VISHKANYA**EPILOGUE 1, 2** Pg. 119, 121** 18/01/18 - Page 38

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i am heart broken after reading 1st part geet died
but geet alive than why she hide herself
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Oh my geet left maan thanks to savitri dadi
Why they r doing shardha when geet is alive .
Geet killed nt
But what about brij...
Will b waiting
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Chapter 18

Maan did not keep any of his promises that he made to his wife but it also seems
because of Rajamata lots of misunderstanding happened making Geet leave him
he remembers how she fought with queen Naintara and killed her
but today she is no longer here
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Chapter 19

Is Geet reborn and she seems much younger
helping Khushi out and now visiting her
meeting Maan at Arnav and Khushi's place both are shocked
for Maan its understandable
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why she left all thing behind
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PLEASE READ CS OF "PARVATI KALIKA CHAUHAN BEFORE READING THIS UPDATE!






CHAPTER 20




ALL THE NAMES & PLACES ARE FICTITIOUS (if any resemblance to persons & places is purely coincidental). Any royal titles, MEDICAL PROCEDURES, MEDICAL TERMS, MILITARY PROCEDURES, MILITARY TERMS, RELIGIOUS TERMS, Punjabi terms, architectural terms, IT terms & programs, office hierachy, wedding rituals, etc. are from my imagination hence THEY ARE NOT TRUE. PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!!!!


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Before her anger and hatred could get her in their grip, Parvati closed her eyes and murmured some verses. An invisible wall sliced through her dividing her in two. One side of the wall was a beautiful milky white skinned "Parvati who was calm, happy and relaxed standing in front of Raizada family taking her leave. On other side of the wall was "Kalika who was breathing fire which was turning her skin darker by each passing minute. She was boiling in anger from within ready "to destroyMR. MAAN SINGH KHURANA!

"Tum kaun ho jo meri Geet ka roop le rahi ho? (Who are you to take on my Geet's persona?) Maan thundered.

"GEET? KAUN HAI GEET?(GEET? WHO IS GEET?)



"Geet ka naam respect se lo woh "Mrs. Geet Maan Singh Khurana hai. Meri patni. (Say Geet's name with respect, she is "Mrs. Geet Maan Singh Khurana. She is my wife.)

"Hai" nahi "thee. Jab aapki patni jeevit theen tab toh aapne naa toh unki parwah ki aur naa hi unki izzat. Aur abb aag babula ho rahe hain kyunki humne unka naam aadar se nahi liya! Kya dugle naag hain aap. (Not "is, "was. When your wife was alive you neither cared for her nor respected her. Now why are you fuming just by my taking her name disrespectfully! What a hypocrite you are!)

"Tum deradh pasli ki ladki mere se badtameezi kar rahi ho. Mai tumhei... (You chit of a girl are being disrespectful to me. I will...) Just then there was a puff of smoke and Parvati Kalika Chauhan had disappeared leaving a fuming Maharaj Bhujang Mahadev Singh not Mr. Maan Singh Khurana standing. But Maharaj Bhujang didn't notice a brown cobra encircling his ankles, but soon it disappeared in thin air. However, luckily due to the invisible wall Raizada family could not see what was happening between Bhujang and Parvati. A furious Maharaj Bhujang converted in his huge python form and slithered away to find the truth about this creature called "Parvati Kalika Chauhan.


Meanwhile Parvati or Kalika' as she was in her present state was extremely furious. Her skin had turned from white to dark brown as if she was burning from inside. Her face from soft look had become sharp, pronounced and emphasised features due to change in her skin colour and face becoming tense resulting in a totally different look. She went in her hotel suite's washroom and sprinkled water on her face to calm herself down. The moment water droplets touched her face, extreme steam emerged showing the intensity of Kalika's anger present. She knew that she hated a person named Yuvraj Bhujang or Maan Singh Khurana but she never knew who he was or how he looks? So when Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada introduced Mr. Maan Singh Khurana to Parvati it came as a shock as well as her hatred rose to the surface.


