VISHKANYA**EPILOGUE 1, 2** Pg. 119, 121** 18/01/18 - Page 35

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Finally done..
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read story so far, little bit confused with all thing happening, so not giving coment as i am not digesting tory but still like the dialoge in rajasthani accents.,
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CHAPTER 16

ALL THE NAMES & PLACES ARE FICTITIOUS (if any resemblance to persons & places is purely coincidental). Any royal titles, MEDICAL PROCEDURES, MEDICAL TERMS, MILITARY PROCEDURES, MILITARY TERMS, RELIGIOUS TERMS, Punjabi terms, architectural terms, IT terms & programs, office hierachy, wedding rituals, etc. are from my imagination hence THEY ARE NOT TRUE. PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!!!!

ALL THE PHOTOGRAPHS DOWNLOADED DO NOT BELONG TO ME BUT BELONG TO THE ORIGINAL UPLOADER. I HAVE JUST USED THEM AS THEY GO WITH MY STORY! PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!

On reaching Ajgarh, Rajkumari Durgeshwari was at once whisked away by Rajkumari Meenakshi and few of Yuvraj Bhujang's cousins before he could even comprehend what was going on? Yuvraj Bhujang was guided once again to Rajmata Vijayalakshmi's bedchamber where Yuvraj's Daddoo was waiting for him. Seeing Yuvraj Bhujang Rajmata Vijayalakshmi said, "Yuvraj kaisa raha Durga ke pag phere' ki rasam? Vishgarh ke Maharaj aur Maharani ne toh apne jawai-sa ki bahut khaatirdaari ki hogi? Kya aapne Rajkumari Rukmini se baat ki unke pag pheron ki rasam ke baare mein? (Crown Prince how was pag phere' ceremony of Princess Durga? The King and Queen of Vishgarh must have really looked after well the son-in-law of Vishgarh? Did Princess Rukmini agree for coming to Ajgarh for her pag phere' ceremony?)

"Haan Daddoo mai Rajkumari Rukmini se mila. Magar Rajkumari Rukmini Ajgarh ke Rajmal mein ghusna nahi chahti kyunki woh Dadimaa se bahut naraaz hai uski zabardasti shaadi karne ke kaaran. (Yes gradmaa I met Princess Rukmini. But Princess Rukmini refuses to enter the Palace of Ajgarh as she is extremely furious with Queen Mother Savitri Devi for getting her forcibly married.)

"Bhabhi-sa aur Rajkumari Rukmini dono ka nazariya apni-apni jageh theek hai. Yadi aap kal vyasth (busy) naa hone, toh hum aapke saath Vishgarh, Rajkumari Rukmini se milne jaana chahenge. (Queen Mother Savitri Devi and Princess Rukmini are both right in their perception of the current situation. If you are not too busy tomorrow, can you come with me to Vishgarh to meet Princess Rukmini?)

"Jaisi aapki aagya Daddoo. (As you wish grandmaa.)

Just then Rajkumari Meenakshi walked in with few of Yuvraj Bhujang's cousins. Looking at Rajmata Vijayalakshmi she said,"Dadi-sa, jaisa aapne kaha thaa sab tyaar hai. (Grandmaa everything is ready as per your wish.)

"Kunwar Vikrant ko aur Kasturi ko bulaiye. (Call Vikrant and Kasturi.) When both Vicky and Kasturi (Rajmata Vijayalakshmi's one and only grand daughter) came, Rajmata Vijayalakshmi said, "Kunwar Vikrant aur Kasturi, aap dono apne Bhujang bhai-sa ko unki suhaag sej tak le jaaiye. (Vikrant and Kasturi, please guide your elder brother till his room.) Bringing at once a full ear to ear smile on Yuvraj Bhujang's face.



