The Dungeon - An SS ( Chapter 1 updated on Page 1)

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi everyone and especially my fellow EDKVians!
Remember me? Shikha here!
How good to have both old and new people together here!
So the first week has been successful enough to build up an intriguing setting for a story and I, hence, have decided to pen down something!
Wait! Is this the first FanFic on the forum? I would be privileged to be the writer in that case!
Ok, coming back, I have decided to make it a one shot as of now, but my mind may change later, according to the way it goes(and of course, the number of replies!)

So here we go!


TEASER

He waited and waited, and waited for her, to come to him, to delve deep into him, but the tides in the sea brought in betrayal, as he slipped into the dungeon called destiny...


-Shikha



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CHAPTER 1 : THE SNOW'FLAMES' ( PAGE 1)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi Shika
after so long
bhoot ji ke story padhne ko hum bekarar hein
keep writing
i m sure u get good response for this OS
yes u r the 1st to write FF in this forum 😉

It's Vinu here
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi all!
Shikha here!
Kept all waiting for a looong time? Well, sorry peeps!
Caught up with a lot of work ----- it doesn't let me heave a sigh of relief!
Well, no more waiting and here comes the first chapter and yes, I have decided to make it an SS!
Its a very short one to begin with!
Hope you enjoy reading it and please do leave a comment if you peep in. Means a lot to the writers!
So here we go!

CHAPTER 1 : THE SNOW'FLAMES'

The snow seemed to shiver as a dark green leaf landed in it and rested beside a bunch of pink star-gazers.

Winter had just bid goodbye to the Earth and it was time for spring to arrive at its doorstep, but a sheet of snow with flakes in it adorned the stony path. None knew from where the leaf arrived, as there was not a single tree nearby. The leaf began to wither away and the star-gazers looked up to nowhere. There wasn't any star in the dark sky on the night of the full moon, when the moon was expected to beautify its surroundings. The snowflakes were broken, one by one, and all merged with the snow except one.

The cold wind blew, and the ground became parched. The black owl seemed to be the only living presence of the night. It hooted silently, as if it were welcoming someone. The rabbits in their burrows were roused from their deep slumber. The dry blades of grass rose in the air and settled on the sheet of snow. The dog in the garden looked everywhere, but a bark did not escape his mouth when the star-gazers slowly turned white.

The last snowflake shook violently as it lay in mid-air. A flame appeared in it. It had traces of yellow and orange in it, but was mostly red. It was unable to melt the snowflake but when a moth appeared near it, the creature was lulled to eternal sleep. Some petals of the star-gazers withered away, while some lay still. The leaf was burnt to ashes by the thing that fell on it. The owl stopped its hooting and flew away to a distant place. The rabbits peeped out of their burrows and looked at the ashes. The dry blades of glass sank in the snow, and the dog in the garden fell asleep.

The snowflake landed on the ground with the flame still burning in it. It rested beside the ashes of leaf and did not move an inch. The rabbits in the burrows were terrified and went back to sleep as a tear-like drop of blood glistened in the snow, and a pair of eyes monitored the burning flame.


Aag ko jalte rehne ke liye chingaari ki zaroorat nahi padhti,

Usse to bas koi hawa na bujha de,

Dard ko zinda rehne ke liye tanhai ki zaroorat nahi padhti,

Usse to bas koi dawa na mitaa de.



Edited by Nimik - 7 years ago
Cheesybabe thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Such an amazing start . Would lyk to know more n plz do continue soon 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice starting.. beautifully written. Plzzz update as soon as possible..!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice beginning. Do update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nicely written pal
The abstractness was mesmerizing👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Amazing start😊 update soon and please do PM me
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nicely written 👏
Do continue ... 👍🏼
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Love the way you have started the story.. Eagerly waiting for next part... Tnq so much for pm...sorry for late review..

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