Avneil Ts meri jindgi ban gye ho tum ||updated 3 A PART

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Monika545

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Posted: 7 years ago

This is Avneil TS..on track of yesterday episode ,when Neil and Avni finally meet in Rangmahal -

Avni or Neil bahut der tak aese hi hug karke khade rhte hai.

After some time

Neil:-Avni

Avni :-hun !

Avni Neil ko chhodna nhi chahti thi,vo sirf usko or tightly hug kar leti hai

Neil:-vo..vo Avni hme Ali ko dundna hai

Neil ek bdi smile ke sath kahta hai.

Itne mein hi Ali or DD vaha kuchh gundo ke saath fight karte hue vaha pahunch jate hai .

Ali ko dekh Avni or Neil bahut khush hote hai ,Ali bhi bahut khush hota hai vah kuchh bolne wala hota hai tabhi unsbko firing Ki Awaaj aati hai ,..Avni ek dam se neil ka hath pkad leti hai..yah dekhkar Neil usko aankho se assure karta hai..

Avni:-vo ..Neil truck ke pass juhi or baki ladkiyan hai..

Sbhiuss jgah jate hai jaha truck khada hota hai..lekin ladkiyon ka koi naamo nishan nhi hota

Ali:-yha to koi bhi nhi hai

DD:-unko kahi Pandit ne to nhi pkad liya

Neil:-hme chlna chahiye,lekin usase pahle DD tumne backup force bula li hai na

DD:-yes sir,maine intzaam karwa diya hai vo bas pahunchti hi hogi

Neil Avni ka hath pkad leta hai tightly or sbhi ladkiyon ko dundte dundte uss jgah aate hai jaha Raavan bnaya hua hota hai

Vaha Pandit juhi ke sir ke upper gun rkhi hoti hai

Avni juhi Ki traf Jane lgti hai tabhi Neil uska tightly fir se hath pakad leta hai..or uski traf dekhkar ishara karta hai Ki "no"

Pandit:-lo aa hi gya tu,..mr Neil khanna..mujhe nhi pta tha Ki tum itne bevkuf nikloge,abi Bach kar tum nhi nikal skte,tum chahte to avni ko lekar Bhag skte the..lekin nhi tumhe apni purani wali mashuka bhi chahiye ..hai na?

Pandit ek evil smile ke sath bolti hai

Neil:-vo main tumhe btaau ki mujhe kya chahiye..ye main jruri nhi smjhta ,or kahi bat juhi or inn ladkiyon Ki..to main ek police officer hu..or mera ye kaam hai Ki main inko bchaaun..agar police nhi bhi hota ..insaaniyat ke naate bhi yhi karta.

Neil gusse main bolta hai

Iske baad pandit ko gussa aata hai tabhi vaha dyavanti aa jati hai..vaha Neil ko juhi,baki sbhi ladkiyan..or Avni ke bich kisi ek ko chunar ke liye bolti hai..

Avni Neil Ki traf dekhti hai..hath abhi bhi unke ek dusre ka pakda hota hai..juhi bhi Neil Ki traf dekhti hai

Avni sochti hai Ki Neil juhi ke sath khush rhega..vo usase pyaar karta hai..or uski khushi ke liye main kuchh bhi kar skti hu..or baki sari ladkiyan..bechari inka kya Kasoor hai inn sbme.yah sab sochkar vah Neil se apna hath chhudane Ki kosis karti hai..lekin Neil uski traf dekhkar hath or tightly pkad leta hai

Neil:-Dyavanti mehta,main actually tumhare diye gye swaal mein interested nhi hu abhi..

Dyavanti gusse se:-vo to abhi pta chl jayega interested kyon nhi hote tum

Pandit apne aadmiyon ko ishara karti hai unpar gun tanane ke liye,..vo aage bdne lgte hai tabhi ..

Neil:-pandit main itna bhi bevkuf nhi hu

Tabhi vaha back up force unke head par gun rkh deti hai ..

Neil:-le jaao innsbko ,or inn ladkiyon ko bhi kisi safe jgah le jaao..kal mrng mein inki family ka pta kiya jayega..or..

