VISHKANYA**EPILOGUE 1, 2** Pg. 119, 121** 18/01/18

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Awesome updates..

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Lovely double update finally the tome came when maan could make geet his but in all rituals he was missing his sister whose life was ruined thanks to his Dadi geet made him understand and promised she will come back to him rukmini refused to lwt Dadi do her pagphera but instead wanted geet to do it Dadi was hurt and upset by Durga maan was happy to have his sister back geet recreate the environment of their sr surprised maan altogether and both became one in every sense geet took promise from maan that he will always protect her honor maan accept not knowing how it will test him in future too

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Nice updates dear

Loved both the updates.

Maan was missing his sister in each of the rituals and held thyself responsible for the happenings took place with her. Geet consoled Maan and gave suggestions to him about Mini's pagphere rituals. Mini agreed to pay visit to her parents house on one condition. Rajmata felt that Geet started to win hearts of her family and was in control of her reign. Seeds of enimty and superiority has began to be sown in Rajmata's mind. Maan was happy that Geet's suggestion regarding Mini's pagphere rituals was successful and ended in happy note. Maaneet became one in all sense. Geet took promise from Maan to protect her honor in future. Nice pics !!

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Dasi seems like angry with geet yet agai ...

Maaneet become one...

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Fantastic Double Updates

Rajamata instead of been happy that Princess Rukmini was coming home after 4 years she now feels that Princess Durga wants to take her place or challenge her position surely this will cause lots of problems for the future

finally the newly weds get alone time and became one both admired each other

Durga wanted a promise from her husband and he too vowed to keep his promise

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Amazing, beautiful n lovely updates

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both parts are amazing

pics so beautiful

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Wow awesome update yaar

Finally maaneet became one and geet took promise from him as a gift

Savitri devi thinks geet to be a threat to her power and position but unaware of the fact that her own granddaughter doesn't wants to see her face ever

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CHAPTER 18

ALL THE NAMES & PLACES ARE FICTITIOUS (if any resemblance to persons & places is purely coincidental). Any royal titles, MEDICAL PROCEDURES, MEDICAL TERMS, MILITARY PROCEDURES, MILITARY TERMS, RELIGIOUS TERMS, Punjabi terms, architectural terms, IT terms & programs, office hierachy, wedding rituals, etc. are from my imagination hence THEY ARE NOT TRUE. PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!!!!

ALL THE PHOTOGRAPHS DOWNLOADED DO NOT BELONG TO ME BUT BELONG TO THE ORIGINAL UPLOADER. I HAVE JUST USED THEM AS THEY GO WITH MY STORY! PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!

FOUR YEARS LATER

These four years has been an eye opener as well as redemption years for Maharaj Bhujang Mahadev Singh or Mr. Maan Singh Khurana. Now Yuvraj Bhujang Mahadev Singh is "Maharaj of Naaglok but the person who would have been happiest with his acquiring this title is no more. The person, his wife whom he should have treasured has left him forever four years back and now there is no way of getting her back. Maan (Bhujang)'s insecurity, jealousy, anger, insult, humiliation and suspicion has taken her away from him along with his giving in to wishes of a vindictive Queen Mother who also happens to be his grandmother along with malicious female gossip done by Ajgarh Palace staff!

The promise he gave to his love, his wife and his Geet he could not fulfill it. The promise everyday beats in his head like a hammer for past four years, "Hum aapse yeh vacchan chahte hain ki har sukh aur dukh mein; har kasht evam katnayi mein aur har din-prati din aap humare nikat aur sadaiv humare saath rehenge. Humare maan, swabhimaan evam charith ki samaajhik aur rajsi tathiyon se raksha karenge. (I want you to promise that in all our happy and unhappy times; in our pains and problems; and everyday, every month and every year you will be always near me and supporting me. Also that you will protect my honour, self respect and my character against royal and social injustices.) None of the promises he had made did he keep. The most important for Geet was"Humare maan, swabhimaan evam charith ki samaajhik aur rajsi tathiyon se raksha karenge. (You will protect my honour, self respect and my character against royal and social injustices.) But Maan failed to hold his wife's honour, self respect and protect her character not only in front of their families but also in front of Kingdom of Ajgarh, Kingdom of Vishgarh and the world!

