yummy food
Update soon please
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Its so funny continue soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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thank you lovelies for your nice comments sorry for late update little ones were poorly so was impossible to find time for this here we go

Avni: worried!!!!!
officer: why you think sir so generously invited us
Avni: what are you talking about officer
neil: lets get real Avni YOU CAN'T COOK !!!!!! he even postponed his wedding after drinking your tea (pointing towards the officer) and told his bride to be to learn cooking properly as he doesn't want to end up like me
Avni was furious and her face turned red
neil:DD my friend you don't have to do this you have a lot to live for .
neil tried to stop DD who was busy enjoying the food
DD: its been a long time since I tasted such yummy homemade for if you don't want to eat your choice YOUR LOSS PEOPLE! I'll eat all of it
avni: thank you DD you know what i think you should eat all of it they don't deserve good food
avni picked up plates and put all the food in DD's plate
she angrily left station saying
avni: this was the last time i cooked food for you don't expect this from me again
neil and the officer were satisfied and looked towards DD
neil: DD she has left already
DD: sir your are being judgemental just try 1 spoon
neil hesitantly tried one spoon he couldn't believe himself it was so tasty he wanted to eat more DD picked up the plate and started walking out of the office
DD: sorry you heard bhabi its all mine
neil started to regret
now the officer also wanted to try some
office: please can i taste some
he said walking with spoon in his hand after DD
DD: ok just one spoon
officer turned and saw neil staring at him he looked fierce
officer: its all your fault stay away from me today or you may end up dying virgin
he quickly left office
now neil couldn't wait to finish duty and go home to eat his wifey's yummy cooking
night at khanna house
neil reached home late his parents and bebe were asleep already
he opened door carefully was ready to tackle any vase or chappal or rod coming to mash his potato
but luckily he escaped spouse abuse that night
he went straight to the kitchen wanted to impress his wife by getting his own food
but much to his surprise all the pots were empty
he checked thr fridge for left overs but there was no pilau or chicken makhni
just then he heard somebody entering kitchen
it was Avni
Avni: looking for something
neil: ya i am famished any pilau or chixken makhni left
Avni: no i packed all the unhealthy tasteless potentially hazardous food and sent it to madhvi tai
neil couldn't hate madhvi tai more
neil: what about me what am i gonna eat now
Avni gave him a plastic box from fridge filled with poha from chamko cafe
bon apetite with a typical pissed wifey look
hope you all enjoy reading it


Edited by 144128 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very nice! Please update the next parts also na. Neil has to manaofy his wifey now!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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that was hilarious how everyone is scared of eating avni's cooking

update soon
waiting for Neil's reaction

ooohh part 2 is also updated

poor Neil he faced wifey's anger
no home made food for Neil.

superb update

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