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Posted: 7 years ago
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Who am I? Forever to be outside of that which is considered valuable in life. An outsider to life, outsider to familial love, outsider to sweet moments in life, outsider to friendship and outsider to love. I am who has no identity, I am whose name has been obliterated in time, I am who has been forgotten by his near and dear ones, I am who cannot tell his own narrative...
I am the Outsider...I do not count, I cannot be seen, my presence gives comfort to none, flowers reek not of beauty and fragrance that lifts up one's soul but flowers are one which reminds one of death.
I am the Outsider to Love, all that I care for is vengeance but it still doesn't give respite ...I still remain 'outside' to the material world and my lover's embrace.
My pain is not heard, my tears cannot flow, my eyes express darkness or worse they denote a void that can never be filled...
I am the Outsider... My name mentioned by none, my agony and desperation lacks the power of utterance because there is no one to tell it to...Alone, Alone, forever alone

I am the Outsider who can remain witness to others story, real or unreal, to lies or truth but, the story cant find a place for me because I am beyond all those stories...

But why am I here? Whose stories will get written or rewritten because I am the Outsider...one from whom no story shall ever begin nor end...Am that silence that envelopes this world so that when noise is heard one can differentiate it from the whispers of love..

Am that Outsider whose story will never get written but who frames the stories of others...

This is an ode to Shiv...the ghost. Shiv hasnt yet been shown and whatever we have yet seen so far, its couched in silence or turns into a profusion of love between Vyom and Sharanya.

Can that story be heard where the Outsider manages to find that flower which reminds him of times spent together rather than of times which can never be replicated.
As per the current track, Shiv is a ghost so his story is already over before we can even see it flower. But, Namik as Shiv and with those VO at the end of every episode, even ghosts and their love stories turn out to be more magical than it would have been possible.

To that loneliness called Outsider...❤️



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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautifully written Indu👏 ...you have literally conveyed the feelings of Shiv through your words, really awesome❤️ ...Namik has brilliantly enacted these emotions of Shiv and the VOs by him at the end of every episode is truly magical 😛
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Originally posted by: AMNP

Beautifully written Indu👏 ...you have literally conveyed the feelings of Shiv through your words, really awesome❤️ ...Namik has brilliantly enacted these emotions of Shiv and the VOs by him at the end of every episode is truly magical 😛


Thanks Mayu😳 I love giving voice to the unsaid and unfamiliar😃
Glad you liked it
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautifully written Indrani 🤗 waiting for the Outsider to get his voice across - to the ones who need to hear him, the ones to do not want to hear him and above all to the love of his life.
The way Namik has played with the ghost's screaming silence is no short of brilliance. As a viewer I feel his restlessness to be shunned out of what is rightfully his story - i feel his angst when someone is trying to steal away his part of the world that is left over - I feel the helplessness when he has to scare the (possible) love of his life to make his presence felt. The helplessness in all of it is palpable.

I am all geared for Shiv's story . or is it Vyom? well time will tell.

P.S: feels strange to be back in this forum 😛 it always unleashes that wild part of our quest for the deep often where it doesn't even exist 😆


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: QUIRKY333

Beautifully written Indrani 🤗 waiting for the Outsider to get his voice across - to the ones who need to hear him, the ones to do not want to hear him and above all to the love of his life.

The way Namik has played with the ghost's screaming silence is no short of brilliance. As a viewer I feel his restlessness to be shunned out of what is rightfully his story - i feel his angst when someone is trying to steal away his part of the world that is left over - I feel the helplessness when he has to scare the (possible) love of his life to make his presence felt. The helplessness in all of it is palpable.

I am all geared for Shiv's story . or is it Vyom? well time will tell.