Once Yuvraj Bhujang reached his bed chamber, Kasturi stood in front blocking the door admist lot of teasing and joking. "Bhai-sa, yadi aap aaj ratri bhabhi-sa ke saath bitaana chahte hain toh hummei uske liye tax dena hoga. (Bhai-sa, if you want to spend the whole night with your wife, please give us tax?)

"Kasturi tum yeh kya keh rahi ho? (Kasturi what is this?) Vicky asked confused.

"Vikrant bhai-sa, chinta matt kariye jab aapka vivaah hoga toh hum aapse bhi tax maage gayen. (Vikrant bhai-sa, don't worry we will also ask you tax when you get married!) Bringing another round of laughter and giggles.

"Ladkiyon yeh kya ho raha hai?(Girls what are you doing?) Rajkumari Kumudini came seeing a big group of girls in front of Yuvraj Bhujang's room.



"Maa, they want tax from Maan bhai. (Maa, they want tax from Maan bro.) Vicky complained.

"Vicky yeh tumhari behano ka nek hota hai. (Vicky this is your sisters' right!) Rajkumari Kumudini gave an envelope to Yuvraj Bhujang saying, "Beta yeh apni behano ko de do. (Give this to your sisters.) Hearing word "behano Yuvraj Bhujang was missing his baby doll, Mini.



But pulling himself together he gave the envelope and all girls along with Rajkumari Kumudini and Vicky left.

Yuvraj Bhujang entered his room feeling a little low and depressed since he heard the word "behano. The night for which Yuvraj Bhujang was so eagerly waiting seemed distant now in front of his pain. Unable to control himself he started talking aloud as if he is talking to his inner conscience. "Aaj sab meri behane yahaan hain siwaiye meri baby doll ke, meri Mini ke! Aaj mere kaaran abhi bhi Vishgarh aur Ajgarh beech ek and rooni tanaav hai. (Today all my sisters are here, except for my babydoll, Mini. I'm still the cause of hidden tension between Vishgarh and Ajgarh.) Yuvraj Bhujang buried his face in his hands. Unable to bear Yuvraj Bhujang in this depression and painful state, Rajkumari Durgeshwari came and hugged him tightly saying, "Yuvraj, apne aapko sambhaliye. Aap chinta matt kariye bhabhi-sa avashiye Ajgarh aayengi yeh humara aapse vada hai. (Crown Prince pull yourself together. Don't worry your sister will definitely come to Ajgarh one day. I promise.)



"Patta nahi Geet, aaj subah se mujhe Mini ki bahut yaad aa rahi hai. Vishgarh mei bhi usne mujhse zyada baat nahi ki. (I don't know Geet, since morning I'm missing Geet a lot. Even in Vishgarh she didn't talk to me much.)

"Kya hum ek sujhaav dein? (Shall I give a suggestion?)

"Kya? (What?)

"Aap kal jaa kar ekaant mein bhabhi-sa se baat kariye. Unhein apne saath Ajgarh le kar aayiye. Yadi woh akele naa aayen toh bhai-sa ko bhi saath le aayega. Chinta matt kariye, sab theek ho jaayega. (Tomorrow you go and talk to Princess Rukmini in privacy. Then try and bring her to Ajgarh. If she is hesitating you also coax my brother to come with her. Don't worry! Everything will be fine!)

"Daddoo bhi yehi keh rahi theen. (Daddoo was also saying the same.)

"Dadi-sa, bilkul sahi keh rahi hain. Abb der ho gayi hai, chaliye vishram karte hain. (Grandmaa is perfectly right. Its getting late now, lets sleep.)

"Magar aaj toh humari... (But today is our...)

"Abb toh hum aapke saaton janam ke liye hain! Naa aap aur naa hum kaheen bhi jaa rahe hain! (Now I'm your for next seven births. Neither you nor I am going anywhere!)



Then Rajkumari Durgeshwari gently pulled Yuvraj Bhujang towards her and placed his head on her lap and started running her fingers through his hair calming him. After sometime Yuvraj Bhujang went to sleep. Making Yuvraj Bhujang comfortable on pillow she covered him with duvet and went to change her clothes.



