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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: dellaakdha

Wow...All are very happy...

Their game and the answers given by them is nice... Especially Jo and Ja...
Ajay is still upset with hamiada and humayunn...
I like Akdha Part...Jo is ready to open up...it's good she is trying to get the real jalal...Hope ja won't break her trust...
Jo's words to jalal is very nice...
Awesome..

well now this story will be focus on akdha so it was just to make everyone side and for that I make this chapter based on everyone to and Jalal will break her trust or not for that you have e to wait dear and yes Ajay is still angry on his parents as they support wrong but Nevermind he is smart he will understand soon after all he is wise character of this story anyway thanks for such a lovely comment dear.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb!

Jodha is speaking her heart with Jalal, she knew he awaits her sleeping form and then hugs her
He is now ready to give him a chance
But Ajay is angry on Humayun_Hamida for the reason they said they are leaving for their home
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Rahiramesh

<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Superb!

Jodha is speaking her heart with Jalal, she knew he awaits her sleeping form and then hugs her
He is now ready to give him a chance
But Ajay is angry on Humayun_Hamida for the reason they said they are leaving for their home
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well she is trying to make everything alright between them and trying to give him chance and about Ajay angry at Jalal parents there is not only this but that marriage reason to as they support Jalal so as a brother he is angry nothing much anyway thanks for your wonderful comment dear.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Rashmi when are you going to update this story
It's been two days yaar
Plzzz update dear
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: konakalla

Rashmi when are you going to update this story

It's been two days yaar
Plzzz update dear

don't worry dear I will update tomorrow it's just i am having little fever so anyway I will update soon dear .
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Rashmisingh9151

don't worry dear I will update tomorrow it's just i am having little fever so anyway I will update soon dear .

It's OK dear first take care of your health
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: konakalla

It's OK dear first take care of your health

Ya Rashmi..Take care of your health...we will wait.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: dellaakdha


Ya Rashmi..Take care of your health...we will wait.


thanks for understanding dear and I will update today dear.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Chapter 53

(next morning Jalal woke up and looked at Jodha who was sleeping in his arms Jalal remove the hair which was covering her face and look at her face).

Jalal pov : you are so beautiful baby girl not just by outside but by inside to you have very good and kind heart but you are hell stubborn to but I love you and I am really very happy that you give me chance and I promise I will not do anything which may make you regret on your decision.

(thinking this he lightly kissed on her forehead and carefully make her lay on side of the bed and goes to freshen up and after sometime he come out all ready to go and looked at her than goes to her side caressed her cheek softly).

Jalal said : wake up baby girl it's morning now.

Jodha said : let me sleep for more time.

Jalal said : but you are morning person if you will not wake up what will people think and I am sure Ajay will come here and kill me thinking I did something with you.

(listening this Jodha open her eyes and looked at Jalal and giggle softly).

Jodha said : so Mr Mohammed you are scare From my Bhai well...you better be and I want to sleep more so go now.

Jalal said : fine than I will wake you up by my way.

(than without warning he started tickling her and she started laughing loud and try to stop him).

Jodha said : he...eee...ha...aaa...ple.. ple... please...st...op...stop...I..stop .. I say...stop...please...

(after good minutes of tickling her he stop it and looked at her who was just clutching her stomach and still laughing).

Jalal said : now go and get ready you have to go hospital to isn't it.

Jodha said : you are bad is the way to wake some one up.

Jalal said : well I have more ways but I think it's the best way as by this I make you laugh isn't it anyway go now I am waiting.

(listening this she goes to freshen up than after sometime come out wearing pink color sleeveless salwar suit drying her hair while Jalal who was sitting on bed looking at her after sometime she look at him).

Jodha said : what are you looking at Don't you have to go office.

Jalal said : yes I have to go but first I will drop you to hospital than I will go office and I was looking at you because I wanted to know how can anyone look this much beautiful.

Jodha said : so Mr Mohammed you are trying to flirt with me.

Jalal said : what is this Mr Mohammed Mr Mohammed call me Jalal and flirting with your wife is not some crime isn't it.

Jodha said : okay okay fine now Let's go we will be late.

Jalal said : no first call me by my name.

Jodha said : no I will not.

Jalal said : than I will use my own way

Jodha said : and what is that.

(listening this Jalal goes close to her making her nervous than very lightly kissed on her forehead than hugged her and kissed softly on her earlobe and in husky voice).

Jalal said : say my name or else there will be more ways I have.

(his sensual husky voice make her shiver and something unknown she felt and unknowingly)

Jodha said : stop Jalal it's not the way to joke.

(listening his name from her mouth Jalal become very happy and break the hug).

Jalal said : one more please take my name one more time.

Jodha said : what's wrong why are you so desperate to hear your name from me.

Jalal said : don't know but it's make me happy please take my name.

Jodha said : okay fine Jalal please let's go we will be late.

(listening this Jalal again hugged her but break it fast and both of them goes downstairs but find no one there).

Jodha said : where everyone gone.

Jalal said : don't know maybe they gone for there work.

Jodha said : let's ask someone.

(than both of them goes to one servant).

Jalal said : hey where is everyone.

servant said : well Ajay kabir sir Ritu mam gone to there office for some work and Bakshi mam kabir mom and your parents go back to your house and Veer sir Priya and father goes to one school for kids admission and kids are with them to.

Jodha said : oh okay than.