P.S: feels strange to be back in this forum 😛 it always unleashes that wild part of our quest for the deep often where it doesn't even exist 😆


You bet Sanju, it feels strange to be back on forum after such a long time. 😛And may I say you encapsulated the pain, the scream of this nether spirit for his love beautifully.👏😳 Take a bow! Sanju😃
We are hearing and looking at Vyom's story and the ghost remains invisible (pun intended!) ..But, his need to be heard, to be seen, to be touched tells us of a story untold. And am eager to hear it told.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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very happy to see you here indrani .😃
Very nicely you brought Shiv, the outsider's thought in light . Loved it .
Namik is doing outstanding , without dialogues he has manage to make presence on screen.
Thank you for this post . 🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Indrani🤗I'm really glad you have written. You have used a beautiful word here - Outsider, because arent we all outsiders of some sort at some point in our lives? In this case, one could say that the Ghost is an outsider in his own life, memory and the few bits of him that have been left behind in this realm. But then again, is HE the outsider or are the others the outsiders in his life, outsiders that he now wishes to bid goodbye to in the most appropriate fashion.


Originally posted by: indranigupta

Who am I? Forever to be outside of that which is considered valuable in life. An outsider to life, outsider to familial love, outsider to sweet moments in life, outsider to friendship and outsider to love. I am who has no identity, I am whose name has been obliterated in time, I am who has been forgotten by his near and dear ones, I am who cannot tell his own narrative...

I am the Outsider...I do not count, I cannot be seen, my presence gives comfort to none, flowers reek not of beauty and fragrance that lifts up one's soul but flowers are one which reminds one of death.

This is rather sad, because he is like the spirit that has been shut in a bottle for years, with no voice and a forgotten identity. But, that is why he is here now, to claim his identity and find his voice. And to right the wrong that has happened. He his here to breathe life into a past that left him dead.


I am the Outsider to Love, all that I care for is vengeance but it still doesn't give respite ...I still remain 'outside' to the material world and my lover's embrace.
My pain is not heard, my tears cannot flow, my eyes express darkness or worse they denote a void that can never be filled.. .
That's just it. It is a void, quite like the void inside him now, that he has filled with anger and a quest for vengance. He no longer yearns for his lover's embrace. Atleast, that is not what I think. For him to move on justice has to be serves and, he has to settle old scores.

I am the Outsider... My name mentioned by none, my agony and desperation lacks the power of utterance because there is no one to tell it to...Alone, Alone, forever alone.

He truly signfies Alone in a Crowd.

I am the Outsider who can remain witness to others story, real or unreal, to lies or truth but, the story cant find a place for me because I am beyond all those stories...

But why am I here? Whose stories will get written or rewritten because I am the Outsider...one from whom no story shall ever begin nor end...Am that silence that envelopes this world so that when noise is heard one can differentiate it from the whispers of love..
👍🏼


Am that Outsider whose story will never get written but who frames the stories of others...

This is an ode to Shiv...the ghost. Shiv hasnt yet been shown and whatever we have yet seen so far, its couched in silence or turns into a profusion of love between Vyom and Sharanya.

Can that story be heard where the Outsider manages to find that flower which reminds him of times spent together rather than of times which can never be replicated.
As per the current track, Shiv is a ghost so his story is already over before we can even see it flower. But, Namik as Shiv and with those VO at the end of every episode, even ghosts and their love stories turn out to be more magical than it would have been possible.

To that loneliness called Outsider...❤️

Loneliness is in a way as much a part of us as our soul is. It is very internal. As much as it is bitter, it is sweet and peaceful. I think it is the most tangible human emotion. Funny then, that is haunts the Ghost that haunts the human kind?



To me this story belongs to The Ghost, as of now. It may develop into something else, but the love story is incidental and takes back seat.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: -rhythm-

very happy to see you here indrani .😃

Very nicely you brought Shiv, the outsider's thought in light . Loved it .
Namik is doing outstanding , without dialogues he has manage to make presence on screen.
Thank you for this post . 🤗


Rhythm, its so good to hear from you.🤗 Yes, he is doing brilliantly. Though his story is yet shrouded in silence and where words have yet to represent the pain, the very silence vibrates and tells us there is yet a story to be told.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beagle😳 What a wonderful way to put it 👏 Yes, who is the outsider? Is it simply a trick of the light and outsider is simply a misreading? Time will tell but, yes, despite the many loopholes in the show and the gimmicks thrown in, there is that invisible story which is fighting hard to make itself read.