First time since Yuvraj Bhujang had come for her pag phera ceremony, Durga saw that her husband had worn the same clothes that she had selected and which her brother had gifted her husband on his tilaak' ceremony. She opened the buttons of the westernized sherwani and slowly removed it so that Yuvraj Bhujang is more comfortable.

Next day Yuvraj Bhujang woke up very early as his daily schedule for his workout. He was taken aback to find Rajkumari Durga sleeping next to him holding his hand. He looked around to see his bedroom decorated so beautifully. Then he remembered that last night was his and his Geet's "suhaag raat. He also remembers how unhappy and depressed he was as he was missing his younger sister Mini. Yuvraj Bhujang was slowly understanding that how a rashly taken decision of one family members effects rest of the family as well. The selfish decision taken by him not had humiliated Vishgarh and Ajgarh kingdoms and their respective royal families but it had totally destroyed his younger sister, Mini's life. Yuvraj Bhujang was still in his thoughts and contemplating what to do next when Rajkumari Durga woke up. Seeing him still lost in his thoughts she went closer to her husband and wished him "Good morning with a slight peck on his cheek.



Bringing Yuvraj Bhujang out of his melanchony. Rajkumari Durga got out of the bed and went to collect her towel and inner clothes for bath and saw her husband still lazing with his eyes clothes.


As the saree was very expensive and heavy she decided to drape it once she came out. Durga came out of bath looking very beautiful her hair wet and few water droplets on her face wearing a bathrobe over her inner clothes.



Her husband was still lying with his eyes closed so Durga thought he has dozed off. She quickly took her saree and draped it in the room connected to the washroom. She came out to their bedroom and was drying her hair slightly damp hair



and she was wearing a very beautiful heavy saree



unaware that she is under her husband's desireous glare and the impressions of Yuvraj Bhujang's fang marks on Durga's neck started glowing. Yuvraj Bhujang was mesmerised seeing his wife's damp beauty. He was too spell bound seeing his wife dress i.e. drying her damp hair; tightening the loose doori of her blouse; applying sindoor in her centre parting;



wearing her mangalsutra in her neck; wearing bangles in her hands; wearing an expensive jewellery set; putting a borla' above her sindoor on her hair parting (borla or as maang tikka called in Rajasthan. Borla is only worn by married women)


and finally covered her head with the heavy palla of her saree.



She was just passing by the bed when Yuvraj Bhujang caught a trailing piece of her palla thereby stopping her movement



and he gave a strong pull so Durga twirled and landed in his arms and he tightly enveloped her in his arms, passionately nibbling her lips.



Durga tried pulling herself out of his strong muscular arms gasping, "Hum..mei...jaa..ne...dij...iye, Yuvraj. Dadi-sa... pu...ja...ke...liye...intezaar...kar...ra..heen...hain! (Please let me go, Yuvraj. Grandmaa is waiting for me for prayers!)
But Yuvraj Bhujang refuse to let her go. Just then there was a firm knock and a hushed but audible whisper,"Bhabhi-sa, sheeghr aayiye. Dadi-sa aap ki prateeksha kar rahi hain. (Bhabhi-sa, please hurry up! Grandmaa is waiting for you.) Rajkumari Meenakshi's voice came through the closed door. Durga pushed Yuvraj Bhujang with all her might gave a glance at herself in the mirror saying "Sabar ka phal meetha hota hai! (Patience will bring you sweet fruits!) Yuvraj Bhujang was very frustrated with this continous distance from his wife again and again. He was going to change into his snake form and start breathing fire to release his frustration when Rajkumari Durga turned at the door before opening it and said, "GEET MAAN KI THEE, HAI AUR RAHEGI! (Geet was, is and will always remain Maan's) Hearing the most cherished words Yuvraj Bhujang calmed down slightly and Durga left.