Location : PALACE OF NAAGLOK


Meanwhile in Palace of Naaglok, Maharaj Bhujang is remembering what all happened to Durga before she left this world. How he had failed as a husband, lover and a father. He remembers the first time when he had feelings of jealousy, insecurity and suspicion. It was the day of their Wedding Reception when Yuvraj Krishan Pratap had come with a youngman. The youngman was Major Raghavendran, Durga's college batchmate. Yuvraj Bhujang had initially started liking the youngman's sense of humour till he stopped Durga from leaving by holding her hand. It was a simple and an innocent gesture which was over blown by Rajmata Savitri Devi, media and his insecurity. That night Durga after getting a verbal lashing from Rajmata at her disrespectful conduct in front of Royalty, high officials and dignitaries, she was also extremely humiliated by Yuvraj Bhujang as he treated her very roughly in bed. When Durga resisted he threatened her with, "Hum Naaglok ke waasi hain aur Naaglok ke naag ek se adhik vivaah kar sakte hain. Manushiyon ke tehre hummein kewal ek stree ke prati pratibandh nahi hain. Agar tum mujhe apne paas nahi aane dogi toh mai kissi aur ko dhoondh loonga. (We belong to World of Snakes or Naaglok'. The citizens of Naaglok are entitled to more than one wife we are not bound like humans for Monogamy'! If you don't let me come near you, I will find someone else who will allow me to be near her.) Bhujang behaved more like an animal that he was rather than human form which he was camouflaged in. As if that was not enough he called his batchmate cum friend Pari next day and spent major part of evening with her till Durga would have gone to bed.


Everytime he was insecure regards Durga's attention he would use force with her in bed, threaten her and demean her self respect by going out with Pari. Whereas Durga tried to ignore his his disrespectful and filthy behaviour as much as she could and looked after all his needs and wishes. Durga also everytime protected him at expense of her own life - twice from Maharani Naintara's evil deadly attacks and once from Maharaj Brijendra's attack.

Maharaj Bhujang's guilt and repentance regarding his treatment of his wife was internally making him despise himself but the positive aspect of this guilt and repentance was that Maharaj Bhujang Mahadev Singh had become an excellent King (ruler) of Naaglok. All the naags and naagins were full of praises of his ruling. He was strict but fair. He was tough task master but compassionate. But above all he never misbehaved with any woman whether belonging to "naag yoni or "manushiye yoni. His father, Maharaj Nagendra had boycotted him once he knewing how much Durga suffered because Bhujang. Whereas Maharaj Bhujang had boycotted his grandmother, Rajmata Savitri Devi since the day Durga left him. Maharaj Virendra Pratap had lost his speech ability and Maharani Pallavi was totally paralysed after seeing the horrific visual of their daughter's demise. Rajkumari Kumudini and Vicky were talking to Maan as and when required. Maan for first time saw his "Maa's anger and displeasure with him. Only two people who have not boycotted him and those are Yuvraj Krishan Pratap and Rajkumari Rukmini. Yuvraj Krishan Pratap feels that he was no better than Maharaj Bhujang as he had also mistreated his wife and has no reason to judge him.. Rajkumari Rukmini was forced to be nice to him as she had promised Durga. If she knew how rude, humilating and insulting his behaviour was towards her little sister, Durga she would have never promised!

After Durga's leaving Yuvraj Bhujang and this world, everynight his soul and heart was wrenched by his sister's innocent but true warning hammering in his head, "Rajkumari Durga ke liye apne swabhimaan se adhik mehtri poorn kuch bhi nahi hai apna parivaar bhi nahi! (Nothing is more important Princess Durga than her self respect. If her self respect is injured by her family she will even leave them behind.) Due to Bhujang inhumane acts, Vishgarh lost its daughter. As if that was not enough, his bitter words that he said to Durga were daily hitting him like leather hunter on his skin. "I DON'T LOVE YOU! Mai uss ladki se pyaar nahi karta jo har raat ek naye aashiq ki bahaon mei ho!" (I DONT LOVE YOU! How can I love a characterless girl like you!) Durga's anguished, betrayed and heart-broken face continously use to come in front of his eyes everyday.

In order to go to sleep Maharaj Bhujang use to do strenous workout so that he could sleep.


But today sleep was not coming easily to him after Parvati Kalika Chauhan's hate filled words, "Jab aapki patni jeevit theen tab toh aapne naa toh unki parwah ki aur naa hi unki izzat. Aur abb aag babula ho rahe hain kyunki humne unka naam aadar se nahi liya! Kya dugle naag hain aap. (When your wife was alive you neither cared for her nor respected her. Now why are you fuming just by my taking her name disrespectfully! What a hypocrite you are!)

Bhujang sat in padama-aasan (lotus pose) and decided to meditate.


