Shivaay TS : SACRIFICE. (Ft. Rikara Rumya)

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prabhata

@prabhata

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Posted: 8 years ago

#81

Beautiful updates. Read both 2nd and 3rd part. I absolutely loved the second part, u made me emotional with the writing. Third part was soothing after the emotional second part.

Keep writing.

Thanks for the pm and apologies I didn't comment earlier.

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black_hawk

@black_hawk

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Posted: 8 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: prabhata
Beautiful updates. Read both 2nd and 3rd part. I absolutely loved the second part, u made me emotional with the writing. Third part was soothing after the emotional second part.
Keep writing.

Thanks for the pm and apologies I didn't comment earlier.

I am happy you liked it :)

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Meha

@Meha101

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Posted: 8 years ago

#83

Intense is the word I would use for your writing. Loved it! This is what I want to see onscreen but well IB being IB are taking it in a comic route. Sigh!

The story kinda of reflected the emotions beautifully, not only Shivaay but others also in that particular scenario and loved the angst/serious feel in the story

Would love to read more of your writing please pm me if possible. Keep writing!

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black_hawk

@black_hawk

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Posted: 8 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: Meha101
Intense is the word I would use for your writing. Loved it! This is what I want to see onscreen but well IB being IB are taking it in a comic route. Sigh!

The story kinda of reflected the emotions beautifully, not only Shivaay but others also in that particular scenario and loved the angst/serious feel in the story

Would love to read more of your writing please pm me if possible. Keep writing!

Thank you for your valuable review :)

I am also not much happy with the sudden entry of comic plots... It's kind of a bit weird... There was no proper Shivika scene after Pinky's exposure... And also that chawl scene... much was expected from that particular scene...

But yeah as you said IB being IB 😆

Hope for something good from next week !!!

And I will definitely pm you my next work 😊