Jalal said: it means we are alone anyway let's go.

(than both of them goes to car and sit inside and Jalal started driving).

Jodha said: what are you going to do today.

Jalal said : nothing much as I have many pending work to complete so I think I will be busy what about you.

Jodha said : well I want to go my home today.

Jalal said : fine than I will come to take you for that.

Jodha said : I can go alone to.

Jalal said : I know you can baby girl but I want to spend time with you and that will be perfect time.

Jodha said : stop the car Jalal.

(listening this Jalal stop the car and ).

Jalal said : why what happen.

Jodha said : I want to eat Pani Puri see there.

Jalal said : do you lost it who eat Pani Puri in the morning and more ever it's not healthy for your health.

(saying this he looked at her but saw she is not inside the car so he looked at stall and saw her there he shook his head and come out than goes to her).

Jodha said : h..hmm...do yummy hey Jalal have it so tasty.

Jalal said : no baby girl once I eat that and don't want to get bitter taste so you should have it.

Jodha said : so you are scared.

Jalal said : no I am not.

Jodha said : than prove it.

Jalal said : how.

Jodha said : let's have competition who can eat those Pani Puri most.

Jalal said : fine than ready to loose baby girl.

Jodha said : we will see Jalal.

(than both of them started having competition no one was rest to accept defeat but seeing Jodha eyes are getting teary and she is really full Jalal stop eating).

Jalal said : I lost I can't have more.

(seeing this Jodha started jumping up and down in excitement).

Jodha said : I won I won I will tell everyone that I won competition with you.

(seeing her happy and enjoying with him Jalal to get happy and smiled at her than both of them goes to there car and started driving).

Jodha said : so how was it.

Jalal said : well not bad.

Jodha said : how rude I thought you enjoy anyway stop the car .


Jalal said : now don't tell me you want to eat more.

Jodha said : why will I ask for that I want you to stop because we reach my hospital.

Jalal said : oh sorry here you go.

(saying this he stop the car and park at the side while Jodha kissed him on his cheek and come out quickly).

Jodha said : thanks for dropping me here Jalal bye see you at evening.

(and left for work leaving smiling and satisfied Jalal behind after sometime he to left for office and get busy in work and in afternoon he get call in his cell he without checking received that).

Jalal said : yes Jalal Mohammed is here.

Jodha said : how are you doing did you had your lunch.

(listening her voice Jalal smiled and in teasing voice).

Jalal said : someone is trying to become perfect wife isn't it.

Jodha said : what to do I should have to anyway answer me did you had your lunch.

Jalal said : no not now but I am going to have it what about you.

Jodha said : well I am to going to have it as I had to check lot of patients today so forget to have it.

Jalal said : do you want me to accompany you at lunch.

Jodha said : no you better be there and focus on your work and have your lunch now bye see you at Evening.

(saying this she cut the call and have her lunch here Jalal to have his lunch than again both of them get busy in there work and in evening Jalal goes to pick her up from Hospital and soon both come and sit inside the car).

Jalal said : how was your day.

Jodha said : tiring and very frustrating.

Jalal said : do you want to go somewhere now.

Jodha said : well take a turn and let's go to beach area I want to spend sometime there.

Jalal said : your wish is my command baby girl.

(than soon both of them reach at beach Jodha come out of the car remove her sandals and started walking at side of the soft sand slowly relishing the perfect weather and the cool breeze of sea and looked at the sky and get lost in the beauty of nature while Jalal was just looking at her and admiring her).

Jodha said : beautiful isn't it how peaceful and relaxing this place is isn't it.

(and list in her Jalal in lost voice).

Jalal said : yes very beautiful very peacefully just like heaven.

Jodha said : you know whenever I get sad or happy I go some place like this we there these are park sea area or some other as I love to spend my time with nature what about you.

Jalal said : well same here in Mumbai this is my favorite place I always come here to relax myself.

Jodha said : okay enough of relaxation now let's enjoy...

(saying this she poured some water by her hands on him which shocked him soon he started pouring some water on her while she run to save herself from him than soon both of them started running behind each other and started having water fight after half and hour both get tired and fell on ground besides each other).

Jalal said : you are so naughty just like Ajay you know he was prankster of college.

Jodha said : I know we had a talk about him in fact he himself share his college life with us.

Jalal said : you know baby girl if someone will saw you both than he will you both are blood relatives.

Jodha said : really.

Jalal said : yes look he is smart so you are he knows how to face challenge so you he always do right and stand by his decision do you he is naughty so you he is handsome so you are beautiful you both are like same sometimes I think k you both share a same blood.

Jodha said : well if it's true than its really great but if it's not than to he is like my brother anyway tell me about yourself.

Jalal said : there is nothing much to know about me still I can say about my likes and dislikes so here it comes I like Italian to eat light green is my favorite color Sonu Nigam is my favorite singer and I like to play football and chess...


Jodha said : well quite interesting I mean some are same as I to like Italian to eat but prefer most of the time Indian and my family singer is Shreya and color light pink love to play basketball and video games ...

Jalal said : well we have lot of similar likes isn't it anyway let's go back home it's really late.

Jodha said : but I am hungry.

Jalal said : okay than let's have dinner first than we will go what say.

Jodha said : good idea.

(than both of them goes to one hotel and have there dinner and talk with each other).
Edited by Rashmisingh9151 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
thanks dear glad you like it .

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