Who am I? Forever to be outside of that which is considered valuable in life. An outsider to life, outsider to familial love, outsider to sweet moments in life, outsider to friendship and outsider to love. I am who has no identity, I am whose name has been obliterated in time, I am who has been forgotten by his near and dear ones, I am who cannot tell his own narrative...

I am the Outsider...I do not count, I cannot be seen, my presence gives comfort to none, flowers reek not of beauty and fragrance that lifts up one's soul but flowers are one which reminds one of death.

This is rather sad, because he is like the spirit that has been shut in a bottle for years, with no voice and a forgotten identity. But, that is why he is here now, to claim his identity and find his voice. And to right the wrong that has happened. He his here to breathe life into a past that left him dead.

It is because of this reason that I am still connected to the show. What is that past which is pushing with all its might and trying to be heard. As of now still unsuccessful. Is it because any story requires not an author but a reader?


I am the Outsider to Love, all that I care for is vengeance but it still doesn't give respite ...I still remain 'outside' to the material world and my lover's embrace.
My pain is not heard, my tears cannot flow, my eyes express darkness or worse they denote a void that can never be filled.. .
That's just it. It is a void, quite like the void inside him now, that he has filled with anger and a quest for vengance. He no longer yearns for his lover's embrace. Atleast, that is not what I think. For him to move on justice has to be serves and, he has to settle old scores.

I dont really know. The ghost holding that comatose girl's hand, who was he? What did he wish? Why didnt he hurt her then?

I am the Outsider... My name mentioned by none, my agony and desperation lacks the power of utterance because there is no one to tell it to...Alone, Alone, forever alone.

He truly signfies Alone in a Crowd.

Yes

I am the Outsider who can remain witness to others story, real or unreal, to lies or truth but, the story cant find a place for me because I am beyond all those stories...

But why am I here? Whose stories will get written or rewritten because I am the Outsider...one from whom no story shall ever begin nor end...Am that silence that envelopes this world so that when noise is heard one can differentiate it from the whispers of love..
👍🏼


Am that Outsider whose story will never get written but who frames the stories of others...

This is an ode to Shiv...the ghost. Shiv hasnt yet been shown and whatever we have yet seen so far, its couched in silence or turns into a profusion of love between Vyom and Sharanya.

Can that story be heard where the Outsider manages to find that flower which reminds him of times spent together rather than of times which can never be replicated.
As per the current track, Shiv is a ghost so his story is already over before we can even see it flower. But, Namik as Shiv and with those VO at the end of every episode, even ghosts and their love stories turn out to be more magical than it would have been possible.

To that loneliness called Outsider...❤️

Loneliness is in a way as much a part of us as our soul is. It is very internal. As much as it is bitter, it is sweet and peaceful. I think it is the most tangible human emotion. Funny then, that is haunts the Ghost that haunts the human kind?



To me this story belongs to The Ghost, as of now. It may develop into something else, but the love story is incidental and takes back seat.

Yes, loneliness is one which makes us human. But, see the irony here he is outside to that very human existence😭

Lovely comments beagle. Reminded me of old times😳🤗
Edited by indranigupta - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: indranigupta



That's just it. It is a void, quite like the void inside him now, that he has filled with anger and a quest for vengance. He no longer yearns for his lover's embrace. Atleast, that is not what I think. For him to move on justice has to be serves and, he has to settle old scores.

I dont really know. The ghost holding that comatose girl's hand, who was he? What did he wish? Why didnt he hurt her then?



His intentions are still unclear. But why hadnt he moved on to the other realm? Why was he still in this world? Maybe he was waiting to move on. A spirit does not belong in this realm. I imagine it would pain them to be in this world, because it is not made for them. Isnt that case with anything - my orchids die the minute I place them in the window which is not a good environment for them. But still he hung on-not with the hope of reuniting with his love but perhaps with the anticipation that she would wake one day and he can get justice, one way or the other.

Perhaps thats what he is after- Justice and closure.

Anyway, I was listening to this song and it reminded me of the Ghost😭😆
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dDO9ZRSNB9s


Edited by beagleboy - 7 years ago

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