After doing the puja in presence of Rajmata Vijayalakshmi, Rajkumari Meenakshi whisked away Rajkumari Durga into the kitchen for "rasoi puja whereas Rajmata Vijayalakshmi and Yuvraj Bhujang left for Vishgarh to meet Rajkumari Rukmini.

Once Rajmata Vijayalakshmi and Yuvraj Bhujang arrived in Vishgarh to meet Rajkumari Rukmini, there was a flurry of activity in Palace of Vishgarh to see to their comforts i.e. what would they like to eat, drink etc. After half an hour of pleasantries Rajmata Vijayalakshmi said to Maharani Pallavi, "Maharaniji, yadi aap anumati dein toh kya hum apni beti, Rajkumari Rukmini se kuch samay ekaant mein vratalap kar sakte hain? (Maharani Pallavi, if you give permission, can we talk to our daughter I mean Rajkumari Rukmini in privacy?)
Understanding the reason for privacy, Maharani Pallavi along with Yuvraj Krishan Pratap and Vishgarh Palace's domestic staff left the room.

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My Dear friends,
Sorry for delayed updates as I was not keeping well. Hence I'm posting double updates!

From next updates, as stated before the story of "Vishkanya" will move at a very fast pace. Now the story will be PURE FANTASY & NO LOGIC! The story will now have lot of Hindu mythological references. Many of you may or may not like/agree with many incidents but remember its a fantasy, IT IS NOT TRUE ! Its only meant for "entertainment purposes! Hence READ ONLY IF COMFORTABLE!
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CHAPTER 17



ALL THE NAMES & PLACES ARE FICTITIOUS (if any resemblance to persons & places is purely coincidental). Any royal titles, MEDICAL PROCEDURES, MEDICAL TERMS, MILITARY PROCEDURES, MILITARY TERMS, RELIGIOUS TERMS, Punjabi terms, architectural terms, IT terms & programs, office hierachy, wedding rituals, etc. are from my imagination hence THEY ARE NOT TRUE. PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!!!!

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Once they were alone, Rajmata Vijayalakshmi said, "Rukmini beta, kaisi hain aap? (My dear Rukmini how are you?)

"Hum theek hain Dadi-sa. Aap kaisi hain? (I'm fine. How are you Dadi-sa?)

"Beta, aap Ajgarh pag pheron ke liye kab aayengi? (Rukmini, when will you come to Ajgarh for pag phera ceremony?)

"Dadi-sa...

"Mini, wapis aa jaao. I'm very sorry for my behaviour due to which your life was turned topsy turvy. I know I cannot turn the clock 4 yrs. back, but please come back I miss my baby doll so much. (Mini, please come back.) Yuvraj Bhujang tried to apologise holding Rukmini's small hand between his two large muscular hands.

"Bhai-sa, mai... (Bhai-sa, I...)

"Rukmini, aap jo chahengi aur jaisa chahengi waisa hi hoga. Beta Ajgarh aane se manna matt kijiyega. (Rukmini, don't worry! Everything will happen the way you want it. Please don't refuse to come to Ajgarh.) Rajmata Vijayalakshmi pleaded.

"Mini agar tum chaho toh hum Yuvraj Krishan Pratap ko bhi apne saath abhi le chalenge? (Mini, if you want we can take Yuvraj Krishan Pratap also with us?) Yuvraj Bhujang insisted remembering Durga's suggestion.

Rajkumari Rukmini was quite for sometime and then said, "Theek hai, hum abhi Ajgarh ko aane ke liye tyaar hain kintu humari ek shaarat hai.(Alright. I'm willing to come to Ajgarh now but on one condition.)

"Kya? (What?)

"Humare pag pheron ki rasam sirf aur sirf bhabhi-sa arthaat Rajkumari Durgeshwari ke dwara hi hogi. Yadi Ajgarh ki Rajmata ne humari pag pheron ki rasam ki toh hum turant wapis Vishgarh aa jaayenge. (My pag phera ceremony will be done by only and ONLY by bhabhi-sa, I mean Rajkumari Durgeshwari not Queen Mother of Ajgarh. If Queen Mother does my pag phera ceremony, I will return to Vishgarh immediately.)