Avni:-neil ,ek ladki injured hai

Nei apne police member se:-or Jo ladki injured hai usse hospital le jaao,sbka dhyan rkhna okk

Police ka ek member:-yes sir,vah salute karke vaha se chla jata hai

Sari police force unhe le jati hai..vaha sirf Ali Avni Neil DD or juhi bchte hai

Ve sab bhi Jane liye mudte hai tabhi pichhe se achhank Amol aakar Neil ke sir par gun se ..Jor se attack karta hai.

Srry guys.i know this is boring..but sah lena yr..jldi mein mobile par type kiya hai..or third time kiya hai..just irritate ho rhi hu mai..kyonki jab main type kar rhi thi,pta nhi kaise bich mein kuchh alag hi open ho jati hai site..or jab fir se main uss page par aati hu..to vo gaayab,jo maine type kiya tha.or copy bhi nhi ho rhi thi,. issliye abhi itna hi..

Teaser :-upcoming part

Neil:-Avni ,mujhe kuchh ho jata to tumhari jaan kyon chli jati?

Vah Avni ke cheeks par hath rkhakar bolta hai

Avni:-kyon.. kyonki

Neil:-han,bolo Avni..main sunana chahta hu

Avni:-Neil..vo...

Edited by Monika545 - 7 years ago

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Posted: 7 years ago

A good start. Loved it but please make it a English version. It's tough to read it in Hindi. Continue soon :)

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Monika545

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Posted: 7 years ago

Part 2

Ve sab bhi vaha se Jane lgte tabhi,Amol pichhe se Neil ke sir par gun se attack karta hai

"Neiiil!"Avni Bhag kar usko pakdti hai..Jo Ki niche girne wala hota hai

Vah Neil ke head ke pichhe apna hath lgati hai,to dekhti hai uske haath red ho gye hai.

Yah dekhkr ek dam se uski sans rook jati hai

"Neil kuchh nhi hoga tumhe..okk,kuchh nhi.."vah Neil se jyada khud ko tassali dene ke liye bolti hai

"Avni tum chinta mat kro,hum abhi hospital lekar chlte hai"Ali bhi Neil ka shoulder opposite side se pkdte hue kahta hai

Lekin Avni ke aanshu nhi ruk rhe the..

Juhi thodi hi dur par khadi hoti hai..usko smaj nhi aa rha tha Ki kya kre.. issliye vah vahi chupchap khadi thi

DD Amol ke pichhe gya hua hota hai ,Jo ki Neil par attack karte hi vaha se Bhag jata hai

"Av..Avnnnii,main thik hu"Neil weak smile ke saath Avni ko assure krne Ki koshish karta hai

Ve dino Neil ko car mein betha lete hai ..Neil ka sir Avni apni god mein rakh leti hai ..vah kaskar apne lahanga choli Ki chunri ko fadkar Neil ke sir par band deti hai kaskar.

"Tumhe kuchh nhi hoga"vah dhire se apni. gaal par aanshu ko pochhte hue kahti hai,vah nhi chahti thi Ki vah iss vakt kamjor pde,neil behosh ho jata hai

"Ali or speed se chla "Avni Ali ko bolti hai

Ali speed se car chlata hai..ve 20 minute mein hi ek chhote se hospital mein pahunch jate hai

Neil ko doctor examine karti hai..or uski dressing karti hai

Ali DD ko call karta hai..or hospital ke bare mein btata hai.udhar vah bolta hai Ki Amol mil gya. Main usse police station lekar jaa rha hu..fir 10 minute mein main vaha aata hu

"Nhi DD ,abhi Neil ko discharge krne wale hai doctor,vo to achha hua Ki chot jyada Ghari nhi thi 2 stitch lge hai,kal subah milte hai"Ali phn disconnect krke juhi Ki or mudta hai ..Jo ki vahi uske pass wali bench par bethi hoti hai

"Juhi tum thik ho?"Ali puchhta hai

"Main thik hu,bas thoda thak gyi hu"vah slightly bench par apna sir tikate hue kahti hai.