He had taken to meditation as Durga use to do it and she said it will calm his latent anger. No one knew that he had started to meditate to connect with his inner soul as well as Almighty.. He often use to leave for Himalayas for "tapasya or meditation, saying that he is going for "camping to whoever was interested to know his whereabouts! Hence with meditation calming him, he finally slept but suddenly woke up screaming, "GEEET! Once awake Durga (Geet)'s last words were again hammering in his head, "HUM YUVRAJ BHUJANG, AAPKO AUR ISS VIVAAH KO TYAAGTE HAIN!" (YUVRAJ BHUJANG, I DISOWN YOU AND THIS MARRIAGE!)



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CHAPTER 21


ALL THE NAMES & PLACES ARE FICTITIOUS (if any resemblance to persons & places is purely coincidental). Any royal titles, MEDICAL PROCEDURES, MEDICAL TERMS, MILITARY PROCEDURES, MILITARY TERMS, RELIGIOUS TERMS, Punjabi terms, architectural terms, IT terms & programs, office hierachy, wedding rituals, etc. are from my imagination hence THEY ARE NOT TRUE. PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!!!!

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"Maharaj, MAHARAJ! Aap sahi the ki Maharaj Brijendra ka naa toh paarthiv shareer mila hai aur naa hi unke nikatam sambandhiyon ko gyaat hai ki woh kahaan hain? (Maharaj you were right. We have not found any remains of King Brijendra's burnt or normal body and also none of his near and dear ones know about his whereabouts.) Senapati (Commander in chief) of Naaglok, Ram Singh came and told Maharaj Bhujang his findings.

"Senapatiji yeh humara sandeh nahi Naaglok ki Maharani ka sandeh thaa. Kintu aap abhi bhi Maharaj Brijendra ki chaan-been jaari rakhiye. (Commander-in-chief, these are not my doubts but those of Queen of Naaglok. However please still continue to seach for King Brijendra.)

"Ji Maharaji. (As you say Your Highness!) Senapati Ram Singh gave a formal bow and left.

Hearing the mention of his wife, Maharani of Naaglok, Neelakshi Durgeshwari, Maharaj Bhujang still remembers her battle with Maharaj Brijendra. Some incidents of the battle he remembers and some incidents of the battle were told to him by Yuvraj Krishan Pratap and Rajkumari Rukmini as he was unconscious during that part of the battle!

FLASHBACK

SIX MONTH LATER (Since Yuvraj Bhujang and Rajkumari Durgeshwari's marriage)

Today it was a joyous day for both Royal families of Ajgarh and Vishgarh as they were given the news that Rajkumari Rukmini is pregnant. Both Royal families of Ajgarh and Vishgarh were busy in celebrating when there was a sudden attack of fire on the roof of Palace of Ajgarh. Seeing Ajgarh under attack all gaurds and both royal families got ready to retaliate. Durga was about to suit up when Maharaj Nagendra ordered, "Rajkumari Durgeshwari aap yahaan se sanchaalan kariye abhi kewal Yuvraj Bhujang aur Senapati Bhadraveer ko Maharaj Brijendra ko sambhalne dijiye! (Princess Durgeshwari, kindly foresee the progress of war from here. Presently let Crown Prince Bhujang and Commander in chief, Bhadraveer handle King Brijendra and his forces.)

"Ji Maharaj! (As you say Your Highness!)

It was a furious battle. Six hours passed but neither side was willing to give up. Yuvraj Bhujang was the one and only one who could bear Maharaj Brijendra attack and retaliate to him with equal power. Maharaj Brijendra had thought in his arrogance and attitude that Yuvraj Bhujang will be as easy to defeat as Prince of Sarpgarh Rajkunwar Rishabh (Rajkumari Neelakshi Vasundhara's husband). But now seeing Yuvraj Bhujang's battling ability and poweress as well as fearing that battle result may not be as he wants, Maharaj Brijendra by underhand way just like Maharani Naintara did eight months back aimed at Yuvraj Bhujang resulting him to loose his consciousness. Before Maharaj Brijendra could capture Yuvraj Bhujang, Senapati Bhadraveer by his quick thinking got Ajgarh's soldiers to form an unpenetrable ring around Yuvraj Bhujang and guide him to safety. As Maharaj Nagendra was informed about Yuvraj Bhujang, he immediately came out and joined forces of Ajgarh and Vishgarh to fight Maharaj Brijendra. Durga went to see her husband's state and realised that he has been given a deadly wound. She went to the Rajvaid, "Acharyaji, kriypa Yuvraj ko chandan ke lep ke saath unhein yeh bhi de dijiye.(O Reverend teacher, along with applying sandalwood paste, please also give this to the Crown Prince of Ajgarh) Handing Rajvaid the same tablet which she had given to Rajmata earlier. "Hummei abhi prasthaan karna hoga Acharyaji, Pitaji ki sahita karne liye. Hum chalte hain. (I will have to depart O Reverend teacher as father needs my assistance.)
On her way out she encountered Rajmata Savitri Devi and wished her, "Pranam! (Salutations!) But Rajmata Savitri Devi ignored her greeting.