Maan had so wanted to give up his title of "Yuvraj and to follow his wife to the next world but the wise Purohit Ram Prasad Mishra stopped him saying,"Yadi aap "Yuvraj ki upaadhi tyaag denge toh aap "Naaglok ke Maharaj nahi bann paayenge jo Rajkumari Durgeshwari antim iccha thee. Aur Yuvraj yeh jeevan aapka nahi kissi aur ki amaanat hai iss liye aap usse tyaag nahi sakte! (If you give up the title of Crown Prince, you cannot become the "King of Naaglok which was Rajkumari Durgeshwari's last wish! This life is not yours to destroy Crown Prince. Its a precious possession of someone else!) Maharaj Nagendra ernestly wanted to crown Bhujang as "Maharaj of Ajgarh and hand him over all the reponsibilities of Ajgarh but Bhujang refused as he could not bear to stay in Ajgarh Palace as well as Ajgarh as each and everything and each and every corner of the Royal Palace reminded him of his wife, Geet (Durga). He wanted to break all his relationship with Ajgarh but due to his father and sister's insistence he did not. But he has not seen face of Rajmata Savitri Devi since His Geet left him, despite of Rajmata's continous pleas. Although Rajmata Savitri Devi may have been the prime cause but he also cannot abstain from the sins he has committed against his wife which led his Geet to take such drastic steps!

Maharaj Bhujang still remembers when his wife first time after their marriage, saved him from underhand and viscious attack of Maharani Naintara, then Naaglok's King, Maharaj Brijendra's wife. It happened a month after Yuvraj Bhujang and Rajkumari Durgeshwari's marriage in human form. They were going to leave for Mumbai next day. Once in Mumbai, Geet (Durga) would only be his wife, Mrs. Geet Maan Singh Khurana. They could live peacefully as normal humans do without all the time being reminded of royal protocol, ancestoral history (Parampara), royal duties (rajsi kartavya) etc . Bhujang had come into his room to change when he suddenly saw a strange evil looking woman or a naagin' as he could detect by her body odour.

But before he could question her or raise an alarm he found some black atrocious smelling smoke across his face and what happened next he doesn't recollect. When he woke up it was next day morning and the whole Palace of Ajgarh was in disarray with tense hustle bustle going on. Just then his Valet, Bheem Singh arrived and unable to hold his curiosity Maan asked, "Bheem Singh, kya ho raha hai? (Bheem Singh, what's going on?)

"Yuvraj, kal raat ek baar phir Maharani Naintara ne aap par hamla karna chaha thaa kintu samay par aa kar Rajkumari-sa ne baccha liye. Poori raat yudh chala. Rajkumari Durgeshwari ne pehle Maharani Naintara ko Ajgarh Rajmahal ke bahaar khadhera.

(Courtsey: Icchapyaari Naagin)

Kintu Maharani Naintara ne apni haar nahi maani aur Vishgarh ke Rajmahal par hamla karne ki koshish ki jo Rajkumari Durgeshwari ne phir viphal kar di.

(Courtsey: Icchapyaari Naagin)

Chaar ghante ke bhayaank yudh ke paschaat Rajkumari Durgeshwari ne Maharani Naintara ko maar giraya.

(Courtsey: Icchapyaari Naagin)

Kintu iss yudh mein Rajkumari Durgeshwari bhayankar roop se ghayal ho gayeen. Kyunki Rajkumari Durgeshwari, Vishgarh ke rajparivaar ko bacchana chahti theen iss kaaran yeh yudh Vishgarh ke rajmahal ke peeche ek soon-saan jageh mein hua thaa jiss kaaran Rajkumari Durgeshwari ki sahita karne mein aur unki marhum-patti karne mein atyaadhik samay lag gaya aur unke shareer se bahut rakht (blood) beh gaya. Iss kaaran woh atyant shithil ho gayeen hain. Aaj prahta kaal, Jawai-sa aur Rajkumari Rukmini unhein Ajgarh chodne aaye the. Abhi rajvaid unki Rajkumari Rukmini ke samaksh jaanch kar rahe hain. (Crown Prince, last night once again Queen Naintara tried to attack you. But you were saved by the timely intervention of Princess Durga. Whole night the battle continued between Princess Durga and Queen Naintara. First Rajkumari Durgeshwari dragged Queen Naintara outside Royal Palace of Ajgarh. But Queen Naintara refused to accept her defeat and tried to attack the Royal Palace of Vishgarh but again Rajkumari Durgeshwari made her taste dust. After four hours of intense battle, Rajkumari Durgeshwari was finally able to defeat Queen Naintara by killing her! But in this battle Rajkumari Durgeshwari was brutually injured. To avoid anyone getting hurt in Palace of Vishgarh, Rajkumari Durgeshwari had directed the battle towards a far and inaccessible area of Vishgarh. As the area was inaccessible, it took long time for the soldiers and medical aid to reach the spot, thereby making the Princess loose lot of blood and now she is extremely weak! Today at dawn, Yuvraj Krishan Pratap and Rajkumari Rukmini brought her to Ajgarh. Currently the royal doctor is examining Princess Durga in presence of Princess Rukmini.)