Tabhi vaha Avni bhi Neil ka hath pakdkr le aati hai.. doctor ne to kaha tha Ki ek din ke liye hospital mein rah jaye,lekin Neil hospital mein rhna nhi chahta tha issliye uske kahne par doctor ko aakhir discharge karna pda

Sabhi car mein beth jate hai..Avni Neil ke shoulder ko pakdkar usse aaram se andar betha deti hai..chot jyada gahri nhi thi..lekin kuchh medicine ka bhi effect tha..

"Ali kya tum juhi ko lekar ghar ,or mujhe or Avni ko hmare uss Ghar par chhod doge?"Neil Avni ke shoulder par hlke se sir tikate hue bolta hai

Usko pta tha Ki bebe ,mom or dead usse aese dekh aese hi or jyada preshan ho jayenge,vaise bhi preshan ho rhe honge pahle se

"Neil.."Avni ,Neil ko confused hokar dekhti hai..vah usse aankho se assure karta hai

"Ali hmare bare mein puchhe to kah dena Ki vo dono thik hai or hum uss ghar par thahr gye hai"Neil fir se Ali ko smjhata hai

"Thik hai Neil"Ali car chlata hua Avni or Neil ke liye smile karta hai..vah unn dono ke liye khush hota hai

Amol ke bare mein Ali pahle hi Neil ko bta chuka hota hai

Jaisa Ki Neil ne kaha tha ..Ali vaisa hi karta hai..vah Avni or Neil ko unke Ghar chhodna(jis chhote se Ghar mein Neil marriage se pahle rhta tha)or juhi ko Neil Ki family ke sath chhodkar, khud apni nanno ke pass chla jata hai

"Avni main thik hu"Neil ke kahne ke bavjud vah usse Sahara dekar bed par bethati hai..or tablets pass ki table par rakh deti hai Jo doctor ne di thi

Continue soon ...

Srry guys,meri english thodi poor hai..jaise hi vo thodi rich hoti hai..main usme bhi likhna start kar dungi

For next part plz comment nd click like button :)tc

Edited by Monika545 - 7 years ago

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Monika545

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Posted: 7 years ago

Part 3 a

"Avni main thik hu"Neil ke kahne ke bavjud bhi avni usse sahara dekar bed par betha deti hai.

Avni bathroom mein fresh hokar bahar niklti hai to dekhti hai Neil kuchh soch me duba hua hai.

Vah towel pass ke chair par rakh,Neil ke pass bed par beth jati hai.

"Neil kya hua.."kahakr vah uske forhead par haath rakhkar dekhti hai..kahi bukhar to nhi hai.

"Main thik hu avni"vah Avni ka hath apne hath mein le leta hai or uski traf apni charming smile pass karta hai.

Lekin Avni kuchh nhi bolti ..vah gumsum si bethi thi..

"Ab tumhe kya hua Avni"vah apne dono hath uske gaal par rakh Avni ka face apni or karta hai..uski aankho se aanshu continousely bah rhe the.

"Hey...shhh..plz rona band kro"vah uske aanshu pochhte hue kahta hai.

"Nei..l..vo .."vah haklaati hai.

"Han bolo avni..tum ro kyon rhi ho?..main thik hu..dekho meri traf"apni sbse bdi dimple wali smile dikhate hue kahta hai.

"Amol ne..mujhe bechne ki koshis ki..or tum par attack kiya..tumhe marne ki koshish ki.."kahte kahte vah ruk jati hai..aanshu abhi bhi uske thamne ka naam nhi le rhe the.."Neil mere hi bhai ne tumhe marne ki koshis ki.."kahkar vah Neil ka hath pakadkar..fir rone lagti hai.

Neil usse chup krane ki koshis karta hai..lekin vah bed se khadi hokar window ki or chli jati hai.

"Neil meri jaan nikal rhi thi ye sochkar hi..ki tumhe kuchh ho jata to!"aakhir kaar vah apnr emotion khud mein nhi dba kar rkh payi .

Neil sochta hai isse distract karna pdega..

"Avni..Aa..ouch!!"

"Kya hua neil,tum thik ho"avni bed ke pass bhagkar jati hai..

Continue soon...

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About next update :-full romantic :)

Edited by Monika545 - 7 years ago