Reaching battle field she saw her father, Maharaj Virendra Pratap severely injured and asked Vishgarh soldiers to take him inside the Palace. Yuvraj Krishan Pratap was also injured but was still fighting. Maharaj Nagendra was fighting valiantly when a dart came and hit Maharaj Nagendra making him loose consciouness but before Maharaj Brijendra and his forces could capture Maharaj Nagendra, Durga came in between Maharaj Brijendra and Maharaj Nagendra and indicated Senapati Bhadraveer to carry Maharaj Nagendra inside the Palace of Ajgarh. Seeing Durga, Maharaj Brijendra gave an evil and lusting smile, "Rajkumari Neelakshi aap humare paas aa jaayiye. Hum yeh yudh samapath kar denge aur aapko Naaglok ki Maharani banna denge. (Princess Neelakshi, you come to me. I will stop this war immediately and make you the Queen of Naaglok!)



"Maharaj, aap rajsi maryada ka ulanghan kar rahe hain. Hum ek vivaahit aur pativrata stree hain jo apne pati se bahut prem karteen hai. (King, you are going against royal protocol. I'm a married and one man woman. I love my husband a lot!)



"PATIVRATA STREE? PREM? (ONE MAN WOMAN? LOVE?) Maharaj Brijendra said jeeringly. "Jo stree apne pehle pati ki mrityu ke chhe maah pashchaat hi punarvivaah kar sakhteen hain woh prem ke baare mein vartalaap naa karen toh hi behtar hoga! (The woman who can marry after six months of her husband's death, should not talk about being a one man woman and loving her husband.)

Hearing Maharaj Brijendra's rude and mannerless comment towards his sister Yuvraj Krishan Pratap was about to attack Maharaj Brijendra but foreseeing the attack, Maharaj Brijendra transform into gigantic python and got ready to attack Yuvraj Krishan Pratap with his poisonous fangs. But Durga came in between resulting in Maharaj Brijendra's fangs injecting poison in Durga's arm but it was not Durga who was effected but Maharaj Brijendra jerked back with intense poison running Durga's blood stream saying, "Yeh kaisa vish hai? Hummei iske baare mein... (What poison is this? I'm unaware...) Maharaj Brijendra lost consciousness.

Seeing sun setting in the horizon, Yuvraj Krishan Pratap announced as he was the only male among both royal families, "Aaj ke liye yudh samaapath hota hai kyunki suryastha ho gaya hai. (As the sun has set, we conclude the battle for today.) Looking at Maharaj Brijendra's army he said, "Vishgarh aur Ajgarh ki sena yudh ke neeyamon ka paalan karte hain iss liye aap apne Maharaj Brijendra ko le jaa kar unki marham-patti kariye! (Armies of Vishgarh and Ajgarh know the rules of war. Hence you take your King Brijendra and get his medical treatment done.) Making Maharaj Brijendra's army ashamed while Ajgarh and Vishgarh's armies returned towards Palace of Ajgarh and Vishgarh respectively.

Durga came inside Palace freshened up and went to the area where all wounded soldiers were. She found her husband and father-in-law still unconscious. Her father, Maharaj Virendra Pratap severely wounded but conscious. Yuvraj Krishan Pratap's wounds were bleeding but they were being tended by junior vaids (doctors) and lovingly by Rajkumari Rukmini. She went near Rajvaid and asked, "Pitahji aur Yuvraj ko kya kasht hai? Vishgarh ke Maharaj aur Yuvraj ka swasthiye kaisa hai? (What is the matter with father and Crown Prince of Ajgarh? How is health of King and Crown Prince of Vishgarh?)

