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Posted: 7 years ago
#91
Congo for new story..
will read and comment soon..
😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: --cute.manasi--

Part 5...

jalal u're too much intimidating the poor soul now !

& oops her speed of running...😛😆

well anyone would do that , when they r hell scared like that .

but jalal needs to realize his actions if he wants her affection !


well he is bad boy and have some attitude problem so he will be like that but don't worry hew will realize soon dear and thanks for such a cute comment dear.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: --cute.manasi--

Part 6...


oops oops , they r back to square one !

& jalal full in rage , i hope he doesn't end up doing something horrible .

jo so terrified has confided in friends thus riling jalal , i hope he'll understand her fears .

well what will he do and it will be bad or good for knowing that you have to wait for next chapter dear anyway your comments are so beautiful I like them thank for such a lovely comment dear.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: divyaJA

Congo for new story..

will read and comment soon..
😊

Thanks dear foe wishes and I will wait for your comment Dear.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I read all parts one by one...
All parts are awesome..
jalal is in love wid jo...
jo is so innocent...
nw ja will impress jo's bro...😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: divyaJA

I read all parts one by one...

All parts are awesome..
jalal is in love wid jo...
jo is so innocent...
nw ja will impress jo's bro...😉

well you are right maybe he will do that or maybe he can't anyway thanks for such a lovely comment dear I was just waiting for your comment anyway I am glad you like it.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Chapter 7

(after sometime Jodha and her friends left from there and than).

Jalal said : here she is enjoying with that rich brat he is rich to but she don't have problem but with me it's look like I am having some disease I will not leave her like this.

Abdul said : calm down dude we already plan what to do than don't do anything stupid just wait for Sid to come back.

Jalal said : till than i should enjoy watching her with that Rascal no way I am going to get her now.

Viraj Said : don't behave like Mad men do you have any idea who he is.

Jalal said : I don't care who is he and what is he.

Aslam said : come on Jalal he is the son of Rajveer Singhania most powerful businessmen of India for heaven sake don't mess with him or the consequence will be worst for us.

Jalal said : than what should I do Dammit I can't see her with anyone like this didn't you all see how comfortably she was hugging him and with me she just get scared and try to run away from me.

Mirza said ; so just avoid her till Sid comeback.

Natasha said : now let's go back to our home now.

(than they all left for there home to other side Jodha and her friends reach her house).

Ajay said : woo awesome house Dear it's beautiful and clean.

Jodha said : thanks for compliment now go and freshen up than I will make dinner for you all.

(listening this they all nodded there head and started going to freshen up but than stop listening Jodha voice).

Jodha said : hey is there some special demand for Dinner.

Ajay said : no we don't have any demand just make what you like to make we will have it.

Jodha said ;okay than go now.

(Than Jodha called her brother and he pick her call within few minutes).

Jodha said ; hello Bhai how are you did you reach on time did you had your Dinner and how is Bhabhi and her Mom and when you will come back as I am missing you.

Sid said : hello My Cutie Pie and yes I reach safely and I am fine to and now I will go and have Dinner and your Bhabhi and her Mother is fine to but I will stay here foer two weeks as Dovtor will do her operation after one week so I can't comeback and I am missing you to anyway tell me how was your day and did you had dinner.

Jodha said ; oh okay than take care and my day was good and I am going to make Dinner and you know Nisha Siya and Ajay will stay with me here till you come back .

Sid said : oh that's great now I don't need to worry okay now go and have dinner will talk to you later and take care of yourself bye.

Jodha said ; you to take care of everyone there Bhai bye.

(after talking with him she goes to make dinner and her friends come there and help her in that after half hour done with that they all had dinner together and left to go sleep and other side Jalal enter in his home with bad mood and looking at him Hamida Humayu get worried so they stop him ).

Humayu said : what happen my son you look very angry is there something wrong.

(Listening his father voice Jalal goes to him and hugged him tightly).

Jalal said : I will not Leave her Dad she is playing with my emotions I will not leave her she reject me because I am rich and she herself have friend who is moir rich than us you know today I goes to meet her and there...

(he told his father everything which make Humayu angry on that girl But listening everything he can't help but Admire his son choice as the girl is full of innocence and Moral and he even without seeing or meeting her can say she will be the best for his son).

Humayu said ; I think your friends are right just avoid her for sometime.

Jalal said ; I will try Dad but I am not sure.

(saying this he goes to his room and looked at his cell phone where hear pic was and kissed that and lay on bed).

Jalal Pov : you are enjoying by hurting me right Kitten than let it be now you will know what I can do you ignore my warning to and told your friend everything right than let it be now you will face me Kitten.

(thinking about her he slept and next morning he after freshening up get ready and left with his father to office and spend his half day there by helping him and than goes with his friends to watch college football match and othere side Jodha and her friends were in college).

Ajay said : hey you all are coming to watch my match right.

Jodha said : yes we will now go and get ready.

Siya said : are you nervous.

Ajay said : u..m.m..not much but yes I am anyway now I am going see you on stadium do come soon.

Nisha said ; good luck Ajay do your best.

(than Ajay left to see his team and Jodha Nisha Siya goes to there class and after class they all goes to stadium where Jalal and his friends were to but they all didn't saw them but how can Jalal don't see her he and his friends saw them but didn't do Anything just watch them but now Jalal concentration on Jodha not in Match who was jumping up and down and shouting for Ajay to do goal).

