Prithvi and Sanyogita.in this janam-1 & 2 - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rash2cool

wow great work...
loved it....
plz don't mention end now.....
say to be continued....😳

we will wait for next part....😳

Thanks....for your support....and I will try to do my level best

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: ppiyu

Hey Anjali,

Nice Work !!! good one keep it up.👏

And Arshit - great Antilover 😆, I m sure Pranay bahot jald sudhar (antilover se lover😉) jayega.

hey diiii I was waiting for your reply......and haan ek na ek din.....antilovers lovers hoke rahenge

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hai Guys.....
thanks for your support.....well I am here with the second part😛

Recap: in the first part we will know that Pranay is very good boy but don't believe in Love...and he feels every relation is a commodity.He lives in Delhi.....his father is secretary of the colony.

That night was over with joy and they all welcomed the new year with many hopes in their hearts...and they said good bye to all the sad moments of the last year.....and everyone prayed God that the newyear brings them success and joy in every aspect.........everyone went their homes at 4:00 in the morning...............

saara Delhi....subah subah utrahi thi...lekin Pranay ke colony mein subah hiin chaand aagaya....sab log itna thak gaye kii...sorahe the........but in Pranay's home............still there was noise and hal chal.................

koi bhi nahin soya......Ganga(pranay's mom...)is cooking food.....bahut jaldii mein hain.........Sridhar(pranay's papaa...)busy in searching for something...................

Sridhar : Pranay.....uthona....jaldi utho....

Pranay : kya hua papaa...mujhe kuch der sona dena.....bahut thak gaya hoon.....

Sridhar : Pranay......utho....jao...tayaar ho jaoo.....station bhi to janaa hain tumhe........

"station...!!!!!!?? par kyuun...?

"bhool gaye....aaj hamare colony mein naye log aarahe hain.....304 ke flat mein"

"ohhhhh nooooooo....ab mujhe un logoon ko station se laana hain kya........pappa aap jaa sakte hain naa....aapko kya kaam hain,..aaj"

"beta....mujhe aaj begum ke saath shopping jaana hain....bahut dinon se o mujhe maar rahin hain....aaj to hamari begum kii khawaish to poori karni hain...sirf aaj o logon ko tumhe flat dikhaane ka hain......uske baad......"

(Sridhar calls his wife.....Beghum)

"uske baad.....?aur kya kaam hain pappa....mein bahut busy hoon.....mujhe collage mein bhi bahut kaam hain....."

"Pranay.....don't try to fool me....I know that ...kii tumhe ek hafte kaa chutti hain..........so....."

"soo......to kya papaa....kya..?

"kya....kya...kii tum un logon ko aaj o flat dikhana chaahiye....aur uske baad is hafte mein....us flat koo saaf karna hain..."

"Mein!!!!!!!!! saaf karoon...."

"tum nahin beta.....workers karenge....tum supervise karna...."

"papaa....."

"bas keh diya...so keh diya..."

"theeke.....kaun sa flat...?"

"....304 and 404...."

"two....?"

"haan o flat duplex hain.....isliye...poora hafta lagega...saaf sudhai karne keliye...."

"mein akhela....?"

"tumhara monkey batch hain naa.....aao.....saare hafte us flats mein raho...aur kaam karte karte enjoy karo....mamma aapko.....time pe food degiii...mein beghum ko kehdiya....."

"sab kuch aapne plan bhi kardiya....theeke mein karoonga......"

End.......................

wellllll let me tell you something....I think you all people are waiting for Sanyogita....sorry Sraddha...................and how this antilover becomes lover...........everything...is with that flat..............

I won't let you people wait...I know that this part...thoda boring hain....but I promise....from next part...it is a love story....a silent love story.

kudiya thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I will be waiting for all your suggestions and comments............ 😉 😛 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Arrey Anjali. yaar thoda baba likha karo naa!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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good one... Waiting for next part 👏

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