"Rajkumariji, aapko toh swayam Ayurved ka gyaan hai aur aap sab samajhteen hain. Maharaj Brijendra ke prahaar se Maharaj Nagendra ki vish thaili par ghaat hua hai iss liye unka vish sookh gaya hai. Vishgarh ke Maharaj aur Yuvraj ke ghaav gehre hain kintu dono sachet hain. Kintu Yuvraj Bhujang par koi bhi aushaadi kaam nahi kar rahi hai! (Princess you have good knowledge of Ayurveda and will comprehend. By King Brijendra's attack, King Nagendra's venom pouch had been punctured leading to drying of his poison. Both King and Crown Prince of Vishgarh have been brutually wounded but are conscious. However, Crown Prince Bhujang has been effected very badly and also no medicine is working on him!)

"Humare putr aur pote ko aap kyun nahi sachet kar paa rahe hain? (How come you are unable to bring my son and grandson to consciousness?) Thundered Rajmata joining in the conversation.

"Maharaj Nagendra ko sachet karna ka kewal ek upaya hai? (There is only one way to bring King Nagendra to consciousness.)

"Woh kya hai? ( What is that?)

"Rajkumari Neelakshi, Maharaj Nagendra ka sparsh karen. (Princess Neelakshi, has to touch King Nagendra.)

"KYA? HUM ISKI KADAPI AAGYA NAHI DENGE! (WHAT? I'LL NEVER GIVE PERMISSION FOR THIS!)

Seeing her grandmother-in-law in one of her disagreeable moods, Durga left from there.

Durga went and sat near Yuvraj Bhujang saying, "Yuvraj utthiye! (Crown Prince , Please Get up!) There was no response. "Kya Maan apni Geet ke liye nahi utthega? (Will Maan not get up for HIS GEET?) Still there was no movement. Yuvraj aapne hummei vacchan diya thaa ki aap sadaiv humare saath aur nikat rehenge. Aap apna vachan todh denge?
(Crown Prince, you had promised that you will stay near me now and always!) Saying this Durga still got no response from Yuvraj Bhujang and finally Durga broke down crying. She felt a hand on her shoulder when she turned she saw Rajkumari Rukmini. Unable to act strong any longer she hugged Rajkumari Rukmini's waist and cried her heart out, "Bhabhi-sa, yeh kyun nahi utth rahe? Aap inhei uttayiye kyunki yeh humse rusht hain. (Bhabhi, why is he not waking up? You try to wake him up as he is angry with me.)

"Durga shaant huiye! Abhi durbal hone ka samay nahi kyunki Maharaj Brijendra aur unki sena ke virrudh yudh karne ke liye siwaiye aapke aur koi nahi hai. Dono Maharaj buri tehra ghayal hain. Vishgarh ke Yuvraj bhi ghayal hain aur bhai-sa murchit hai. Aapko uss ghammandi, durachaari aur vaasna bhogi Naaglok ke Maharaj Brijendra se yudh karna hi hoga poore Naaglok ki raksha ke liye!(Durga please calm down! This is not the time to become weak because you are the only person who can fight against King Brijendra. Both the Kings of Ajgaeh and Vishgarh are badly injured. Yuvraj of Vishgarh is brutually wounded and my brother is unconscious. You have to fight with that arrogant, callous, ruthless, lusting King of Naaglok, Maharaj Brijendra and teach him a lesson.)

"Kintu... (But...)

"Koi kintu parantu nahi. Aap vishram kijiye aur dekhiyega ki kal ka suriye udaay humari jeet ka aur uss Maharaj Brijendra ki haar ka prateek hoga. (No ifs and buts. You now go and rest. You will see that tomorrow's sunrise will come with our victory and that Maharaj Brijendra's defeat.)

"Bhabhi-sa, kya aap hummein ek vacchan dengi? (Bhabhi, will you give me a promise?)

"Kya Durga? (What Durga?)

"Bhabhi-sa, yadi hummein iss yudh mein yaa uske paschaat kabhi bhi kuch ho jaaye toh aap humare pati, apne bhai aur Ajgarh ke Yuvraj, Bhujang ka dhyaan rakhengi. Kyunki hum jaante hai ki yeh (Yuvraj Bhujang) Rajmata se krodh mein lad lenge aur Pitahji inki bhaavna nahi samjhenge aur inhein dandh de sakte hain. Phir yeh (Yuvraj Bhujang) ek dam akele ho jaayenge. Yeh (Yuvraj Bhujang) bahaar se bhalhe hi balwaan aur shaktishaali naag dikhate hain kintu andar se yeh ek dus varshiye bacche hain. Iss liye hummein inke baare mein bahut chinta hai. (Bhabhi, if during the battle or after that something happens to me then promise me that you will look after my husband, your brother and Crown Prince of Ajgarh, Yuvraj Bhujang. As I know due to his (Yuvraj Bhujang) anger he will fight with Queen Mother. Father will not understand his (Yuvraj Bhujang) feelings and immediately give him punishment thereby making him all alone. His (Yuvraj Bhujang) external persona maybe of a brave, fearless and powerful python but internally he is just like a ten year old boy. Hence, I'm extremely worried about him.) Saying this Durga become quite.