"Maan beta, MaAN, MAAAN! Havan ka samay ko gaya hai. (Maan, MaAN, MAAAN! Its time for prayers!) Rajkumari Kumudini called from downstairs breaking Maan's painful but happy memories of his Geet ! Maan got up freshened up wore his dhoti-kurta and went downstairs.

In the main hall of Khurana Mansion, Rajmata Vijayalakshmi, Maharaj Virendra Pratap, Maharaj Nagendra, Maharaj Harshvardhan, Maharani Meenakshi, Yuvraj Krishan Pratap, Rajkumari Kumudini, Rajkumari Rukmini, Adi, Vicky, Meera and Pinky were gathered dressed in white. No one had bothered to invite Rajmata Savitri Devi as neither she had any feelings for Durga nor anyone in the room wanted her presence as they all blamed her for Rajkumari Durgeshwari's leaving the world. Maharani Pallavi was also not present as she was completely paralysed due to shock of seeing her one and only daughter leaving their world and hence could not move!

Seeing Maharaj Bhujang, Pandit Dwarka Prasad said "Yajmaan padhariye! Aapki patni ka shraadh prarambh karte hain! (Come Sir! Its time to pay respects to the departed soul!)

ONE YEAR LATER (FIVE YEARS SINCE DURGA LEFT)

Location : CHANDNI CHOWK MAIN MARKET, DELHI

She had come to Chandani Chowk as her current client the Khuranas wanted a typical Punjabi wedding for their younger son Vikrant Singh Khurana (Vicky) and his fiancee, Meera. She had always stayed in Mumbai since she arrived in this world. She was trying to find her way around in the hustle and bustle of Chandani Chowk when she saw a fair, slim and attractive girl in bright coloured clothes eating bhel and arguing with the vendor. The girl's expression and innocence brought a smile on her face after a very long time. But her smile disappeared as she saw a huge red truck swirling purposely towards the arguing girl. She came in between the truck and the girl and pulled her away but the girl was extremely shocked and scared and was swaying when she said, "Aapka naam kya hai, Ma'am? (What is your name, Ma'am?)

"Hey Devi Maiyya hummein kya ho raha hai. Arnavji aap apni Khushi ko baccha lijiye. (Oh Goddess Durga what is happening? Arnavji please save your Khushi.) The girl in bright clothes answered.

"Aapka naam kya hai? (What is your name?)

"KHU...SHI! Then the girl collapsed in dead faint and she held the fainted girl and in a flash both disappeared in thin air which went unnoticed in the crowded streets of Chandani Chowk. She took Khushi to the nearest hospital and got her registered under the name of "Mrs. Khushi as she saw in Khushi's neck a mangalsutra and sindoor on her forehead.

"Aapka naam? (What is your name?) Hospital receptionist asked

"Humara naam? Kyun? (My name? Why?)

"Ma'am formalities hain.(Ma'am they are hospital formalities.) Hospital receptionist replied.

"PARVATI KALIKA CHAUHAN. She replied with pride and attitude.

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CHAPTER 19

ALL THE NAMES & PLACES ARE FICTITIOUS (if any resemblance to persons & places is purely coincidental). Any royal titles, MEDICAL PROCEDURES, MEDICAL TERMS, MILITARY PROCEDURES, MILITARY TERMS, RELIGIOUS TERMS, Punjabi terms, architectural terms, IT terms & programs, office hierachy, wedding rituals, etc. are from my imagination hence THEY ARE NOT TRUE. PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!!!!

ALL THE PHOTOGRAPHS DOWNLOADED DO NOT BELONG TO ME BUT BELONG TO THE ORIGINAL UPLOADER. I HAVE JUST USED THEM AS THEY GO WITH MY STORY! PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!