Nisha said : what the hell why he not doing goal.

Jodha said ; he will just wait and watch after all he is best isn't it.

(than looking at Ajay).

Jodha said ; come on come do the goal you need to do that for winning.

(and seeing her cheering for Ajay Jalal get angry but didn't do anything and after match they all had fun as Ajay and his team won the game so they all celebrate there success and left from there and like Jalal and his friends left from there to and like this they all get busy on themselves Jalal go office with his Father and help him and in evening spend his time with his friends other side Jodsha was busy in her studies and enjoying her days with her friends soon it was Saturday and as Plan Jodha and her friends goes to Participate in Bike Race where Jalal and his friends gone to watch).

Abdul said : what do you think who will win.

Aslam said ; first let start the race than we will bet.

Viraj said : yes guys just wait for sometime.

Jalal said : hey Mirza you are eating all the chips alone give me some.

Mirza said ; so when I stop you take it.

(saying this he give him some chips and they all started watching other side Jodha and her friends reach the venue and change there dress and sit on there bike wearing Helmet they are ready for that Jodha bike was Black and her Dress was balck to and other side Ajay Bike was Dark Blue and his dress was Dark Blue to).

Ajay said : so all ready to loose from me girls.

Jodha said ; we will see who will loose and win.

Ajay said : okay than let's have a bet if you win than My car will be your for one week and I will pay the bill for everything for week in canteen and if you loose than you will give all of us treat what say.

Jodha said ; done so get ready to give your car to me.

(soon the race start and Nisha and Siya wish there friend a good luck and goes to sit with audience where Jalal saw them but than he again started watching match where two rider was very fast as they left others very far and there way of driving was awesome).

Abdul said : now whom do you think will win Black one or Red one.

Mirza said : I think Blue one as he was very fast in driving and his moves of stunt are very sharp to.

Jalal said ; I don't think I mean that black slim Rider was doing very good and his Moves are very calculating and speed is good to I am sure he will win.

Viraj said ; well let's see than.

Aslam said : I to think the Black one will win look how dangerous his stunts are and not for second his speed get low.

Abdul said : okay than I and Mirza are on Blue one side you and Jalal are on Black side so than let's have bet if Black one will win than we will give you all treat and 5 Lack if Blue one win than you all will give us treat okay and Five Lack what say.

Jalal Said : okay than Done and Be ready to give us treat.

(saying this he started looking at Race again where as Jalal said the Black one won the race but he get heart attack when he saw the rider who removing helmet comes towards there friend and like Jalal his friends were shock to).

Seher said : oh my god she is the one to win this race.

Shivani said : awesome she is mind blowing.

(they all were praising her and Jalal was angry and worried what if something has happen to her and in rage he goes out side and left from there other side Jodha was hugging her friends and Ajay was making face ).

Siya said : now Ajay give your car Keys to Jodha and be ready to pay our bill for week.

Nisha said ; well over confidence always make person lost the game and that's what happen with you.

Ajay said : oh Please I just loose because I wanted to or else no one can defeat me anyway let's go it's late.

Jodha said ; you will never admit that you loose because I make you right.

Ajay said : no now let's go.

(than both of them goes to change there dress and left from there to home and after freshening up they all goes to sleep and Jodha after closine every door and checking when goes to her room she get shocked to see Jalal in her room and she was about to shout in fear when he closed her Mouth by his hand and hurriedly tied her hands by rope than tied the cloth on her mouth and from her window take her to his car while she struggle and cried and tried to shout but her voice went dead because of cloth which was tied on her mouth and soon opening his car door he make her sit and tied the seat belt around her and started driving all the while stealing a glance at Jodha while she was just crying and trying to get her hands free but no use so she just pray to god to save her from him but maybe she was late in praying soon Jalal stop the car and come out while she get scared to see a forest area and a big house Jalal open her side of door and take her outside by carrying her in his arms while she struggle to get away but no use soon he take her inside and take her in one room and lay her on bed while she get faint because of tiredness and fear he looked at her but than closing the door he come out and called his friend).

Jalal said ; hello Abdul why were you give 10 missed calls.

Abdul said : wo you just left suddenly so we thought to check anyway where are you.

Jalal said ; I am fine and I am staying at my Farmhouse don't worry and will see you tomorrow bye.

(saying this he cut the call and enter the room again and looked at her than sit besides her and caressed her face).

Jalal Pov : uff after one week I am seeing you from this much closed you are so stunning and Beautiful Kitten but how dare you to Participate on that Race what if something happen to you did you ever thought about me what will happen with me how will I live without you Kitten but no you don't care about me never mind now I will make sure you don't do anything like that.

(thinking all this he bend a little and kissed on her forehead than slept besides her while hugging her).

Edited by Rashmisingh9151 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Me First
Awesome update dear waiting for next chapter soon 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: konica.arora.92

Me First

Awesome update dear waiting for next chapter soon😉

well you don't have to wait much as I will update next soon dear and thanks for comment dear.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Suprb Chptr yar..
Jo won...yipiieee😃😆
i love how jalal concern abt jo..😳
jealous jalal i always love 😉
tnx fr pm

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