"Manzoor hai! (I agree!) Yuvraj Bhujang accepted without hesitation.

"Theek hai hum inse pooch kar aate hain." (Fine, I'll ask him (Yuvraj Krishan Pratap) and come.) Rajkumari Rukmini said and left for her room.

Rajkumari Rukmini came back with Yuvraj Krishan Pratap and he said, "Yuvraj Bhujang, hum aapki behan ke saath abhi "pag pheron ki rasam ke liye chalenge. Aur dopahar ke khaane ke pashchaat wapis Vishgarh laut aayenge. (Yuvraj Bhujang, I will come with your sister for "pag pheras today and then we both will return to Vishgarh after lunch.)

Yuvraj Bhujang immediately called Ajgarh Palace and gave good news to Maharaj Nagendra along with Rajkumari Rukmini's condition. Ecstatic Maharaj Nagendra went to the main room where majority of ladies were gathered young and old. He formally announced in his royal capacity, "Abb se ek ghate pashchaat Rajkumari Rukmini ke "pag pheron ki rasam hogi. Rajkumari Durgeshwari aap sab tyaariyaan karengi. (An hour from now will be Rajkumari Rukmini's "pag phera ceremony. Rajkumari Durgeshwari kindly make arrangements.)

"Kintu Maharaj hum sabse jeshth hain. (But I'm the eldest here, Maharaj.) Rajmata Savitri Devi objected.



"Rajmata, lagta hai ki aapki smaran shakti shithil ho gayi hai. Aap ek "vidhwaa hain aur Rajkumari Rukmini ek "suhaagan. (Queen Mother, I think your memory has become feeble. You are a "widow and Rajkumari Rukmini a "married girl.) Maharaj Nagendra knew that he had hit below his mother's belt, but he was fed up of his mother's dual standards. He was also infuriated at her ruthless and callous decision in name of royal politics which not only caused his darling daughter, Mini humiliation, insult and intense mental stress and pain but also due to which Mini had not come home for past four years.

"Toh Rajkumari Meenakshi kar dengi. (Then Rajkumari Meenakshi can do it.)

Seeing around Maharaj Nagendra saw that luckily Rajkumari Meenakshi was not present there and said, "Rajmata aap bhool rahi hain ki abb Rajkumari Rukmini ki asli bhabhi-sa yahaan hain, Rajkumari Durgeshwari! Aap kriypa dopahar ke bhojan ki vyovastha kijiye kyunki jawai-sa, Yuvraj Krishan Pratap bhi padhaar rahe hain. (Queen Mother, you are again forgetting that now Rajkumari Rukmini has a real sister-in-law (bhabhi), Rajkumari Durgeshwari! You kindly see to lunch as our son-in-law, Yuvraj Krishan Pratap is also arriving with our daughter.) Hearing Maharaj Nagendra's words other elderly women also agreed thereby making Rajmata Savitri Devi's decision in minority. But unknown to everyone present, that this small and insignificant decision made by royal family, made Rajmata Savitri Devi consider it to be an attack by Rajkumari Durgeshwari on her supremacy, authority, power and position in the Ajgarh Royal Palace hierachy!

TWO HOURS LATER
Rajkumari Rukmini along with Yuvraj Krishan Pratap arrived at the main entrance of Royal Palace of Ajgarh making the whole Palace i.e. Maharaj Nagendra, Rajmata Vijayalakshmi, Yuvraj Bhujang, relatives, friends and domestic staff of Ajgarh Palace extremely happy seeing their Princess Rukmini after more than four years.



