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Posted: 7 years ago
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Love the way you are taking forward the story. Amazing.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: divyadaya13

Love the way you are taking forward the story. Amazing.

thanks dear glad that you like it.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rashmisingh9151

thanks dear for acknowledging actually I am not getting many comments so somehow I was thinking that my story are not like by people much only few people are there who comment or send pm to me about it and now it is making me sad anyway thanks to you all.

Actually some will visit the forum only when they get pm..
Dnt worry if they get pm surely there will be more readers...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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but I already informed everyone by sending pm that I can't send them because my laptop is not working isn't so it mean that they didn't even check that to its really disappoint me now dear I didn't send you pm to still I am getting comment from you and some of other friends of mine and if they are not commenting at least they do hit like button but now I am feeling low as I think people is not liking when start the story I get many comments and likes but later it's not like same and oh how to say dear.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Chapter 3

(saying that he turn towards left but seeing her standing still he look at her).

Jalal said : didn't you heard what I say come now.

(saying this he grab her hand but than she removed his hands from her and take step back and nervously).

Jodha said : listen...I ... can't... come... with...you ...my...brother...will...not... like...to...know...that...I...am... .with...you...and...I ... don't...want... myself.. to...be..with...you...as...you...had... very ...bad... reputation...in... this... city...try...to.. understand...my... problem...one...will...say...anything...to...you...but...they...will... definitely... point... there... finger... on...my... character...so...please...let...me...go ... now... that...to...by... myself... please...

(listening her innocent yet valid point Jalal fell for her more and more if there will be any other middle class girl she will hurriedly get ready to come with me for fame and money but she is not any girl yet she doesn't have parents to who raised her by high society moral but her Brother is no less he make her strong and very stubborn when it's come to choose her decision she is very strongly stand by her moral her brother is very open minded and modern type of boy 27 year old but he give her freedom to choose anything she want to get or want to do and that's make him respect that brother of her but now her morality and stubbornness is irritating him as she is not agreeing to go with him thinking all this he goes near her held her chin by his hands and look at her eyes which are full of fear and the time he held her chin she started struggling to Remove his hand but Alas he was strong to much strong).

Jalal said : stop struggling there is no use...

(listening his Stern command she get stiff in fear).

Jalal said : you know about my bad reputation but still don't have idea how I earned that but now you will know and will definitely agree to come with me.

(saying this he forcefully turned her face aside and kissed on her cheek and if that's not enough he showed her his cellphone where he taken the pic of him kissing her and seeing that she look at him horror).

Jalal said : I have a great circle of friends and if you still didn't agree to come with me than you don't have idea how famous I can make you by sharing this pic with my friends.

(listening this she started crying tears started coming out from her like waterfall and seeing her like this Jalal mentally slapped himself ).

his heart said : you idiot bloody fool what the hell you did you come here to meet her impressed her or make her cry you really make her understand how bad boy you are stupid now do something i can't see her like this and how many times I warn you in heart matter don't take advice of your stupid mind but a fool you are will never understand.

(getting frustrated at himself Jalal looked at her than thinking something).

Jalal said : hey hey please please don't cry I don't mean to hurt you it's just that I just wanted to friend with you wanted to spend time with you and you were not agreeing so to convince you I did that but looks here I am deleting that look.

(saying this he showed her his cellphone again and in front of her delete that photo which makes her calm she stopped crying and wiped her tears).

Jalal said : now it's really late and I will again asking you will you like to come with me I will just drop you to college only.

Jodha said : I ...will ...agree... if... you ...promise ...me... that ...you.. will ...never ...cross... my ...path ... again... I ...mean ...we...will...not... see...each... other... again...

(listening this Jalal lost his calm and before she could finish he grabbed her by waist and take her in his arms like bridal style and started moving towards his car).

Jalal said : I think you don't have to agree as I am not letting you by yourself neither I can promise you that so just let be in this way.

(astonished with his act she started struggling to come out but is there any chance for her to win with him so she in calm yet fearful voice).

Jodha said : le. leave...me...what... are...you...doing... it's ...wrong... leave me... or ...else... I ...will ...shout ...for help ... leave...me...

(but he ignored her and having no other option she Started yelling for help but one hard glare from him she shut herself and she Started sobbing silently and soon he crossed the road and open his car door than make her sit inside he tie the seatbelt around her than run towards his side and after sitting inside he started driving the car and looked at her).

Jalal said : oh god for heaven sake stop getting scared and shedding tears i am not vampire or some animals who will eat you alive so stop sobbing kitten.

(listening his words she started sobbing more but than).

