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This Os I am going to write for Himani di & Roshni..Today Roshni complete 2 years inn indiaforums as I realized me & himani di to complete 2 years few days back...

So this os is a surprise os which I am planning for long but was don't have lappy but got new lappy so first thing on Aviman I am going to write on this new lappy..yes going to write on Aviman..so lets start I Love OS By Arisha..

There was pretty evening..Avi doing her work on phone suddenly shiroo her pet start licking her..

She took shiroo & start playing with him..

At a time Mani came & said..

Lets go misty I got new sharukh movie tickets..

We will enjoy it..

Avi said really shinchan yeye lets go..

Shiroo barks that take me to with u ..

Mani said awww shiroo baby we cant take u but we will return & then play with u..

Shiroo lick mani..

Shintsy(Mitsy & shinchan to avoid if rules I cant use real name ok guyx) they enter in cinema & start enjoying ...Avi leans on mani shoulder & watching...she used to it..

But two eyes burning in anger..

Heena & his friend Rahul they keep chasing them..

Heena: Rahul see how avi leaning mani shoulder..

Rahul:yes we have make them separate ..

Heena:Yes they always say they are friends but see how much close they are..

Rahul:lets plan something..

After watching movie..

AVI: Shinchan I Am hungry ..

Mani: yes me to lets have something..

They went in food court order Chinese & Italian food.. both having happily..

Avi doing chik chik pik pik suddenly food stuck in her throat & she start coughing badly..

Even she getting tears ...

Mani get worried..

He rub her back & give her water..

Mani: how many times told u not talk whikle having food but u never listen see what happens to u..

Avi looking at him..Mani to start looking her..

Both have eyelock..

Waiter came & say sir u need anything more..

Both came in senses..

Mani:yes two ice cream staweberry flavor..

They have ice cream & return..

Heena throw party inviting shitsy..

Heena: Rahul are u ready.

Rahul:yes I am..

Shisty reached their..

Avi looking so beautiful mani secretly admiring her..

Rahul & Heena start their plan ..

Heena went near Mani who busy admiring Avi..

Rahul push waiter drink fell on avi dress..

Avi went in washroom..

Mani:what happens heena?

Heena: I think avi interested in Rahul..

Mani: How dare u how u can say like this..

Heena: I saw them many times.see also they are disappear in party..
Mani look here their avi & Rahul not seeing anywhere..

In room..

Avi cleaning dress suddenly Rahul came their..

Avi always feel uncomfortable present on Rahul..

She about to move but Rahul hold her hand..

He looking evily to her..Avi shove his hand & went out ..

Mani saw avi coming out she looking tensed while Rahul caming behind him..he look heena..

Avi hold Mani hand..

Avi:Shinchan I want to go home..

Mani:What happens are u ok mitsy..

Avi:plx na lets go..

Mani:ok I will drop u came..

Both sat in car..

Manish thought why mitsy tensed why Rahul with her..did he do something with her ..i don't like him he is not good ..he may trouble my mitsy..if yes I will not leave him..

Avi Lean on his shoulder..

Mani:what happens mitsy any problem?

Avi nodded no.

Avi thought if I tell him he will get angry..

Mani:ok relax..

Both reched until avi in half sleep..

Mani: Mitsy wake up we reach home..

Avi slap on his shoulder ..

Avi: let me sleep..

Mani: uff yeh ladki..uncle aunty must be slept..

He hold her in arms..servant open house..

He takes her in room & make her lay in bed.

He covers her with blanket & on the ac..

He about to move Avi hold his hand..

He smiled & keep gently on bed..

He saw shiroo looking at him..

He kneel down & said..

Hey baby yake care of your mummy ok ..

He bark as he understand..

Mani caress him & went ..

Heena try to make Mani misunderstood Avi but Mani never believe..

One day avi went some farm house & say mani came..

Suddenly Rahul came their Avi get shocked..

Avi:what u doing here?

Rahul:just came to give u company..

Avi: I don't need it,..

Rahul: acha...

He moved closer to her..

Avi: stay away from me I will tell shinchan..