It was sight worth seeing with all women having tears in their eyes and singing wedding songs while Rajkumari Durgeshwari was welcoming a new bride, Rajkumari Rukmini and her husband, Yuvraj Krishan Pratap by "aarti and "tilaak in her maternal home or "Maika first time after her marriage.



As soon as Rajkumari Rukmini entered inside the main door of Palace she was surrounded by all ladies young and old with lot of hugs and tears. Whole of Ajgarh was very happy to see their Rajkumari Rukmini back. Knowing what is to follow Maharaj Nagendra, Yuvraj Bhujang and male relatives escorted Yuvraj Krishan Pratap to Maharaj Nagendra's study to spend male oriented time. Under Rajmata Vijayalakshmi's guidance Rajkumari Durgeshwari, did Rajkumari Rukmini's pag phera ceremony. Everyone was happy and occupied in the ceremony except for Rajmata Savitri Devi as she was neither present at pag phera' ceremony or after that. Fortunately, no one noticed her absence except Durga. But as Durga was still new in this household and the ice had not broken between her grandmother-in-law and herself she was in delima what to do next? She couldn't ask Rajkumari Rukmini as she was busy with her family and friends. Rajmata Vijayalakshmi was also busy sitting with Rajkumari Rukmini and some elderly relatives. Just then Durga saw Yuvraj Bhujang's valet passing by she went near him and said, "Bheem Singhji, kya aap Ajgarh ke Yuvraj ko humare kaksh mein padhaarne ko keh sakte hain? (Bheem Singh, can you please ask Crown Prince of Ajgarh to come to our room?)

"Ji Hukum! (Yes Your Highness!)

Within ten minutes, Yuvraj Bhujang arrived looking very relaxed and calm. Before Durga could say anything he hugged her tightly and said, "Thank you Geet! You have made me so happy today. Geet, can I...

Durga slightly pushed Yuvraj Bhujang away from her to maintain distance and said, "Yuvraj, kriypa rajsi maryada ka paalan kijiye. Humne aapko yahaan iss kaaran bulaya hai ki hummein Ajgarh ki Rajmata ko le kar bhay hai. (Crown Prince please maintain Royal protocol. I have called you here as I'm scared for Queen Mother of Ajgarh's well being.)

"BHAY? Kiss baat ka? (SCARED? Regarding what?)

"Woh hummein dikhi nahi jabse bhabhi-sa padhaari hain. Naa toh pag pheron ke samay aur naa hi uske pashchaat! Hum asha karte hain ki unka swasthiye sahi ho? (I have not seen her since Rajkumari Rukmini arrived. Neither was Queen Mother of Ajgarh for Rajkumari Rukmini's pag phera ceremony nor after that. I hope her health is alright?)

"Tum bina baat darr rahi ho. Dadimaa, Mini ke pag pheron ke samay aur uske baad iss liye Mini ke paas nahi hain. Kyunki Mini ne yeh sharath rakhi thee Ajgarh aane ke liye. (You are getting unnecessarily scared. Dadimaa was not present at Mini's pag phera ceremony or after that, because Mini had put that condition for coming to Ajgarh.)

"Hum samajh sakte hain. Kintu ek baar jaa kar aap dekh aayiye. Please! (I understand. But please go and check on her once.)

"Theek hai. Tum bhi chalo. (Fine. You also come.)

"Nahi aap jaayiye. Kyunki Rajmata humse kissi kaaran rusht hain. Hummei dekh kar aur krodhit naa ho jaayen. (No you please go. She is a little upset with me. If she sees me, she will get more upset.) Durga left from there before anyone could see them and create a uproar. Three hours later finally Rajkumari Rukmini along with Yuvraj Krishan Pratap left for Vishgarh. Leaving a very happy Royal Singh family and Durga who was finally able to make her bhabhi-sa visit her maika.

