Shivika OS: Breaking The Norms

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice! Very well written. You do have a way with words. I almost could see Shivika and Omru right in front of my eyes. Keep writing.
No, i guess it do happen in some families, though I have been fortunate enough to get lovely in laws who never differentiated between the daughters in law and their sons. But I guess not every one may be as fortunate as that.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It is so touching piece of works!!! *me lost in memories*
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Posted: 8 years ago
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You really do know how to make my day don't you? How do you always come up with such Fanta blouse pieces every single time?? Just HOW??? This was so effing beautiful. You addressed such a common issue in a marriage life and handled such a sensitive problem so delicately. Bestest part was Shivay reactions and his piece of mind to shikha aubty.

"Is it pune?", asked Shivay calmly, while pushing the spoon into Anika's lips before looking at Shikha.

"Sorry?"

"Is it Pune?", repeated Shivay, his tone unchanged.

"what kind of question is that? Of course, not."

"Am I your son?"

"No."

"Is Anika your daughter in law?"

"No"

"Well then, congratulations! You've got your answer."


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What a comeback, 🤣


I'm not aware of the kind of dictionary you have used to define all the characteristics of an ideal daughter in law but no daughter in law are or should be entitled to straining the hell out of themselves all day making every single one of your preferences at breakfast, lunch and Dinner, and starving themselves until you finish devouring every corner of your plate in peace, as an act of respect. And even if they are, and that's how you people want them to be, too bad because my wife is neither entitled to nor do I allow her to exhaust and stress herself to such extent over any kind of matter, regardless of how significant it is. And I would definitely not want her to tire herself to core over something as baseless as cooking each and every guest's favorite dish every day till Prinku's wedding is done. If you don't like it, you always have the option of calling your daughter in law over to make the "best" Rajma chawal in the world for you to savor."

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mush, this bit deserves standing ovations, applause, bows everything!!! What a dialogue, so apt dude dil jet liya

Turning around as he pulled anika closer to his chest to give mini heart attacks to the already thunder bolted aunties, Shivay spoke, "Since you are as incapable as my wife to not see the 6 cooks I hired to successfully serve every kind of dish you could ever think of in your lifetime, let me inform you that they can make Rajma Chawal and Daal Makhni as well and they are way better than your "ideal" daughter in law


🤣 I just suffered a painful death here. Holy shit!!! How do you even come up with these dialogues. 🤣 ti can so imagine Shivay saying all these 🤣


The Shivika bedroom scene is what I have been craving for, for sooo long yaar. You're like my mind reader. Such a beautiful scene mush. It just warmed my heart seeing Shivay breaking all those bullshit norms of the society and massaging her feet oh so lovingly. Just arrange a Shivay for me please?


Loved the bed scene. Aww how Shivay kept hiding his face in her neck. God so beautiful to read.


Love love loveeesss

Just never stop writing mush...


Edited by LoveNakuulMehta - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb os
Totally loved it
Loved how Shivay took stand for Anika and give back to that aunty with double intensity
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This was so beautiful..
It's sad that even today people like shikha aunty too exist. Inspite of being literate not all people r educated. Today every girl have equal qualification as boys as far as education is concerned but still they r expected to know cooking and all the household work.
At the same time there r men like shivaay too who respect their women not only on the basis of their qualification or go efficiently they manage home but they respect and love their women for what they r as a person. This is what is so special about ishqbaaaz. I love annikas in laws, obviously pinky is a different case but the makers have not made her a generalized MIL but she is just an insecure person.
Well I just would want to share something...my friends boyfriend's father had once told him that he should get a girl jo unki seva kare to which he replied that I m ur son and u should keep such expectations only from me since its my duty, do the bride's parents expect their jamai to do their seva, only their daughter's do. That really made me proud and happy coming from a male. So guys society is changing. And as a women its our responsibility too to reach our children esp boys to respect girls. Being a boy does not make them special, everybody this planet r special irrespective of anything...
OMG. This really turned out to be long.
But ur os really touched my heart..it shows how beautiful u urself r. Thank u for such an amazing read
Biggg huggg🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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u know what u used rajma chawal nearly 10 time in this Os, n i swear i hate u for that...my favourite dish n i want to have it right now... n ask my mummy too for t same at t moment only.😆
shivaay give back to those aunties in his own style..🤣 awww. muje b shivaay jaisa pati chaiye..how much caring, loving n protective he is..
dekho u again went to bed na, i love u for that. i hope uppar wala hate compensate ho gaya..
abt that social issue i my self hate that, n worst r husbands... i dnt know if they themselve were a ideal bahu...
wating for more from ur side.
thanks 4 PM
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awww this is an awsome piece
Loved every bit of it
Shivaays comebacks were so funny
And the speech he gave to the aunt was so true and heartwarming, you have written shivaay so beautifully, so lovable
The perfect husband, the extent that he goes to protect his loved ones and make sure they are comfortable is beyond words

Superb job dear Mushfika, you addressed this issue so nicely, I am always frustrated with these social norms and the husbands doing nothing about it, thanks a lot for writing about it in such a phenomenal way, very appreciated

Much much love!
.Saumya.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update yar...
it was really touching yar...
I really wish to see this type of scenes in the show
you are right...so many things likes this happens in our society who treats the daughter in law... so low
Totally loved it

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