Seeing Durga worried and tense Rajkumari Rukmini said, "HUM VACCHAN DETE HAIN! (I promise!)

NEXT DAY

The day dawned nice and bright. As expected Maharaj Brijendra was there more fierce, obstinate and breathing fire. He thundered, "RAJKUMARI NEELAKSHI, YADAPI AAP ISS SHANN HUMARE SAATH NAAGLOK KE RAJMAHAL CHALEN TOH HUM YUDH ABHI SAMAPATH KARTE HAIN! (Princess Neelakshi, if you come with me to Palace of Naaglok right now, then I'll stop the war at once.)

"Yudh bhoomi par khade hote huye yudh ko samapath karne ki baatein kewal kaayar kartein hain. (You are standing on the battle field and you want to end the war like a coward!)

"Aapne hummein kaayar kaha toh yeh lijiye. (You called me a coward then take this.) Maharaj Brijendra aimed at Durga an arrow raging with fire but it started loosing its fire due to presence of water in Rajkumari Durgeshwari's body. So the war continued on. After seven hours of intense battle, Maharaj Brijendra lost his patience and transformed into python and increased his size ten times to his original size. Maharaj Brijendra at that height could attack not only Durga, Yuvraj Krishan Pratap, Ajgarh and Vishgarh armies, but also Ajgarh and Vishgarhs Palaces. Hence closing her eyes Rajkumari Durgeshwari started reciting few mantras first she transformed into her original form a white cobra and then her size increased and increased and increased till her hood reached beyond the clouds. Now the flap on her neck was so big and wide that it was like a wall between Maharaj Brijendra and Yuvraj Krishan Pratap, Ajgarh & Vishgarh armies, and also Ajgarh & Vishgarhs Palaces. Feeling sudden darkness around them Rajmata, Maharaj Virendra Pratap, Maharani Pallavi, Rajkumari Rukmini, palace employees and anyone inside Ajgarh Palace who was conscious and could walk came out to witness Durga's gigantic form. Maharaj Brijendra was stunned seeing Durga's powers.



He now started getting worried and he closed his eyes with arms outstretched and murmured some mantras and a fericious looking weapon called"Naag shastra (Weapon of Snakes) appeared.



Seeing presence of Naag shastra', Durga was slightly perturbed as it was one of the most deadliest weapon in Naaglok and she was not sure if she had enough power to diffuse it. Although she had decided to use Maa Durga's blessing for reviving her unconscious husband but seeing no other alternative to prevent Ajgarh and Vishgarh as well as Naaglok from evil forces of Maharaj Brijendra, Durga decided to use it. Therefore as soon as Maharaj Brijendra threw Naag shastra' at Durga she followed with throwing of beautiful green coloured celestial gem, "Naagmani towards Maharaj Brijendra.



Naagmani' not only sliced through Naag shastra' in half it also hit Maharaj Brijendra as he was right behind Naag shastra'. After attacking Maharaj Brijendra with Naagmani', Durga came back to her normal size and to human form. With Naagmani's effect first Maharaj Brijendra reduced to his normal size but was still in snake form and then his body started burning which was observed by everyone present there.

"Maharaj, MahaRAJ, MAHARAJ...! Maan's reverie was broken by voice of Senapati of Naaglok, Ram Singh. "Maharaj, aapki aagya anusaar humne apne sabse shaktishaali guptchar naagon ko bheja hai jeev "Parvati Kalika Chauhan ki khoj mein. Sheeghr ati sheeghr unka samachaar avashiye aayega. (Maharaj, according to your order, I have sent the most powerful spies in search of a creature called "Parvati Kalika Chauhan. Very soon they will return with some good news!)

"Hum aasha karte hain ki Naaglok ke guptchar hummein niraash nahi karenge. (I hope that Naaglok spies don't disappoint me.) Saying this Maharaj Bhujang left for his bed chamber.

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