After Rajkumari Rukmini and Yuvraj Krishan Pratap left for Vishgarh, the remaining relatives also trickled back to their respective homes. Now in the Ajgarh Royal Palace, there were Rajmata Vijayalakshmi, Rajmata Savitri Devi, Maharaj Nagendra, Yuvraj Bhujang and Rajkumari Durgeshwari. As the elders were tired they retired early. Yuvraj Bhujang was occupied with some work related to Khurana Construction. Durga ordered Yuvraj Bhujang's valet, Bheem Singh to inform her once Yuvraj Bhujang finishes his work. Then Rajkumari Durgeshwari along with her two maids in waiting (whom she had got with her from Vishgarh) Shashikala and Lalitha got to work.


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Yuvraj Bhujang (Maan) opened his and Rajkumari Durga's bedroom door and was stunned to see it so beautifully decorated.



He at once understood that his Geet has decorated the room for him to recapitulate what he missed last night. The room was only smelling of flowers and illuminated with soft light through scented candles. The cherry on cake was his gorgeous looking wife sitting on his bed with her lengha spread out like a flower.



Yuvraj Bhujang was so transfixed by the beauty of the room and care of his wife that he was standing like a statue at the place where he had entered the room.



When Durga could not take his silence anymore she said softly, "Suniye!" (Listen!)
Making Maan come out of his trance like state. Maan slowly walked near the bed lifting flowers draped like a curtain around his bed. He slowly sat down on the bed and gently lifted Durga (Geet)'s ghunghat (veil).



He saw Durga sitting with her lowered eyes gazing at the bed spread with her arms encircling her bent knees and fingers threading one another forming a clasp. Bhujang (Maan) went near and held her chin.



Then he raised her face close to him, increasing Geet's heart beats saying "Agar tum yunhi neeche dekhogi to main tumhari aankhon mein aapna jahaan kaise dekhonga?" (If you keep on looking down, then how will I drown in your eyes?) Geet slowly raised her hazel doe like eyes and looked at Maan breaking Maan's control. He gently pressed his lips on hers and started kissing her with full passion. Maan and Geet didn't realise when they lay on the bed.



Seeing Bhujang (Maan) hesitating so as to not hurt Durga (Geet), Durga (Geet) went near Yuvraj Bhujang and softly kissed his one cheek, then the other, then eyes, then chin and finally softly pecked his lips.



Before she could shyly withdraw, he held her tightly and started nibbling her lips but the 'naath' got in way.



He slowly removed the naath kissing her nose, than her 'mang tikka' placing a kiss on her forehead,



followed by earrings, necklaces,



payal



and kardhani(waistband);



placing kisses each time he removed a piece of jewellery. After Bhujang finished removing Durga's jewellery, he slowly and steadily removed her odhani (dupatta/veil) thereby explosing her flawless snow white back.



Durga (Geet) by now was a shivering mass of nerves! Before she could control her nerves or desire, Maan flipped her over, so Geet's back was all for him to see. He started with slowly running his fingers on her back, if that torture was not enough for Geet he replaced his hands with his lips and opening blouse's both doris with his teeth and warm lips on the way. Geet couldn't take it anymore and said in a seductive and breathless voice, "Suniye bas kijiye! Hummein abb apna bana lijiye taurant!" (Please it is enough! I can't wait. Make me yours now.) That was all encouragement Maan needed soon Geet's lahenga and inner garments along with Maan's clothes were on floor, both were as nature made them. Geet had always know that Maan was a true male (both in snake and human form) full of masculinity & virilety but had not realised the extent of his masculinity & virilety ! Maan had also not realised that his wife had a true sexy 'hourglass' figure as she was always well covered. Seeing Durga staring at Bhujang (Maan)'s muscular masculine torso, Maan teased her, "You are checking out and drooling on your husband,sweetheart? Go ahead I'm all yours!" Durga (Geet) blushed, Bhujang(Maan) started rubbling her b****t & twitching her n*****s arousing her. Slowly and surely he entered her trying to be as gentle as possible. Durga (Geet) though had slight pain but soon started enjoying after getting used to the rhythmn. Bhujang(Maan) didn't leave her whole night and both lost the count of number of times they made love! When Durga (Geet) got tired in human form making love, Bhujang changed them both into their snake form and thereby both were intertwining with one another! Finally when Bhujang (Maan) was satiated, Bhujang covered Durga and himself with quilt & cuddled to HIS Geet in his arms and went to sleep. Bhujang (Maan) finally had a peaceful sleep after a very long time with a sense of pride that Geet was his socially and physically!

