Originally posted by: Jhinka_Roy
Truthfully I read it the moment I saw it posted, considering my thirst for any OS/ FF based on my fav. characters from this show! 😳
But being distracted by many other unrelated stuff during the 1st read, I was not able to appreciate right away. It was difficult to follow the narrative transitions from one character to another, which has less to do with your writing style.
The 2nd time I read your piece, with full attention, it made sense and it was beautiful. ❤️ Especially considering every one of the emotional set pieces differ from each other- from the impatient, somewhat volatile longing (Sudha) to the loss felt hardest by the bereaved parents who drifted away in every way from each other long back but find togetherness in mourning for their child(Baldev-Satrupa) to a journey of two young hearts who are new in this game (Adhiraj-Anami), who found each other to be capable of soothing their own hurt and anger and even laugh together forgetting for a moment that they are surrounded by one after another ruthless and seasoned players- you captured all of these emotions in one single little OS! 👏
I am so going to pester you for many more OS on various characters from RKC! 😆
Aww, I can completely relate to that. Sometimes you read something, and you are not even in the shoes to relate to it - and then after some time, it's like oh yeah ! I am late to so many posts on this forum just bcoz of that 😆 - ; and by that time half the action is over, coz it's usually a discussion .
Bang on ! That's exactly what I hoped to convey, and you have expressed it so beautifully here. Thank you so much ! Sure, all pestering is welcome 😆😉