Rahul: really I am scared ..what he will do if he really cares he must be here ..

Rahul hold her & pin in wall..

Rahul: u are so innocent girl ..he must be with his girlfriend..

He caress her face Avi try push him bhe he hold her hands tight..

Avi scream aaahh..leave me ..

He caress her face ..

Suddenly he got pull back & got great punches from Mani..

Avi: Shinchan ..

She rush & hug him tight..

Avi:shinchan he trying he..

Mani: ssshhh relax I am came na just relax,..

He hug her tight & rub her back..

Suddenly heena came & said..'

Rahul our plan works u just see Mani will leave avi..

Mani move & heena shocked to see mani huuging avi..

Rahul on floors bleeding..

Mani got so angry he slap heena & said..

How dare u ..u think I will trap in your dirty plans..i know u both plan something but this is to much..i wont leave u both & he again start beating Rahul 7 said..u touch my mitsy how dare u..

She is mine only mine understand ...

They both run..

Avi stunt & said what u say know.

Mani: what I who nothing..'

Avi: just say ..

Mani: u are mine..

Avi:but why?

Mani: Because I woh me ..

Avi:I woh me kiya..avi start teasing him..

Mani: I love u na yaar..

Avi got so happy..

Avi hug him..

Avi: I love u to na yaar..how much I wait for this..

Mani Kiss on her forehead & again give her tight hug...

So how is surprise Himani Dido & Roshni??

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Posted: 7 years ago
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ha ha super awesome loved it so cute & funny o couldn't stop laughing on that dinasour wala part u know who I m talking about I didn't expect that dinasour to be in this os but really she deserves more slaps infinite slaps the confession was so cute awww Avi leaning on Mani shoulders & watching movie Mani admiring avi secretly their friendship bond everything is lovely thank you for writing this is really cheered up my mood was so upset thanks love you wonderful surprise loved it
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Oh god this was awesome os yaar. I loved it. Nice as well as funny.great work dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome os Arisha...loved it...great work...& Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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1st of all hearty congratulations to my aspiring doctor roshni,himani di,and to my cutie pie ari on completing 2 years in rosid world...!!!!superb os ari..loved it soo much..they expressed their love finally..loved it soo much...!!!!superb..!!!!👏👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
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AVIMAN OS...so cute os Ari..loved it...Never expect heena in this os but I laughing laughing n shinchan slap heena hahaa😆 she deserve it..n shinchan called shiroo as baby hahaa😆my god he never call him as baby he call him arreay mamma ke bachha n he always try to tease mom n son(misty n shiroo)...But i loved that cute scene between shinchan n shiroo..N theater n love confession scene was sooo cute n lovely...just loved it... N yeah hearty congrats to roshni for completing two yrs.. N congrats to u both Ari n himani di for two yrs of friendship...keep ur friendship bond alawys...Happy for u..
Edited by Suruthi_rosid - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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So sweet of you dear it's a really cutest os i love it please keep writing and thanks for pm hope your wish to see aviman together in new serial come true best wishes from me 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome OS dear
Loved it!! Well written.
Thanks for the pm !
:))
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awww it was really cute os yaar luvd aviman's bonding as friends n their luv confession it was just awesome,... Hahaha poor heena received nice slap n she deserves it fr trying to create misunderstandings between aviman... Thanks arisha fr this cute os..,. N finally congrats to roshni, arisha n himani di fr completing two years in rosid world n fr giving beautiful stories on rosid n pls keep writing...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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how beautifully you used half names of avika and Manish.avi and mani.very cute.only in one place you wrote Manish.the names which they call each other were even more cuter.mitzy and shinchan.shiroo is such a cute character.restaurant scene was so cute.mani really took care of her.eye lock was romantic. I imagined Rosid bgm in that part.rahul heena trying to create mu between aviman.good that mani didn't believe it.room scene was sweet and romantic. rahul is so cheap.mani saving avi from him was heroic. both rahul heena got nice from mani.aviman confession and hug were sweet and romantic
Edited by jasminerahul - 7 years ago

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