Next morning Durga woke up in half human and half snake form like her husband. Durga's upper body was strongly clasped in Bhujang's muscular arms. Durga's white cobra tail was intertwined with a black python tail.



Bhujang's python tail was very heavy for Durga to move even in her full cobra form. Feeling her squirm Bhujang woke up and both transformed into their human form with Durga's head resting on Bhujang's muscular torso just above Bhujang's heart. Bhujang was running his fingers in his wife's brown wavy and luscious mane. Bhujang was finally feeling relaxed after nearly 7years. Seeing her husband in a calm mood Durga asked him hesitatingly, "Yuvraj, aapne hummein pehli baar kahaan dekha thaa? (Crown Prince, where did you see me for the first time?) Bhujang narrated Durga that he had seen Durga (Geet) outside Hazrat Nizamuddin Darga in Delhi. She was dressed in white anarkali with gota (golden trimmings on the edges of her sleeves, dupatta & anarkali). He also saw her after her prayers when she was looking for an autorickshaw, and it had started to rain. Then how she had jumped and twirled around starting to dance in the rain, looking like a graceful swan who was spreading its wings in a move ready to fly! Hence he had named her "HANSINI!. There was complete silence as Durga was feeling ecstatic on finding her true love and Bhujang was in his deep thoughts!

Suddenly Bhujang remembered something, "Geet, maine toh tumhei humari suhaag ki sej par koi bhi tofa nahi diya. Mujhe Mini ne yaad bhi dilaya thaa. (Geet I was suppose to give you a gift on our first night. Mini had also reminded me.)

"Toh kya hua? Aap abb de dijiye. (So what? You can give me now.)

"Haan kyun nahin? Tumhein kya chahiye? (Yes, why not? What do you want?)

"Hummein koi heere - jawaharaat nahi chahiye. Hummein aapse tofe ke roop mein ek vacchan chahiye. (I don't want diamonds or jewellery. I just want a promise from you as a gift.)
Yuvraj Bhujang remembered Mini's words,"Durga ko sansarik vastuon ka moh nahi hai. (Durga is indifferent to material possessions.)
"Kaisa vacchan? (What promise?)

"Hum aapse yeh vacchan chahte hain ki har sukh aur dukh mein; har kasht evam katnayi mein aur har din-prati din aap humare nikat aur sadaiv humare saath rehenge. Humare maan, swabhimaan evam charith ki samaajhik aur rajsi tathiyon se raksha karenge. (I want you to promise that in all our happy and unhappy times; in our pains and problems; and everyday, every month and every year you will be always near me and supporting me. Also that you will protect my honour, self respect and my character against royal and social injustices.) Durga stretched her hand and said, "Vacchan dijiye! (Promise me!)

"Main vacchan deta hoon! (I promise!)



YUVRAJ BHUJANG WAS UNAWARE THAT HOW HIS THIS PROMISE WILL BE TESTED IN HIS FUTURE!


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Edited by LM1991 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Lovely updare dear
I love to read ur story

Sorry since past few update i've not commented due to my sechdule
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Posted: 7 years ago
awesome updates...

loved dem very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely updates...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update
Don't scare
Also they both now doesn't get separated
Thanks for PM
Update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
thanks 4 da pm and double amazing updates! well written! Maan misses Geet! terrific moments! finally they become one! Maan happy! he remembers his gift and she asks 4 her a promise! liked her promise! update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Lovely update
Waiting for next update.

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