Location: SHANTIVAN (RAIZADA HOUSE)

It has been past eight hours since Arnav has been trying Khushi's mobile but it was of no use. By now Arnav's worry and feeling that something was not right has superseded his anger. Arnav had just arrived in Delhi 8hours back from London and was desperately wanting to see his wife and his sweetheart, Khushi but she was neither at home nor picking up her phone. When Arnav had arrived home none of the family were home as well and Hari Prakash only knew that "Khushi Bhabhiji has gone to Chandini Chowk but that was 10 hours back now. Arnav had planned to surprise Khushi by arriving one day earlier than expected hence no one was at home including his wife.

When four hours back, Arnav's Nani, Mrs. Devyani Raizada along with Arnav's Di(sister), Anjali Raizada had arrived from "Satsang. Arnav had pounced on both of them before they could greet him. "Nani aur Di, Khushi kahaan hai? (Nani and Di, where is Khushi?)

"Khushiji toh Chandini Chowk jaa rahi theen Diwali ki shopping ke liye. Magar abb toh... (She had gone to Chandini Chowk for Diwali shopping. But that was...) Anjali said looking at her watch.

"Chhe ghante ho gaye hain usse gaye huye aur kissi ko bhi nahi pata woh kahaan hai. It is UNBELIEVEABLE! HOW CAN KHUSHI BE SO IRRESPONSIBLE? (Its been 6hours since she left home but still no one knows her whereabouts!) Arnav thundered.

Driver, Mohan had also by now returned home as he also did not know any whereabouts of Khushi Bhabhiji and she was not answering the phone as well. Arnav had just picked up his phone to call Police Commissioner as ten hours were over since Khushi had left Shantivan. Just then his phone rang. It was an unknown number but something made him pick up the call.

"Hello!

"Can I please talk to Mrs. Khushi's husband? A crisp and firm female voice spoke.

"Yes this is her husband, Arnav Singh Raizada.

"Mr. Raizada, can you please come to Chauhan Hospital as your wife is not well.

"Who is this speaking?

"I'mParvati Kalika Chauhan, please come as I've been trying to find your wife's identity and her family for past ten hours but as her phone's battery had died and she has been unconscious...

"WHAT? I'm coming. What's her room no.?

"Mr. Raizada, currently she is still in AER but as soon as she is transferred in a private room I'll inform you. You can call me at this number. You can look for me outside AER once you are here. My name is Parvati Kalika Chauhan.

Arnav rushed and reached the hospital with Devyani and Anjali Raizada. He asked where is AER. He was guided and then when they reached AER they found that Khushi has been transferred to the Presidential Suite of the hospital. Arnav entered the Presidential Suite with his Nani and Di to find Khushi still unconscious. Just then a lady doctor came and when Arnav introduced himself she said, "Mr. Raizada, Congratulations you are going to become a father in 7 1/2 months.

"WHAT? Arnav was too shocked to react. But both ladies were jubiliant.

"Hum padh dadi bannewale hain Anjali betiya.(Anjali, I'm going to be a great grandmother.)

"Aur hum bua, Nani.(I'm going to be an aunt!)

Arnav pulled himself together and said, "But why the hell is my wife still unconscious?

"That is because she is very weak you all will have to see to her health and activity. She should regain consciousness soon. Coming near Arnav she looked at the two ladies and whispered, "Mr. Raizada can I meet you outside for sometime.

Arnav left with doctor as his grandmother and sister were too preoccupied to notice his absence. "Mr. Raizada, Miss Chauhan wants to meet you urgently.

"Yes I too want to meet her and thank her. Where is she?

Doctor pointed towards a girl standing near a window wearing a trendy but decent white churidaar kurta and walked away. The girl was standing with back towards Arnav and looking outside. "Miss Chauhan?

The girl turned and Arnav was taken a back how young she was. "Yes?

"I'm Arnav Singh Raizada, Khushi's husband. We spoke on the phone.

"Oh yes Mr. Raizada. How is Khushi Ma'am?

Arnav was impressed with her politeness and manners but her voice was emotionless. Arnav spoke, "She is still unconscious. Doctor said you wanted to talk to me urgently.

"Yes Mr. Raizada.. Sir, your wife's life is in danger.

"WHAT?

"I just happened to see a huge truck swirling purposely towards your wife. Because the road was wide enough to avoid collision even if the vehicle had lost control. I withheld informing Police as I thought I will do so only if you wished it. Even to the doctors I mentioned that she had fainted on the road and doctors attribute it to her pregnancy. Congratulations Mr. Raizada. I shall now take your leave. Can I meet your wife once before I leave?