Jodha said : I ...am ...Jodha... not... some... kitten...and... yes ...you... are not... vampire ...or ...animal ...that's... why... you... are ...more... dangerous. as ...they...will...just...kill...me...but... with...you...I... don't...have...idea... what...will... happen...with...me...

(listening her innocent reply to his sarcastic word he started laughing his heart out).

Jalal said : I think you are right I am more dangerous than them anyway i know you are Jodha but I will call you kitten as I like to call you that my innocent scared little kitten.

Jodha said : I... I... I...am...not... Little... and...you... don't...have... Any...right... to...call...me...that...so...stop...

Jalal said : well I have Every right on you more that anyone ever have kitten and yes you are 18 year old innocent little kitten for me only.

Jodha said : wh... at ...what... y...ou you... me...an ... mean.

Jalal said : nothing kitten don't think to much you are so much innocent to understand that anyway now here we reach college and one more thing today at 4 pm we will go out so be here at parking area at 4 pm i will wait for you okay and if you Didn't come than I will take you from your class front of everyone as the same way I taken you am I clear.

Jodha said : but ...I... have... very... important... lecture ...today...I ... can't... Miss... that...

Jalal said : that's not my problem you have to come or I will come to take you Choice is your kitten and one more thing you look beautiful on this favorite color of mine kitten now go.

(saying that he open the door for her and she run from there like Deer run from lion and seeing her running like this Jalal chuckled lightly).

Jalal said : such a beautiful little kitten you are but only mine.

(than he parked his car and come out and goes to canteen where Aslam Mirza Viraj were sitting and talking with each other).

Mirza said : what do you think he will come today.

Aslam said : don't know buddy nowadays it's so difficult to understand what he is thinking.

Viraj Said : exactly you know nowadays he is no less then any Romeo.

Mirza said : true I think he fell in love.

Aslam said : maybe as because nowadays he often smiled and stay lost in some thoughts sometime just look at his cellphone only.

Viraj Said : here he is thank God he comes today.

Jalal said : what's up what's going on and where is Abdul.

Mirza said : he is not here as today he is gone with Salima for out.

Jalal said : how lucky he is.

Aslam said : did you say something.

Jalal said : no I didn't why did you heard something.

Aslam said : no not really but tell us Jalal what happened to you.

Viraj Said : yes what's wrong with you.

Jalal said : I am in love with a beautiful innocent girl who makes me mad for her by her one single look her doe like fearful yet the most Mesmerising eyes her innocent yet beautiful face stolen my heart unknowingly.

Mirza said : you and love do we look fool to you that we believe on you and to tell you the truth today is not 1april so don't joke with us.

Viraj Said : yes we are not going to fell in your trap.

Jalal said : do you really think I will joke with my emotions no never.

Aslam said : who is she what's her name.

Jalal said : remember two weeks before I beat one boy name Ankit and with him there was one girl her name is Jodha Singh I fell in love with her Aslam.

Aslam said : oh my my really you love her she is really lucky if you love her anyway congratulations at least now you to are in love.

Viraj Said : congrats dude. and when are you going to let her meet us.

Mirza said : I thought you were joking but you are serious anyway congratulations but please never hurt her .

Jalal said : thanks guys but I love her she don't so have to wait for you all to meet her but for now I can show you her pic.

(saying this he showed them his cellphone on which her pic was there he taken that when she was doing shopping with her brother in mall).

Viraj Said : gorgeous dude she is made for you only and I am sure she will love you soon.

Mirza said : no words to say she is master piece made by god I am sure he made her when he was in very good mood.

Aslam said : true she is beauty innocent.
Edited by Rashmisingh9151 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#56
Omg
Jalal fell in love with jo
Innocent jo but strong and stupor too
Jalal Teasing jo
Wow😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: konica.arora.92

Omg

Jalal fell in love with jo
Innocent jo but strong and stupor too
Jalal Teasing jo
Wow😳

thanks for first and fast comment dear and yes he already fell in love with her dear and Jodha is shy yet strong girl to who knows what is right and wrong so she stand by her decision no Matter what but Jalal is no less to he knows how to get what he want dear anyway such a lovely comment dear thank you.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Ja truly loves Jo
Hope Jo understand soon
Fabulous update

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sranjani

Ja truly loves Jo

Hope Jo understand soon
Fabulous update

hope for best dear as it's my story so there have to some twist anyway thanks for comment dear.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 3...

a full entertaining one...😆

ja so determined...😳 & so is our jo...😛

he has kept a name too muchto jo's horror , he kept intimidating her !!

waiting for next...😳

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