"Thank you. Yes off course.

Arnav took her in the room and introduced her to his Nani and Di. Parvati went and did namaste to Nani and she blessed her. Then she quitely went near Khushi closed her eyes and murmured some shloks and Khushi immediately woke up saying "Devi Maiyya aap? (Goddess Durga, you?)

"Putravati Bhav! (May you be blessed with a son!)

Khushi went back to sleep now. Then there was intense white light and there was no Parvati Kalika Chauhan there leaving Arnav, Devyani and Anjali Raizada in state of shock which was broken by a voice, "Mr. Raizada can I enter? Arnav went to open the door to see Parvati standing there.

All three Raizada's were stunned to see Parvati standing there.

"Magar, aap toh... "(But you were...) Anjali stammered.

"Miss Raizada, woh hum nahi Maa Durga theen. (Miss Raizada, that was not me but Goddess Durga.)

"KYA? (WHAT?) All the three Raizadas asked shocked.

"Khushi Ma'am, Maa Durga ki ananye bhakath hain iss liye Maa ne unhein swayam darshan diye hain. Abb hum chalte hain. (Khushi Ma'am, is a true devotee of Maa Durga, hence she came to bless her. Now I shall leave.) Leaving Raizadas still in trance.

A WEEK LATER

Parvati was to leave tomorrow for Mumbai and was in two minds whether to call and find out about Mrs.. Khushi Raizada or just leave. She was still debating when her phone rang and she was surprised to see that Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada was on phone. She quickly picked up the phone and after wishing him asked about Khushi. He said in his famous no nonsense voice, "Miss Chauhan, Raizada family would like to have you over for tea today at Shantivan at 6:00p.m.

"But Mr. Raizada...

"I'm not requesting you its an order. I'll send the car with driver to pick you up. Can you please SMS me your address?

"That will be really helpful. Thank you. Parvati agreed as she was really eager to meet Khushi.

Parvati reached at sharp 6:00pm to Shantivan. She was debating what to wear but decided to wear a saree as she was going to meet Khushi Ma'am at her home where her in-laws were. She wore a simple white and black cotton saree and tied her hair up in a bun.

The mature hair do and sober saree still could not camouflage her beauty or her youth. She was welcomed very warmly by the whole family especially Khushi Ma'am. Within half an hour of reaching Raizada home she felt as if she knows them for long. When she addressed Khushi Ma'am as "Ma'am she was very offended and said, "Parvati aap humse choti hain toh hummein "Didi, "Jiji yaa "Bhabhi bulaiye. Aap Lad Governor (seeing Arnav glare she corrected herself) humara matlab hai ki Arnavji ko "Sir yaa "Mr. Raizada bulaiye. (Parvati, you are fairly younger to me so please call me "Didi, "Jiji or "Bhabhi. But you can call Lad Governor (seeing Arnav glare she corrected herself ) I mean my husband, Arnavji "Sir or "Mr. Raizada .) Seeing husband and wife banter, Parvati give one of her rare smiles.

After sometime a youngman joined who was full of life and speaking wrong Hindi. As soon as he saw Parvati he whistled, "Wah kya bandar lakdi hai? (Wow, what a monkey stick?)

"NK bhai "sundar ladki. (No NK bro, its "beautiful "girl.) Anjali corrected.

"Parvati, kya tum mere saath picture diwaane chalogi? (Parvati will you come with me for smitten picture?)

"Picture diwaane...? (Smitten picture...?)

"Parvati, NK bhai ka matlab hai ki kya aap unke saath picture "dekhane chalengi'? (Parvati what NK bhai means is Will you come to see a movie with me?') Anjali explained.

"Parvati beta aap pareshaan matt hoyiye. Nanadkishore ki Hindi bahut kharaab hai. (Parvati dear don't worry. Nanadkishore's Hindi is atrocious.) Looking at NK, Nani said sternly, "Abb aap kuch nahi bolenge. Nanhe. (Now you will not even speak a word. Nanhe.)

Rest of the evening passed well and she was about to leave when doorbell rang. NK went opened the door and a fortish extremely handsome man entered. After he had wished everyone and enquired about Khushi's health. Arnav introduced him to Parvati saying, "Bhai, this is Parvati Kalika Chauhan who helped and took Khushi to hospital.

"Miss Chauhan, this is our family friend, MR. MAAN SINGH KHURANA.

Both turned to look at one another and were stunned!

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